Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 44

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

And yes Jaipur hai and a mansion like house.Ideal place for the "Labon ko " song from Bhool Bhulaiya.

And don't forget"Main aggar kahoon","Ajab Si",etc.

ya just like it was in bhhol bhulaiya! but not haunted!😆and thanks for suggestions

Originally posted by: yyyy

Rocking ..awesome scenes..i am really enjoying reading this 😊

thanks!!!!dear!

And one more thing.Jo ladki ghar pe ghunghat rakhti hai woh bhi Honeymoon pe Salwer nahi pehenti aur yahan toh....

Please honeymoon pe no salwer.Sexy dresses aur saries pehnao yaar.

And update fast.

why dont u update the next parT???plzzzzzzzzzz doo soo quick 😊

update fast plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

And one more thing.Jo ladki ghar pe ghunghat rakhti hai woh bhi Honeymoon pe Salwer nahi pehenti aur yahan toh....

Please honeymoon pe no salwer.Sexy dresses aur saries pehnao yaar.

And update fast.

fikar mat karo yaar!naina is wearing no suits or anythign like that...she is wearing jeans-kurti or dresses/frocks...so...

Next day they both went to see the bird sanctuary. It was a big open place where lot of ppl were feeding birds and some were talking pictures with them. Naina and raj both joined the tour of the sanctuary. Naina was amazed with the differents types of birds. They were very pretty and very natural. Raj just looked as naina as she looked at those birds lovingly. Naina told raj to take to the lake where ppl were feeding ducks. Raj gladly took her their and buyed some food and then naina started feeding those birs. She looked at raj who was smiling at her act. She smiled and took his hand and told him to feed the ducks. Raj did what she said.

After the great tour to the sanctuary they went went to the place which was very famous and very beautiful form outside. The monument was called as "Hawa Mahal". It was really beautiful. It looked like it had thousands of windows and naina was amazed by the monument. It was all pink in color and it is said that It was made by the king of jaipur.

After that they went back to hotel as they were tired and they were going to Jodhpur the next morning.
They both freshened up and ordered their dinner in room. Meanwhile naina started doing packing for the trip. They called kaka this morning saying that they will see jodhpur and other places and then they will come their and kaka agreed with that.

R: biwi….eat first and then do you packing.
N: raj just 10 more mintutes. That's it.
R: no jaan! No packing now! After dinner (he took her and hand and made her sit on his lap)
N: raj chodo na1 dekho kitni packing baki hain.
R: wo tum uski chinta na karo. Main hoon na so, ab tum yeh (he pointed out to the plate that was beside them which was their dinned kao.
N: did you eat
R: haan (he looked around as it was a lie)
N: aacha (she took a piece of roti offered it to raj who looked surprised) toh yeh lo. (She offered him)
R: naina.
N: jooth bolna nahin aata toh phir kyun time waste kato na patidev
R (smiled) kya karu mujhe aapni se pitna thodi hain jo main kahu ki jaan maine nahin khaya.
Naina started laughing at this and raj joined her too. They both made each other eat food with each others hand. They played and they pulled each other all ths time. After dinner and after packing they both sat by the fire place holding each other close to their heart. Raj had his hand around naina and she had her back toward him and her hands were around raj's. They both were watching a movie. It was a triller movie. Naina was into the movie (as usual) and raj was just playing with her hair.

Their, was this dangerous scene when this bad buy who was dead was finding someone to kill. He had a knife in his hand and his whole body was full with blood. Naina held raj's hand tightly and closed her eye. She was scared and raj saw that. He smiled and held her tighter too. He was getting romantic seeing naina close to him. He moved his lips on her back, kissing her softly on her back. Naina smiled as his act. He slowly moved his lips up and opened the dori of her kurti and then kissed her there.
N: raj…(she said softly but raj continued) he started kissing her on her nape and her neck. His hands started moving her kurti further down so to get more excess of her skin. He slided her kurti from her shoulder and started kissing her bare shoulder. Naina was turning on as raj was kissing her insently. His kisses were passionate and very light which sent shrivers in her body. She was moaning as he was kissing her. Raj was like hungry to get her love. He kissed her bare back, her shoulder, her neck everywhere. Naina held his hands tightly as he increased his kissing. She turned to him as not taking more of his passion and captured his lips in hers. Raj gladly responded to her kiss. He held her tightly by her waist and puller her closer. Naina moved her hand to his neck and pulled him closer. The kiss was getting very passionate and very wanted. Raj was biting her lower lips and then sucking it. Naina's hands were moving fast. She started unbuttoning is shirt. Raj was more than happy to help her talking of his shirt with his singlet. Copying naina's action raj took her kurti off her and started kissing her cleavage, chest, jaw and every visible part. Suddenly raj broke out and looked at naina with eyes full of passion and love.

R: I WANT YOU BIWI (he wispered it in her ear)
Naina hugged him tightly and kissed his nape. Raj got his answer and hugged her tightly. He took her in his arms and took her to the bed. He puts her on bed and lies on top of her. He grabbed her lips and kissed her with full passion. Naina replies it with same passion and same intensity so, without waiting for anything further he depepned his kiss and held her tightly to him. He pulled and started kissing her jaws, neck, bare shoulder, clevage and everywhere. He moved down slowly and reached ber belly. He bit their hard as naina made a painful sign. But after biting her, he kissed and caressed that bit with his tongue and lips. He kissed her belly and again again which was making naina go wild. So finally giving up she said
N: jaan take me…

And raj gladly obliged. He loved her so much that night that the stars were wondering If they had seen anybody like this them. Their lovemaking, naina's moaning and raj's groaing was getting louder and louder as time past.

(MORNING)

We see that both raj and naina were sleeping in each other's arms. Their bare bodies were reflecting the happiness and pleasure that they had last night. Raj was till on top of her and had his hands on her waist. Hoding her tightly as somebody is going to take his biwi form him and naina was hiding her face under raj's shoulder. Raj moved a bit and then again slept. He was cover with a black sheet with naina. His bare chest can be seen as he moves. He again moved as naina moved. He opens his eyes and finds naina under him. He smiles at the sight and brushes his lips to her slowly. Naina feels the sentaion and opens her eyes slowly. She looks at raj who was smiling at her.

R: good morning love. (he kissed her again but this time on her forehead)
N: morning…(sleepy)
R: its not a good morning.
N: why (confused)
R: kyun ki tumne mujhe morning kaise wish kiya (he made a face)
N: kaise (confused)
R: jaan, I kissed you when I wished you morning and now you are suppose to kiss me when you said morning to me.
N: ohhh…(acted like she didn't knew that)
R: kya ohhh….ab mujhe phir se morning wish karo aur is baar ek kiss ke saath.
N: here….(she kissed his lips lightly) good morning. Ab khush.
R: bahut (and to prove that he hugged her tightly as he was on top of her)
N: raj..
R: hmmm…(kissing her neck as his face was buried in it)
N: kya hum kuch aur dair so shakte hain. (she was very sleepy as our naughty raj didn't let her sleep whole night)
R: kyun….(still didn't raised his head)
N: kyun ki mere patidev ne mujhe saari raat mujhe sone nahin diya.
Raj smiled at this and hugged her tighter.
R: toh main kya karu, aap ne toh aisa jaado kar diya hain ki main aap se dur hi nahin re shakta (He looked up to see her reaction)
N: aacha! (she pulled him closer)
R: aur nahin toh kya, ek pal bhi mujhe meri biwi se alag kar doghe toh main toh mar (naina covers his mouth with her hand)
N: raj agar aise baatin karni hain toh main uth jati hoon (she tried to get up but raj pulled her back)
R: sorry! (he made a cute face)
N: hmmm
R: sorry bola na! ab toh maaf kardo.
N: okay, par you better not talk like this or I will not talk to you forever.
R: tumse baat kare bina toh main reh hi nahin sakta biwi.
N: neither can I patiji (both smiled and then closed their eyes so they can get more sleep)

After an hour or so out romatic couple woke and got dresses. They both began their journey to the Udaipur which was like 2 hours form jaipur. It was a different journey as they went by train this time so they can reach earlier. Naina and raj were playing cards in train. Raj was winning continuesly, which annoyed naina a lot. She tried to win but failed. Seeing naina lose raj smiled to himself and this time he made her win the game. Naina was very happy that she bet raj and raj was happt seeing his biwi happy.

After 2 hours they both reached updaipur. They both went to their hotel and sat for a while. They ordered lunch and sat around while eating lunch.
N: raj! Kya hum mumma-baba ko phone kar sakte hain.
R: why are you asking, just dial the number jaan.
Naina smiled and dialed the number.

(TRING TRING)
Ma: hello.
N: hey maa.
Ma: naina beti kaise ho? Aur raj kaise hain, aap log honeymoon toh eanjoy karte ho na. (she bombared with wuestions and naina smiled)
N: maa, calm down. Yes we are enjoying our honeymoon and me and raj are fine. Now tell me about you and baba?
Ma: we are f inw too beti, but we miss you and raj a lot.
N:us too.
Ma: where is raj?
N: here ..just a sec (she called raj and told him that mumma wanna talk to him, he came by and puts the phone on speakser)
R: mumma.
Ma: haan beta, kaise ho?
R: main tikh hoon. Aap aur papa kaise hain.
Ma: hum bhi thik hain. Aacha toh aapna honeymoon kaisa chal raha hain. Maine toh sochatha kit um log hume bhul hi jaoghe.
R: kya mumma aap bhi na! hum..i mean main toh aapko nahin bhula sakta par yeh naina ka toh pata hain (he played with her and naina lookeda thim with anger)
Ma: kya matlab, meri beti mujhe kabhi bhul sakti hain (naina showed raj her thumb and raj just smiled)
R: ho bhi sakta hain…aacha mumma paps kahan hain.
Ma: beta woh office gaye hain. Par jab who aaye main unhe jarur keh unghi ki tumne call kiystha.
R: aacha unhe mera pranam karma.
Ma: thik hain beta aapna aur naina ka khayal rakha, aur agar naina tumhe sataye toh ushe dodatna jarur.
R (laughed) main yaad rakhuna (and looked at naian who was looking angry)
Ma: aut hain enjoy karma…honeymoon sirf ek hi baar aata hain
Raj blushed at this and said okay…they both bid each other bye and as he kept the reciver he was hit by a pillow which hit him right on his face. He looked at naian who trew it and said
R: oh you are so dead…(he grabbed a pillow and trew it on naina's face. It hit her directly on her nose)
N: rajjjj…
R: maine kaha tha ki mujhe pillow se maro, toh phir asie kyun kiya.
N: tum maa se meri bare main bad things keh rahe the toh main aur kya karu.
R: toh kya jooth kaha maine….(he played with her)
N: kya jooth bola, kya kya nahin bola.
R: are phir bhi maine tumhara pati hoon mujhe tumhari bare main kehne ka haq hain.
N: toh phir main bhi tumhari bare main bad things kahunghi ji …(she played with him, their was a mischevif in her eyes…she had her hands back so she slowly picked a pillow and as raj was about to answer she threw it at him and it hit him on his eye.)

R: naina….(he was rubbing his eye as it hit him, his eyes were closed and water was falling form the,. Naina looked worried and came to him and told him not to rub his eye and raj followed it. He looked that she was worried and she was standing very close to him. He puts his hands around her waist and pulls her on top of him and both fell on bed. Naina was on top of him and raj was under her but not for a long time, before naina relizes what happened raj flips. So, now naina is under him and raj was on top of her.

N: raj….(shocked like what happened)
R: haan.
N: what is this, what happened to your eye?
R: nothing. (saying this he winked at her and naina gasps in shock and then turns angry)
N: raj aise mazak kiya jata hain, pata hain main kitni daar gayi thi. Aut tum…(she was angry and raj was looking at her lovingly)
R: toh usme meri kya galto hain, tum hi net oh muhe pillow se hit kiya tha aur phir kab se meri tang (leg) kich rahi thi, tab maza nahin aaya tha.
N: who toh maine tumeh satne ke liye kiya tha, na ki darbe ke liye.
R: I am sorry…
N: its okay…(suddenly realized what position she was) ab hato…
R: agar main na kahoon toh? (he came closer)
N: raj no masti!
R: jaan masti ke bina life kise borning ho jati hain (he came closer)
N: raj you have become very naughty (she said with a soft tone and pulling hin closer to her)
R: saab aap hi se sikha hain biwi.. ?(saying this he bit her neck)
N: what was that for? (angry)

R: for pulling my leg….(he kissed the place where he bit with his lips and then carasses it with his tongue. Naina made a sign that was an encourage raj to go further. He pulles her sleeves further to get more excess of skin and then kissed her bare shoulder. He moved upward and kissed her jaws, followed by her soft cheeks but before going any further he bit her their too but this time it was soflty. He moved upward and kissed her forehead and ears, tip of nose and then finally her lips which were waiting for him to claim. As he calmed her lips, he puller her closer so, that their bodies rub each other. Raj was sucking her lips in his and naina was exploring his mouth. Both of their tongues were playing with each other. They were on edge to make love again but…their was a knock on their door. Both were still kissing each other. Their was harder knock and then parted their lips and looked at door.

R: kya yaar! Yeh kaun hain jo romance main badha dal raha hain. (he said annoyingly)
Naina giggled and signaled him to go and open the door before he breaks it. Before going to open the door raj wishpered
R: abhi toh jane de raha hoon par raat ko….(he didn't complete as he knew naina got it by looking at her blush)
Raj went to open door leaving naina who was making her clothers proper.
Raj opened the door and saw their was hotel worker. he was smiling.
R: yes! (looked annoyed)
Worker: sir we came here as our hotel have comleted its 50th year and we are having a party tonight. So you and your wife have been invited to the party tonight.
R: oh congrulations! (he wished him) we will surely come!
W: thanks you sir! And sorry for disturbance.
R: ITS OKAY….
And he closed the door and went to naina who was now looking at him with a mischevious look.
N: kaun tha?
R: bas ek warker tha (he came and sat by her)
N: kya keh raha tha?
R: keh raha tha ki hum aapni sundar si biwi ko chod kar kyun aaye door kholene. (he pulled her closer)
N: raj seriously…
R: kuch nahin jaan bas hume invite karne aaya tha?
N: invite?
R: who aaj yeh hotel ke 50th anniversary hain toh hotel ne el party rakhi hain raat ko, toh hume invite kiya hain.
N: oh…that's great…are we going to the party?
R: do you want to go (naina nodded) okay then we will go. But be reasy its at 9:00 P.M.
N: okay…….(she was about to go but raj pulled her back)
R: biwi kahan ja rahi ho?
N: raj chodo na, dekho mujhe showere lene jana hain.
R: aacha! Par baad main…
Naina hit him on his shoulder and left leaving smiling raj.

Both raj and naina did lot of thing ths morning. They went to the temple. It was a very famous temple of devimaa. Naina insisted raj to go their and raj said okay so. Naina was stnding by devima with her eyes closed and making a wish…
N (in her mind): maa, mere har khawaish puri ho gayi, mujhe mere raj mil gaya aur main bahut khush hoon, bus mere ek hi aur minat hain aap mere aur mere raj ke rishta humesha abne rakhana.
Raj on other side made his wish
R: (In mind) maa, main aur kuch nahin mang sakta mujhe meri naina mil gayi, mujhe aaj tak aise khusi nahin mile. Naina mere liye ek khusian ka kiran ban ke aayi hain aur usne meri zindighi main bahut se khushiya bhar de hain aur an main bas ek hi cheez aap se mang raha hoon, aap mere naina ko humesha khus rakhana aur humare is rishte judai rakhana.

He opened his eyes and saw that naina was staring at him. She had a smily face and that created a smile on his face immediately.
R: jaan kya dekh rhai ho?
N: dekh rahi hi hoon ki aapki ki wish kya itni lambi thi?
R: jaan meri list lambi toh thi, toh time toh lagegha na (he played with her)
N: aacha toh mere patidev ne kya manga?
R: maine manga ki meri cute si biwi humesha khus rahe aur humara yeh rishta kabhi bhi na chute.
Naina had tears in her eye.
R: jaan kya huva? Meri wish aachi nahin lagi humara yeh rishata humesh banae rakhe.
N: kyun karte ho mujshe itna pyaar karte ho?
R: because you deserve it. So cheer up (he held her hand) aacha bolo tumne kay manga.
N: maine yeh manga ki…who humarwa yeh rishta humesha banae rakha.
R: to phir basically hum se ek hi chez mangi?
N: hmm (they both laghed at that)
(they both are walking)
R: okay nain where do you want to go now?
N: what about shopping.
R: WHAT (he stopped walking as he heard shopping)
N: what happened?
R: you know I hate shopping naina..
N: raj! I know par humare pas aaj raat ko pehne ke liya koi bhi outfit nahin hain…is liya hum who outfil lane ja raheh ain.
R: par?
N: no raj we are going…I promise it will not take long?
R: promise
N: ya…ok now lets go..(she grabbed hi hand oth both moved toward stores)
First naina looked for rajs clothes… while raj just looked at his adorable wife.
After a while sorting out coupel of suits, naina looked at raj who was wondering when is he going out of the shop.
N: raj.
R: hmm
N: yeh kaisa hain (she showed him a black suit)
R: jaan aacha hain par black kyun…
N: aacha oh phir white thik hoga…
R: dekho?
Naina showed himteh white suit and he smiled.
R: ya I like this one.
N:okay so try this out and tell em if it fits you?
R: jaruri hain…(he mad a puppy face)
N: haan (she said him like a strict teacher and pushed him to the changing room)
N: bilkul baacha hain?
After a while raj came out and naina saw him. the suit suited him perfectly. He is looked dashing.
So they packed the suit and then shopped for naina…
This time raj was looking sarees for naina and naina was looking at her husband with adorable eyes.
She was looing at confused raj who was having trouble to choose color.
N: raj, main karti hoon na?
R: no…I am doing it na, so keep quite. (naina kept quite and lets raj do the work as she knows that raj will do whatever he wants)
Suddenly naina's eyes fell on a infant section. She smiled and went their. She started looking at clothes, socks etc…
Their raj was confused and he asked naina what about this but their came no reply. He asked again (but didn't looked up) but no reply. This time he looked up and didn't saw anybody. He looked around to find naina. He didn't found anybody. He was just about to ask the manager but his eyes fell on infant section. He breathed and smiled. he walked toward the section where he saw naina smiling. He went behind her and wishperes
R: aaj se shuru kare…
Naina got scared and looked back. She saw raj smiling at her mischeviously.
N: raj…you scared hell out of me.
R: really..
N: what do you mean by that…
R: what?
N: the thing that you just said in my ear.
R: oh that (he smiled miscehviously)
N: yeah that..
R: come here…(she came near him and he wishpered in her ear)
R: that means if you want any kid then we can work on it right away…
Naina turned red as scarlet color. She didn't looked at raj who was smiling at the way she was blushing.
N: raj…
R: hmmm…
N: you are getting very naughty this days…
R: aacha…(he pulled her closer)
N: raj chodo mujhe yeh shop hain…aapka bedroom nahin.
R: par biwi toh aap hi ho na..
N: raj leave me (she said with a embaressing way as everybody was looking at them)
R: lo chod diya (he left her) par batao ki tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? (again at his mischevious manner)
N: main bas…bas bore ho rahi thi to hmain yahan ah gayi…
R: aacha huva ki tum aah gayi.
N: kyu?
R: kyun ki kuch din ke baad tumhe yahan aana hi hota…humare baache ki liye shop karne (saying this he winked at her)
Naina blushed and hits him on his arm.
After some shopping, masti and pulling legs they both went to the hotel.
It was time to get ready for the party. Naina still haven't seen the saree that she is going to wear as raj kept it secret. He didn't let her see that saree.
N: raj mujhe meri saree dekhne hain?
R: abhi nahin jaan…
N: par kyun (in a sad manner)
R: (cupped her face) because you will see in it in 1 hour.
N: but why not? (angry)
R: because I want to give to you when it is time to get ready for the party.
N: that's not fair…
R: 100%
N: okay then you are not going to see you suit either.
R: (smiles broadly) no problem because I alreasy saw it, rememer you told be to check it out, (he winked at her)
N: uhhhhhhhhhhh
After an hour we see that naina is sitting in sofa watching T.V. she was flipping the channels as nothing good was coming. She was just about to ask raj about
doing somehitng else when her cell cell rang…she kept it in speaker..
N: hello…
Person: oye zaara aapne veer ke saath ho kar hume bhul gayi…na kbahi miss call diya na kabhi SMS bejha honeymoon jane ke baad..
Naina smiled broadly…she looked at raj who had a amused look on his face.
Pooja (as you all know): oye ab kuch bol kyun nahin rahi hain?
N: ab main kya bolu tune hi toh sab bol diya hain (pooja bit her tongue)
P: waise kya ho raha tha? (she asked in a meschivious tone)
Naina blushed: pooji…
P: kya pooji kar rahi hain….kya maine veer-zaara ko disturb kiya…(she said innocently)
N:pooja stop..now…aacha tell me how is ali and gang (she changed the subject)
P: kuch khas nahin….sab aapne aapne kam main kag gaye hain…huda apani mummji aur bhaiso se mil ne gaya hain aur alekh uske saath gaya hain aur yudi aur neelu aapne khar aapne parents se mil ne gaye hain, shaliani apani duty resure karne KMA chali gayi aur ali kanpur chala gaya apni aami-aabu se milne aur reh gayi main….toh maine soch ki main aapne simran ki khabar puch lo?
Raj suddenly speaked: kyun aapne veer ki khanar nahin puchni…
Pooja: hai mere veer…ahh..jeejaji (raj blushed, he didn't knew why but whenever pooja said jeejaji or veer he use to blush a lot, not caring how ar they are)
R: tumne mere sawal ka jawabnahin jiya Salli ji
P: who kya hain na (she decided to play with her jeejaji) jeejaji, mere zaara toh aapna veer ka khyal rakhati hain toh usme puchne ka kya faida..
Raj and naina blushed at this…
Naina till now was enjoying the conversation and now she spoke..
N: who toh hain…ab kya karu mujhe toh aapke jeejaji ki seva karni padti hain na….(she said innocently to which pooja laughed and raj looked at her with anger)
P: aacha chal bata honeymoon kaisa chal raha hain.
N: bahut hi aacha…tuhe pata hain…(and they talked the girls stuff and raj just looked at naina and smiled…she seemed happy and that's what he wanted. He sinaled naina that her gift is in the bag and saying that he went to the bathroom to change. Naina smiled broadly and said pooja bye and went to that gift. She opened it and saw a beautiful red saree. It is heavily worked with stoned and the border of the saree and little danglers that adored it. The black shade in the pallu was just complementing the saree more. Besides saree their was a a neclace and a earrings that matched the saree. She took the necklace and smiled. Their was a note attached to it…
It said:
My little Biwi…
This neclace will adore you with that red saree. My biwi should be looking best from all…
From,
Patidev…
P.S: Be prepared for tonight…
Naina blushed after reading the PS…She knew tonight was special and raj will make it very special with his company.
She quickly got ready. She was doing her make up when bathroom door opened and raj came from tehir. he was wearing the suit that she bought for. He is looking very cute with that white suit. The red rose and the red tie was matching her saree and his suit. She almost forgot to breat e when she saw him.
Whereas, raj came out of bathroom and turned when his breath got caught. He saw an angel infront of him. His little biwi was looking very beautiful with the saree on. She was standin infront of mirror trying to wear jewellary. She was like princess to him. her long balck hair were slightly wet and her red saree that she was wearing was making her look hot and wanted. He was happy that she liked the saree. He slowly went toward her and held her form behing. He kissed her jaw followed by her neck and shoulder. Naina closed her eyes just to feel his presence. Raj was kissing her slowly yet passionately…naina kept hold on her as she knew it was not right time…
N: (she managed to say) raj chodo na…
R: kyun…
N:hum late ho rahe hain
R: party main jane ka mood nahin hain jaan…(saying this he kissed her cheek)
N: toh kya karne ka mood hain (well aware what he wanted)
R: hume toh sirf yeh waqt aapni khubsurat biwi ke saath bitina hain…(saying this he held her tighter)
N:raj…(she said it will her sweet pleading voice)
R: ab itne sweetly kaho ghi toh main kya kar sakta hoon…(he moved and took her necklace)
N: yeh kya kar rahe ho…tumhe pehna hain kya (she joked with him)
R: nahin mujhe nahin pehna hain par tumeh jarur pehnaungha. (saying this he tied that necklace that he gace to naina on her neck and then placed the earrings on her ear)
N: ho gaya..(she said with a smiled)
Raj looked at her form up-down and said: Na…
N: ab kya baki hain (he looked at herself in mirror)
R: yeh…(saying this he took a sindoor from dibi and placed it in her mang and then took her mangalsutra nad tied it around her neck)
He then looked at naina whos eyes were teary. Raj turned her and made her look at him.
R: yeh kehti hain ki tum sirf meri ho…(he pulled her closer)
N: meri sirf tumhari hoon, aur humesha rahunghi…(saying this she took his lips into her mouth. Raj gladly obliged. He overtook her action. Kissed her with a lot of love and care. The kiss was not wanted. It was slow yet very passionate, they both were kissing each other with love that they had store in their heart.
After a long passionate kiss both parted and looked at each other. Naina just goes into his arms and raj enveloped her in his arms. He caressed her hair with one of his hand…
R: chale…dair nahin ho rahi kya (he said as she hugged him)
Naina smiled: chale…
Both went downstair where the party was going on. Their was lot of people (guests of the hotel)
The hotel manager welcomed them after that raj and naina went to the bar and sat their. They were hoding hands. Both were talkignto each other. They both were enjoying eachotehrs company. When announcement was made. Every couple was invited to dance on dace floor. Raj offered his hadnn to naina to ehich she accepted it gladly. They both went to the dance floor. Were this songs was playing…
Bahon ki Darmiya from khamoshi…
It was a very slow yet passionated song. Raj pulled naina toward him until their was no space b/w them. naina had her hands on raj's necka and raj had her hand on her nare waist. He was massaging her waist slowly but he didn't knew that his action was making naina arouse. She looked down and smiled. raj smiled as he saw hwe shyness. He pulled her even closer. Naina looked up into his deep black eyes which reflected nothing much than a deep sea of love. She couldn't take his eyes anymore. She pust her head on his chest and rah envelopes his hands around her. Like that they danced all night. It was turning out a passionate and very romantic. After a while naina asked raj if they can go back to room as she was tired of this lous music and the atmospehere. Raj gladly obliged.
They both went to their room and changed their clothes. Naina stood in balcony looking at the stars. Raj meanwhile was in bathroom changing. After a while he comes out and loksf or naina. He didn't saw her around so he got worried, but later he spot her in balcony. He camr to her and said

R: jaan…what r u doing here…
N: nothing much…I was just feeling this high winds and the beautiful view of the hills.
R: hmm…toh..(he pulled her toward himself)
N: raj……(hugged him back)
R: hmm…
N: tum kabhi mujhe chod kar toh nahin ja oh ge…(she said the thing that was fearing her. after having all the happiness of her life she feared that it will go away. Her raj will go away from her.
Raj made her look at him and cupped her face.
R: kya kabhi suraj badalo se milna chod degha…kya kabhi dhadkan kabhi dil se alag hoti hain to, phir kyun kabhi raj aapni naina se dur hoga…kabhi nahin…tumeh pata hain agar main aape aap se dur kar do toh main mar…
Naina quicky puts her hand on his mouth, not letting him speak more.
N: kabhi bhi marne ki baat marna…
R: jaan agar tum mujhe aisa sawal puchoghi toh…
N: toh wada karo ki tum mujhe kabhi chod kar nahin jaoghe (she raises her hand forward)
R: promise (he puts his hand on her)

AFTER 2 years….
We hear somebody saying that: tumne aapna wada thod diya and a tear falls from that person's eye…
The person gets up and goes near window and looks at the moon and says: kyun kisy tumne aisa…kyun?
On other side of the world there is something same going on..
We see a person saying: I am sorry…and a tears falls from that persond eyes too.

Suddenly that person wipes the tears as he felt someone's hand on his shoulder. He looks back and saw a girl…he hugs her and cries saying : I am sorry. The girl had a tear in her eyes. She had seen him like from the movement he told her to leave from his life…she spoke..

Girl: raj…(yes that person who was saying was raj…and the girl is shalani)

R: maine usko apni zindigi se nikal diya…(he cried)

shalani: raj…aakhir kyun kiya tumen aisa…tumeh pata hain ki who tumse kitna pyaar karti thi aur use koi dukh nahin tha ki tum CHAL NAHIN SAKTE THE…(a big shock I know but I will tell you later what happened)

R:shalu! Main kya karat main nahin dekh sakta ki naina ek apahij se saath rahe. Main kya karta jab hum honeymoon se aaye him bahut bahut khush the, par phir kuch dino baad mujeh pata chala ki mujhe ek mission pe jana hain. Mujhe naina se kuch mahino ke liya dur jana hoga par mujeh nahin pat atha ki in kuch mahino 2 saal ho gayenghe…mere mission pe bahut kahtra tha lekhinphir bhu main gaya tha aur phir mere bombblast ne mere tange (legs) paralyzed ho gaye.
Mujeh pata tha ki main chal nahin sakta tha aur naina bhi yeh janti thi phir bhi who mujhe utna hi pyaar karti thi lekin phir bhi mere dil main ek daar tha ki main naina ko who sab kuch nahin de paaoungha jo maine kabhi socha tha. Ek apahiz pati kya kya kar sakta tha aoabi biwi ke liys. Naina ne mere liye army bhi chod dhi. Who kehti thi ki main humesha aapne raj ke paas rehna chato hoon par main janta tha ki mere liya usne itna kuch chod diya aur main nahin chatha tha ki meri wajah se who jina chod de. Maine ek din faisa kiya ki main naina ko apne aap se dur kar daungha. Main use aapne zindighi jeene ka haq nahin chin sakta. Maine deere deere mera aur naina ki beech misunderstanding lani suru kar de. Mujhe pata tha ki meri is wajah se naina ko bahut is dukh sehna pade gha lekin main yeh bhi janta tha ki is se naad nain jahan jana chahe ja sakti thi aur aisa hi huva. Jan mujhe nandani milne aai toh maine socha ki main use kar sakta hoon naina ko mujhse dur karne ke liya. Aur phir maine natak kiys ki humare beech kuch hain aur aise naina ko hurt kiys aur ek din maine use aapne zindighi se bahar jane ko keh diya.
(he cried)
shalani: raj!!!naina ab kahan hain…kya tum jante ho…

R: NAHIN! Us din baad maine naina ko kabhi nahin dekha, aaj main chal sakta hoon toh who sirf tumhari wajah se lekin main usi din mar gaya tha jab maine meri naina ko jeete jee mar diya tha (he cried)

shalani: raj tumne koshish ki….

R: ek saal se dhund ne ke koshish ki lekin…aur main use sehmat hi hoon…use mujh jaie insane ke paas laut kar nahin aana chaiya par main sirf use ek baar mil ke use mafi mang na chata hoon. Mujhe yakeen hain ki in 2 saalon main usne bhi kise se sh..shaadi kar li hogi (saying this he closed his eyes, it was hard for himt o imagine that his naina would be somebodys els'es him this time)

shalani: tumne cadets se milne ke koshish ki ya phir baat karne ki, unhe toh sayad pata hoga ki naina kahan pe hain…

R: haan maine baat karne ki koshish ki thi par koi bhi mujhse baat karne ko razi nahin hain. Who naina ke saath huva abhi bhul nahin sakte aur main bhi unse razi hoon…maine aapni naina ko kho diya…par abhi bhi mere dil ko lagta hain ki meri naina mere paas hain. Lekin dimag kehta hain ki who chali gayi hain…chali gayi….(he sobbed)

Aaj main chal sakta hoon toh who sirf tumhari wajah se, jab tum wahan aaye aur mujhe apne saath sonpath le gayi aur wahan meri treatment huvi aur phir mujhe ek naya josh huva ki ab saayad apni naina ko…phir maine socha ab main use aur dukh nahin se sakta…maine use baizat karke aapni zindighi se nikal diya, atleast try kiya par….who humesha meri zindighi main raheghi…

Shalu: dont lose hope I am sure she will be here…I know she loves you a lot ans she will come back to you…

Raj smiled and said: I will be waiting for that day…

S: aacha raj mujhe academy jana hain…warna BC mujhe kha jayega…(saying this she left leaving raj on sweet memory of their honeymoon)

Their on other side of world we see that the person who said: tumne aapna wada thod diya was standing by window…looking at moon. She was in her world when she hears a vain…she looks back and smiles. she goes to her bed and lifts a baby. She kisses her forehead and said: aapko pata hain aap mumma ko bilkul akele nahin rehne deta….and mumma loves you for that…she kissed her cheek again…and then baby smiles.
(that girl is naina and that is her baby, ANGEL)

THIS IS A BIG PART PPL AN DI HOPE I WILL GIVE ME MORE COMMENTS TOO.....i am sorry but i was writing this big part so it took lond time + i was having my finals..

i am sorry ppl i will not be ablt to post until feb as i going to india for a month for my sister's marruiage and i am not sure if i will get time to write the parts...

so i am keeping this ff on hold...

wowwwwwww the first half was hot... but the last was way too emotional...

i do hope that raj gets to know about his kid and wife soooonnnnnnnnnnnn


and he joins them soon

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Originally posted by: sonarajasingh

wowwwwwww the first half was hot... but the last was way too emotional...

i do hope that raj gets to know about his kid and wife soooonnnnnnnnnnnn


and he joins them soon

👏

thanks!!!!!!!!ya that was like a twist to my story!