Till death do us part, my fan fic - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i love it plz continue as soon as u can. cant wait to read more.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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guys i really want to thank you for all the appreciation,

Part 13


well Kripa was thinking of angad the whole time and she couldn't stop fiddling with the pendent he gave her.

Harshini: Wow man your so lucky its such a beautiful pendent!!! hes soo romantic.

Kripa: I know, the more i come close to him the more i love him and he has such intensity in himself, i feel soo lucky.

Hrshini: don't mind me!! but he is sick right ? you wouldn't want to be with a guy whoose sick and is going to die?

Kripa: Harshu?!?!?!!? how could you say that? i just don't think of him as my boyreind i think of him as my love, i don't think i can ever love anyone else after him. and by the way you forget i'm sick too!!!

Harshini: but thats the deal, your going to live hes not.

Kripa: just don't force your conciousness to believe what isin't true, i know you care about me but that can't force you to believe something thats not true. what about Angad somepne loves him too you just can't say hes going to die.

Harshini: i'm sorry Kripa, i should have thought before i spoke.
by the way do you know today will be your radiation results!!!

Kripa: Oh god !!!! i forgot all about that,, thanks!!!
Mom must be waiting outside for me.

kripa runs toward the cardoor giving a big hug to harshu. harshini whispers good luck in her ears. during their journey, kripa's heart was thumping so loud that she felt it wanted to come out of her shest. she was soo nervous but she kept remembering Angads calm face that gave her peace.

At the doctor's
Doc: Good morning!!! Sharmas.
kripa had a feeling that the doc had a fake smile on.

Doc: well you results came in today and well we are glad to uinform you that the tumour is dormant.

Kripa: dormant?

Doc: its stable and its not as small as we expected it to be. but the radiation has stopped the growth.

Instantly every sound around Kripa fainted and she felt the goosebumps on her skin. she was filled with tears and she wanted to remove them but held it back.

Father: What do you mean? that all this pain and chemo she went thorugh was for nothing?

Doc : i wish there was better news to tell you
that moment Kripa needed Angad soo bad and she felt like running into his arms.

Mother: we can't loose hope i mean there is another alternative isin't there.

that minute Kripa just pushed the chair behind in anger and ran towards the exit of the hospital. and grabbed the taxi, the sounds of her parents trying to stop her, didn't mean anything to her all she wanted was angad.

she knew angad's schedule very well and she knew at 8:00 pm he would be free.

she rang his door bell!
Angad: Kripa?!?
she fell into his arms and cried until every tear was shed he didn't stop her!!

Angad: the results weren't good?

Kripa: they were horrible i went through so much pain and i recieved nothing in return.

Angad: well kripa!!! you recieved my love.
he held herhand and she shivered a litlle with his warmth.
Angad: ?Kripa no matter what, these results don't mean anything to people liike us, all i can say is that we are lucky to have each other at this point, i want to let you know how much i love you and howmuch i adore your bravery and patienctce for going through so much

Kripa: i just want to hug you and forget everything.
they went tot heir fav indian restaurant and sat there
he hugged her for hours and hours..
until she fell asleep on his shoulders.
he kept looking at her face and cried so much inside he felt like he was crying a river.

Angad whispered: I won't let anything happen to you!! i love you too much to loose you!!!

hope you guys liked it
sorry for the delay

Love Aafreen

Edited by luviqbal - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
WOW!!! awsome part i loved but it was soooo sad!! plzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: simplyconfused

WOW!!! awsome part i loved but it was soooo sad!! plzzz continue soon!

simply confused thank you soo much for your appreciatiion you guys are my inspiration. i will continue the story tomorrow.

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: SADIYAH

brilliannt story.....please ccontinue

thanks alot sadiya, i will continue tomorrow.

love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheen2005

OMG i just read allllllllllll the parts today only n they all were veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy beautiful n sooooooo romantic. u really have a talent, it was really a very special story, but its still not done right.

i loved this the most:
Kripa: well if I come will you win,

Angad : if you come, I?ve already won!!

😳
really an awesome story, plssssssssssss continue soon 😊

cheen thanks alot your so sweet, i'm glad you liked my version of the story but the actuallr story line is mby the author lurlene mcdaniel. so well i'm just creating a version of it because i feel angad and kripa really suit it. thanks alot

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: happe

awwww Aafreen,
Just read the whole thing now. I loved it. Sorry for not reading earlier. It's such a touching story. Now I can't wait to go to Barnes & Noble to grab this book. I am loving it.
Please continue soon. 😳

please do the read it its really good, i have turned the story here a little bit i mean in the book the girl whoose kripa (April in the book) has a boyfriend wht she meets Angad(Mark in the book). thanks for your views.

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Aafreen after long time i read ur fanfic and its as amazing as diamond 👏 👏 👏 i loved the whole part very much really its awesome pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez continue soon 😭 😭 dear i m waiting !!!!!!!!!!!!GOD BLESS U TAKE CARE N ALWAYS BE HAPPY I LOVE U ALL A LOT 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
That part was just too good yaar..plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
that was great, plz continue soon

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