Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 39

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Oye yeh kaisi dhumki hai.Main tumare fic ko accha kaha jo normally bahut muskil se kisi fic ko kehti hoon.

Aur koi suhaag raat ke beech mein rukta hai kya???

i am sorry readers....i will resume this fan ficiton fo yours sake and this time i have decided that i am going to give a very very very long part and then i will not give any part after that for a week or so. or each time i post you will get a biggggggggggggg part...

hopt that satisfies you 😛 😛 😛

and i am sorry!

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Naina smiled and started removing her jewellery. She sat on swing and started undoing her earrings. She was just about to open it when she felt warm hands over her. She looked up and saw it was rajveer. He was smiling as she looked at him with confused look. Rajveer signaled her that he is going to take it off for her. Naina was about to say no but rajveer started taking it off. He took of her earring and kissed her ear softly, which sent a current in her body, then he took of the other earring and then kissed it and then slowly-slowly he took all her jewellery before kissing each part. After that he took her in his arms and made her sit on bed. He took his chunni/scarp (whatever they call it) off and then looked at niana who had her eyes downwards. Raj said

R: naina thank you for coming in my life…..(he blowed one candel off which was around the bed)
R: thank you for being my support (he blew another candel)
R: thank you for making me so special (he blowed another candel)
R: thanks you for trusting me so much (he blowed another one)
R: thanks you for being my life partner (he blew another one)

ONE by one he blew all the candels and then he came to naina and sat beside her. Niana was looking at him with eyes full of love and respect. Her eyes were teary seeing a loving husband who loves her a lot. Raj saw that and took her face in his hands and slowly sipped her tears from her face. His lips didn't stopped their, they started working. His hands set of to her back and started removing her blouse. He was on top of naina and kissing her intently everywhere. Whereas, naina was taking pleasure of her loving husband. Raj took naina's lips in his and kissed her with all the passion that he had for her. Their lips were parting and coming together, their tongues were playing with each other and their hands were intertwined with others.

It bright moon witnessed their love making and the flowers, the music and everything witness that two loved were finally together and now their souls were one.

The new morning or I should say the noon. yes it was : and still our love makers were sleeping in each others arms. Raj's head was on naina's crook. Their faces were inches apart and their body…no, they were intertwined with each other. Their deep heavy intakes of oxygen were proof that they were deep in sleep. Why wouldn't they didn't slept whole night. But they could sleep anymore as the sun was shining brightly and that disturbed raj sleep. He hides his face under naina's deep black hair but still the sun was too shiny. Giving up he woke up and saw that his beautiful bride is still sleeping. He smiled and pulled her closer as the sun doesn't wake her up. He saw that her face was shining. He didn't knew whether it was his love previous night or was it because of sun. well what ever it was he was happy that he started his day by seeing his beautiful biwi. He kissed her tip of nose softly. Naina stirred little as it tickled. Raj again kissed her but this time on her cheek. Niana again stirred. She hide her face on his bare chest. Raj smiled and kissed her again but this naina was faster she moved so that rajveer misses his spot. She opens her eyes slowly and says…

N: sone do na..
R: are tum kab uthi.
N: jab tum aapni naughtiness se mujhe utha rahe the.
Raj smiled and hugged her: morning biwiji.
Naina smiled as he called her biwiji…so naina also called him as
N: aacha patidev.

She felt raj chest expand, as he was smiling.
R: kaise rahi humari "suhaag raat" (he smiled naughtly as she saw her blusing)
N: jaise tumahri thi (she siaid blushingly)
R: jaan havei ever told you, you look very cute when you are blushing.
N: no….
R: okay so now I am telling you that you are looking incredibly cute (saying this he bit her neck)
N: ouch….raj

But he didn't listen to her. He continued what he was doing. He started kissing her all over. Naina was arousing in his love. She pulled him near her and raj pulled her very near. In no time they started making love again.
After an hour or so both raj and naina went to take shower and then both got ready to go to naina's house for parents house for "paag phera's"
The was also sitting their welcoming Mrs. Naina singh shekhawat and her husband.

After the ritual everybody were sitting in living room taking abouy stuff. It was getting late so soon everybody stared going (as friends) the only ppl were left were pooja-ali, raj-naina and their parents (niana's)
Naina told everybody to get some coffee so she went into the kitchen with pooja. They both were making coffee.

P: toh? (she raised her eye brow)
N: toh? (confused)
P: toh kya kya huva kal?
N:kal kya hona tha.
P: aare main tumhari suhaag raat ki baat kar rahi hoon? Kya huva? (she asked naughtily)
N (blushed): hona kyat ha…
P: tere chera keh raha hainki….
N: pooja…(she was blushing badly)
P: kya pooja…
N: pooja plz…..maine kaha na ki hum ja ke so gaye (in mind she says: so gaye…subhe tak sone hi nahin diya patiji ne)
P: ohhhhhh
N: ohhhhh kya!(she thought she read her mind)

P: kuch nahin...

N:Chal ab coffee bana
They both made some coffee and went outside. Naina sat beside raj giving him his coffee and having her coffee. They all were chatting briefly but only tow ppl were not in the conversation. (Any guesses) yup our newly married couple. They were inthier own world. Raj had niana's hand under her sari's palu which naina was trying to free. They were talking with their eyes. Suddenly raj thought of an idea. He took his cell phone out and send and SMS to naina saying..

R: jaan I LOVE YOU
Naina's phone beeped and she looked and saw that she have got an SMS from raj. She looked at him and asked him like what? To which rajjust tell her to read. Niana smile and reads. She smiles and starts talking toh er mum again. Raj looks sad as he expected he to send her reply saying I LOVE YOU TO HONEY but….
He again send her SMS…..naina's phone beeps again. She looks and sees that it was raj's message saying " my reply"
Naina looked at raj who was looking sad (not exactly)
Niana also sended a message which raj received in a sec. he hurriedly opened it and read it said " shhhhhhhhhhh"

Raj sended a message which said "you are not going to be forgiven when we rech home…be ready my love"
Naina's phone beeped and she read the message and her eyes widened….she sended a message which says "I will be waiting honey"

Raj read the message and smiled naughtily. This all sequence of messaged was watched by all. They all knew what was going on and they dared not to interrupt they love talking. All tried to suppress their laughter by watching raj and naina's expressions.

When niana's dad coughed both raj-naina came out from their SMS world. They looked around and saw that everybody in room were staring at the. They pretty much got that they were caught so they looks down. Everybody laughed out lound at that.
P: kya huva sir (to raj) aapko aur niana ko toh mere connection lag gaya.
Both looked down in an embarrassing way.
Mum: chalo chodo ko….mere bete aur meri beti ko yun tang mat karo. Aakhir unki shaadi abhi abhi huvi hain.
P: haan haan…..
M: aacha beta tum ek kam karo tum dono honeymoon pe chalo jao.
R: papa hum kal is ja rahe hain…(naina shot him a surprising look)
P: are yah mere sharukh…I mean jeejaji (raj blushed & naina smiled) ap toh kehne se pehle hi chal pade.
R: nahin who hum chate the ki duty ke….(he was blushing)
P:okay okay!
Ali was watching it all and was smiling. He though it would be safe it he didn't said anything.
Ali: uncle, sir I think we should go now! It's getting very late!
Papa: okay beta….as u wish!
P: okay uncle bye (he hugged mum and took uncles ashirwad, then went to naina and hugged her whispering in her ear : honeymoon pe ja ke bhul mat jana, aur haan thodi shopping bhi kar lena….she winked at her after hugging and naina was red hot! And raj was wondering what happened to naina.)
Pooja then hugged raj and then both ali and pooja went to their respective houses.

After couple of minutes both raj-naina went to their house and their naina was wondering where they are going for their honeymoon!! Raj was just smiling as he was thinking about their honeymoon.
They reached their home and as soon as naina changes her clothes raj took her hand and made her sit on the bed. His back was having support of the wall and naina's front part was taking support if raj's chest (hope you get the scene, like niana has her head toward raj's chest)….raj had his hands around nia's waist and naina had her arms around his waist.
N: raj tumne mujhe kyun nahin bataya ki hum kal honeymoon pe ja rahe hain?
R: kyun ki main tumeh surprise dena chata tha.
N: par asie sabke samne.
R: well who toh maine nahin socha tha par phir sab…
N: okay..i get it…par hum ja kahan rahe hain?
R: guess karo…
N: batao na!!!!!
R: humne jahan decide kiya tha wahan. (naina looked at raj)
N: hum rajasthan ja rahe hain.
R: hmmm
Naina took his face in her palms and made him look at her….
N: kya tum jana chate ho?
R: nai…main…jana chata hoon.
N: saachi
R: mucchi! (Smiled)
N: raj par
R: nahin jaan, main ab aapne bachpan ke dino main jana chata hoon…I know I have missed a lot and I want to make for it. I want to go and see my hometown. (naina who still had his face I her palms came forward and kissed his lips soflty)
N: you know you have become more intelligent after marriage. (she made a joke to make the environment less intense.
R (smiled): aacha!!!!!he held her tightly.
N: aur nahin toh kya…(she said while kissing him on his neck)
R: jaan I want to make love to you. (he said it straight forward and seriously)
Naina looked at him and shy…raj got the message and pulled her closer. He kissed her neck followed by her shoulder, jaw, cheeks, forehead ears…basically everything and last her captured her wet, soft lips and caressed it with his. The kiss of soft and gentle but not for a long time, as the seconds passed the kiss became more demanding and more passionate. Raj hands were working fast and naina's too…both were turning on and ………..(you can imagine)
The night turned out to be passionate and both lovers made love again. Looks like their heart has more wishes to fulfill.

Next day both raj and naina packed their stuff and said bye to friends and family. Both were very excited in their own way. Raj was very excited as it was his honeymoon and second of all he was going to visit his childhood place after 15 years. Where naina was very excited for many reasons. First it was her honeymoon (of course) second she is going to see raj's birth place and third she is going to see rajashtan. She always wanted to go their but never got chance. She have read a lot of palaces and forts their and now she was finally going to see it with her husband.

The trip was long and both were tired. They stopped by the dhabas for having some food and drinks. By the tike they reach the rajasthan, and their hotel they went straight to bed without bothering to change to have some dinner. Both were exhausted and very tired so…..

In morning we see that naina is sleeping and raj is standing by window looking at rising sun. he woke up early as his sleep was broken early. He looked at naina who was sleeping peacefully in his arms. He didn't want to disturb her sleep so he got up without disturbing her from her sleep and went to take shower and then stood by window looking at sun. he was feeling very good when he watched sun rising or sun going down.

Naina moved a little and slides her hand to feel her husband but she doesn't feel it. She opened her eyes instantly and saw that raj was not sleeping by her. She got and looked around and made a happy sign as, she saw him by window. He had a small smile on his face. Naina got up and went by him. She hugged him firm back and then kissed his shoulder. Raj felt her and his smile widened. He puts his hand on her's.
N: patidev aap itni jaldi kaise uth gaye!
Raj made her stand in front of him and held waist in his string hands.
R: who kya hain na aap toh so rahi thi toh maine socha ki aah toh exercise toh nahin hogi toh maine kaha aapne aap se ki tab tak wait karta hoon aphir toh…(his eyes twinked and naina's eyes lowered in shyness)

N: raj tumhe aur kuch nahin sujta?
R: main kya karu meri biwi itni boring hain toh…
N: (naina didn't liked that comment) aacha toh main itni boring hoon! (she pulled him closer with his coller)
R: well jo sach hain who toh sach hain (he pulled her more closer by her waist)
N: aacha! Aabhi dekhati hoon ki main kitni boring hoon! (she kissed his lips forcefully and was about to leave in a minute but raj pulled her closer and kissed her harder. His hands around waist were sliding down. He bit her lower lip, then kissed it and then caressed it with his tongue. Naina had changed her mind after what raj did; she kissed him back with same force and same vigor after a long kissssssssss they separated and both looked at each other with lot of passion in their eyes. There was a fire in their eyes that just reflected their passionate kiss. Naina turned around, as she was shy after that kiss. She knew it was one of the raj's tricks to make her kiss him and he succeeded. Raj made her look at him and smiled at her red face.)
R: you know naina I think that the kiss was very…delicious as you. (naina became more shy and came into his arms. Raj smiled and enveloped her in this arm.)
After a romantic morning they both decided to go to raj house. Naina asked raj why they didn't went to house why hotel to which raj replied.
R; jaan uncle ne kaha tha ki unhone ramu kaka ko keh diya tha ki who ghar clean kar ke rahe do hum wahan reh sake.
N: aacha! Yeh ramu kaka kaun hain?
Raj smield: ramu kaka meri kak the (not real kaka) he use to work at our place. When dad-mum use to go anywhere he use to take care of me. He was like a ftaehr figure to me and after mum-dad's death I didn't saw him.
N: so where is he now?
R: honey he still lives their. I didn't believed that either but uncle told me that he took great care of that house and he still lives their by a cottage that was joint to our house. (He talked in excited manner)
N: (smiled at his excitement) aacha2 toh main unhe milne se bakarar hoon?
R: me too honey!
After half and hour so, they reached rajveer childhood house. It was very big. They had a bid gates to welcome guests. There was a big palace like house that looked very old. It had many windows. The palace (lets call it that) was very beautiful from outside. The beauty struck Naina. The flowers that surrounded house with a big lavish garden. And for raj he was wondering how could the house look exactly like he left 15 years ago. That gardens. That houses, that windows, those big gates how is that possible. They both got out of car and started walking by the main door. As they were started opening gate a voice stopped them. They turned immediately. Their stood a man who was looking old he had a dhoti and a kurti on and a turban type thing on his head. His mustache was very grave and long.
Raj immediately understood who that was. a big smiled came on his face. He looked at naina who was holding his hand tightly.
The man came by them and asked
Man: aap log kaun hain?
N: jee (but stopped as raj grabbed her hand tightly)
M: haan kaun ho? Aur wahan kya kar rahe ho? Yeh museum nahain hain aur na hi public place. (Man looked at raj and naina intently)
Raj came forward and touched his feet. The man looked shocked. Raj got up and looked into his eyes directly and said
R: aacha aap aapne raju baba ko nahin jante? (The man looked shocked and then smiled)
rk: (to touched his face) tum mere baba ho? (raj nodded and had tears in his eyes, raj hugged him and he(man is ramu kaka) hugged him back. He was smiling broadly and had tears in eyes as raj. They broke their hug and smiled)
rk: mujhe kaise pata ki tum mere baba ho, tum kabhi aapne kaka se milne hi nahin aaye. (raj looked at him sadly and his tears were flowing freely)
R: main kya karta kaka, mum-dad ke jane ke baad mujhe wahan aane ka bahut man huva par ohir bhi jab bhi main sochat hoon wahan ki to mujhe aapne bachpan ki yaad aathi thi and kaise mum-dad….
rk: beta, kuch yaadien khushi dete hain aur kuch gam…(suddenly his eyes fell on naina)
rk: beta yeh khubsurat ladki tumahri saath aayi hain (to raj)
R raj looked back and saw naina smiling he went to her and grabbed her and hand and made her come in front of kaka)
R (cheerfully): kaka yeh hain aapki bahu,(blushed) mere biwi.
Kaka looked shocked yet very happy, naina cmae to him and touched his feet and took his ashirwad. Raj looked at naina in surprise and smiled. He didn't expected her to touch his feet as he did but he misunderstood her. Kaka gave her his ashirwad and touched her face.
K: aacha…mere 7 saal ka raj itna bad aho gaya. (He looked at raj and raj blushed)
R: kaka aap bhi na!
Rk: aacha ab chalo aandar. Kya aapni biwi ko yahan khade rahne wale ho (raj smiled)
Both raj and naina entered the house together with their kaka.

Originally posted by: sweta2005

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon we r eagerly waiting for it asap.

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Originally posted by: sania_58

waiting

thanks sania!!😛

guys fom now on i will give you this long updates but you will get it little late......not very late but it will not be regular!

😛 hope that satisfies you!

Good!!!

But yaar honeymoon hai toh keep on making it romantic and passionate.