...Kehna Hi Kya.. [Characters+Part1 pg.1]

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Pyaar?...Woh mein jaante kya hota hai…Aur jaana bhi nahi chaathe…Mere neseeb mein kabhi pyaar likya nai hai, Na parivaar ka pyaar, Na Ma Baap ka pyaar…par main kush hoon apne choti se zindagi mein…Mere liye mera sub kuch, mere zindagi hai mere Mukti…mere choti behen...

Main hoon Nisha Walia. I come from the beautiful city of Pune, where my most precious moments in life were spent. My childhood was very vivid and vibrant until the night my parent passed away. My life took U-turn and I was left with nothing. My life had come from this beautiful fairytale to a very real reality check. But I am not one to question fate, Jo mere neseeb mein likha hain who mujhe mansoor hain. Mumbai has been a huge obstacle that faces my life. Now that school is over, a new chapter in my life begins. This leads me to the steps of Khanna Industries.

Character Skectches:

Nisha Walia: A very sweet and innocent girl, unaware of cruelties in life, always one to look on the bright side. At a very tender age her parents were taken away from her in a car accident. Since the accident Nisha has faced every hurdle head on and has not looked back. She does not believe in love, no prince charming on a white horse, for her it only happens in movies and books. Never one to care for herself lives for others happiness. Her happiness lies in her younger sister, Mukti. For Mukti she is willing to give up the world. She can not tolerate anything against her sister; she is all she has in this world. After finishing her studies at Mumbai University, Nisha has got a job interview at Khanna Industries. Nisha always wanted to go into business because of her father. He was an up and coming business man, he had great talent and always wanted his daughter to follow in his footsteps. At a very young age she discovered the passion she had within her for the business industry and would do anything for her father. She was daddy's little girl, everyone of her secret were told to her father. He was her confidante. Now she lives to fulfill her father wishes and lives a simple life. She is one to keep her feeling hidden from the world and not express them to anyone, not even her sister. Let's see what life has in store for this innocent girl.

Mukti Walia: Formally Mukti Desmukh was the daughter of Nisha's father, Jai, closest friend, Jeevan. When Mukti was born her mother, Naina passed away from complications. After her mother's death Jeevan was never same. He lost the love of his life, for Jeevan there was no reason to live not even for his daughter. He became a drunk and never gave a care about his daughter; to him his life was taken away because of Mukti. Shortly after Mukti turned 10, Jeevan walked out the door and never came back. This filled Mukti with an undesirable amount of hate for him. She had no one in the world, she was all alone. Until Nisha took her under her wing and she became Mukti Walia. Mukti has huge passion for dance and has her own dance studio, Jalak Studios. Her dream is to become one the top dancers the world has ever seen and show the world that she can become someone. Her sister is everything to her in this world; for she gave her the life that father could never give her.

*Coming Up: Angad Khanna and Prem Virani's Character skectches*

Okay this is my attempt at a fan fic😊

it's just an idea that I'm developing please tell me what you think so far your comments are greatly appreciated 😃😃😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yayayyY!!!! i'm the 1st one!! lolz... plz plz plz continue soon and you have my favorite jodi yayay!!! premukti rox!!! plz continue ..will be waiting!!

'~bisma~'
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sound really good...but since ur having angad and prem in the story was just wondering is the character of nisha walia played by neha bamb??
plzz cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent....love the characters....my fav..Prem and mukti 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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luv da intro of da girls lukin 4ward 2 da guys intro especially premz 😉 can't wait 2 c how PM interact with 1nother 😳 update soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the comments:bisma_4eva!,subhag,tsamhita,mandy07 😊 😊 😊
I'm not sure at moment who will play Nisha's character but it might be Neha Bamb. I love the chemistry between Angad and Kripa 😃 😃
The next part is coming up in a little while, hope you all like it 😃
Edited by JATTIPUNJABI - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Angad Khanna: A HOT and SEXY bachelor that can make any girl weak in knees with one glance. A certified PLAYBOY. He has had his fair share of women yet still not satisfied. He is the son a business tycoon Mr. Rishab Khanna, his mother, Prena Khanna, passed away when he was young. In the short time Angad had with his mother she gave him the love that no one ever could. His father neglected him after the death of his dear wife. He immersed himself in becoming the world's best business man to fight off the grief, sadness and loneness he had in his life. Angad tried hard to impress his father by being the brightest in all his classes, joining his business making it excel into the sky. But all his tries were in vain; his father just gave him the cold shoulder. Angad gave up trying to impress his father and immersed himself into the life of drinking, clubbing, and women: many women. Deep down he wants his father to come to him and tell him stop living this way, give him a hug: and tell him that he loves him. He waits for the day his father will greet him with open arms.

Prem Virani: A bad boy with a heart of gold. To the world he shows his hard core attitude but at home he is the darling son of Karan and Nandani Virani. He will do anything for his family; his family is his life. He works along side his father in the home business, Virani Groups LTD. Prem is also a big flirt and playboy. For him there is an endless supply of women. But deep down he is just waiting the girl that he chases not the one that chases him. He secretly is waiting the woman of his dreams but for now he has his time pass of women.

Part 1

"Get up Mukti, your going to be late!" Nisha shouted in vain, knowing her sister will not wake until the last possible second before being late. "UFFF DI, let me sleep" replies an agitated Mukti and shoves her face under her pillow. "Oh come on now Mukti, your going to be late and your going to make me late. Whose going to deal with all the rehearsal preparations?" The one way Nisha did know to get her darling sister up in the morning is to mention dancing. Just as Nisha finished her sentence, Mukti got up and ran into the washroom. Dancing was her passion; nothing can keep her away from passion, not even her deep and long beauty sleep. Nisha smiled to herself at seeing her sister's childlike antics. Every morning was the same for her, trying hard to get the Maharani out of bed. Nisha sat down waiting for Mukti come and eat then run out the door. "Wah Di breakfast smells so good" A smiling Mukti comes to the table dressed in dancing clothes and starts to gobble up her food. " You won't believe all preparations that are going for tommrows performance Di...uff I still have to get the costumes in order and then…the stage decorations still needs to be fixed and…" Nisha smiles watching her sister expressively talk about the details of her upcoming show, she loves when there's a smile on her, it's what Nisha lives to see, her sister happy. " Okay Di, I'll see you in the evening" says Mukti as she rushes out the door. Nisha looks down at Mukti's plate, " Uff yeh larki bhi na, never finishes her food, how does she get the energy to dance?" Nisha picks up the leftover piece of toast left on Mukti's plate and is about the put it in her mouth when Mukti comes back and kisses her cheek. "Good luck on your interview DI!" She gives her hug and takes the piece of toast from her hands and runs back out the door. "BYE DI!" "Bye" Nisha laughs and smiles at her sister. Nisha gets up and leaves their apartment and arrives at the mandir. She places her duppata on her head and folds her hands together. "Maa aaj mere liye bauht bara din hain, I'm going for interview with one of the biggest companies in Mumbai. Hopefully I'll get the job. Ghar ke expenses bhar rahe hain and I need this job to support Mukti and myself. Mere rakhsa karna Maa" she bows her head down and walks down the stairs.


Let's she what happens to Nisha when she reaches Khanna Industries, who will she meet? 😉 😆
And when will our dear Mukti meet our bad boy Prem 😆 just wait and see 😆

Edited by JATTIPUNJABI - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwww i luv da relationship dat nisha/mukti share 😛 itz really sweet 😳 can't wait 2 read PMz parts wonder how they'll end up meetin 😉 update soon can't wait 2 read da next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey amazing story. Mukti and kipa have a really cute relationship. Great start and keep up the good work, looking forward to the next part continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!! mukti and nisha are too cute!! 😃
plz cont soon..i cant wait until they all meet 😆

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