Shaadi-kyph Part 13 Pg.20 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
koun jealous?kripa and angad???/

pls cotninue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
👏 👏 👏 great part, uhmm..I think ahhh the girl is angads sister/relative or someone who is after angads money nd charms 😕 i m confused anywayz great part plzz continue SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
Great part! 👏 👏 👏
continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Thanx for ur comments I am glad that u all like my fan fic....the identity of the girl will be revealed in the next part and this time both will get jealous.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kripa was getting ready for the party; she wore a black sari with silver embroidery, with matching jewelry, and put on light make up. She looked absolutely gorgeous. She really did not feel like going to the party she did not know anyone there plus she wasn't going follow Prithvi like a shadow but she had no choice.

Kripa and Prithvi reached the party, when they entered Prithvi introduced Kripa to his friends, all commented on her beauty. After a few minutes Prithvi left Kripa alone and went with his friends. Kripa looked around and finally saw someone she recognized he was matching her attire. It was Angad, he was dancing with someone it was the same girl she saw at Angad's house in the morning. She felt the same pain, she felt in the morning. She couldn't take it she turned around and was walking away when someone came up to her and asked her for a dance. She politely said no but the guy kept asking her she finally gave in and said yes for one dance.

Kripa and the guy went to the dance floor, the guy kept touching Kripa intimately but she tried her best to stay away, but she couldn't take it anymore and left the dance floor. Angad had seen all this his blood was boiling no one had the right to touch Kripa the way the guy was touching her not even Prithvi Kripa's husband. He left the dance floor and followed Kripa, who was at a corner.

"Hi Kripa", said Angad.

"Hi" she replied but not in a friendly way like she used to.

"Can I have a dance?" he asked.

"Why don't you go and dance with that girl you were dancing with a few minutes ago" answered Kripa. "Well because her husband is here and he would want some time with her even though she is my sister" said Angad

"Sister?"

"Haan, kyun tumne kya samjha?"

"Maine....kuch bhi to nahin, I was just wondering."

"Ohh" Angad had a gut feeling that Kripa was jealous but he didn't know why. He didn't even know his feelings why was he jealous of that guy.

"To chalien" said Kripa

"Kahan?"

"Dance karne kahin irada to nahin badal gaya"

"Abhi tak to nahin"

He let out his hand for a dance and Kripa accepted.

As they were dancing the song: Mann tera mera mann from Aaghaz played in the background

--FEMALE--

Mann, tera mera mann ek raheTera mera mann --MALE--Mohabbat ka matlab samajhne lagaa hoon - 3Main dil banke tujh mein dhadakne lagaa hoon - 2Mann, tera mera mann ek raheTera mera mann --FEMALE--Mohabbat ka matlab samajhne lagi hoon - 3Main dil banke tujh mein dhadakne lagi hoon - 2Mann tera mera mann ek raheTera mera mann --MALE--Dekhoon jahan pyar hi pyar hoAisa khayaalon ka sansaar ho --FEMALE--Nanhe khilauno se bhar jaaye gharGhar ko lage na kisi ki nazar --MALE--Yahi soch ke main tapadne lagaa hoonMain dil banke tujh mein dhadakne lagaa hoon--FEMALE--Main dil banke tujh mein dhadakne lagi hoon This song was conveying their feelings but both were oblivious to these new feelings. Kripa and Angad both were lost in each others eyes. Prithvi saw this but he wasn't jealous at all instead he got an idea he could use this new relationship to his advantage he thought and gave an evil smile. After the song ended Angad saw the same guy who was misbehaving with Kripa leave the party, he followed him outside. After they finally reached a safe distance from the party Angad starts to beat the guy, Kripa who went outside to get some fresh air saw this, both the guy and Angad were hitting each other, Kripa tried to stop Angad. "Angad usse mat maro…usse chodo Angad…" She tried to pull Angad away. Angad finally leaves the guy and the guy just goes from there. Kripa saw his hand bleed and ripped off her sari, she tied the cloth on his hand. While doing this tears start forming in her eyes. "Kya zarorrat thi usse maarne ki?" asked Kripa in a teary voiceAngad didn't reply "Angad mein tumse baat kar rahi hoon"He still didn't reply."Angad!""Kripa usne tumhare saath batameezi kari isliye "Kripa was about to say something but just them Prithvi comes there clapping his hands.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
gr8 part

hmm... prithvi is really mean. i hope he does not create a scene



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~Sana~
Edited by iamsmart - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
stupid prithvi........always comes in at the wrong times...........anywayz loved the part..........but i dont get it, y did prithvi marry kripa after all??????
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
gr8 part. stupid prithvi always lands up in all the wrong places at the wrong time. ugh! newayz, cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Great part 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
wonderful part hun but write more...n update more often i cant wait 😃 👏

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