Kya pyar dard hai? (sk)..upd pt 10 pg 16

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hey awesome part yaar..plz continue soonnnnnnn 😃

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lovely part.. 👏 ..gr8 gng....do cont soon...

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: beauty_queen
Wow yaaaaaaaar gr888 storyyy hanaaa ..... 👏 ek dum jhakass hehehehe ...
Ab intezar hai mujhay k sujal aur kashish kaise milte hain hehehe 😳 😳
COntinuee soooooooooooooooooooooooooon...
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ballleh balllleh great to see u imu....no thnx jeee 4 commenting...don't worrry sujal and kashsih bohot jald miljaenge basss abbh thoda sah intezar...

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: easygold
Honii u r an awesum writer!!gr8 goin!!cont soon! 😛

thnx easygold....will continue soooon....keeep commenting...

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: togepe30
Awesome part!!!!!! 👏

Continue soon!!!

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no thnx vandu jeeeee....will continue sooon...keeep commenting..😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: fravashi
hey nice nok jhok between kashish,charu and angad. really the part was very good 👏 . specially tom and jerry one 😆 . continue soon yaar plzz....can't wait any longer. waiting for sujal kashish's meeting. 😳

hey nikki...thnx alot yaaar m glad u liked it....sk meeeting is coming up bass thoda sah intezar....will continue sooon...keeep commenting...😃

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Originally posted by: ami_princess
hey awesome part yaar..plz continue soonnnnnnn 😃

thnx bhumi...will continue sooon...keep commenting..😃

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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*
lovely part.. 👏 ..gr8 gng....do cont soon...

thnx di...will continue sooon...keep commenting...😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

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PART 5 ...

next morning...

Angad is sleeping peacefull dreaming ....achanak

kashish: anguuuu...chal uttth yeh mumbai nahin gao hai yahan weekends parrh koi 11 bajeh keh baaad nahin uttthta
angad: theek hai toh mein mumbai chala jataa hun waha toh koi nahin aeega na utthannne...[says in a sleepy tone]
kashish: [gets angry] theeek hai toh padde raho yahin.....

kashish leaves but angad is still sleeping....

outside near a tree....

kashish: good morning class...did you all finish your english and maths homework...
children: yes maaam....[they shout]
kashish: okay today i am going to talk about human values...
children: [interested] ohhhh
kashish: these are very important for every individual...human values complete a human being
children: [all are giggling and looking behind kashish]
kashish: kya hua...why are you all laughing...

now they start laughing loudly...kashish turns...but there's no one ...

kashish: shut up....[gets angry] bunty!!!stand up
bunty: [stands and says] yes maaan
kashish: tum log hass kyun rahe ho...
bunty: yunhi (just like that)
kashish: arrgggghhhhh...sit down ...abbh agar tum hasseh sabbh ko punishment milleggi samjeh...
all: sorrry maaam....[and again couldnt contol themselves and started laghing like crazy]

kashish turned and saw Angad was standing on the tree and making stupid faces...

kashish: oh mr.angad...[took a stick in her hand and ran after him]
angad: [is yelling] nahin didi nahin...yaar lag jaegggi.....di....
kashish: aacccha jab meri class distract kar rahe thay tabh nahin socha...
angad: sorry sorry yaaar....[stops acts as if he is stronger] accha app mujeh marengi ....mariye mariyeh naa...[heads closer to kashish]
kashish: mumbai jaaakeh itni himmmat aggai keh appni di ko challenge karrogeh...
angad: haa...[before he could finish kashish started hitting him and he ran] sorrry di
kashish: bade himmat wallleh ho naa aooo na [shouts at him]

In the evening....cut to garewal house

chetan: yeh sabh kya hai...[to veena] tum jannti ho aaj mere kuch friends anne walleh hai aur tumne mere jhua khelne ka table nikalwadia
veena: [says in a scared expression] jee haaan ... app janteh hai maa jeee neh kabi nahin chaha keh app kabi jhua khelen aur app?
chetan: oh shut up... tum aur tumhari maa jee...mere baap dada neh khella thaa mere dad neh khella tha...toh here i am mein bi khelunga ....kya tum mujeh rokogi huh?[laughing]
veeena: haaaan [chetan is shocked]
chatan: batameeez [slaps her]

aur ussi waqt sujal and krpia wahan agae...

kripa and sujal: dad yeh kya kar rahein hein app...
chetan: ek tumhari maa kaam thii keh tum dono agae...
sujal: mr.Garewal ainda kabi appne meri maaa paad haath uthanneh ki koshish kii [gets more angry and points at him] toh mein bhul jaunga keh app mere dad hai...
veeena: [before sujal could continue veena slaps him] sujal tum bhul rahe ho keh tum kisseh baat kar rahe ho...
chetn: haaan haaan ...yahin sikhaya hai na apppne beteh (son) ko...
sujal: maaa abbi bi app iski taraf darri kar rahi ho ...yeh insan jisne appko itneh saaal dard diya...
veena: sujal please...mein appne pati keh barreh mein kuch nahin sunnah chahati...

sujal gets angry on chetan and leaves the house....bahar appni car mein behet jata hai kripa follows him and usseh rokne ki pooori koshish kar rahin hai lekin sujal nehin rukah...sujal apppni gadi itni tezh chala raha hai keh usseh khud ko pata nahin woh kahan jaa rahah hai...aaaj uski manzil ka faisla usne appneh gusseh padd chorhdiya hai...he is driving and driving and driving Mumbai seh bohot duuur hai abbh naaa usne aggeh dekha naa peeche aur chaaal pada saaamne ek truckk aati hai sujal lost his control and ek khaaaai mein uski gadi...
DHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ....ek bada blast hua...

here is the end to part 5....was a lil short sorry 4 that....will be waiting 4 comments...

Edited by Honii - 18 years ago