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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh, i just read the whole thing, and i think you are amazing. continue soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Liq..I didn't know that u wrote fan fics..Oh my gosh and adapted from one of my fav female author's book..Great Liq...I am usually very far behind on catching up with fan fics...but I did get hold of yours..otherwise I would have missed one of the masterpieces..

Thankooo..Liq....👏plz continue soon...can't wait..

😊Anamika😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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ITS AWSOME WONDERFUL WORK
KEEP IT UP DO CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: Decent Ayesha

Aafreen after long time i read ur fanfic and its as amazing as diamond 👏 👏 👏 i loved the whole part very much really its awesome pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez continue soon 😭 😭 dear i m waiting !!!!!!!!!!!!GOD BLESS U TAKE CARE N ALWAYS BE HAPPY I LOVE U ALL A LOT 😃

OH ayesha your the sweetest thank you sooo much, i was waiting for your wiews.

Love you Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fallen Angel

That part was just too good yaar..plz cont soon

thank you soo much i will be continuing soon.

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Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

that was great, plz continue soon

thanks alot, i will be continuing soon , i'm still on a move.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: rano

oh, i just read the whole thing, and i think you are amazing. continue soon.

thanks alot rano, i'm glad you liked my fan fic.

will continue soon

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anamika_Mitra

Liq..I didn't know that u wrote fan fics..Oh my gosh and adapted from one of my fav female author's book..Great Liq...I am usually very far behind on catching up with fan fics...but I did get hold of yours..otherwise I would have missed one of the masterpieces..

Thankooo..Liq....👏plz continue soon...can't wait..

😊Anamika😊

OH anaimika your really making me blush, i am a big fan of Lurlene and i really like this story of hers. i love all her books especially the one " If i die before i awake" its really good one

thanks for liking my story

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: zarna

ITS AWSOME WONDERFUL WORK
KEEP IT UP DO CONTINUE SOON

thanks zarna , i will continue soon

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks alot guys you've been very supportive,

Part 14



IT was past midnight and ANgad thought he should leave kripa to her house and so he went to leave her:

At Kripa's place; the door bell, shes in his arms,
Mother: Oh god Kripa, what happened to her.

Angad: actually she was very tired today and she came over for some consoling, she hated what she heard form the doctor.

Mother: thank you so much ....ummm....

Angad: its Angad, no problem, i know how precious she is to you, inhis mind (shes worth more than a diamond to me)

Mother: Angad, you can leave now we'll take care of her, thank you for bringing her hear.

ANgad: no problem, anytime.
as the door was shut, angad felt to burst out his tears.
he was so upset and dissapointed and he blamed GOd for everything.
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the next day: kripa found herself in her own bed and was having her headache as usual, it kept reminding her about her results.
she stormed down and went towards the kitchen,

Kripa: Mom, Dad, how am i here?

Mom: Angad, got you hear.

Dad : beta are we so bad that you felt you needed a stranger to console you, do you know how worried we weere about you, how could you have just left us ike that ang one to some stranger.

Kripa: dad his name is Angad and hes not a stranger to me, i really love him and he understands me and cares =about me.

Dad: but hes wwith a disease.

Kripa: I knew those would be your next words, dad how come all of you forget that i have a disease too, how come all of you forget that i might die soon someday like him. why r u in so much denial as to my health.

Dad: because we haven't lost hope , we will never loose hope.

Kripa: withoput saying anything just left..

It was Angad's birthday tomorrow and she was soo excited to give him her gift, she fel that if she kept her mind busy she would forget about what she had.
she called Angad an dspoke to him for hours and she had to go to his house today..

Kripa: i'll be bak by 8:00 mom.

Mom: beta, can i leave you today.

Kriap: why? i thought you were late to meet dad.

Mom : no i want to meet angad and i want to tell him something,

Kripa: oh mom!! please don't start with him or put him in a spot.

Mom: i promise i won't

Kripa's mom drops her at his place and during the journey she observes every little thing onher way, Kripaknew she was scared for this relationship and she knew he would die soon.

Kripa knocks the door.

Rohan is Angads nurse he comes regularly to give Angad his thumps on the back in order for freee flow of respiration.

Rohan: i'll see you tomorrow Angad, bye

Kripa: hi rohan, how is Angad doing.

Rohan: hi there, well hes always been cooprative.

Kriapa: but any progress?
ROhan ignored her question and pretended to be late for some meeting.

Angad: hello Kripa, and Good evening Mrs. Sharma.
he was very gleeful.

MOm: you live alone (inspecting the place)

ANgad: i find myself quite independent even though i have a disease.

Kripa: ithought you had to go to dad mom??

Mom: whats for dinner?

Angad: i'll be cooking for your daughter today, i'm not bad my mother taught me.

Kripa forcfully pushes her mom while her mom ends with have a good evening.

Kripa: i thought she will never leave.

Angad: i think shes very dissapointed in me.

Kripa: Angad shes a mother she will scrape you until she doesn't find a flaw in you.

Angad: well i have to get cutting, i did promise i will be cooking for you.

Kripa: Angad? can i do the thumps for you , i mean i can tell Rohan to teach me, because i hate him interrupting us all the time to do your thumps.

ANgad: NO!!!!

Kripa putting her arms around his: Please Angad then whenever you need it i will do it for you.

Angad: no kripa i want you to love me not nurse me.

Kripa: look okay it decided i'm doing the thumps for you,

ANgad toook he suddenly by the shoulders and kept her so close that he coulfd feel her warm breadth.

ANgad: Kripa!!!! (pleading) i really love you i don't want to loose you and i know you love me too but i can't argue with you on this its because my heart aches for you. i don't want you to see me sick, i want you to just love me.

tell me if you likes it.
Liove Aafreen

Edited by luviqbal - 20 years ago

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