Fan-Fic: Vaada - The Promise - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
eshikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa r der ....plz cont 😭
i realy luv this fan fic 😳 😳


lub u all
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72

Eshikaaaa!! Please cont soon!! or someone else please please please cont soon! this story has a awesome start.. i really want someone to cont this fan fiction if not eshika! Eshika..where are u????? 😭 PLease cont!!

Mallika! 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
well i guess some1 else has to cont, coz if i am not wrong eshika said tht she's busy and she will not be able to cont her fanfics, so some1 plz plz plz cont. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
Does anyone mind if I just post 1 part to the story! It's a really good story and I just don't want it to end. I won't continue until you guy say it's OK and if Eshika doesn't mind.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz angadkripa4eva do cont, i hope so too tht eshika or any1 else doesn't mind 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
I'm just going to write a small part and I hope someone else continues! This is my first fan-fic so sorry if it's boring. 😕

PART 6

Birthday Party Continued...

Angad and Kripa are dancing really close to each other. The song finishes, but Angad and Kripa are still in each other's arms looking deeply into each other's eyes. Something is happening between them, something they have never felt before! Suddenly someone on the dance floor accidentally bumps into Kripa and she falls into Angad's arms and they both come out of their trance. Kripa is embarrassed while Angad has a cute smile on his face. Kripa turns from there and goes to where Prithvi is sitting, while Angad's eyes are on her the whole time. Kripa sits down next to Prithvi.

Prithvi: Kripa, tum ho?

Kripa: Haan Prithvi!

Prithvi: Angad kahan hai?

Just then Angad comes from behind with a cheeky grin on his face. Kripa still shy excuses herself and goes to the balcony.

Angad: Yeh hamesha mujhse baaghti kyoun rehti hai? (Angad says under his breath)

Prithvi: Kuch kaha?

Angad: Nahin kuch nahin! Prithvi, mein abhi aaya.

Angad goes to the balcony and sees Kripa standing there hugging herself and looking at the moon. The wind is blowing her long hair and the moonlight illuminates her beautiful face. Angad just stands there mesmerized by the angelic sight! As if in a trace he slowly walks towards her, while a romantic song plays inside:

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

Chaahne jab lage dil kisi ki khushi
Dillagi ye nahin ye hai dil ki lagi
Aandhiyon ko dabaane se kya fayda
Pyaar dil mein chhupaane se kya fayda
Jaan se pyaara jab dildaar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

Angad slowly walks towards Kripa and Kripa feels someone's presence. She turns around and sees Angad looking at her passionately. Their eyes get locked. Angad reaches Kripa and gently cups her face in his hands Angad softly kisses Kripa's forehead and nose! Kripa closes her eyes and stays totally still! Her heart is beating like crazy! Angad is leaning in to kiss her on the lips when…

Prithvi: Kripa! Kripa!

The trance is broken! Kripa pulls away from Angad bright red. Kripa smiles to herself and runs inside! Angad looks at Kripa running away! He has a huge grin on his face!

Angad: God…What's happening to me?!

Kripa runs inside still smiling and goes to Prithvi.

Kripa: Prithvi kya baat hai, tumna mujhe kyoun bolaya?

Prithvi: Umm actually Kripa…itna acha gana chal raha hai, so I was wondering…Will you dance with me?!

Kripa: Ye bhi koyi puchne ki baat hai! Of course karungi!

Prithvi is delighted that Kripa said yes. Kripa leads Prithvi to the dance floor and they both dance.

Uski khushboo agar apni saanson mein ho
Uska sapna agar apni aankhon mein ho
Jab na dil ke behelne ki soorat lage
Jab koi zindagi ki zaroorat lage
Aur jeena bhi dushwaar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage pyaar hone lage

Meanwhile Angad comes back inside and is staring at Kripa with a lovelorn look in his eyes. Kripa can feel his stare but doesn't look back at him! At the same time there is another guy staring at Kripa with a dirty look in his eyes. When Prithvi and Kripa finish dancing the guy starts walking towards Kripa!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
omg......................plz conttttttttttttttt..........it's gettinggggggggg sooooooooooooo damnnnnnnnnnnnnn goooddddddddddddddd.........plz contttttttttttttttttttttttt
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
u left it off at such a good part.
contiue soon. plz
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello I'm back! Since no one else is continuing I'll post one more part. Sorry if it's boring, I'm not as good as Eshika!


EPISODE 7

The guy walks towards Kripa with a sleazy look on his face. His body language was clearly showing that his intentions weren't good. The guy put his arms around Kripa's waist and starts caressing it. Kripa turns around shocked!

Kripa: Yeh tum kya kar raha ho?! Choro mujhe!

Guy: Come on beautiful, we're at a party, let's enjoy!

Kripa tried to push him away, but he wouldn't let go of her! Angad was watching all of this and his expression was livid. Angad runs up to the guy and grabs him by the collar. There was rage and hatred in Angad's eyes. Angad starts bashing the guy up badly, while Kripa is protesting in the background and telling him to stop. Angad suddenly grabs a broken bottle and heads towards the guy, but Kripa quickly comes in between them, making Angad stop in his tracks. Seeing Kripa's eyes shut tight and her scared face he drops the bottle to the ground. A group of people has gathered around them.

Prithvi: Kripa tum theek ho?

Kripa just nods her head.

Prithvi: Angad cholo humein ghar drop kardo!

Angad leaves from there and Kripa and Prithvi quietly follow, as the crowd slowly goes home too.

Angad drops Prithvi home and then there's only Angad and Kripa in the car. They are both quiet and don't say anything the entire way. Angad stops the car in front of Kripa's house. Kripa is about to leave the care when Angad grabs her hand.

Angad: Kripa tum mujhse naraaz ho?

Kripa: Nahi toh. (without looking at him)

Angad: To mujhse baat kyon nahi karahi. I'm sorry Kripa! Pata nahin mujhe kya ho gaya tha! I'm really sorry!

Kripa: Tum kyoun sorry keh raha ho! Meri wajah se tumhara birthday kharab ho gaya aur…

Angad silences Kripa with his finger and looks into her eyes deeply!

Angad: Ye birthday meri zindagi ka sabse khubsurat birthday tha!

Kripa looks away shy and is about to get out of the car.

Angad: Kripa…main tumse kuch kehna chatha tha!

Kripa: Bolo!

Angad: Umm…baat yeh hai ki I…

Kripa: I…?

Angad: I…I…want to thank you! For the party!

Kripa: (disappointed) Oh you welcome. Kal College main milte hai! Good night.

Angad: Good night.

Angad watches Kripa go inside.

Angad: Stupid..Idiot..Fool.. I can't believe I said thank you! Lekin apni dil ki baat patani to paregi.

Angad drives off with a grin on his face.

Preview: Kripa and Arjun?! 😕 Jelous Angad! 😡 Goa trip! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
jaldi jaldi jaldi i can't wait

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