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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ab raha nahin jata...plz plz plz plzz plzzzzzzz continue..................... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
part 57

suhaag raat[continued]

su:…[to kashish]"emm..kashish..hiii…kaisi ho…kem cho..majama cho…ghar pe sab kaise hai.."…

to himself -"uff..sujal..yeh tuu kya bake jaa raha hai…"

su:ka---sshhii---sssssshhhhh…

ka:…

su:umm…ehh…kaa…shii—ish,..

ka:…

su:kuch bolo naa…

ka:…

su:[shayad Sharma rahi hai]umm…[achnak se use gale lagata hai..but instead of a delicate kashish he finds out something hard as rock ,he moves his hand towards her face and opens the ghunghat]are yeh kya hai[sees a big box surrounded with some cloths…(to make it look oval shaped,which misguided sujal as it being kashsih) He tries to open it…]yeh kahan se open hoga…emm…kashish kitni sweet hai…mere liye gift rakha hai…par muje toh who chahiye.,..gift dene ke liye toh puri zindagi padi hai….achanak]aaaaahhh…[and out comes a toy clown]

it was tht kinda toy which speaks and the room is full with this song coming from it..

"yeh duniya mast kalandar…

Te utthe baitha BANDAR..

Samjhe apnu Sikander…

Te chak de putte.."

He presses the button on top of it in a bit of anger…

Then he goes towards washroom…

Su:[kock ,knock]kashish….ru inn washroom…kashi..where is she???

Opens the cupboards to change,,,and as soons as he opens it lots of soft toys come out and fall on him…and he sees something on cupboards walls...it was a naughty cartoon sketch with hands besides its forhead and tongue out …

Su:uff…kitni shaitaan[naughty] ho gayi hai…isse achi toh school mein thi..huh..kashishhhhh…kahaan ho yar…mazak ki bhi had hoti hai..huhh..TV dekhta hoon aaa jayegi..

[switches it on] "shaadi karke phas gaya yaar shaadi karke…"😆

su:uff..[switches to some other channel] "ek kunwara…phirgaya mra

phas gaya dekho..yeh bechara…

do din ki hai yeh chandni…phir kali kali raat hai…

tu manja dulhe raja…

aaj teri shaadi teri baj gaya baja"😆

su:uff..[goes to sit on the chair and as soon as he sits..chair breaks down making him fall…]

Kripa and Angad come out laughing….

Kri:haha hahaha ahaha:bas angad..Ab I can't conrol my laughter any longer.

Ang:thodi der aur tamasha dekhte to kya jata…

Su:teri shaadi bhi door nahi…kal teri baat tere dad ko kahunga…

Kri:haan sujal ..tum hi batao..yeh toh darpok hai…

Ang:oye..kripa..ke iseas the …meine oth sirf..

Su:tuje jaanta hoon..U did all this …But all over tht…WHERE IS KASHISH..???

Kri:Pub mein gayi hogi…

Ang:raat ko nashe ki halat mein aaye toh surprise mat hoiyyyo..

Su:WHT…where exactly is she?I ll go get her…

Kri:ruk..uske boyfriends ke saamne ?uski reputation ka toh soch… kya sochenge ki "pati ko saath laati hai"…How unfashionable !!!

Su:[sits down and holds his head,starts crying]main lut gaya ...barbaad ho gaya...kaa—shiishhhhhh…tumne muje dokha diya…kyun..

Ka:bohot ho gaya guys…mazak ki bhi had hoti hai…lekin who clown wala idea kiska tha??? Very interesting…

Ang:abe tu toh washoom mein hi nahi gaya…

Kri:warna humne pura bandobast[arrangement] kar liya tha tuje minus 40 degrees ka temperatur yaad dilane kaa…!!

Ka:haahahahaaa…bechara sujal….aur us clown ko kasise gale laga liyaaa[rubs her hand on sujal's head…making his hair come on his forhead…and kisses him on his cheek]my sweeetuuu pie…u r very cute…

Kri-ang:ahemm..aheemm….😆

Kri:I think v shud go..

Su:oye…subah 8 o clock tak apne dad ko nahin bola toh mein sab kuch keh dunga…!!Yaad rakhiyo…

Ka:tumhe sach mein laga ki mein doka kiya..

Su:c'mon…I was just kiddin…wasie…yeh lo..specially for u…[hands her a rose]

Ka:thanx…[as soons as she picks it…some blue paint gets sprayed on her face…]Suujaaaaaaaaall…

Su:hahahahaaa

su:accha…yeh kholeo.tumhare liye…

ka:kuch gadbad toh nahi hai naa…

su:no not this time…

ka:opens it…[amd come out a small toy…] iska mein kya karun…

su:areeeeeeeeeeeyyy!!…hamare bacche honge naa…ushe de dena…tohda advance meion de raha hoon…who kya hai naa…I always plan hings before nine months u see…

ka:ohhhhooo….Y nine?…aaj tumhara koi plan hai kya…

su:ab jab um samaj hi gayi ho toh….

Ka:Shut up…besharam…

Su:lee…ismien kahe ki besharmi..apni biwi se…

Ka:sab pata hia…room men enter huye tab toh …kitna stammaer kar rahe the…pasi ne chuut rahe the…ab sab kuch gayab?

Su:who kya hai ki tum mere itne paas hoti ho toh sab gayab ho jata hia…in face..I become more romantic..

Ka:itne paas…

Su:toda aur…

Ka:itna…

Su:aur paaass…

Ka:[closes her eyes]itna

Sujal takes the toy in his hans and ..a mischevious smile on his face… presses the stomach of tht toy and some water sprays out from its mouth onto her eyes

Ka:SUUJAAAAL….!!

Su:hahaa hahaa

Both r sitting with hand in hand…just looking at the ceiling

ka:kuch karna bhi hai…ya puri raat aise hi baithe rehna hai…

su:subah toh ho gayi ab kya…sab angad kripa ki wajah se…kitna time waste kiya…

ka:arey…subah nahi hui…dekho toh..kitna andhera hai..

su:subah ke 1:00 baje hai..[yawns]mein toh soo raha hoon…bohot thak gaya…

ka:kyaaaaaa….so rahe ho..

su:aur kya!!tambura bajau..

ka:Sujal…!!I mean…I …I …expected totallyyyyy…something different ..wud happen today…umm…lik..u know..I mean…u and me…ehh…me and u….[blushes]

su:hmmmmmmmmmmmm….[thinks] ab aya uth pahad ke niche…

ka:But…yaar…tum toh kuch sammajte hi nahi… khair chodo...mein change kar leti hoon…

kashish goes on front of mirror…

su:may I help…

sujal takes her earing out…and drags his hand towards her neck making kashish feel a tingling sensation in that part…he advances hi hand to t take he chinari out ….and out comes the chunari…he runs his fingers thru her bare back… they both go towards the bed and sujal makes her sit….she is blushing really hard…she can't look up…she knows if she does,those eyes will get her stuck to them forever…her runs his finger thru her back and tilts his head…and kisses her all over her face,…slowly he advances to her lips…and gives her a juicy kiss…and she gets it converted to a deep and a passionate one…she showers his face with kisses….his one hand goes towards her waist and other is running thru her back..and….and….and….he the strings of her blouse get untied…he is gradually moving down further…crushing into her….she unbuttons his shirt …she looks into those deep dark eyes full of love and care for her….and there lies his shirt…she rubs his back with pleasure…and he comes down to her belly…and lets his skin rub with it.. her hands reach to the bedsheet and turns into a fist …crushing it more and more into her fist as Sujal was sprinkling her with his love and passion… and …and…and…they have their first night of ultimate though newly discovered passion and love…

next day morning

kashish comes out of the washroom…she was in front of the mirror …in a white kurta…her wet hair added beauty to her face…Sujal was looking at her constantly…she feels a warm hand coming up to her waist

su:perfect…

ka:hatho…muje ready hona hai…

su:u r very pretty..

ka:I know..tell me something new..

su:seriously yaar…aur kal raat ke bad toh…bas[rums his fingers thru his hair] pucho hi mat…matlab mein toh pura…tallu hi ho gaya tumpe..

ka:Sujal…Shram karo…

su:kyun tumhi ne toh kaha tha..ki u expected tht..me and u …u and me…remember??

Ka:jao chodo…and get ready…[she pushes hin inside the washroom…]

she gets ready


sujal gets ready


After marriage…

Now angad at his home…

Niar[his dad],BC[grand pa],sujal, manjeet[his mom]and angad were sitting in a circle in the drawing room,with all eyes fixed on nervous angad…

His dad:toh beta ab teri kya planning hai?

Ang:ummm…

Su[whispers in his ears…]:kripa ke bare mein bata de

Ang:who dad…

N:batao..

Ang:meinekladkisebohotpyarkartahoonuskebinanahijiisaktailove heraurwohladkikoiaurnahibalkikashishkifriendkripahihaihumdon oekdusreko10thgradesejaantehaiandvloveeachothersincethenandI wanttomarryher…[and a big sigh..huh]😆😆😆

BC:muje kuch samaj mein nahi aya..

N:neither me…

Su:he loves kripa….

Ang:[surprised]OMG!!U said all of tht in just 3 words…

Su:kashish's friend…Kripa

Now all eyes were looking at angad quite a bit amazed and doubtful…there was a complete silence until…

Ang:umm..hehe..hehehhe…[very nervous and confused…doesn't know wht to do..so he just laughs..as if he cracked a jokebut sooon his laughter turned to a request or may b a plead…he sat down at the knees of his dad and joined his hands to BC]pleaseeeeee….main kripa ko bohot chahta hoon..who bohot hiii achhi ladki hai…plzzzzzzzzzzz…muje usi se shaadi karni hai..

His mom[m]:par beta …

Nair[signals his hand in front of manjeet to stop speaking, looks at worried angad..]….

Now angad turns his face towards BC with a small bit of hope but sees the redness in his eyes and…

Ang:[thinks]huh…pata tha…aap log ne kabhi muje nahi samja…ab kya samjoge…

N:thik hai…kripa achhi ladki lagti hai…

BC:kaafi talented bhi hai…dekha nahi tha..kitna sureela gaa rahi thi sujal kashish ke engagement and wedding par…

M:tum kripa se shaadi kar sakte ho….

Ang:I just can't believe it …Sujal…meine kar dikhaya…yIpppyyyy…Thnxks dad…[he is umping all over the room…climing up on the sofa's…running towards the door…bumping into a lot of ppl…and telling "aj mein BOHOT khush hoon" to everyone he came across…Finally he reaches Kripa's home….😆😆😆

Ang:huhhh..[panting]KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA…..

Praveena[kri's mom]oye chokra…yeh kya…aaj black shirt nahi pehente…Saturday hai…

Ang:Saturday aur shirt ka kya lena dena…anyways…kripa ko bulaiye jaldi se…[is about to enter the home]

Pr:RUK JAO…manjuben,aarti ki thali lanaaaaaaaa,,,

Does his aarti…[he is about to enter]

Pr:pehle right pair..

Ang:okay…

Kri:tumhare ghar se phone aa gaya…sab ko manzur hai…

Pr:Jami raja…aaoo aaoo…

Praful:Angadkumar..oooh..Angadkumar[the way he speaks in khihdi "bhaveshkumar"]
Edited by dhvanisoni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey nice part!!!!!!!!!! very cute and romantic part!!!!!!!😳😳 and FUNNY!!!!! - as always!!!! plzzzz continue soon!!!!!

Edited by Sai-licious - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Dhvani!!!........awesome part yaar 👏 😉 😛 😆 ❤️ 🥳😊 🥳 ❤️ 😆 😛 😉 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........bechara sujal 😊....kripa n angad having fun at his condition 😆....aur kashish ko washroom me chupadia tha 😆 😛.....so she can also see the fun 😉 😆 😃... !!!!!!!!!..........but i agree wt kashish that the joker idea was great 😆 😉 😃......ab to try karna parega 😉 😆 😉!!!!!!.........ssujal bhi bohat chalak nikla 😛.......rose n the teddy bear part were really nice n funny 😊 😛 😆!!!!!!!..........the scene btw sujal n kashish was so romantic 👏 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 👏..........!!!!!!!!!!!! finally angad family knows that he love's kripa n want to get married to her 😊....of course with sujal help 😉!!!!...........awesome part dhvani , i could imagine everything that was happening in the story 👏 😊 👏 .......!!!!!!!!!!!...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz................abb angad n kripa ki bari hai!.............plz more sk romance!!!!!!!.........can't wait 😭 👏 😊 😉 😊 👏 😭 !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part dhvani.Really like it.Angad's behavior was 2 funny 😆 😆 .Cont soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi....gr8 part yaar....amazin.... 👏
poor SUJAL kitna bura kiya ANGAD or KRIPA ne uske saath and KASHISH too supportd her....hmmmmm naughty girl......waise SUJAL is also no less kya badla liya kashish se....maza aaya....
ab to SUJAL angad ko nahi chodega on his SUHAAG RAAT.....
continue soon yaar....wil be waitin....
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Posted: 17 years ago
Suhaag raat keh waqt bhi mazak 😆 😆 bechara Sujal i just loved the part yaar it was mind blowing 👍🏼 👍🏼 i just love the characters u use in your fic they really make your story fun 😛 Plz cont. soooooon 😊 😊

P.S- sorry for commenting late 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

Suhaag raat keh waqt bhi mazak 😆 😆 bechara Sujal i just loved the part yaar it was mind blowing 👍🏼 👍🏼 i just love the characters u use in your fic they really make your story fun 😛 Plz cont. soooooon 😊 😊

P.S- sorry for commenting late 😊

amazing part👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
heeeeeeee heeeeeeeee heeeeeeee kyaaaaa stupid hai angad kripa suhag raat ke din bhi itna hasaya 😆 .but it was hilarioussssssss man...... kya part tha dhvani 😉 .hass... hass... ke pagalkar diya tumne sach 🤣 .first that joker,then that cupboard and then that chair 😆 .ohhhh goddddd!!!that left sujal is shock and confusion . waise sujal ka woh teddy bear was really sweet and the way he sprikled water on kashish was just too funny 😆 .but... but...but.... after that all the the part which u wrote when they get one was superbbbbbbbbbb!!! i mean u have described it beyond my imagination 😳 . it was really fantastic and surely showed lot of passion and love they have for each other ⭐️ .wowwwww aur shadi ke baad kashish kya lag rahi thi in that picture 😳 .she is damn gorgeous 😉 .hmmmm.... and now angad ki shadiki baat chal rahi hai with his hitler dad. lolllzzzzzz but the way angad confesses his love for kripa in fornt of everyone was sooooo confusing 🤣 . aik minute ke liye mujhe laga ki he is not saying anything 😆 . apne aap mein hi baatein kar raha hai but when i read carefully i got to know that what did he say in real 😉 . but i am happy that everyone agreed to his and her marriage 😳 . abb toh angad and kripa will also get settled 😳 .phir kya will they all go back to canada or staying india? i think they should stay in india 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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