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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes!! finally u r ere!! lemme read n comment!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part!!!!! I hope he's serious about wanting to go out with her because he always likes to tease her. Continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it waz awsum!! loving it !!! plzz continue now!! jus can't w8 until 2moro!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part. if angad is falling for kripa then i'm happy and i hope kripa should say no to angad that she can't go out wid him that would be fun 😆 😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome update..aww kripa and angad kissed in a grave 😆 ahahahaha!!
omg and now he just asked her out!! i wonder what she'll say.. 😕 😕 😕
plzzz cont soon!!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey wow great part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you to:Mimi_Rani, SujalkiDeewani, jdsean, iamsmart, subhag, sameira-90 for your lovely comments 😊 😃 🤗 , they help me alot to write

Part 6

K- What did you say me and you, no I don't think so, she said leaving him
A- Whoa babe not so fast he said grabbing her wrist tightly hurting her,
K- Ouch your hurting me you freak, let go before I scream loudly
A- don't play games with me okay, you either go out with or I'll force you
Kripa was scared, what had suddenly happened to him at first he hated her guts, was it the kiss that changed him?
K- why do want to go out with me, I thought you hated me
A- oh sweetheart he said touching her face, don't you know fighting is the first step of flirting , and let's just say your sexy he said whispering in her ear giving her the chills, she had to get away.
Kripa bit his hand hard and tried to run but angad grabbed her hair holding her in position and very close to him, A- don't think you can try to run from me.
K- you can't force me
A- oh yes I can, it's called blackmailing
K- there's nothing to blackmail me with
A- there's also a thing called lying hun, wow your really new to this stuff
K- move out of my way and let go of my hair your hurting me
A- fine I'll leave you today but your going to end up going out with me
K- we'll see about that, she said leaving
A- hey your choice I either do it the right way or the bad way he said grinning, " good night"
Kripa went straight up to bed , what a weirdo, he's a mystery at first he hates her and now he wants to go out with her, wow his complicated kripa thought.
On the other hand angad went up to his room feeling proud of himself, he called up Raj
A- yo bro
R- hey what ya doing
A- nothing just playing around
R- what do you mean
A- you know kripa, well I playing around with her, telling her I want go out with her , man you should have seen her face , and it got worst when I said I'll force her and blackmail into dating me
R- man angad your so bad
A- that's why everyone give me the bad boy image
R- true, but you know she's not into boys, she think they're pathetic
A- oh really, then what was she thinking when she kissed me in the grave yard
R- WHAT
A- yeh I gave her, her first kiss
R- and so now your all proud, I pity her
A- shut up
R- so how long you going to play around with her, seriously I think it's a bad idea what if you end up falling in love with her
A- me and her no way please, she totally opposite me
R- well there is always that quote "opposites attract"
A- well in my case no, plus you know the girls I'm into
R- oh yeah especially mishti
A- well she's the best out of all the girls I been out with but she's so clingy
R-well you just have bad taste
A- look who's talking
R- it's Raj
A- wow you know your sad, I can't believe I hang out with you
R- take it back
A- no
R- I'm not talking to you bro
A- stop acting like a girl
R- you hurt my feelings
There was a pause of silence, and then they both broke out in laughter
A- wow , I don't know what I do with out you
R- don't worry I'll always have your back
A- cheers to that
R- anyway I better go mum wants me to watch saathiya with her
A- your mum and her movies
R- tell me about, well I better go and bore myself talk to you later
A- yeh alrite laterz
Angad put the phone down and went to bed.
The next day they didn't do much , college had started, Kripa's classes were all in the morning 8- 12, where as Aaliya had classes from 1-5,it was around 1pm, kripa got back home, no one was in sight, especially Angad thank god, the room was dark as the light s off.
She tried feeling her way around in order to find the switch, when someone grabbed and pushed her on to the sofa , it was angad on top of her after he switched the lamp on. He grinned
A- so our home huh, and look no ones at home
A- so what's your answer
K- no I wont, go get someone else she said angrly
K- get off of me,
A- no not so soon
A- I'll ask for the last time, yes or no
K- fine yes
Angad was shocked, she agreed so quickly, how could that be, kripa noticing Angad's shocked expression she smile to herself
K- why you so shocked, what happened your little game ended so soon, surprised how I know well, being Mr. dumb you are you forgot to lock your door yesterday when you were talking to raj, and I happened to go downstairs to get a glass of water when I heard you spoke.
A- what the heck you were listening to my private conversation,
K- whatever, now get off me


Angad gets of and storms up to his room calling up raj.
Days pass on until one day mishti show up all of a sudden
A- mishti what are you doing here , he said shocked
Aa- I'll explain bro Aaliya said coming from behind, mishti is coming to join our college and when dad found out he asked her to stay with knowing how you and her are really good friends, and so she told me to keep it a surprise from you, so surprise
A- wow great surprise, he said sarcastically
Aaliya introduce kripa to mishti and they all got along fine, kripa could notice mishti had feeling for angad but angad being the way he was could careless she pitied mishti for having feeling for a guy like him. When she got and Idea she grinned, it was payback for his little scheme he had planned on her.

Kripa and mishti were alone, when kripa began to speak
K- so I've notice you like angad, causing mishti to blush
M- how do you know
K- it's pretty obvious, well listen even though I basically have no experience in the boys department I will try and help you get angad , so deal
M- umm but wouldn't that be unfair to him
K- well if he doesn't find out and trust me he won't
M- deal
K- great and they both hugged , but poor kripa what did she know that angad was listening outside behind the door, he grinned, A- poor thing her plan failed before it even started, so she's trying to get revenge I guess it's time to get even again.


Preview~ surprise 😉

okay heres the next part hope you like it please leave comments!! soory this part is not as long but the next part i will try to make longer

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!! wonderful part!!!

lets see wat happenz abt her planz!!👍🏼

plz plzz continue soooon!!😳

hats off to ur creativity!👍🏼

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Edited by SujalkiDeewani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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** sorry posted twice **

Edited by SujalkiDeewani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani

wow!!! wonderful part!!!

lets see wat happenz abt her planz!!👍🏼

plz plzz continue soooon!!😳

hats off to ur creativity!👍🏼

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aww thanks a bunch😳 😊😃i'm glad you liked this part..yep lets see what they both will do!!😉...thankyou for commenting!!!😛

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