Kya pyar dard hai? (sk)..upd pt 10 pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey great part....i hope i see kashish in next part 😛

thnx bhumi...4 commenting...probably you will see kashish in the next part...will continue soooon...keep commenting...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

lovely part dear... 👏 ...so da guy was anagd.. 😳 ..bechara.....free mein phas gaya.. 😉 .now his sis wil nt leave him... 😃 ....do cont soon... 😊

thnx di 4 commenting...haaan heheheheheh chalo dekhte hai abh kya haal hoga uska....will continue sooon...keep commenting...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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just 3 comments...i think you guys don't really like my ff...thn i have to stop writing... 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 ...great....lol..woh girl kahin kashish to nahi 😆 ...continue soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

👏 ...great....lol..woh girl kahin kashish to nahi 😆 ...continue soon 😃 😃 😃

no thnx faru jee i'm glad you liked it...accch guess hain you'll get to know in the coming part...will continue soooon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4

recap : principal calls angad's sister ....angad scared... sujal and akshat have a conver......

girl 1: main hoon na
man : nahin not u...
girl 1: no app toh usseh seedha maafh kardenge lekin mein...nahin...annne doh ussseh...aaj toh usne phone hi nahin kiiya...
man: kaam mein hoggah...
girl 1: no papa ...appp usski taraf daarri na kijiye toh hi accha hai...
man: lekin ...meri baaat toh sunno...
girl 1: no...aaj toh usne haadh hi karrdi ...maaar piiith....[someone enters]
girl 2: chodd naa tuu..kyun tension leh rahin haaiii...baccha hai...
girl 1: tu toh chup hi reh...harrh waqt uski taaaraf daaari karkeh ussseh bigad diya hai...
girl 2: abbbh maine kya kiya [confused]
girl 1: nahin nahin tunneh toh kuch nahin kiya...sati savitri honne ka dhong karti rehtti ho....
girl 2: mein toh sati savitri hooon...lekin tuu toh hitler seh bi....
girl 1: kya kaha tumne charuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ki bacchi aaaj tujeh nahin chodungi [she runs behind charu...]
charu: aaaa naaa...
girl 1: i hate u...


a bunch of boys and girls: arre woh dekkho charu maam aur kashish maam...[all are laughing] lagta hai tom and jerry ka bhooot chara hai...

kashish : [heard everything and stopped] chalo tum sabbh log jao appneh ghar warna kal ki class meh teen ghanteh ummmmmm...[thnking for a topic and then speaks up] Mahatma Ghandi kah lecture...
all: [shout] NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN....bye maaam
Kashish: [laughs] bye...paagal...

[charu comes to kashish...]

charu: [starts breathing fast] kya hua
kashish: tujeh pata hai yeh bacche humein kya keh rahe hai...
charu: kya? kya ? kya?
kashish: TOM AND JERRY [starts laughing]
charu : oeeeeee nahin chodungi unnneh annedoh agli class mein....khabar lungi inki...
kashish: charu abbbh acting maath kar...baccche hai mazaak kar rahe thee...waise charu woh log theeek hi toh keh rahe thay...
charu: kashish tu bii...[both share a laugh]


Cut to Angad....

[woh abbi apni car mein hai...aadhe ghanteh mein he'll reach in the village]


in the village...

[ Angad apni car ko apne ghar seh bohot duur park kartta hai keh kashish ko pata nah chaalleh...and he starts walking...chup chup keh bina awaaz kiye jaa raha hai air achanak seh]

charu: ehhhh...rukkk...
Angad: margaya...[turns] maine kuch nahin kiya...
charu: tunneh toh kuch nahin kiya...lekin kashish kuch karne walli hai...
Angad: loohaa (metal) garam hai kya...
charu: haaan...bohot garaaam hai...aadha (half) garrr gaya hai (has melted) ...
Angad: ehhh BBC...kuch kaar na..please ...ek tu hi hai jo di ko samjha sakti hai...
charu: hmmmm kya karrun..[suddenly remembers angad neh usseh kya pukara] kya kaha ? mein BBC?
Angad: [ran away from her] abbbh BBC ko BBC nahin kahoggeh toh kya star newa kahoggeh...[jokes around]
Charu: hmmmm..toooh yeh baat hai theek hai...phir .... kahsish koh toh tu hi manana ..theek hai na...mein toh challi [keeps her hand on angads shoulder] woh kya hai na aaj meri ek lambi class hai...
Angad: ehh meri behen meri shona jaise behen please yaaaar...please i am sorry tuh BBC nahin hai...mein huu gaddha no.1 ....
charu: haaaaaan abbh ayah na line peh...
Angad: mujeh pata thaa yahan gao mein ek tu hi hai jo meri side leetti hai aur mujeh support karti hai i love u sis...
charu: haan haaan chal abbbh drama bandh kaarh...kuch sochne deh mujeh...[thinks and speaks up] pehle mujeh theek seh batao uss din hua kya thaa?
Angad: [he tells charu everything that happend and finishes by saying] aur maine ussseh maarna shuru kiya...
charu: tu bi kitna buddhu hai agar usne kuch kaha toh tujeh ignore karna chaiye..khamakhaa appneh liyeh problem khaadi kardi...abbh tumharreh pass ek option hai jisseh kashish tummeh maaf kardegggi..
Angad: kaise?
charu: tu ussseh sab kuch saach batadee...
Angad: mooh fitteh tera...tum toh mujeh aur problem mein dallogi.
charu: tu samajta nahin..kahsish ko sach kehnne walleh bohot pasand hai...kashish ek aissi larki hai jo sach aur jooth ko kisi keh bi ankhon mein paadd sakti hai..
Angad: mujeh lagt ahai tu sahi keh rahin hai [thinks and decides] theek hai mein di ko sabh sach sach batadunga...[goes to their house]
charu: [shouts and shows a thumbs up sign...] best of luck..

Angad gives a smile lekin usko abbhi bi daar hai keh agar kashish di neh maafh nahihn kiya tooooh kya hogga essa sochteh sochteh he reaches home...gulps his saliva aur extends his hand and rings the door bell...someone opens the door..

angad: [does not see kisne darwaja khoola uska saar jhuka hua hai] m sorry di...mujeh maafh kardo mera woh irada nahin thaa...[tries to continue aur saarh upar karta hai] papa!!! phew... di kaha hai...
sinha: ander hai...tumhara intezar kar rahin hai [says coldly]
angad: papa app bi...app janteh ho mein aisa kuch...
sinha: tu jaaa warna phirseh chillaeggi...
angad: waise isss ghar mein barraaa kaun hai appp yah di...kabhi kabhi lagta hai keh woh appki maa hai aur app uskeh beteh (son)
sinha: fhil haaal toh woh meri maa hai...abbh yahan kya khadda hai jaaa naaa...
Angad: jaata huun na...

in the sitting room...

kashish khaddi hai gusseh mein...talks to herself...

kashish: abbi tak nahin ayah...annnehdoh ussseh aisa sabakh sikhaungi...keh [turns and see's angad khada hai mooh phula keh...kaan pakad keh feeling guilty...]

kashish: aagae app...
angad: jeee woh...di ...woh mein ...appko...woh
kashish: mujeh kuch nahin sunnah...tumeh pata hai mein itni mehnaat karti hoon keh tummeh best education milleh aur tum ho keh college mein aisi harkatein karte ho cheee...mein bi ussi college mein thii kisi seh bi puchlo kashish sinha kesi thii...tummeh ek bi shikayat nahin millegi lekin tumh ho keh mera hi naaam badnaam karna chahte ho...
angad: di i am sorry lekin...kya appp janti ho uss din kya hua thaa...maine kyun maaar piit shuru kii...
kashish: mein yeh sabh nahin suunna chahati...tumne maar pit kii hii kyun why...why...kya maine bachpan seh lehkaar aajtak tumhe yehi sikhaya hai...
angad: nahin lekin...
kashish: basssss ....
angad: nahin bass nahin...appko meri pooori baaat sunni hi parregi jab tak koi nattigeh (conclusion) par pohoncho.. [he tells her everything and didn't let her interrupt in between]
angad: abbh app hi bataiyeh kya maine galat kiya uss larki ko bachaa kaarh...haa mein mantaa huu keh maine uss paad pehle haath uthaya pad usne bi maaa ko gali dena shuru kiya...

kashish: abbh mein kya kahun tumseh...tumeh phir bi uspar haaath nahin uthhana chaiyeh thaaa...tum janteh ho aise larkon ko koi badnammi ki parwah nahin lekin hummeh hai...samjhe...
angad: jeee..ainda mein iss baat ka khayal rakhunga...i am sorry..
kashish: [goes to him and kisses his forehead...] tum janteh ho tumharreh peeche maine ek bohot hi mehnti (hardworking) larkeh ko dekha hai jismein woh kabiliyat hai...kuch kardikhane kaah...aur zindagi mein aage bharne kaaa...
angad: di mein toh yehi dua karta hooon keh kabi koi aisa kaam naa karooon jissseh appko takleef ho...
kashish: mein janti hooon...apni didi ko dukhi nahin dekhsakteh to kabi aisa kaaam karrogeh hi nahin...
angad: bohot pyar jooo karta hooon aapseh...
charu: [jisne saabh kuch sunnah] accha sirf isss di seh pyar karteh ho aur mujhse nahin...
angad: arreh BBC di ko kaise bhool sakta hooon...
charu: [hits him on his muscles]
angad: oeeee araam seh pata hai pooore 3 mahine laaga hai issseh bharranne (increasing) mein... [pointing at his muscles]
charu and kashish: acchhaa...[dono starts hitting him]
angad: papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... 🤢

jab bi kashish angad aur charu saaath hottteh hai toh bilkul bacche banjatteeh hai...aur issi tarah woh din hassssi khushi nikal jaata hai...kashish angad ki favourite dishes banatti hai they have a smaalll party with all the villagers...bhalleh hi gao wallon keh pass ittneh paise nahin hotteh appne zarooortoh ko poora karneh kii lekin inkeh passs pyar ki takat hai joh paison ki takat seh ziada hai...woh jahan bi hotteh hai khush hotteh hai...apno keh saath...


okay gys here comes the end of part 4....will be waiting eagerly for your comments...

Edited by Honii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Wow yaaaaaaaar gr888 storyyy hanaaa ..... 👏 ek dum jhakass hehehehe ...
Ab intezar hai mujhay k sujal aur kashish kaise milte hain hehehe 😳 😳
COntinuee soooooooooooooooooooooooooon...
*iMAn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Honii u r an awesum writer!!gr8 goin!!cont soon! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part!!!!!! 👏

Continue soon!!!

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey nice nok jhok between kashish,charu and angad. really the part was very good 👏 . specially tom and jerry one 😆 . continue soon yaar plzz....can't wait any longer. waiting for sujal kashish's meeting. 😳

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