Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 34

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

awesome,very cooll..me loving it totally... 👏 bhumi do post the next part soon... 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: varun_sujjal

wow lovely update continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

cool yaar
update it soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: guddi29

wow...utta romantic...luvd it

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: varallika

mast part yar plzzzz update sonn

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

update soon yaar
it is really very cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks a lol yaar!!!!!!!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
P: ali chalo na kahin jate hain!
A: kahan aur who bhi is barsat main….(par pooja garden main chali gaye thi….usne dekha ki pooja barish main nach rahi thi…bilkul baachi ki tarah kehl rahi thi…ushe dekh kar ali ke mooh par ek halki si smile ah jati hain aur wo bhi uske ke peeche chala jata hain…wo dheere dheere peeche aata hain aur pooja ka haath pakad leta hain, wo use turn karta hain…pooja use dekh rahi thi jo ab poori beeghi huvi thi aur Sharma ke aap ni palke zuka leti hain ali ko dekh kar. Ali pooja ke karib jata hain…aur karib par pooja ushe dheka de ke chali jati…ali bhi uske peeche chala jata hain par bahut der ho chuki thi,,,who apne kamre mein chali gayo thi….wo bas uske roon ka darwaza band dekh kar smile karta hain aur aapne room main chala jata hain)
Andar pooja mirror ke paas khadhi ho kar aapne aap ko dekh rahi thi…wo yaad karti hain jo bahi bahar huve aur Sharma jati hain…who bas intezzar kar rahi hain ki kab wo aur ali ek….(wo uske soch par aapna muh aapne haath main chupa deti hain)
Wahan raj aur naina ghar aate hain aur dona bahut bheege hote hain, jaise wo ghar ke andar aate hian wahan pe unhe eh pandit aur maa-baba living room main bete huve dikhai dete hain.
N: maa-baba…(she ran to them and hugged them) app kab aaye..
Mum: wo 2 ghant pehle hi aaye….
N: wo sorry hum..(She was blushing)
Baba: (finfih her sentence) hum ghume gaye the….aapke doston ne bataya.
Naina blushed whiel raj just smiled and came to them and touched their feet and then hugged. They all sat in living room. Naina looked at pandit and then looked at mum..
N: ma..yeh pandit ji..yahan pe..(she was confused and raj was aso confused too)
Naina's mum-dad just smiled and said…
M: bete yeh tumhari shaadi ke date pix karne aaye hain (naina looked shocked and raj was surprised and both naina mum-dad were smiling while looking at bride and groom's face)
N: shaadi ki date! (shocked)
Baba: haan baba…shaadi ki tarik …kyun shaadi nahin karni kya..
R-N: karni hain na (both said together and maa-baa started laughing and naina and raj blushed)
B: aacha toh karni hain na toh panjitji aap tarik likalye!
Panjitji started looking for tarik and said…
P: bhai saab 2 hafte ke baad ek sub muhrat hain jo r saal main sirf ek hi baar aata hain…aur meri mane toh yeh hi tarik bahut hi shub raheghi…
B: aach atoh…so hafte baad…rajveer aur naina ki shaadi paaki….(raj n naina looked at each other and smiled)
Maa-baba congrulated both raj and naina and went to their room leaving raj and naina….both were silent for a while, they didn't knew what to say or not. It was like their dream was coming true….they were going to get married….both were very happy but they didn't knew how to express their feeling to each other though they knew that the other know what other feels.
So raj looked at naina who was looking down and came to her and took her hands in his and said
R: JAAN! I cant wait until 2 weeks. (naina looked up and saw a shine in his eyes which reflected his happiness and hugged him and raj hugged her too)
After a long hug they went to their respective room for a good sleep after a long, fun day but none of them were on mood to sleep, they kept thinking about their marriage. After 2 weeks they are going to get married. Which fool is going to get sleep.
Morning..:
Naina called her friends and told them that their marrige date is mixed after 2 weeks and everybody were very happy, why wouldn't they, after all it was their naina's marriage with their rajveer sir. They all were given duties to handle certain things for marriage, their was lot of thing but time was less.
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was so niceeeee. waiting for the marriage 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey too good


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