Fan-Fic: Vaada - The Promise - Page 9

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Here's episode 8, I hope you enjoy it! Sorry if it's boring. I'm new at this. 😳 😊

Episode 8

That night Angad, Kripa and Prithvi all go to bed with a sweet smile on their face! Angad and Prithvi are thinking about Kripa and Kripa is thinking about Angad.

Next Day…. College

Angad and Prithvi are sitting in the canteen talking. Angad's eyes keep looking at the entrance, searching for Kripa! Kripa soon enters the canteen wearing a black churidaar and looking absolutely beautiful. Angad can't seem to take his eyes off her. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. Kripa comes into the canteen laughing and Angad realizes that she's with some one. Kripa walks merrily towards Angad and Prithvi linking arms with some guy!

Kripa: Hey guys. Aaj mein tumhe kisi se milwana chhati hoon! Yeh hain mere bachpan ka dost, Arjun jo kal hi America se aaya hai aur wo ab hamare college mein para ga!

Prithvi says hi to Arjun, while Angad can't seem to get his eyes off their linked arms. He isn't too happy about Arjun's entry.

Arjun: Hi (looking towards Angad)

Angad (flatly): Hi.

Angad excuses himself and goes into the practice room.

Practice Room

Angad and Kripa are about to start their practice when the teacher and Arjun come up to them.

Teacher: Kripa kyon ki Arjun yahan nayaa hai aaj tum uske saath practice karo. Aur Angad tum Rahul ke saath 'Dus Bahane' pe practice karo. Arjun aur Kripa tumhara gana hai 'Suraj hua Madham.'

Angad can't concentrate at all on his practice and keeps making a lot of mistakes. His eyes keep darting towards where Arjun and Kripa are practicing. Since Arjun and Kripa have a romantic song, they have to dance really closely and look into each others eyes romantically. Angad is red with jelousy and anger. He suddenly has an urge to rip Kripa out of Arjun's arms…and that's exactly what he does. He goes up to Kripa and pulls her towards him and she hits his body hard. His hold is possessive and his eyes are still raging with jelousy and anger. He grabs Kripa's arm and takes her outside. Everyone is staring at them and Arjun is shocked.

Kripa: Angad yeh tum kya kar raha ho?!

Angad stops and looks at her with anger.

Angad: Mein kya kar raha honn? Main? Tum kya kar rahi thi, us Arjun ke saath?!

Kripa: Angad kya tum pagal ho gaya ho? Wo sirf ek performance tha aur kuch nahin!

Angad: Mein nahin jaanta agar mein pagaal ho gaya hoon ya nahin, lekin mein itna janta hoon ki mujhe tumhara Arjun ke itne kareeb hona bilkul acha nahiin lagta! Samjhi tum!

Kripa: Lekin KYON!!

Angad: Mein nahin jaanta!

Kripa is now extremely angry and confused.

Kripa: BAS! Tum apne aap ko samaj te kya ho Mr Angad Khana?! What do you think of yourself?! Tum hote kon ho mujhe batane wale ki tumhe kya pasand hai aur kya nahin! Tum mere lagta kya ho?! Jawaab hai?! Nahin na!

Kripa just runs away from there with tears in her eyes, leaving an angry, confused and hurt Angad behind.

Arjun was standing at the door and heard all of this. He has a smile on his face.

Arjun (thinking): Wah…lagta hai ki ek doosre se bahut pyar karte hai, magar keh nahin pare. Mujhe hi kuch karna pare ga. Teen din mein Goa trip hai, agar meine tum dono se I love you nahin kelwaya to mera naam Arjun nahin!

Preview: Goa trip! What will happen between Angad and Kripa?!

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Episode 9

3 Days Later- Goa trip

Angad: Kya Prithvi…agar tu nahin araha to main bhi nahin jaonga.

Prithvi: Kya yaar mood nahin kharab kar. Tu jaraha hai and that's final!

Angad: Nahin!! Aag tak hum kabhi ek doosre ke bina kahin nahin ge!

Prithvi: Angad tujhe meri kasam! Tu Goa ja raha hai aur tu enjoy karke aaye ga! Ek hafte ki to baat hai.

Angad: Kasam dene ki kya zarurat thi! Theek hai mein joan ga!

Prithvi and Angad hug eachother and Angad leaves.

At the College everyone is getting ready to get on the bus when Angad sees Kripa arriving with Arjun. Angad looks at them madly. Kripa sees Angad and walks towards him.

Kripa: Angad, Prithvi nahin aaya?

Angad (sharply): Nahin!

Angad gets on the bus leaving a sad Kripa behind. When Kripa and Arjun get on the bus they see that there's only two seats left. One next to Angad and one in the front next to the driver. Arjun gets an idea.

Arjun: Kripa tum Angad ke saath bait jao aur mein agge bait jata hoon. Wo kya hain ne mein bahut bus sick hota hoon. See you in Goa!

Kripa hesitatingly goes towards Angad and sits next to him. They are both very uncomfortable and not even looking at each other. Both of them are yearning to talk to each other but their ego comes in the way. Both Angad and Kripa keep stealing glances at each other when the other is not looking. They carry on like this for hours! Soon it gets dark and Kripa starts to sleep. Her head accidentally falls on Angad's shoulder while she's sleeping and Angad looks at her!
Angad was about to move her head back, but looking at her sweet innocent face sleeping peacefully, he just couldn't! Instead he smiles looking at her and soon falls asleep resting his head on hers. Arjun looks back and sees them sleeping so close to each other and just smiles.

Arjun: I'm too good!

Throughout the night Angad and Kripa unknowingly become closer and now there're hugging eachother. Angad is leaning on the window and Kripa is on top of him and Angad had his arms around Kripa. Both have a happy and content expression on their face.

The bus stops in front of the hotel in Goa causing Angad and Kripa to wake up. When they see how close they are to each other, they quickly let go of each other, but Kripa's necklace is stuck to Angad's shirt so she falls on Angad again. Kripa is red with embarrassment. She's trying hard to untangle her necklace, but Angad holds her hands and gently does it for her. They look into each others eyes with a lot of longing, but Kripa just looks away trying to hide her tears and walks off the bus!

Girl: Sab log apne apne room keys leker rest kar lo. Aaj raat ko hotel mein ek party aur theme hai traditional Indian wear. So be ready!

Arjun: Wow party! (looking at Angad) Kripa will you be my date!

Kripa (also looking at Angad): Of course! Why not!

Angad is devastated and he just leaves from there.

Angad and Kripa's rooms are right next door to each other. Angad and Kripa are both looking out the window thinking about the other.

Angad: Kripa kyon mein tumse nahin keh para hoon ki mein tumse kitne pyar karta hoon?!

Kripa: Mein janti hoon ki tum mujhse pyar karto ho Angad. Bas ek bar keh do.

Jo tum nahin pas to phir saath ho kaise
Tere illawa aur kuch baat ho kaise
Ho shaam ya ho savera
Har waqt hai waqt tera
Meri kahani mein har lavz tera hai
Karna yeh izhaar hai
Kaisa yeh pyar hai
Kaisa yeh pyar hai

The Party

Everyone is enjoying the party. Angad is dressed in a black sherwani and looking extremely hot and handsome. All the girls are staring at him, but he seems to be searching for only one girl. KRIPA.

Arjun: Hey Angad bahut smart lag rahe ho, Kripa kaha hai?!

Angad (sarcastically): Tumhe pata hoga. Wo tumhari date hai!

Soon the hall goes quiet and everyone is looking at the entrance. Angad slowly turns around and the figure in front of him leaves him stunned! Time just stops for him.

Preview: Will the confess their love to eachother and how? 😳