Kya pyar dard hai? (sk)..upd pt 10 pg 16 - Page 2

PART !...

We enter a huge mansion...10 workers are seeen cleaning every corner of the house...camera zooming at the dining table...hmmm an old man is sitting having a bad mood...and a lady is standing [having a scared look on her face]...

man : yeh kya hai ?
lady: jee nashta...(scared)
man: mein taaaanggh agaya hun(tired of ) tumseh..harrozh yeh parathhe [moving the plate away]
lady: jee woh
man: kya woh woh? [stands up] ek baar jab kuch kehta hun toh samaj mein nahin aatta...lagta hai roz mujeh yeh parrathe khilakkkeh ek din mujeh mardaalogi...mere pitagee ki raeh(advice) tumhare barreh mein bilkul sahee thee tum jessi aurtein hum amiron (rich) ko phasti ho aur jab business mein koi khotara ho toh ...humarreh barre mein puchti tak nahin...
lady: yeh kya keh rahe hein app...hosh mein toh hai...kya appne pehle kabi mujhse pyar nahin kiya ...[having tears in her eyes]
man:hosh mein toh abbh ayah hun mein...yeh thi merri zindagi ki sab seh badi galti...joh maine tumseh pyar aur shadi karne ka faisla kiya...[he leaves by saying that]
lady: hey baghwan...pata nahin konse pappon ki sajja milh rahin hai mujeh

[App sabh logon neh sahi pehchana yeh thi Veena Garewal jiski zindagi maut seh bi bhattar hai aur woh thay Mr.Chetan Garewal jo koi na koi bahana banakeh jagda karte thay]

Camera zoom hota hai uppar ki taraf its a beautiful flooor...ek kamre peh nazar padti hai jahan seh...ajeeb sih awaazein arrahin hai...jaisse koi typing kar raha ho...a girl is standing infront of that door...her hair are open and messy..she has worn a pink color ka silk pyjama suit...woh dekkhti hai keh wahan door step peh ek tray aur coffee ka mug pada ha...

girl: oh my god yeh bhai kabbhi sudherne walle nahin hai...[woh darwaja khol keh ander jaati hai]

She sees a handsome guy...shirtless aur sirf pyjama's pehna hua hai(loll)...sitting on his computer table and doing some work...wahan table peh saari files messed up hai...

girl: bhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiii [screams as if she had seen a cockroach]
guy: [jhaaaaat seh chair seh utth jatta hai] kya hua kripa?
Kripa: App neh iss ghar koh samaj kya rakkha hai...harr waqt kaaam...subha kaam...dhopeir(afternoon) ko kaaam...shaam ko kaaam...raat ko bi kaaam..uffffffhhhhh [irritated] give me a break!!! app ek kaaam kyun nahin karte humare ghar ko office...mhhhhh mhhhhhh [isseh pehle kripa kuch kehtti that guy keeps his hand on her mouth to shut it]
guy: yaaar haarrozh ye hi bhashan..abbh mein kya karun agar yeh project ka kaaam mein abbi khatam nahin karunga toh dad mujhpeh chillaenge...kya tum chahti ho keh aisa ho?huh? bolo nah?
Kripa: mhhhhhh...mhhhhhh...[signalling him to remove his hand]
guy: ohhh sorry sorrry [jhaatt seh appna haatth hata deta hai]
kripa: okay okay...yeh toh theek hai lekin...meri ek hi shikayat hai...
guy: kya?
Kripa: jab app utth jatte ho toh kaaam karne laag jatteh ho...aur jab nashteh kah time hottah hai toh app office ka bahana banna keh patli galli seh nikal jatteh ho...abbh mein appko nashta kiyeh bagair jannne nahin dungi...samjeh app?
guy: Accha jeee.. joh hukum sarkar...waise kripa mein bohot motta hun toh patli galli seh nahin nikal saktah..[says that to make her smile]
Kripa: bhaiyaaaaa [says cutely and hugs him]
guys: [hugs her back] pata hai iss chotti si muskaan keh liyeh mein kuch bi karr sakta hun..
Kripa: ohhhh bhaiya....you are the best..aisa bhai bhagwan harrh behen koh deh...aur mein unhh khush nasib behnon mein seh hun jisse app jaisa bhai milla...i love u sujal bhaiya..
sujal: i love you 2..

[yah so that guy is none other than Sujal Garewal]

Someone is standing near the dooor and watching the whole scene...

person: I love you three...
Kripa: tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...


okay guys ...this is the end of part one...sorry if there are spelling errors...will be waiting for your comments...
next part: who is that person?

awesome ff pls ont. wil b waiting for the next part

hey very good part....plz conntinue soon

wooow great hana....loved the intro and the first part 👏 ....waiting for you to continue... 😉 😉 😉

cool intro ...plzz continue sooon

WOW NICE STARTING 👏 . CONTINUE SOON PLZ...... WANNA READ MORE. 😊 😛 😊

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hana dear kya baat hai ek dum zabardast.. fulltoo too good.. intro & the first part was very well written... tumne har ek cheez ko bade hii bhakhoobi dikhaya hai.. me liked it very very very damn much.... keep up the good work going... simply awesome yaar.... 👏 ab yaar please jaldi se continue karna.. me waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃

hana dear
i can simply say

u r rocking dear 👏

waise tau i got that who is third person but just see if i m right or not in ur next part 😉 waiting 4 that 😛

characterization is so sweet
luv them

lolz
ana 😳