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Posted: 18 years ago
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This ff is based on Prem and Mukti the #1 Jodi!

Prem: is in love with Mukti...but her father does not like him...and can't stop loving her even after her death...


Mukti: is in love with Prem...but her father comes in btw her relationship tries to kill Prem but is unsucessful..


Rohan: Piya's lover


Piya: mukti's luk-alike


Sharad: Was really mean to Bajaj family but soon realises his mistake and comes back to the rescue


Prem's boss: is an evil guy he has love with many girls.


soo i well update Part 1 in a few mins.

Luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok..update soon i cant wait!!
and it sounds really good.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I noe that the introfuction doesn't sound intteresting but the ff well be better!

Part 1

It was a Dark night and many stars...u c fire and 2 peoples shadows..The girl was laying down in the Boy's arm.

Boy: Mukti! dont u thing we should tell ur father about us??
Mukti: nahin agar unko patha chale ga toh tumhe nahin pata voh kya karenge! aur voh kuch bhi kar sakte hain Prem!
Prem: nahin....agar mein hoon toh kuch bhi nahin hoga!
Mukti:Prem...mein abhi ayi!
Prem: Mukti...

Mukti gets up and leaves...like 5 mins later she comes back...
Mukti: Prem yeh lo...yeh pehn lo agar kuch hoga toh yeh tumhare raksha karega!
She ties a necklace around his neck
Prem: Mukti mujhe kuch nahin hoga!
Mukti: phir bhi
Prem: Mukti...(he hugs her)
Mukti: Prem.. i love u aur mein tumhe kohna nahin chati!
Prem: i love u too.

The Next Day

Mukti was sitting in her room wen her dad called her.
Mukti went down stairs

Mukti: ji papa??
Papa: Mukti...tum kal raat kahan thi..hum log tumhe kitni der se doond rahe the
Mukti: voh papa...
Papa: aur joh phone call kal raat ayi thi tumhare liye???
Mukti: voh
Papa: voh ek ladka tha...
Mukti: Papa voh ladka Prem tha
Papa: kaun hai yeh Prem???
Mukti: voh...voh...Prem aur mein...ek dosre se..
Papa: ek dosre se???...pyaar?
Mukti: haan....
Her dad slaps her...she falls on the ground.
Papa: kahan rehta hain yeh..Prem?
Mukti:...mein nahin bataongi!
Papa: kya...tu apne papa ko nahin batayegi?
Mukti:(she gets up)NAHIN MEIN APKO NAHIN BATAONGI!
He slaps her once again and she falls towards the door...were Prem had entered from...
Prem bent down..:Mukti??

Im gonna end there but plzz tell me if i should continue or not
Luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I noe that the introfuction doesn't sound intteresting but the ff well be better!

Part 1

It was a Dark night and many stars...u c fire and 2 peoples shadows..The girl was laying down in the Boy's arm.

Boy: Mukti! dont u thing we should tell ur father about us??
Mukti: nahin agar unko patha chale ga toh tumhe nahin pata voh kya karenge! aur voh kuch bhi kar sakte hain Prem!
Prem: nahin....agar mein hoon toh kuch bhi nahin hoga!
Mukti:Prem...mein abhi ayi!
Prem: Mukti...

Mukti gets up and leaves...like 5 mins later she comes back...
Mukti: Prem yeh lo...yeh pehn lo agar kuch hoga toh yeh tumhare raksha karega!
She ties a necklace around his neck
Prem: Mukti mujhe kuch nahin hoga!
Mukti: phir bhi
Prem: Mukti...(he hugs her)
Mukti: Prem.. i love u aur mein tumhe kohna nahin chati!
Prem: i love u too.

The Next Day

Mukti was sitting in her room wen her dad called her.
Mukti went down stairs

Mukti: ji papa??
Papa: Mukti...tum kal raat kahan thi..hum log tumhe kitni der se doond rahe the
Mukti: voh papa...
Papa: aur joh phone call kal raat ayi thi tumhare liye???
Mukti: voh
Papa: voh ek ladka tha...
Mukti: Papa voh ladka Prem tha
Papa: kaun hai yeh Prem???
Mukti: voh...voh...Prem aur mein...ek dosre se..
Papa: ek dosre se???...pyaar?
Mukti: haan....
Her dad slaps her...she falls on the ground.
Papa: kahan rehta hain yeh..Prem?
Mukti:...mein nahin bataongi!
Papa: kya...tu apne papa ko nahin batayegi?
Mukti:(she gets up)NAHIN MEIN APKO NAHIN BATAONGI!
He slaps her once again and she falls towards the door...were Prem had entered from...
Prem bent down..:Mukti??

Im gonna end there but plzz tell me if i should continue or not
Luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its great !! you should deff continue 😛 i love prem-mukti ffs 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Papa: toh ab yeh kaun hain?
Mukti: yeh...
Prem: mein Prem hoon..Prem Prerna Sharma!
Prem: Mukti?? tumhara gal(cheek) itna laal kyon hain?
Mukti: prem...
Papa: Prem ab tum Mukti se door rehna!
Prem: yeh toh mein kar nahin sakta...kyon ki mein apki beti se bohot pyaar kata hoon
Papa: AHH nahi kaho yeh lavs..tumhare mou se yeh sun ke gin ati hai mujko!
Prem..mein Mukti se shaadi karna na chata hoon...
Papa: nahin hum kabhi bhi humari beti ko tumhare ghar nahin ane de sakte hain!
Prem: lekin..
Papa: NAHIN GET OUT BAHAR NEKLO YAHAN SE!
Prem: mein nahin nikloonga
Mukti's dad slaps Prem...
Mukti: PAPA!
Papa: ...Mukti? tune apne papa ke upar chilaya!
Mukti: haan papa lekin app Prem ko nahin mar sakte!
Papa: kyon???
Mukti: kyon ki voh mera pati hain!

thats were im gonna end it!
and plzz leave pros or cons!
and i noe it was short but if there are some more comments tomorrow then ill post a long part!
Luv ya
Umam
Edited by Umam_Paracha_13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay another pm ff....my fav jodi!!! omg prem and mukti r married 😕 😲 ...yay! 😆 😆
plzz cont soon 😉 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Papa: Pati! tum is had thak ja sakti thi mujhe yeh malum hi nahin tha!
Mukti: ...sorry papa lekin hum dono ek dosre se itna pyaar...
Papa: nahin...ajj ke baad tum dono kabhi nahin mil sakte!...

He leaves

Mukti: dekha Prem meine kaha tha na!
prem: kuch nahin hoga Mukti...i promise!
Mukti: nahin Prem ab voh bohot gusa hain! ab voh kuch na kuch karen gay!

Her papa coms back...but with a gun!

Mukti: PAPA! yeh aap kya karen hain?

she runs upto him: nahin plzz papa aise nahin karen!
Prem: Mukti...hat jao Mukti!
Mukti: Prem...nahin...papa!

Her papa pushes her aside and she hits her head on the staircase!
But she doesn't go unconcious
Papa: MUKTI! AB TUMHARA PREM IS DUNIYA SE JAYEGA!

He points the gun @ Prem.

Prem: aap humari baath kyon nahin samajh sakte?..hum ek dosre se pyaar karte hain...humne shaadi ki toh...wats the problem???
Papa: PROBLEM MY FOOT!...tum abhi isi waqt yahan se bahar niklo..varna mein goli chalaoonga!
Mukti: Prem yahan se chale jao! plzzz
Prem: nahin Mukti humne pyaar kiya hain...guna nahin toh hum yeh kyon pachtain??
Papa: nikhil varna!
Mukti runs to Prem...and hugs him from the back...and then goes infront of him.

Mukti: Papa agar Prem is ghar se jayega toh mein bhi!..aur agar aap Prem ko marenge toh mujhe pehle!
Prem: nahin Mukti...mein jaonga

prem leaves

k im gonna say it i dont think i get many comments on FF's soo i'll keep posting but i might only do like 6-7 parts...but...i have n other FF on the Kasauti forums
soo if u do like my ff's then u could read that one!

luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey, where are all ur ff of prem & mukthi? please PM me the links. thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i just read all the part it is really good plzzzzcontinue soon

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