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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
i just read all the part it is really good plzzzzcontinue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Part 4

prem leaves to his house...

Prerna: Prem..beta Mukti kahan hain?
Prem: uske papa ne humhe ek dusre se milna mana kiya hain...
Prerna: nahin prem tum dono ne shaadi ki hai toh voh tumhe apni patni se milna bandh nahin kar sakte!
Prem: i noe maa lekin umho ne mujhe marne ki damki di hain
prerna: kya!

Back @ Mukti's house...

Papa: Mukti..tu ab is ghar se bahar nahin ja sakti!
mukti: PAPA! nahin plzzz....aap aisa kyon karen hain?
Papa: kyon ki tumne mujhe bataya nahin ke tumne shaadi ki hain! aur shaadi ke baad maa baap ka asherwaad di jate hain aur tu ne kabhi nhin mera asherwaad liya...
Mukti: toh mein apko bata de thi lekin mujhe pata tha ke aap itna gusa hote!
Papa: dekho..mujhe ab is musebaat se kuch nahin lena hain ya dena ...ab tu apne kamre mein jao!
Mukti: nahin!
Her Papa grabs her and and takes her to her room and pushes her in and locks the door.
Mukti bangs on the door yelling for someone to open the door but her dad doesn't

Mukti went to her balcony and stood there and started crying then she grabbed her phone and phone Prem...

Mukti:(still crying)Prem...mere ghar ao..lekin andar nahin mere balcony ke paas.
Prem: lekin kyon...aur tum ro kyon rahi ho?
Mukti: Prem baas ao aur seeree(Ladder) bhi lekar ana
Prem: ok...mein baas 5 min mein ata hoon..

Prem goes downstairs and c's Prerna: Maa!
Prerna:kya hua beta?
Prem: Mukti ne mujhe bulaiya hain...lekin voh ro rahi thi...aur ek sawal...umm where's the ladder?
prerna: kyon...peeche hain...lekin jaldi wapas lekar ao..
Prem: ok mein abhi aya!

Mukti: phones Prem again and tell him everything...

Prem brings the ladder and Mukti was going down wen her dad came in her room...he saw her leaving and to who...Prem!
Papa: Mukti Prem ke saath Kahan ja rahi hain..meine use kaha ke kamre mein baandh ho kar reh na!

Her Dad phones some gunde...and tell them to only attack Prem!

Mukti gets down and hugs Prem...and cries her heart out!

Prem: Mukti kuch nahin hoga!...tum dekhna!

Prem and Mukti get in the car and start driving...wen some of the gunde come and start to attack there car!
Prem stops his car...and gets off...
Prem: eyy wat do u think ur doing!
Duy: sorry lekin Sir ne kaha hain ke yeh karen...toh Chalo guys!

All the gunde get off the car and start to Attack Prem... and Muktis dad was watching all this from far away

They all start whipping and hitting Prem...Mukti gets off the car and heads towards Prem...
Mukti: eyyy chodo use!
She pushes some of the guys away...
Prem then gets up and starts beating up those guys...
Prem gets all these guys on the ground but Mukti dad comes out from were he was with more guys...
Mukti was Standing behind Prem
Mukti: PAPA! app!
Prem: Mukti tumhare papa ne toh mujhe jaan se marna hai!
Papa: dekho Prem agar tum yahan se chale jao that would be great cause u and my daughter cannot meet!
Prem: dekho... hum ke rahe hain ke hum ne shaadi ki hain..toh phir aap humhe kyon juda kar rahe hain?
Papa: dekho......tum dono ek dusre se nahin mil sakte!
Prem: kyon nahin humhe farz hai hum pati patni hain!

Papa: SHUT UP!
He points a guns @ Prem

This is were ill end it today...but ill will be leaving to Toronto the day after tomorrow soo ill try to update again tomorrow!ILY!
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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info:....

ill be changing the name of my ff to Love...Was His Only Destination!

and here's part 5...

Part 5

he shoots the gun and Prem moves out of the way and loads of people start running out of there houses.

Prem luks up @ Mukti's dad and c's and expression on his face

Prem c's him takes that gun and shoot himself!...and Prem turns to c Mukti....

Prem: Mukti????

Prem turns around and c's Mukti covered in blood..her father had shot her instead of Prem.

Prem runs to Mukti and Mukti was falling and he grabs her.

Prem: Mukti!....
Mukti: Prem....Prem...
Prem: no Mukti! MUKTI!!
Mukti: Prem...
and she was gone...
Prem: MUKTI!!!!!

5 years later...

Prem was in a new job were he did work for other people.

soon his boss comes to him.

Boss: Prem...
Prem: yes.
Boss: i need u to do something for me
Prem: watis it?
Boss: i need u to keep an eye on someone...
Prem: who?
Boss: her name is Piya...Piya Rai...were in love but i have a feeling she doesn't love me nemore just keep an eye on her and c if there is ne one else.
Prem: ok...wats her adress.?

Prem's Boss takes him to Piya's house...

Outside:

Boss: ok ill leave now...i have to go to europe for a few days i want u to keep an eye on her until i get back
Prem: ok

thats were ill end it today..plzz tell me if it was ok

luv ya Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
HOW CAN U KILL HER? HW CN U KILL MUKTI? please let that piya gal be mukti or sumtin like dat. she might be her look-alike or sumfin but please just bring her back
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6

Prem enter's Piya's house...he luks around...he c's there was a photo on the table...he was going towards it wena voice came out of no where.

"Aap Kaun?"

Prem turns around and gets a shock of his life.

Prem: Mukti?
" Nahin mein Piya hoon...aur aap kaun?"
Prem:...Prem...um my boss sent me to luk after u...here's his card..u must noe him...
Piya: oh haan...ok...aap ne mujhe dekh liya toh phir jaye.
Prem: haan chalta hoon bye.

Prem was driving home wen he kept thinking y does Piya luk like Mukti. Then he started just driving around until 10:30. Then Prem goes to a bar...he suddenly remembers everything again about him and Mukti.and he started to drink...it was 2:00 in the morning...Prem was walking out of the bar and he kept cing Mukti's face...wen she gave him the chain...he felt the chain still hanging on his neck...

then @ 2:50 Prem reaches home.
Prerna: Prem tu kahan tha???
Prem: uhh...no where just doing some work.
Prerna: itni der thak
Prem: yea ..Maa im tired im going to bed.

Prem goes upstairs to his bedroom:

Prem grabs Mukti's picture and just luks @ it...he lays in his bed and falls asleep hugging Mukti's Picture.

Prerna cums upstairs...and c's Mukti's Pick in his hand. Prerna goes to him and touches his hair...

Prerna: pata nahin kyon lekin aaj tu Mukti ko bohot yaad kara rahe ho?

the next day.

Prem was sleeping wen his phone started ringing...it was his boss.
Prem: hello.
Boss: Prem...are u @ Piya's house?
Prem: no...
Boss: well leave everyday she usually leaves around 1:00 and its like 11:30 right now.
Prem: ok sir ill leave right away

Prem quickly takes a shower and makes a toast and goes to Piya's house.

Prem rings the door bell...soon Piya opens it.

Piya: hello app phir se agaye?
Prem: sorry ummm(he just made up something to say) my boss told me to give u my card just in case u need any help with ne thing.
Piya: ok ill take it.
Piya takes it..and was about to leave..wen
Prem: my boss sent a car for u.
Piya. no i wont b needing it.
Prem: ok

Prem leaves. and sits in his car...

Then this other car pulles up and calls out for Piya
"PIYA"
Piya comes running out...she gets in the car and they drive off... Prem follows.

Piya and her friends were having a great time.

all of a sudden Piya starts singing for fun...she sing Eh Papi by Rouge.
and her other 2 friends start to join in...then Piya starts dancing close with her boyfriend

whom she loves!.

soon they all drive home...
Prem was waiting till Piya got into her house...Piya went inside and he left.

on his way back his boss phones.

Boss: did u find out nething?
Prem: no sorry.
Boss: ok just keep an eye on this girl ok...ill be back soon.
Prem: ok bye

Prem goes home...
and he was walking past one of the cars parked out side and saw a note on it all it said was "Guess Whose Back"


thats were ill end it today and i was thinking of ending it soon soo there might be longer updates.
i can't continue tomorrow but ill try the day after tomorrow.

luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
oooooooh. wonder who dat is
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 7

Prem was shocked...

Prem: but...who is this?....humare paas sirf ek dushmaan hain...kya yeh voh to nahin?

Prem went inside the house...

Prem: MAAA
Prerna: Kya hua beta?
prem: yeh dekho.
Prerna read the peice of paper. ...

Prerna: yeh kisne likha?
Prem: mujhe nahin pata...magar mujhe lagta hai ke yeh...Sharad ne likha hain.
Prerna: Sharad? Nahin...yeh Sharad nahin ho sakta!
Prem: Maa...its ok ill find out whose this is...and if its sharad... im not gonna leave him!
Prem goes up to his room.
Prem thinks: y does Piya luk like Mukti?...she sounds exactly like her too...but she isn't Mukti..never she'll never be Mukti...

Prem luks @ Mukti picture.

Prem: Mukti...tum kyon chali gayi?Tumhe pata hai jab bhi mein Piya se milta hoon mujhe har waqt tumhari yaad ati hain....Mukti...i love u Mukti
He starts to cry..
Then all of a sudden his phone rings...he luks @ the number..it was Piya.

Prem: hello?
Piya: sorry meine aapko disturb kiya..
Prem: nahi its ok...kuch kaam tha?
Piya: haan...umm aap thodi der ke liye mere ghar aa sakte hain???...mujhe kahin jana hain aur..
Prem: its ok mein aa raha hoon..
Piya: ok bye.
Prem: bye.

Prem leaves

Piya's house:

Prem's @ her house and Piya tell him she had to go some where

Prem and Piya go to his car.
Piya sits and the first thing she notices is a picture but the back of the picture was facing her.

piya: yeh kis ki thasveer hai?
Prem:which one?
Piya was gonna pick it up wen
Prem: no! dont touch it.
Piya got scared: ok.
Prem started driving.
Piya: toh aapka naam Prem hain?
Prem: haan do u have a problem?
Piya: nahi mein sirf pooch rahi thi.
Prem: sorry
Piya: kis cheez ke liye?
Prem: for shouting...
Piya: its ok.
Prem: its just that...that picture is of someone...
piya: mujhe guess karne do...um aapki maa?
Prem: no...just dont guess u'll never figure it out.
Piya: Aapka Pyaar?
Prem just stares @ her...He imagines Mukti actually sitting in her place smiling @ him.
Just then Piya screams!
Prem: luks ahead and there was a truck coming there way...he swirves to the right and stops just before hitting a tree.

Piya: aap kya soch rahe the?!!!
Prem: sorry...i just got lost in some thoughts.
But Piya wasn't luking @ him. The picture had flipped during this scene... and Piya was luking @ the picture.

Piya: aapke paas meri thasveer kyon hain?...ek min yeh meri thasveer nahin hain...yeh toh shaadi ka jodra pehn rahi hain...yeh mein hoon lekin yeh mein nahin hoon?...Yeh Kaun Hain?
Prem: yeh...yeh...
Piya: aapka...aapka pyaar?
Prem: yeh...yeh

Flash Back:

Mukti's Papa shoots the gun and Prem moves out of the way and loads of people start running out of there houses.

Prem luks up @ Mukti's dad and c's and expression on his face

Prem c's him takes that gun and shoot himself!...and Prem turns to c Mukti....

Prem: Mukti????

Prem turns around and c's Mukti covered in blood..her father had shot her instead of Prem.

Prem runs to Mukti and Mukti was falling and he grabs her.

Prem: Mukti!....
Mukti: Prem....Prem...
Prem: no Mukti! MUKTI!!
Mukti: Prem...
and she was gone...

Flashback Ends:

Prem: Mu...Muk...MUKTI!
Piya: Mukti...
Prem just broke down in his seat.

and thats were ill end it today....but ill continue tomorrow.

luv ya

Umam

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