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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks alot guys....

Part 15

It was angad's birthday today and everyone were so excited, especially Kripa, she knew her gift would be the best.
Angad were surrounded by his parents and his friends, but his eyes were searching for that one person her cared sooo much about. she wasn't here.
till know he had reciaved 2 shirts and one pair of shoes. his interest seemed to be faded because Kripa hadn't arrived yet.

Suddenly a thump on the door, brought a smile to his face.
Kripa: Happy Birthday, Angad sorry i was late.

Angad: Oh i was waiting to see you, i thought you wouldn't come.

Kripa: how could you say that, i couldnt miss this for the world.
here open this.

ANgad: what is it?

Kripa: you have to open it to know.

Angad's curiosity led him to wreck the gift wrap in order to see what his love got him, he didn't care what it was, if it were even a peice of cloth he would have cherished it forever. but it wasn't
to his excitement, it was the most expensive and the best gift he could have ever imagined.

It was a racer suit, which was fire proof and was a jacket that would prevent him from any danger his racing could cause him.

Angad: OH GOD!!!! this is sooo awsome, tis is wortha fortune.

Kripa: well your worth it.

Kripa realised Angad's mother was unhappy as she hated Angad for racing in his condition.

Kripa: well i'm glad you liked it.

ANgad: r u kidding, I love it (he kissed her)let me try it on.

Naina went towards the kitcen and kripa followed her.

Kripa: Aunty my gift dissapointed you.

Naina: i never expected this from you Kripa!! you were supposed to talk him out of racing not give him a boost of confidence get indulged into it.

Kripa: but aunty thats what your son loves and thats the only thing he can control, he just can't let himself feel down just because he has a disease.

Naina: you realise, i'm worried about him. he can die out there. thanks to your suit he would try something more dangerous.

Kriap: trust me that suit will keep him safe. it won't let anything happen to him.

Angad enters with a naughty smile: So!!!! how do i look ladies.

Naina trys to be supportive: Prince charming!!!!

ANgad: well mom i am your son!!!
Naina: angad: i've to serve some of these dishes, please excuse me.

ANgad: yes mom.
as his mom goes oout side he doesn't miss the oppurtunity to ask what Kriap and his mom was discussing.

Angad: i saw mom had you cornered there.

Kripa: no she didn't, i was trying grasp her definition of "i'm worried about you". no problems with that.

Angad: come on we have to leave to my house i have a surprise for you.

Kripa: ANgad Khanna what r u upto now.

Kripa and Angad what arm in arm along the street.

AS angad opens his apartment door,Kripa notices a huge box on the sofa.

Kripa: whats that?!?!?!
ANgad: why don't you go look at it.

Kripa : it says here its for me from you
ANgad: well, open it.

Kripa: oh god its bigger than my box.

ANgad: open it!!!

Kripa tears the wrapper very patiently and finds another box in the first box.

Kripa: what is this Angad:

Angad: boy you get irritated over petty things. don't worry its a long way but i promise its worth it.

Kripa opens the box and finds another wrapped one, and so it goes on till she finds the smallest and the sutest palm fitting box, and opens it to find a purple velvet box.
pening that box, she finds an extravagent diamond ring, she turns her head toward Angad, noticing hes on his knees.

ANgad: that ring was my grandmothers and she always was confident that i will get my kind of girl one day.

ANgad taking kripa's hand: Kripa, i love you soo much and, i can never imagine to spend my life without you, i would like you to be my wife and i promise to make you happy, everyday of your life.

Kripa was confused with many emotions, excitement, joy and nervousness, she was soo emotionally touched that she started crying..

ANgad: well this is not what i was expecting.

Kripa: i don't know what to say!!!

Angad: just say what you feel.

Kripa she jumped up by her arms arround his neck: yes!!!! i will marry you.
his face was filled with relief and happiness and the fell into reach others arms.


tell me how you like it guys.
Love Aafreen

Edited by luviqbal - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#82
that was soo sweet, plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

that was soo sweet, plz continue soon

thanks hrithick luvr, ii will continue soon. please do keep reading.

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: luviqbal

thanks hrithick luvr, ii will continue soon. please do keep reading.

Love Aafreen

dont worry i will, i love ure fanfics!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#85
Darling, continue soon...




i love the story, it's unique
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: rano

Darling, continue soon...




i love the story, it's unique

thanks alot rano, it really gives me inspiration, thanks for liking it, but its not originally mine. will continue soon.

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
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awwwwwwwww that was such a beautiful proposal. man i loved it šŸ˜› pls pls pls continue soon šŸ˜›
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheen2005

awwwwwwwww that was such a beautiful proposal. man i loved it pls pls pls continue soon



i know cheen that is the sweetest proposal, when i read it the first time it was as romantic. i loved it too you know

thanks for reading.

Love Aafreen
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesome part Afreen. Waiting to read more.

I didn't get chance to go to near by Barnes & Noble to grab the copy of this novel. I am still busy. Can't wait to get some time in my hand. I wanna read this novel. I am anxiously waiting until the day I get my hands on this beautiful love story. 😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: happe

awesome part Afreen. Waiting to read more.

I didn't get chance to go to near by Barnes & Noble to grab the copy of this novel. I am still busy. Can't wait to get some time in my hand. I wanna read this novel. I am anxiously waiting until the day I get my hands on this beautiful love story. 😳

😊happe you made me soo happy. thanks alot for the compliment, but i must suggest you to but the book "As long as we both shall live" its actually a combined novel of the book till death do us part and the continuation of the till death do us part" so you will get to read the actual book and its continuation in one book.

thanks

Love Aafreen

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