RN's Love Station Revisited...... C Pg-73 - Page 52

hey sanya nice part.....
by the way how were ur exams?????

hey thats interesting

pl continue soon

hi sanya
after a long time i visited the fan fiction forum yesterday and was just browsing throgh the pages when i caught "RN lovestation revisited".........i had already read half of the first part that is "RN lovestation" but had to leave it due to my board and competetive examinations so i was glad to find this..............as i started reading the story yesterday night i started to enjoy it so much and was so engroosed that when i checked the time it was almost 3:45 am.......so i switched off my computer [although i didnt want to].......
so today when i woke up i switched on my computer and continued reading your story from episode 27 till here that is episode 59................i enjoyed reading it so much that it took me only 1 day to read 59 episodes.................
you are a brilliant writer.............you have done an amazing job............the way the characters developed and the way friendship between raj and naina turned into love gradually was mindblowing.............the writing has been so good that i could actually draw out a picture of it in my mind and the dialogues used by the characters makes it all the more exciting to read..............the most rocking part was the one when raj and naina play thier pranks during navin's and neetika's honeymoon
infact i am glad that i had 59 episodes available to read in 1 day because i am eagerly waiting for the next part for the past 7 hours and now i know how others who have been a regular reader feel when they dont find the next update 😆
please put up the next part soon 😊

Hiii Nishant!!
Thanxxx a lot dear!!I m glad u liked it!Bt wait to karna hi padega aur woh hi bahut zyada since I m veryyyyy irregular these days...nxt update wud need a day or two more!Sryyyy for disappointing u!

Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

Hiii Nishant!!
Thanxxx a lot dear!!I m glad u liked it!Bt wait to karna hi padega aur woh hi bahut zyada since I m veryyyyy irregular these days...nxt update wud need a day or two more!Sryyyy for disappointing u!

koi baat nahin i'll wait for the next part......i know its a tough job.....take your time...........till then i'll read other fan fics written by you [infact i have already started reading one of them]...........i am really addicted to your writing i guess.........but this one is the best..............its amazing

Awesome parts, jus read da last few... i especially luved da endin of the last part, the renovations bit, really like alekh n sanjhi, they seem really cute!!!!! Cnt wat for the nxt parts... plus im sorry for me bein sooo delayed in ur ff, its jus that i didnt have any time at all to read it... sorry!!!!

Diiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!how was ur exam??????? 😆 .I did not know u were going to update today...pooja dii told me in ym...thanks to her.. 😆 ...chalo ab raj - naine se hath kar aalekh-saanjh....waise aalekh ko imagine karke hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha 😕 ..main hi ajeeb banti jaa rahi hun aaj kal.....but u know I am waiting for the rising of the brother inside raj....it will be fun to read those parts 😆 .Mujhe abhi aalekh par pyaar aa raha hai.U know u have this capacity....last time Doomed mein...huda ko aise potray kiya...woh bhi achcha la gaya...phir abhi aalekh...

And as usual this was another rocking part 👏 .Waise aaj kal thoda paagalo jaisa behave kar rahi hun...isiliye ulta seedha likhne ke liye maaf karna 😆 😆

@ Saheli

Control ur emotions babes!!!!Hota hai hota hai!!!Maafi ki zarorat nhin hai aur agar kabhi hui to bina maange mil jaayegfi..tension mat le uski tu!!!Aurt Alekh to hai hi mera sweeeeeeetuuuu!!!


@ Neha


Long time no seee...Bt guud to c u again...Kabhi kabhi time nhkaal liya karo yaar...Odrewise even I m too short of time these days!!Thanxx a lot! 😊

EPISODE – 60

"Hi!" She heard a vaguely familar voice and turned around to find the same stranger again. Her eyes lit up instantly.

With a faint but suppressed smile she replied softly.

"Hi!"

"So you still remember me. Thank god!"

"Even you do remember me."

"Some beautiful faces are difficult to fade away from mind."

She blushed. He slipped his hand in his coat's pocket and took out a rose.

"This is for you."

"Aap jaante the ki main yahaan milungi ya har kisi ko rose dene ki aadat hai aapki."

"Rose to us din aapne bhi mujhe diya tha."

"Excuse me! Maine nahin diya tha aapne khud le liya tha."

"Aur aapne lene diya.... So now you tell me ki woh... I mean main ek special case tha ya aapki aadat hai har kisi ko aapke haathon ka gulab lene dene ki."

"Very smart!"

"Thank you!"

She took the rose from his hand.

"Thank you!"

"Not fair! Maine aapke rose ke liye itna boring aur sookha sa thanks to nahin bola tha."

"What?" She glared into the mischief dancing in his eyes with surprise.

"Just joking!" He said.

"You better!" She said in a pretentiously intimidating tone.

"Waise may I know aap us din is tarah achanak se bhaag kyun gayi thi."

"Bhaagi nahin thi... Chali gayi thi! I told you I was getting late."

"Does that mean ki agar aap late nahin ho rahi hoti to mere saath ruk jaati."

"Hang on..... Are you trying to flirt with me?"

"No..."

"Good for you!"

"...I only believe in serious relationships."

"What is that supposed to mean?"

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"Naina...Please don't tell me you were serious when you told me ki Alekh Saanjh mein interested hai."

"Stop it Raj! And let me correct you... Maine kaha tha ki Alekh aur Saanjh dono hi..."

"I don't think so! Mainaa..."

"Raj! What's wrong with you? Bhaiyya Bhabhi samjhao na isko."

Four of them were standing at some distance from Alekh and Saanjh at Naina's painting exhibition.

"Waise Raj, Naina is right! Saanjh aur Alekh ka kuch to scene hai." Navin said trying to tease him.

"No way... She is too young for all this."

"Raj... Saanjh Naina se sirf ek saal choti hai." Neetika answered.

"Kya hua Raj! Ab pata laga apni behen ko kisi ke saath romance karte hue dekhna kitna difficult hota hai."

"What nonsense? Saanjh koi romance nahin kar rahi hai... Jaa ke apni eyes test karao." He snapped.

"Nahin kar rahi hai to karne lagegi... But yeh love story bhi poori ho ke hi rahegi. Upar se tum dono out of town jaa rahe ho aaj raat.... Apne honeymoon ke liye. Matlab Mainaa ab bilkul free hai... To do whatever she feels like."

"Bhaiyya please, kyun dara rahe ho aap Raj ko."

"Isne kaun sa mauka choda hai mujhe dukhi karne kaa jo main ise itni aasani se chod doon."

"Watever.... Aap dono apne scores settle karo... Main chalti hoon."

"Kahan?" Rajveer asked.

"Un dono ka intro karane."

"Haan haan kyun nahin... Ho to tum bhi is Navin ki hi behen na."

"Stop behaving like a typical elder brother." She planted a kiss on his cheek and left.

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"I hope I am not disturbing anyone." Naina said as she joined them.

"Hi!" Alekh gave her a hug. "Nice Paintings."

"Thank you! But... Tumne dekha kab paintings ko.... Kab se dekh rahi hoon ki tum dono ka hi dhyaan kahin aur hi hai."

"It's nothing like that Bhabhi."

"I wish! Anyways I hope you guys have met properly!"

"Not yet." Alekh answered looking into Saanjh's eyes.

"Ye lo... Mulaqaaton mein hi itna waqt lagaoge to phir...."

"Bhabhi please!"

"Okay okay... Let me introduce two of you.... Yeh hai meri pyaari pyaari sister-in-law.... Saanjh aur Saanjh meet Alekh.... My boss at Radio Mirchi... I told you about the job offer he had for you."

"Oh! So you are her boss!"

"I hope aapko mere saath kaam karne mein koi problem nahin hogi."

"Not at all."

"Absolutely... Saanjh apna dil poori tarah se laga ke kaam karegi... Haina?"

Saanjh glared back at her giving her a pleading cum threatening look to stop it right over there. Naina has been doing the same thing for last two days she has been in town without telling her that she knew that man.

For rest of the evening Alekh and Saanjh remained together. For them it was a beautiful evening indeed. They came to know a lot about each other and every thing about each other helped them to realize their liking for each other all the more.

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"What do you think you were doing?" Raj was still doubtful about Saanjh getting closer to Alekh.

"Ab maine kya kar diya?" Naina asked as she threw another saree into her suitcase.

"Main Alekh aur Mainaa ki baat kar raha hoon."

"Kyun soch rahe ho itna. Mainaa ki life hai so let her decide."

"Lekin..."

"Jisne meri jaan bachayi thi uspe bharosa nahin hai." Naina's tone was too intense and grave. It made Rajveer cut down all his complaints immediately. .Something he had been doing for the entire evening and something he was doing non-stop for last half an hour.

"I was just concerned." He said making a long face.

"So am I! Ab un dono ko chod ke meri madad karoge packing karne mein. Humein dedh ghante mein nikalna hai."

Rajveer got up from the bed to help her. He looked at the suitcase she was packing.

"What the hell are you doing?"

"Hey Bhagwaan! Ab kya ho gaya? Aaj tum itna shor kyun macha rahe ho har cheez ke liye."

"Naina just look what you have done."

She looked in the suitcase.

"Sab theek to hai. Kya ho gaya?"

"Theek hai! You are kidding me Naina."

He took out a saree from the suitcase.

"Yeh kya hai?"

"Saree hai Raj."

"Aur aise 3-4 aur bhi hain ander... Right?"

"Right... So?"

"Hum teerath pe nahin honeymoon pe jaa rahe hain."
"Tumse kisne kaha ki Honeymoon pe saree nahin pehen sakte."

He went closer and pulled her into his arms.

"Madam... Saree to bahut duur ki baat hai... Tumhein sach mein lagta hai ki tumhein main wahan ismein se kuch bhi use karne doonga. Jitna tum dress up karogi tumhein undress karne mein utni hi mehnat mujhe karni hogi. I just want to save both of our efforts and time. Socho utni der mein hum log kya kya kar sakte hain."

His lips bagan to caress her shoulder.

"Stop being so naughty Raj."

He tightened his grip atound her waist pulling her closer into himself. Their bodies rubbed against each other arousing her.

"We still have one and a half hours love. Enough for me.... For us to make love."

"Raj hum late ho jaayenge!"

He loosened his grip. His hands ran over her body caressing her gently.

"Let me see if you can really stay away from me."

His hands rubbed her bopdy fiercely. His hand entering inside her clothes and his lips working out its way upwards on her neck.

"Give in Jaan." Raj spoke softly in her ears as he bit her ear lobe.

"You are so impossible."

She covered his lips with hers forcing its way inside his mouth and he gladly obliged. There was no stopping for them there after.Their clothes came off, their distances covered and the two souls craving for love were united.

An hour later, they were lying in each other's arm. They had to stop. They had too short time with them. Suddenly Naina got up with the speed of lightning.

"Oh my god!" She shrieked.

"Kya hua?"

"Ek bahut dangerous thought aaya mujhe."

"Kya?"

"Agar Bhaiyya Bhabhi ne hamari tarah hamare honeymoon pe..."

"I don't think so."

"You think you can be so sure."

He took a small pause to think about it. He looked up into her eyes.

"IT IS QUITE POSSIBLE!"

OKAY GUYS,
I M IN NO CONDITION TO THINK SO PLEASE TEL ME WHERE SHUD i PACK RN TO, FOR THEIR HONEYMOON...i M SHORT OF IDEAS!!Nxt update & RN honeymoon ki beggining by WEDNESDAY!!!
Luuuv u guys!!