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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sun_423

okies dear i'll surely pm you about the ideas.... waise dear you continue soon...waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊

thanks....i really appreciate your comment😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kashish was standing their alone in a crowd. She was just about to go but somebody called her name from back.

She turned and saw piyush their. She smiled to him.
K: are Mr. Raheja what are you doing here?
P: I think I should ask this question to you.
K: well I am here with my sister who is invited my Mr. Garawel
P: you mean Mr. chetan garawel?
K: no Mr. sujal garawel
P: sujal invited you.
K: yes.
P: but how do you know him.
K: well I don't know him but I would like to meet him as mehak talks about him a lot.
P: well let's go then
(They both started walking)
K: but you didn't tell me what are you doing here.
P: well I am sujal's cousin and I have thrown this part y for him.
K: oh I am sorry
P: it's perfectly okay, hey there he is let's go, but kripa came and took piyush but kash went toward sujal.

Sujal who had his back toward kashish but instantly turned when mehak said kahsish dee.

(Sujal saw a beautiful fairy in front of him. Her eyes were so beautiful that it instantly made him fall in love with her. Her lips were like rose petals, which were painted with red color. Her beautiful face was shining like moon) he was disturbed by mehak when she took his hand.

M: sujal bhaiya meet her this is my kahsish dee and kash dee this is sujal bhaiya.
K: hi Mr. garawel, mehak talks a lot about you.
S: hi (he looks at mehak and smiled) even chinki talks about you a lol.
K: thank you Mr. Garawel thanks for talking care of chinki all these years. I don't know how to thank you.
S: well you can thank me by calling be sujal.(smiled)
K:(smiled) okay..mr…I mean sujal.
S: that's nice.
M: bro go and dance.
S: me but I dont have any partner.
M: go and take dee. (kashish was surprised)
K: me no mehak you know that I am not good dancer.
M: dee you are the best dancer I have even known so go.
S: oh to kashish is the best dancer, so lets go and see. MAY I (he asked for kashish hand)
Kash hesitated for a minute but then took his hand. Both headed toward dance floor where this song was playing-

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki (sujal took kashish's hand in his)
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki (kash puts her hand on his shoulder and sujal takes her waist)
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki (both are looking into each other's eyes)
Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke

Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke Bas Teri Haan Hai Baki (kashish takes her eyes of him and sujal smiles at her take)
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Kaun Sa Mod Aaya Zindagi Ke Safar Mein (kash feels like sujal is still staring at her)
Bas Gaya Tu Hi Tu Ab To Meri Nazar Mein
Dil Ki Har Ek Dhadkan Tujhko Pehchaanti Hai
Meri Chaahat Hai Ab Kya Tu Nahin Jaanti Hai (she looks up at him and smiles which sujal replied by smiling)

Main Tuhje Jaan Gayi Tujhko Pehchaan Gayi
Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki (mehak and angad are looking at kashish who is smiling)
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki (they look at each other and smile)

Aaj Yeh Kya Hua Hai Dil Nahin Mera Bas Mein (mehak sign's angad to ask kripa for dance)
Is Liye Sochti Hoon Tod Doon Sari Rasme
Umr Bhar Ke Liye Tu Aa Mera Saath De De (angad is like "wat" me)
Tera Ho Jaaonga Main Haathon Mein Haath De De
Haathon Mein Haath Sahi Tu Mere Saath Hi Sahi (mehak pushes angad toward kripa)
Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki (angad ask her to dance and both join the dance floor)
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

K: sujal I want to go outside.
S: why? You don't like the party? (in worried tone)
K: it's not like that it's just that I don't feel good. I don't like this atmosphere.
S: (smiles) okay lets go.

Both went outside
They both started walking; both were silent through their short silent walk (hahaha) sujal was glancing at kashish now and then, he didn't knew why but his heart told him to look at kash again and again, and here kashish was just silent, she was just remembering her past….

S: kya huva kashish tum itni chup chap kyun ho? Meri company aachi nahin lagti kay? (he said it jokingly)
K: aise koi baat nahin hain. Main to bas kuch soch rahi thi..
S: kya soch rahi thi…ki mera yehan hone ka ehsas bhi nahin tha.
K: life is so different sometimes; it can change a person form where to where (sujal was confused as why kashish is taking like this)
S: what do you mean?
K: huh..nothing…(kashish not sure why she told all these to sujal)

(Just the mehak calls kashish )
M: dee…(shouts)
K: (looks back and smiles and goes toward her, with sujal following her)

K: kya huva CHINKI?
M: dee I think we should go home.
K: ya I was just going to say that.
S: hey guys you cant go these early you haven't eaten the dinner.
K: no sujal I think its pretty late, any other time.
S: par
M: bhai…plz and angad have to go to Mumbai tomorrow.
S: why?
M: well my bro wanna be a singer so he got his first album contract with AMIT PAUL.. (he is my favorite)
S: WOW! Amit paul the one who was in Indian idol right?
M: yes him…so we need to go.
S: okay..
(just then angad comes)

A: chale dee (to kashish)
K: haan chalo. Bye sujal, it was pleasure meeting you
S: same here.
M: bye bhai…par ghar jarur aana
S: definitely.
A: bye man.
S: see ah and best of luck for your first album.
A: thanks

(So now they all go home and here party ends soon)
Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
hey Amit Paul is y favourite as well 😃 😃 😃 pity he didn't become Indian Idol 😭 😭 but Angad is so lucky 😊 😊 😊 The part was great 👏 👏 👏 Sk dance was superb 👏 👏 👏 hmmmm what abt Kashish's past its a mystery 😉 😉 😉 plz solve it ans continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
very nice..i liked the first meeting of sujal , kashish very much..un dono ke beech nothing is spoken yet there are so many things spoken in between them..i liked this very much... very well written... 👏 please do continue soon.. i'll be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow lovly part👏 sujal,kashish meeting was so nice i think they should confess their love to each other i really waiting for that moment & one think the part was great plsssss cont.soon can't wait to read more see u.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: aishwaria

hey Amit Paul is y favourite as well 😃 😃 😃 pity he didn't become Indian Idol 😭 😭 but Angad is so lucky 😊 😊 😊 The part was great 👏 👏 👏 Sk dance was superb 👏 👏 👏 hmmmm what abt Kashish's past its a mystery 😉 😉 😉 plz solve it ans continue soon 😊 😊

i like amit paul too so i picked him.....i know i think they should have choose him, he is much better then prashat. prashant is also a good singer but not as good as amit to me.

Thanks...i was having a trouble write this part...i just didnt knew how do i make them intro. with each other....but i tried to write it really good....😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sun_423

very nice..i liked the first meeting of sujal , kashish very much..un dono ke beech nothing is spoken yet there are so many things spoken in between them..i liked this very much... very well written... 👏 please do continue soon.. i'll be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Thanks a lolyaar...i wanted it to be like that. kash is quite and i wanted them to understand each other without any word.

Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Aleeza_23

Wow lovly part👏 sujal,kashish meeting was so nice i think they should confess their love to each other i really waiting for that moment & one think the part was great plsssss cont.soon can't wait to read more see u.

Thanks a lol.....i tried to make their meeting special.....they will confess it soon, but dont know when....you just have to wait until rigth time comes dear....so keep reading and give me all these supportive comments...😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for claps

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Posted: 17 years ago
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(sujal in his room)
S: yeh kay ho raha hain, maine aj tak koi bhi ladki main interested nahin tha par aaj yeh main kashish kay saath.. . Aj jab kashish se mila to aise laga ki woh kahin mere se judi hain. Uski who kali kali zulfe(hair), who samundar jaise aakhe, who gulab kaise muskurahat(smile) aura b kuch, who sabse algag thi. Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain…sujal beta ab sochana chod kashish ke bare main. (he smiled to himself and went to sleep)

(on other side kashish was in thoughts to)

K:yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain, main kyu baar baar sujal kay bare mian soch rahi hoom. Kyun who pehle hi baar mein mere liye itna special ban gaya. Kyun? Kyun….
(Having these thoughts she slept)
(Next morning)

K: mehak jaldi nasta kar lo mujhe office jana hain, and angad here are somethings that I have packed for you, for trip.
A: dee what is this..
K: this is a care of a sister.
A: hmm.
K: here you go, and have a safe journey and come back soon, we will miss you
M(come from upstairs): who will miss this Bandar.
A: you are going to miss me sister.
M: me no way
A: yes way, I know you are going to miss me the most.
M: wah wah…which sister is not going to miss her brother.
A: chalo ab yeh emotional dialog band karo.
M: lo bhai, bhalai ka to jamana hi nahin raha.
A: wh wah wah….okay bye dee, bye chinki…I will miss guys.
K-M: us too..bye ( sees of angad )

K to mehak: okay tum nisha (her friend) kay ghar ja rahi ho na, to chalo main tumhe office jate jate chod jungi.
M: thik hain dee! I will just get my bag.
After a while kashish droped mehak at nisha's house and went to Sinha Enterprises.
Sectary: good mornign maam
K: morning jeeny. Send send the file of RnG company to my office. (saying this she went to her cabin)
J: maan here….
K: thank you... (jenny goes after saying this)
Kashish started studying that file intensely. After studying that file 2 hour she called mr. patel (manger) and asked him for his opinion for this project. He agreed so they finalized the deal.
K: I will just call mr. raheja and tell him about our agreement.
M: okay maam
Kashish calls RnG (piyush)
K: hello may I talk to mr. piyush?
Voice: yes just a sec.
P: hello (phone is on speaker as sujal was sitting their)
K: mr.piyush this is kashish sinha (sujal's eyes shot up)
P: oh hi miss sinha.
K: hi, mr. raheja called you because we have decided to deal with your company.
P: oh really, that's great.
K: and I would like to have a meeting for this project.
P: okay Miss sinha, as you say. When?
K: tomorrow will be fine.
P: hmm tomorrow well I think it will be okay.
K: okay then see you tomorrow. Bye
P: bye
(this whole conversation was heard by sujal who was sitting their and was amused at kashish seniority toward work)
S: piyush you are going to canada tomorrow aren't you?
P: Yes I am.
S: then who is going to attend the meeting, I mean you are handling that project and you know the detail of that project.
P: yeh that's the problem. Why don't you attend the meeting. (sujal was shocked)
S: me piyush, but I don't know any detail about this project.
P: here (h handed him his file) all the details are in this file, can you plz study it and give the presentaiotn tomorrow.
S: par piyush…this is your dream project?
P: (smiled) it is but sujal it doesn't matter who handle this project. I can never forget what your family has done for me…(sujal interpreted)
S: (he said it loudly) my family…piyush it is your family too. We are best friends and I care everything with my friend. I have always treated you as my elder brother, as part of our family but I have never thought that you would ever say that…(he turned a around in anger, disappointment)
Piyush came by him and turned him around. He had tears in his eyes.
P: hey sujal! (sujal didn't spoke)
P: sujal plz talk to me…
S: how can you say that you.
P: I am sorry yaar…who thoda emotional ho gaya tha.
S: hmm
P: kya hmmm go and study this file for tomorrow's presentation….(he smiled)
S: (smiled) okay yaar…but never ever say that you are nto part of our family orelse I am not going to talk to you ever.
P: okay mere baap….ab main aapna kaam karu…(he smiled and sujal hugged him lightly and went to his cabin, that he just got)
P: bilkul pagal hain

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