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Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great part thankyou😛😃....continue sooncontinuing today

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Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani
wow!! wonderful FF!!plzz continue soooooooooooooon!!! 👏 aww thanks a ton!!😳😛😃 glad you like the FF

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just read it its awesome thankyou!!😳 😃and the games awesome glad you like them,this ff is wicked i love it and i luv u for writing it aww thanks for your lovely comment 😊pls cont soon 😛 yep continuing today😛

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Originally posted by: subhag
heyy i just read ur whole ff!!! lol its soo funny!! heheh thanks 😊glad you like it😃 i love neev..he's way to cute!!! haha 😆 😆 hehehe yep he sure is a cutie hehehe😆
plzz cont soon..cant wait to see how ak do 😃 continuing today!!

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hey dude luv this fanfic thankyou!!😛 😃and can't wait to read the next one comming up soon😊so chop chop hurry up lolz😆. i just love angad and kripa's jodi that i can even kill. 😆 lolz😆

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okay next part comming up really soon!!

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yes! okay, cant wait!! plzzz post it soon! 👏

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Part 5

Recap- N- what's next? P- umm kiss a random person

N- OHH I BAGS THIS ONE, prachi replied with a dirty look

N- What, hmm this is going to be fun……

P- disgusting, N- your face I know he says laughing to himself, N- come on prachi you have to admit that was a pretty good on though, P- oh yeh the best she said sarcastically, Neev replied by rolling his eyes, N- anyway so where am I supposed to find some random girl and kiss her, P- how am I supposed to know, N- I forgot you have no brains, N- I know we'll go to a club and we will also be able to get four numbers, two guys and girls, it will be easier, well if all the guys are drunk enough tonight, P- what the heck was that supposed to mean, N- no offense prachi but your not very good when it comes to guys, P- well I don't see a line of girls waiting behind you either.

N- Prachi hun jealous are we?, P- of what, P- now just hurry up unless you want to lose, N- what ever you say. They later arrived at a club fifteen minutes later. Neev was used these surrounding, prachi how ever rarely went to clubs they were too noisy for her. N- Okay now I need to find a girl to kiss, hmmm help me out, P- what about that one there she said pointing to a girl sitting at the bar, N- d*** gotta admit huh prachi got good taste, wait here I'll be right back he said leaving her alone with a grin.

Neeve walks over to the girl introducing him, doing the most unpredictable thing the girl could have even guess he said smile and took his phone and took a photo of him giving the girl a quick peck on the lips until he felt someone's hand on his shoulder, turning around facing a tall well built guy with a pissed expression on his face.

Where on the other hand prachi noticing this couldn't' help grin " oops I forgot to tell neeve that she had a bf, bechara", she said laughing and walked off, neeve who was looking ever so sorry looked around for prachi but no sign of her , he then looked up at the guy, " one minute" he said with that he sped off and out of the club, straight for the car where surprisingly he met prachi who couldn't help laugh.

They both got into the car and drove off, N- so this was your plan huh, ooh seriously you better watch it, P- whatever I dare you to take revenge, N- oh don't you worry I will, P- what ever well I got my two numbers so your left, N- what how did you do it so quickly , P- well I guess you'll never know huh, N- thank god, see how much he loves me he said laughing, N- whatever I'll just ask tow girls at the cinemas , by the way what is the time?

P- 11:30pm, where we going to find a cinema showing movies at this time? N- Don't worry leave that up to me, P- that's what I'm worried about, N- omg that was so funny he said sarcastically , P- I know right she said annoying him even more, N- just be quiet gosh you talk to much seriously it's as if your like one of those 24 hour radio channels that never stop, P- WHAT, N- why you so surprised big mouth , P- omgshh seriously I'm going to kill you when we get out, N- oh how I waned to die from your hands, what great honor he said laughing, Prachi just ignored him.

Soon they stopped in front of a busy cinemas full of people and that to at this time, P- I never knew there was such a place, N- well your so boring you never go out and explore now lets go, prachi followed him ignoring the last comment. Neeve goes in and quickly finds two random girls, sweet talks them and get their number even though they found it a bit weird of him taking photos of them and when he was done he met prachi who was standing in the corner waiting impatiently.

P- finally about time seriously is it that hard to pick up a girl, N- jealousy is a bad disease get well soon, P- wow that is so old, what can't come up with anything else, N- sshh now lets sneak in before anyone sees us, which they happened to do successfully. N- so time for drama, P- yep what are we going to do, N- leave that to me he said grinning to get revenge from all the pranks prachi had played on him tonight, P- whatever let's go and get over with it .

Neev sets his video recorder in his phone making sure no one sure , and they both walked in front of the screen where loud boo's were beginning to fill the room up as well and shouting when Neev looked at the time which was 12 midnight and shouted "why" falling to the ground bringing fake tears to his eyes leaving a shocked prachi , " why did you do it" "wasn't I good enough for you", " and today thinking to celebrate our 1st anniversary by taking you out for a candle light dinner , then for a movie and then to the beach romancing with you all night long, but NOO you're a cheater, a betrayer, you couldn't stay away for him, why did you do it why! why! why! And that to with my best friend, don't you know how much I love you, the cinema was quiet with a few sympathy awes for neev mostly by the females, where prachi stood there as if her eyes were going to pop out any moment now, says "neev" softly but is cut off by neev, N- no don't Say anything he says continuing to fake cry, prachi moves forward, when neev moves back,

N- stay away, leave me he said leaving the cinema but stops at the exit and blows a kiss to prachi mouthing bye hun ending it with a big grin, ooh was neev going to get it today prachi said to herself and then looked around at a silent audience when a few began throwing popcorn at her calling her names insulting her, she some how managed to get out and headed straight for the car finding a very happy neeve, prachi got in and kept quiet.

N- what happened hun cat got ya tongue?, he said laughing, P- Neev your so mean , I hate you, N- and I love you now cheer up what's next, P- gosh you know how much I hate you, N- yep I do he said annoying her more, N- so what's next? , P- well we have one more , our last, go to a theme park and ride on a ride, but all the theme parks are closed and how will we operate the rides, N- seriously prachi you got to get out more, P- oh be quiet and drive, N- no actually you know what you should drive, I'm getting tired, P- fine suit yourself , and they both swapped places, prachi started the car driving ever so slow well that is for neev.

N- I guess you have no interest in winning this game, P- do you want me to drive or not, N- whatever, P- then be quiet and sit like a good boy and you'll get a surprise, N- and what is that , P- oh you'll be seeing your best friend really soon, N- who, P- oh no except god himself after i kill you for the scene at the cinemas, N- oh please get over it, P- hmph what ever.

Sooner or later they show up at a theme park that had a few lights on, they both got out and walked quietly into the theme park after finding a way to sneak in and they were in, in no time. N- so what ride you want to go on, P- does it matter, N- oh please don't tell me are you afraid of rides he said holding his stomach laughing, Prachi elbowed him in the stomach, P- I'm not and I'll prove it to you go ahead choose a ride and I'll come. N- deal how about that one he said pointing to a roller coaster grinning at her reaction, "so still up for it" he said mocking her.

p- of course never been so ready she said with a bit of confident, n- then what are we waiting for lets go before we get caught, prachi got seated while neev figured ho to on the coaster which he successfully figured after minutes as he operated the ride he ran as fast and jumped into the seat with prachi before it left the ground for it's first loop.

N- so having fun miss prachi he said videoing him and her, prachi ignoring his comment didn't wan to say anything, scared she would throw up. N- I knew it your scared aren't you , P- sshh, N- prachi's a scaredy cat, ooh blackmail here we come, P- be quiet I'm not scare…. Before she could continue she saw how high they were from the ground , she began to panic, screaming" help, get me off this, help, aah!! Someone save me, get me down, neeve stop this right now" neev on the other hand couldn't think of anything else trying to console her but no it didn't work, he had no other choice to sshh her up before they would get in trouble, he grabbed her face and kissed her deeply with a lot of pressure, prachi forgetting about her fears kisses him back and in no time the ride has stopped breaking the two apart, when neev burst out,

N- ewww, why did you kiss me, P- what the heck you're the one started it , N- excuse miss I only sacrificed in order to keep you shut before you getting both of us in trouble , P- wow and you call your self smart, couldn't think of another way or maybe you wanted to kiss me huh she said with a smirk, N- me and kiss you please don't start to dream, now lets go were done we have to win, P- what ever . and they both head for the car driving back to the house both ignoring each other on the way.

Angad and Kripa- back to the beginning

Angad and kripa both run to his convertible , they both got in and angad zoomed off , A- so what are we doing first, K- um steal something from a shop, A- great that's easy , whose stealing me or you, kripa just looked up at him she would never dare, A- wait I forgot your miss innocent dw I'll do it gosh, it's a sign were so not wining today, K- why are you so arrogant, whoa where did that come from, A- what ,excuse me did I just hear correct me and arrogant, K- yup you heard right you such a annoying, mean, arrogant imbecile, wow that felt good she said her self, A- well it's nice to know you care about me so much he said sarcastically, don't think you r so perfect, immature freak, K- stop it, A- you started the game I was just ending it if you cant play then don't start it.

K- what do girl see in you, A- well in least I have girls after me , where are the guys, I don't see none chasing after you, you know you should be lucky your in the car with me girls would die to be with me, K-well I'd be happy to give up this so called honor , A- you know what your problem is you like me its so obvious , K- please don't lie to yourself, boys are nothing but idiots, A- yeah and girls are geniuses right he said in a mocking tone, K- well were better than guys, A-WHAT EVER, gosh you fight a lot, k- no only with you, A- aww I feel special, kripa replied by rolling her eyes,

And in no time they were at a mall , they got out and entered into a random shop, A- okay change of plan you're the one stealing and I'll help, K- no , A- great let's just give up now, K- fine I'll do it, A- cool now change into this top and come out pretending to show me and I'll continue for them got it, or is that too much for your little brain, kripa shot a dirty and went into the change room regretting ever to play the game, she came out later showing angad the top when before she knew it, she was in his arms and they were running out the store with security running after them. A- jeeze you need to loose weight, kripa who couldn't resist but pulled his hair hard, A- ouch, K- I hate you, A- fine he said dropping her to the floor, A- save your self he said running off, kripa looked behind and saw the guards heading her way, she got up speeding to the car cursing angad on the way.

They both finally reached the car one after the other, A- wow you actually made it, K-you know I'm doubting of you being a human being, A- what am I some animal he said sarcastically, K- what ever, I have no interest in talking to you, A- and you think I pray to god asking him to have a conversation with you please I don't think so, A- what's next, kripa ignored him, A- whatever he said snatching the list, hmm grave yard, darn there's no grave yard around here, K- wow you live her and your don't even know your way, A- what happened to not interested in talking to me , K- I wasn't you just look so dumb I couldn't help my self, A- are you sure or is it you like me he said leaning over her making her nervous, " cause you know fighting is the first rule to flirting, and you just love to fight with me don't you" he said running his finger on her lips , kripa shoved his finger off her lips, K- don't even try, A- jeeze calm down I was just joking, now shall we continue with the game.

After difficulties angad was able to find a grave yard, they walked into the graveyard, angad who could careless if he was making noises walked ahead of a slightly frightened kripa, I mean who wouldn't be sacred and to make it better she was here with him, great that's all she needed she said thinking to herself facing the ground until she bumped into angad who stopped, A- jeeze can't you walk properly, K- well you don't just stop randomly , A- what ever now get started on the digging, k- what no I'm not going to do it why should I, A- fine then I'm leaving, K- so go I don't need you , A- good angad said leaving her for another direction, kripa stood there helplessly.

What was she to do , how much she hated him right now, soon realizing the fact she was alone in a grave yard she tried to find her way out but she went further in, it was hard to see around, she had been looking for in least a good twenty minutes when bam! she bumped into someone causing herself and the person to fall into the whole with kripa underneath. The person took something out of their pocket, and there was light.

It was angad holding his lighter, A- well look who we have here he said with a grin, A- hmm, so what were you doing huh, looking for me sweetheart, K- no I was finding my way out, A- sure excuses excuses whatever, K- let go of me and get off, A- what if I don't , you know you look pretty hot from this position, K- disgusting you weirdo she said trying to get up where angad trying to stop her, suddenly there was no light as their lips met, Kripa's first kiss and that too with him, the guy she hated the most, angad kissed her softly where kripa who was out of her senses started to go with flow being her first time she didn't no what else to do, when she realized , she pinched his elbow, angad replying with an "ouch", k- Get off now, yuck your so disgusting, great my first kiss and that to with a loser with you, I hate you, A- oye why did you kiss me back, " c*** she didn't have an answer, she got up and got out of the whole, saying " I want to go home , I don't want to play the game anymore and she left while angad followed her after a couple of seconds grinning to himself proud to be her first, but d*** did he have to admit she was pretty good for a first timer.

They both got into the door and drove home in silence, and reached half an hour later, they opened the door to find Raj with Aaliya in his arms laughing, A- what the heck is this?, Raj dropping Aaliya instantly says, R- man tell your annoying sis not to take my stuff, I was blackmailing her, A- oh okay, kripa on the other hand didn't buy it where angad was dumb enough to, soon neeve and prachi came, and in the end neeve and prachi ended up winning since they were the only one to complete.

N- wow we actually won, good job partner, P- please more like I should get the credit, A- don't start again, Aa- please, R- we beg you, N- don't be saw losers, which everyone replied by throwing a pillow at him, N- hey watch it.

After a couple of hours neeve, prachi, and Raj headed for home where Aaliya, kripa and angad head for their own rooms. Kripa changed into shorts and a tank nightie she brought with Aaliya, it sure was comfy. She sat on her bed thinking about the kiss, why did it have to happened, but why did she give in when she hate his guts so much, she was confused she needed to talk to someone but who, she needed fresh air, she decided to go out to the back yard and spend sometime on the swing.

When she opened the door and walked out when she found angad in a black tank with dark blue jeans, he looked fresh, she could tell by his hair, he was with his guitar playing tunes, angad who heard the door close while kripa ran behind the shed without noticing angad had already seen her. Angad grinned when he came up with an idea," why not continue from where we left off he said to himself. He walked back into the house and locked the door smiling to himself here went through front door and climbed over the gate and was once again outside, when kripa shocked, what was she going to do.

A- well look if it aint miss kripa, kripa turned around startled at first then angry, K- so this was your plan, A- nah you don't say, K- why are you always after me, A- because I have fun teasing you, your so pathetic its sad you know, "ouch" that hurt, why she couldn't understand, why should she listen to his nonsense, K- just shut up and give me the keys, A- no, K- fine kripa leaving for the door trying to brake it when she was grabbed and pinned against the door.

K- What do you want? She said annoyed at him

A- Hmm wouldn't you like to know he said while reaching one hand into his pocket taking out a cigarette and a lighter, lighting his cigarette, blowing it in her face.

Kripa coughed slightly, K- lease leave, why do you tease me can't you fine someone else, what do you want

Angad grabbed her by the waist and brought her closer to him, she stared up looking at him, not knowing what to do.

A- You want to know right, well I WANT YOU TO GO OUT WITH ME he said grinning leaving a speechless kripa, as if her heart stopped beating

Okay here was the next part 😊 , hope you guys like it!! 😛 , and sorry for continuing after a long time, but i'll be able to continue reguarly now!! please leave commentss!! 😃 and thank you to everyone who commented

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago