Shaadi-kyph Part 13 Pg.20

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello everyone I am a silent reader to numerous fan fics and have decided to make my own, here is first part please tell me if I should continue or not.

Every typical Indian girl dreams of her wedding day and wedding night, she dreams of her husband being sweet and kind. But like we all are aware of dreams don't always come true, instead the exact opposite happens in real life. That is the story of Kripa Sharma or now known as Kripa Bose.

Part 1

We enter a room, it is decorated with flowers mostly roses, in the middle of the bed a girl is sitting down with her face covered wearing a designer wedding dress she is happy and scared, she just got married to the most eligible bachelor in Delhi, Prithvi Bose. Then the door opens the guy is not able to control his steps because he is drunk. He goes over to the bed and instead of sitting down and slowly taking of the ghungat of his bride he snatches it off her head. Scared to death the girl looks up and it none other than Kripa, she sees Prithvi's face and gets more scared, she moves back but Prithvi holds her wrist tightly breaking the bangles in her hand and making her bleed. Kripa yells in pain, "ouch!!" but Prithvi doesn't stop she tries to move back but Prithvi pushes her on the bed and falls on top her, she tries to push him off but failed to, Prithvi ripped off her sleeves and threw her hands on the each side of the bed, holding them tightly. Kripa yelled for help, told Prithvi to stop, but no one came to help her nor did Prithvi stop. Kripa kept on weeping but her tears didn't melt Prithvi. Prithvi finally released her hands and fell on the side of the bed. Kripa got up from the bed rapping her chuni around her and went to the shower fully clothed she turned on the shower, and stood there weeping, and yelling. She never thought the day she was supposed to become a full women would be the day she would be raped by her own husband, the husband that promised to protect her. She was taught by her parents that husband is god but her husband was the devil. When she got out of the shower she wanted to call her parents and tell them to come and get her from this devil but she very well knew she couldn't she had to make this sacrifice for her parents. She went to the corner of the room and sat down there crying. She fell asleep there, by the time she woke up Prithvi had left for work. She slowly got up wiping her tears, she went to the shower and came out wearing a black suit, she looked at the dresser and saw her mangalsutra, she put it on, but to her it felt really heavy, it was suffocating her and then she put her sindoor on.

She went downstairs, but didn't feel like eating. She saw a piano, and started to play it. The music was filled with pain and agony that Kripa was going through. After a few minutes someone rang the bell. She went to the door to open it, the she saw a guy wearing a suit and holding a little baby in his hands, she guessed that he was around the age of 25 or 26.

G: Hi! I am Angad Khanna, I just moved in today next door.

K: Hello, I am Kripa Sh..Bose, come in

A: Thank You

Kripa closed the door behind him as he entered, and pointed at the sofa gesturing Angad to sit down.

A: Were you playing the paino?

Kripa nodded and also sat down across him.

A: You play very well

K: Thank You, Would you like some tea or coffee.

A: No thank you, actually since I am new here I was wondering if you knew ant baby sitter who would take care of my daughter Mehak while I am at work.

K: I am sorry I don't know any babysitter. Even I just moved here yesterday.

A: Ohh ok

K: But if you want I will take care of Mehak until you don't find a babysitter.

Kripa thought that if Mehak would stay here she will have some company and will not go under depression because of Prithvi. She knew what was in store for her in the future.

A: Would you?

K: Sure, I have nothing else to do here anyway.

A: Thank You so much, but can you start from today??

K: Sure

A: Thank You

Angad gave Mehak to Kripa

K: Mr. Khanna may I ask were your wife is??

Kripa was wondering that for a long time and wanted to know who was the mother of Mehak and where was she?

Angad looked down....

Preview: Angad's tells Kripa about his wife and Kripa lies to Angad.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start!! Prithvi is such an a******! that retard!! I hope he doesnt have issues with kripa taking care of Mahek!! I wonder if Kripa is gonna lie about being happily married and such.. anyways.. cont soon!!

**Welcome to I-F btw, hope you have fun here😳
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing start
poor kripa 😭
hope kripa leaves pritvi
angad sounds really sweet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great Start
I feel sorry for Kripa
Can't wait to know about Angad's wife
Continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part but sad umm...so ak are gonna have an affair i guess...and angads wife i think either died or left him.. 😕 anyways great part 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro. ur fan fic seems interesting. i feel so bad 4 kripa though. neways, cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its an awesoom ff
plz cont
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

Great start!! Prithvi is such an a******! that retard!! I hope he doesnt have issues with kripa taking care of Mahek!! I wonder if Kripa is gonna lie about being happily married and such.. anyways.. cont soon!!

**Welcome to I-F btw, hope you have fun here😳



Thank You..well you'll find out soon...I also hope that i have fun here
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will post the next part tomorrow.

Promo:

Kripa and Angad are talking to each other, and are laughing.
In the background: What will happen when Prithvi finds out about this friendship??


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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome story line.........can't wait to read more!!!!!
interesting promo
continue soon

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