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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

huh kash is getting married yaarrr...i dont know how thwy are going to settle things.......and sujal in plane...plz continue soon 😛

yeah...next part wil b posted in a few mins
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sai-licious

AHA MUJHE PATA THA!!!!!!!! hehe... 😆 yeh shaadi vaadi kya hai yaar... abhi toh kashish apni uni bhi complete nahi ki... 😛 i hope sujal ha also booked a ticket to go to india!!!! plz aisa hi karo... 😃

very cute part!!!!!! plz continue soon!!!!!!


hehe...yeah...u r intelligent...😆..keep reading
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 51

A guy comes and sits besides her…he caught her waist and kissed her cheek…She was shocked and turned to slap the person but to her amazament…

Ka:Sujal tum!!!!

Kri:kahaan hai sujal…

Ka:yahin toh hai[pointing and turns and finds there no1 there]

Kri:u r missing him naa..

Ka:a lot…

Kri:[reading a magazine]huh…I m hopeless now…

Ka:huh…same here..sleeps..

After some time…

Kri:are angad tum yahaan!!

Ka:[gets up]where?

Kri:abhi yeh …[turns]yahain toh tha..kidhar gaya…

Ka:koi nahi hai…its empty over there…

Kri:oh..[disappointed]

"passengers r requested to fasten their seatbelts ,the flight is ready to take off"

They tie their seatbelts…and the lights r switched off..the plane takes off

Ka:yeh light kyun switch off huyi..

Kri:don't't u know ..they have different timings..if we sleep when they switch them off..v ll feel less awkward abt or sleeping times when we reach there..

Ka:oh I see…

Now after some time kripa and kashish pen their eyes as the light turn on…"lunch time" But locate two big eyes staring each of them wildly …

Ka-kri:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhHHHHHHHHHH[a big scream horrifying everyone in the flight]

Ka-kri:umm…sorry ppl…

And both of them rub their eyes…" nahin yeh toh ek sapna hai…"

But sujal and angad ke chehre unke saamne waise ke waise hi hai…

Both of them slap themselves…"is this for real???"

Ang-su:yeah…it is…

Ka:this means u were already in…

kri:and u guys were makin fool of us two…

Ka:gosh..[hits sujal on his chest]u guys will never improve…

Ang:we don't want to…

Kri:I was missing u soooooo much…

Ka:same here…but how come u both r on same flight…and where r u guys going?

Su:where is the flight going?

Ka:delhi…

Su:so v r going to phillippines…[sarcastically]

Kri:why?

Ang:to dance ..

Su:of course v r going to delhi yaar…

Ka:yeah!!

she is very excited and hugs him and showers him with bunch of kisses all over his face,sujal was completely stunned finding tht kashish cud ever do such a thing…his eyes rn't able to blink…they widened….

Kri-angad:ahem…ahem…ahem…

She realizes wht she was doing and is blushing heavily…😳

Su:actually..mere mom dad ne muje bulaya hai India..meri shaadi ke liye…

Ka:WHTTTTTTT…


Su:lekin don worry…hum kuch karenge…

I was gonna inform u guys abt this ..but I donno wht up with these phone cables these days…and v all were busy with work…but ab v r together so nothing to worry

Ka:I don wanna marry so soon…I didn't even finish my studies..

Su:neither did I…

Angad and kripa r looking at each other…thinking "kahin hamari shaadiyan bhi naa fix kar di ho who logo ne"

Ka:tu kyun darr rahi hai…

Kri:aunty ne mere bare mein kuch kaha tha?

Ka:nahi…

Kri:I hope my mom has gone to some tirth yatra or something..

Ang:u know wht…I m gonna stay at sujal's ome..i ll hide from my parents…

Su:as if my parents wud not tell ur parents tht u r living at my place…

Ka:uff…this is sooo confusing…v ll decide all tht after we reach there…

All 4 reach delhi…[homes of all 4 r in delhi…since a few months]

Su:ok..we l meet at India gate..umm..I ll call u guys and tell the timings…

Kashish reaches her home…

D:are..maari chokri…aaja…

Ka:jai shri Krishna..

Her dad[umm…lets pick "indravadan" of sarabhai vs sarabhai..i donno his real name]:ketli moti thai gayi che[she has grown up]

Ka:mom

D:are…kripa..teri mummy ne kitne call kiye..anyways now tht u r here…tere liye bhi kaafi saare ladke dekh chuki hai teri maa..

Kri:NO…where is she/…

D:next door ..of course…

Kripa and kashsih were neighbours…

Kripa goes to her home…

Her mom[well..lets take "praveena" of baa bahu baby]:jai shri Krishna..

[the lady on the right]

Her dad["praful" of instant khichdi]chalo ..ab toh kripa aa gayi hai…isko bhi saath mein bithadenge..in mandap..

Kri:muje koi offer samaj ke rakha hai kya…ki..ek ke saath dusri free..

Prav:dekh…umar ho gayi hai..or..baba srinathji ni jai bolke kar daalne ke shaadi bas..

Kri:wht kar lene ki…koi..kapde hai..ki dho dalne ke…

Praful:achha..kashish ke kya khayal hai…do din mein aa jayenge ladke waale…

Kri:Wht..2 days..ok..I ll go to her home..cya..[she runs to kashish's home]

Prav:yeh bachha…uff…chalo..dekh toh liya ise itne saalo baad…

Kripa enters and sees…

D:[she is pushing dhokla,bhajiya,samosa and all the food into her mouth]kietli patdi thai gayi che{she has got soo thin}le aur kha..khaa..[she is pushing all tht stuff in her mouth and she had to eat tht food fried in jugs and jugs of fat oil unwillingly]😆

Ka:mom…muje meri figure ka bhi toh khayal karna hai..

D:figure chod…garam garam undhiyu kha…

Kri:aunty yeh undhiyu kya hai…

D:who tere angrezi mein usko mix vegetable bolte hai…

Kri:[laughing at her condition]khao khao…moti ho jao..

Ka:Shut up kripa…

D:aa le kripa…rotla aur bhakri kha..le beta..

Kri:No ways aunty..not me ok….

D:kha naa..[she is moving forwards ,kripa moves backwards as if a tiger is gonna eat her,kashish was laughing at her state..and mission accomplished!! She ballooned her mouth with those thik "rotlas" dipped in curry…😆] tu bhi kha…aur thodi moti hoja..patli lakdi lagu chu[ u r looking lik a thin stick]

Sujal reaches his home…

His mom[umm..lets take the lady who plays Huda's mummyji in lrl,the previous one cuz now they changed the actor,lets name her bipneet…]:oye…mera putta aa gaya tu…


Su:sat sriya kal …

B:oye..kithhe gaye tussi…itthe aao…ja puttar papa nu mille…

His dad[umm..lets take suriji of lrl]:oye..khote …[hugs him] kinne dino baad dekha tennu…


Su:peri pena..pappaji…bebe kidhar gayii..

Suriji:jaa..andar hi hai…

He goes in..we see a fat lady wearing a tight red salwaar kameez..her hair tied in a long choti…ribbons hanging at one end …tons of pins and colorful buckles on the head…she turns ..we see her lips…shining red with lipstick…he eyes darkly kajaled…cheeks r pink..she is fair…

Su:oye..bebbe…[she is her grandma…her name is Jasbindar]tussi toh iss umar mein bhibadi HOT lag rahi ho…

J:kinni baar bola…menu jassi bula jasii…aur umar umar kya kar raha hai..abhi toh mein jawaan hoon…

Su:aapke liye gift…

J:[opens the box]aye haye…make up box!!

Su:who bhi imported…

Just then bauji enters

Bauji:oye..ab toh yeh teri jawaani ka dhindhora piitna band kar…Jasbindar…

J:"JASSI"…kinni baar bolna padega…

Now angad enters their house with all the bags…

Ang:oye sujal…kidhar gaya…muje kooli banake…bhag gaya..

Sujal's mom[Bip}:oye…tu bhi aaya hai..abhi teri maa ko phone karti hoon..[she starts dialing the number]

Ang:ohh..nahi..auntiji…plz..no..

Bip:oyee…manjeet…tera puttar aaya hai canadda se…tenu mila nahi?ja puttar teri maa bula rahi hai..

Ang:kya kar diya aunty apne…!!huh…ab jana padega!!..uff…

Angad enters his house…

Manjeet [reema lagoo…]does some aarti:hoye…kinna sona lag raha hai..kya body shody banai hai..

Ang:[sharmata hai]teri bahu ko bohot pasand hai meri body…

****:ATTENTION…

Angad gets startled…

His dad[major niar of lrl very strict and angry person] :hmm…achhi body banai hai…u shud b healthy and enthusiactic…



His grand pa[Brig.Chandok of lrl..hehe..always stuck to his prionciples and rules]:hmm…Zindagi mein kuch karna bhi hai kya…


Ang:umm..dad,dadji..I wanna b a singer..thts my aim in life…

Dad:geet gata banjara banna hai kya uss ABHI ki tarah…

This is abhi

Abhi enters[abhimanyu of lrl- he was his music teacher since he was 5 years old…]:humein pukara kya kisine?

Ang:how r u abhi sir…

Abhi:hum behetar hai…Sujal aaya nahin?

Abhi and angad go to sujal's home…

Su:hey…abhi sir…how r u..?

Abhi:hum toh thik hi hai…aur yeh kya sun rahe hai hum? Aapki shaadi ho rahi hai…parson ladki dekhne jaa rahe ho..

Su:WHT…parson…uff…mom….mom…

Ang:puri society mein ladoo baatne gayi hai…

Su:ohh gosh…these ppl…

Abhi:Sujal…akhir tumhe koi instrument bajana aaya ki abhi bhi wohi gana gaate ho…pata hai..bachpan mein ise aur angad ko saath mein music classes leta tha…but this sujal cud never get anything…not a single tune..hehe…but angad was really god gifted with this talent…

Su:dekhona..koi inlogo ko samjhao..abhi toh MBS ki degree bhi nahi mili and they r fixing marriage…I don wanna maryy ryt now..

Ang:I understand yaar…

Su:accha yeh bata Hitler kya keh raha tha…

Abhi:Hitler aur uska baap[Hitler means angad's dad..lol]dono..ispe aate hi toot pade the…army deiscipline ka lecture jhad rahe the…

Ang:bach ke aaya hoon…

Now angad called kripa and told her the conditions and kripa informed abt kashish;s thingis…

Now its evening 5 o clock..

India gate


[this was very long...I ll continue afterwards...if u want I can still continue...😆 ..may b I ll post the next part after an hour...]

Edited by dhvanisoni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey dhvani gosh!!! what should i say yaar 😉 . the whole part was hiiiiiiiillllllllaaaaaaariooooooousssss.....it was damn funny aur main haas haas ke pagal ho rahi hu 😆 . the characters u chose as kashish's mom and dad and sujal's mom and dad and everyone r soooooo goooddddd yaar 👏 .they all are damn funny. unhe dekhkar,unki language sunkaar hi bohot hassi aati hai 🤣 . and ohhhh myyyyy godddddd!!! that daksha woh toh khilane paar tulli hui thi bechare kashish aur kripa ko aur yeh shadi 😆 . kitne jaldi shadi karr rahe hai inn charo ki 😭 . i wish ki ladka ladki yahin ho. and they all get maried. 😉 ya phir let angad-kripa-sujal-kashish run away from their house and marry 😳 😳 . that will be rocking ⭐️ . hey the part was greaaaatttttttt 👍🏼 !!!!continue soon after one hour yaar plzzzzzz.......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!! very funny part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe... 😆 i was literally ROTF at that Sujal-bebe... oops sorry, Jassi's scene...!!!!!!!! it was funny when u described that she was wearing bright red lipstick!!!! 😆 😆 dhvani u r really TOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!! 😆 😆 the whole part was a treat!!!!!!!! aur yeh kya, pura ka pura lrl khandaan ek part mein!!!!!! 😛

really gr8888 part!!!!! im all praises!!!!! plz continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

hey dhvani gosh!!! what should i say yaar 😉 . the whole part was hiiiiiiiillllllllaaaaaaariooooooousssss.....it was damn funny aur main haas haas ke pagal ho rahi hu 😆 . the characters u chose as kashish's mom and dad and sujal's mom and dad and everyone r soooooo goooddddd yaar 👏 .they all are damn funny. unhe dekhkar,unki language sunkaar hi bohot hassi aati hai 🤣 . and ohhhh myyyyy godddddd!!! that daksha woh toh khilane paar tulli hui thi bechare kashish aur kripa ko aur yeh shadi 😆 . kitne jaldi shadi karr rahe hai inn charo ki 😭 . i wish ki ladka ladki yahin ho. and they all get maried. 😉 ya phir let angad-kripa-sujal-kashish run away from their house and marry 😳 😳 . that will be rocking ⭐️ . hey the part was greaaaatttttttt 👍🏼 !!!!continue soon after one hour yaar plzzzzzz.......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊


I m veryyyyyyyy happy tht u liked the part.sorry..cudn't continue...actually I left the pc on...but had to go somwhere...anyways...i m continuing ryt now..keep reading😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sai-licious

hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!! very funny part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe... 😆 i was literally ROTF at that Sujal-bebe... oops sorry, Jassi's scene...!!!!!!!! it was funny when u described that she was wearing bright red lipstick!!!! 😆 😆 dhvani u r really TOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!! 😆 😆 the whole part was a treat!!!!!!!! aur yeh kya, pura ka pura lrl khandaan ek part mein!!!!!! 😛

really gr8888 part!!!!! im all praises!!!!! plz continue soon!!!!!


hehe..yeah...actually I was not gonna pu all this stuff...I was jus tgonna put lik s mom...kmom---krimom---angmom..hehe...but suddenly this idea of making the part funny came to my mind and I decided to put these funny characters...glad tht u liked this part...hehe..lrl.mere dimaag mein ghus gaya hai...kuch dino se I was watching the old episodes..right form start....rajeev dimaag mein ghus gaya hai..dil mein toh kabka ghus hi gaya hai..uff..i m talkin too much...keep reading😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 52[Now i think lots of readers haav not yet read part 51...plz read it...it involves the family ppl and landing of all 4..do read it..its on this page ...and I have edited some of its parts too..i hav actually added some pics to it..nothing added to read,,just the pics.see if u missed out anything,,...about characters...do check it again plz..]

Now its evening 5 o clock..

India gate

We see 2 taxi drivers fighting…

1:aye…dekh ke nahi chala sakta kya….

2:tu kya bailgadi[bullock cart] chala raha tha…

1:tune abhi meri gaadi ki headlights tod dii hoti…

2:terri toh…abhi abhi saaf karwaya hai…glass tod diya..

1:saallle..

2:kameene…

ka[comes out of car 1]are bhiasaab..muje der ho rahi hai..kyun lad rahe ho…

kri:uncle jii…kya baat ho gayi…

su[comes out of car2]:oye paaji..ki hoya…tussi gaddi chalao…

ang:ohh gosh..these ppl…

su:are kashish..

kri:angad tum…

All 4 of them sneak out and walk to some place nearby where they cud sit and talk…

1:oye..mere paise…[😆]

2:oye lutero…paise kaun dega…tere chacha…[😆]

Now we see angad wearing a dark green uniform…looking a "faugi"or"soldier,he was holding a rifle in his hand[toy rifle hehe] and was having a cap in his hand…he was jogging at the same place…"and kripa holding a huge magnifying glass in one hand and a thick wooden tobacco pipe though a fake one with chochlate powder instead of tobacco in it with other hand…dressed in a looong black coat with blue big goggles covering her eyes and a thick book in her hand….

Ang:it's a tough one…cadet angad reporting sir…hamien mission mein kamyaab hona hai….bolo sab "inqalab zindabad"…"hum yeh jung nahi haarenge"…[😆]

Kri:1245699363 hello…224960708 hello…06043739506 hello… 93475634…hello hello….can u hear me…over..over…over and out….

Kashish and sujal were looking at each other with confused faces…

Su:ohh gosh..stop it angad..v r not going on a "war"…plz don make this place ur home…for heaven's sake…

Ka:kripa…this is not a CID or a "karamchand detective agency"…nor v r here for any investigation…plz stop being Sherlock holmes…

Su:I tried to tell my parents…but no1 is listening…

Ka:same here…

Kri:hmm….I need to examine and study the situation and analyse it…

Ka:kripa…will u stop this NOW…

Ang:IDEA!!

All 3 look at him curiously…

Ang:Sujal ,u reject all those girls tht u r gonna meet and Kashish u reject all those guys tht r coming 2 c u…

Su:kamaaaal ka idea hai…uff…u idiot…v know tht…u r not tht dumb….okay!

Ka:just rejecting them will not work…v ll hav to find a permanent solution or else my mom isn't gonna let me go back to finish my studies and this "ladka dekhna" thingy will go on for ever…"ever"means untill I grow old...

Kri:hmm….Y don't u guys simply behave in a weird way lik never before to which ur own parents deny from letting u marry …at least for time being…

Ang:hmm…better…

Ka:huh…u guys r hopeless…

Su: apparently v hav no choice but to reject those ppl…

Ka:may b if v reject every1 then they might abondon the idea of this all shaadi thing…

Ang:hope so..by the way..kripa y r u dressed lik THIS!!?

Ka:kya batau….apne ghar jaati hai toh pagalpan ke daure padte hai…iski mom…gosh…she can b called the most superstitious lady ever on this earth…"red mat pehno accident ho ga aur blood niklega"…."aaj Saturday ko never wash ur hair or else u ll get some "mahadasha"of shani…" and she prays some srinathji baba a lot…well she is very religious…but …

Kri:she gets annoying sometimes…but I love her for tht…after all she is MY mom…

Ka:and thts the reason whenever she comes out of her home she is showered with hundreds for forbidden things and she always does the opposite of wht her mom says…

Kri:hehehe..its fun doing tht…she looks really cute …when angry…isiliye black pehna…keh rahi thi "if u ll wear BLACK TODAY u ll have a fight with someone very near to u …"

Ang:hahaa….so u wore black…hehe…sujal..ab toh muje alert rehna padega…whenever kripa will come back ,after marrige ,from her maika [mother's place]..she wud b soo changed…tht I ll have to tolerate this weird things…hehehe…

Kri:WHt heheehe…iska matlab…I m unbearable !!??!! WHt do u think of urself haan…!!

Ang:umm…ryt now I think u r looking lik a new Sherlock holmes agent who imitates him and steals all his cases…

Kri:U R SUCH A..

Ang:handsome man…tell me something new…this news is old..

Kri:and u ..u r looking lik a monkey…a green monkey…holding a banana instead of this rifle..I ll…

Ang:kiss u hain naa…I know tht too…

Su:uff..yeh dono ko aaj kya hua…they r fighting…😲

Ka:v hav stopped fighing thts y they both r filling in…

Su[looks at kashish at the same time she looks at him ]:gosh,…these 2 r hopeless..

After 2 days…

Kashish's home:

Ka:[getting ready]

Kri:see..mix fevicol in those laddoos… sab ke muh aise band ho jayenge ki zindagi bhar bol nahi peyenge…add excessive salt in those sweets…don't forget to add some extra chilli in those chips…

Ka: and [looks in the mirror]r u sure this dressing of urs is gonna work..

Kri:y not…they ll go mad…they ll run away at the very moment they ll see u….

Both of them smile mischeiviously…

Sujal's home…

Ang:dekh,act lik u r the most spoiled guy ever…describe them tht u have the badest habits ever…everything u see…

Su:but mere gharwale kya sochenge..

Ang:c'mon sujal they know tht u r not tht kind of a person…behave in such a bad way tht ladkiwaale khud hi "NEVER" kahe…

Su:r u sure this is gonna work…

Ang:no…u r gonna admire urself lik anything and tht girl will kiss u ryt there…and u both willl liv happily ever after…

Su:NO…muje kashish se hi…

Ang:then shut up…and stop askin questions …stop doubting my plan…do as I say…

Kashish's home:

Kashish is in the kitchen…

Kri::rama ben…aap jao…kashish le jaegi, yeh laddo aur chai lejaegi…nashta bhi wohi le aayegi…app jaiye..

Kripa signals kashish to come in "raasta saaf hai",now kashish is mixing all liquidized gum and fevicol in the laddoo…mixes something biiter in the sharbat/juice … and mixes some of this sand in the tea… adds extreme salt in those sweets… adds some tremendous amount of chilli in those chips…

Ka:ab dekhti hoon kaise yahaan pe ek second rukta hai…

Kripa and kashish give each other a high-five…and smile mischieviously

Now first of all….kripa goes out side…

Those ppl come in…

All ppl from kashihs's side:aayiye…padhariye…swagat hai…

Kri[hiding and looking everything from a wndow upstairs…]:ab ladka bhi dikh jaye…aisa swagat karegi kashish…aisa swagat karegi…ki "didi …didi" karke bulayega kashish ko…haha hahah hhaha…

A lady:yeh hai hamara beta….SUJAL….

Kri:Wht sujal!!!!…ohhh Shit…PROBLEM!!…[she runs to stop kashish from doing all tht crap,but too late…she was already gone..]

By the time she came out to the drawing room..

D:paani pijiye…

Su:aisi chizein main nahi pita…champaign ya whisky ho toh batao…

D[whispers in her dad's ears]:are…indu…yeh chokra toh sharaab pita hai…

Su:ek ciggarette zara mil jaati toh…bas maza hi aa jata….

Indu:yahaan cigerette nahi piite…

D:ane non-veg toh bikul not allowed inside the house…

Indu:accha beta tumhe khane mein kya pasand hai…

Su:chicken tikka….mutton….tandoori…prawns….and Chinese..tht too baked with fish…ohh..who oh bohot hii tasty hota hai…

By the time

Kri:kashish!!..kashsih!! wait…wait…

Indu:acchha!![ab toh iska pura character aana padega]…ap toh wahaan Canada mein rehte ahi naa…toh friend circle kaisa hai?

Su:haan haan…bohot saari girlfriends hai…ek raat iske saath..toh dusri uske…

Sujal's mom and dad were getting enraged with this sudden unexpected behaviour of sujal..

Bebe:puttar..yeh u kii keh rayasi…

Su:jo sach hai who sach hai…waise aap bhi koi kum nahi hai…[pointing to daksha..hehe]..kaho toh aapko bhi aaj shaam ko disco le chalta hoon…aati kya[winks]

Indu:[fully in anger]yeh kya badtameeezi…

Kashish was coming downstairs…she had the dupatta on her head…no1 cud see her face…she puts the food and everything on the table…

Ka:khaiyena…

Angad now saw kripa waving her hands in a big NO from behind…he was shocked…

Su:[yeh muh kyun nahi dikha rahi..anyways…muje kya padi hai…I don care]:aur haan…aapki ladki ko bata dijiyega…mai yeh indian shindian kuch nahi khata…

ANG:[WHISPERS]:sujal noo…no…

but sujal cud not resist seeing delicious laddooo and sweets down there…he picked one up but angad snatched it he took a bite…he felt a bit weird..then he took some chips..😆

ang:ahh..ah….paani..paani…[his eyes wen watery]

ka:yeh sweets khaiye…muh thik ho jayega…

Sujal reached his hand for those sweets but angad snatched them away but ate all tht himself..he ate one of those…his mouth was filled up with lots of salt..his ears were fuming…his tongue was burning…😆

Kripa was lik :

Ka[she was still thinking tht the guy who came to see her was eating tht stuff..she had a winning smile under tht ghoonghet]:are kya ho gaya jii…acha nahi laga…aap yeh chai pii lijiye…bohot hi tasty hai..adrak waali…malai marke …

su:apna muh toh dikhaiye!!

She opened her ghunghat She had done a lot of make up…her eyes were all balck..with extra dark ircles she made by herself…her long hair were tied back and she wore a wig on it which was quite a white-greyish-goldenish m\colored cming thru her whole face…two teeths coming out lik "draculla"..shelooked pretty sary…her lips were painted red…everyone was scared…TOTALLY…not a sinle person was left unterrified except kripa,cuz she was the one who had dressed her…

But now she looked up and to her surprise Sujal was sittin there…

Ka:ohh no….

Sujal didn't recognize her in tht disguise…

No1 cud speak anything cuz the way things were goingone by one shocks after shocks…

Ka:dad…I need to talk to this guy…hamien plz akela baat karni hai..plz…

Indu just nodded in yes …as he was having a big shock seein her daughter so bizarre…

Su:[now quite a but relaxed]huh…[thinking:aisi pagal ladki ko toh mere parents aise hi reject kar denge…]

Now sujal followed her…both r in a garden…

su:dekho…jo bhi ho tum…bohot badsurat ho…main bhi ekdum bura hu…so I can't marry u …

ka:but I lik u …I m not gonna refuse…

su:then I ll refuse..waise bhi meri asia roop dekhke tumhare gharwale r not gonna accept me..

ka:wht r u saying??!!!mian kashish hoon…kashish…yeh dekho[wipes off all tht black things from her eyes and removes those dark red sparkling things from her face…tht red paint…taked those fake long teeth out…removes tht wierd wig]

Su:TUM!!!..

Kripa and angad enter…

Kri:kashsih tumne sab garbad kardi…are jaane se pehle ek baar dekh toh liya hota ki ladka kaun hai…

Ka:tumne bataya kyun nahi…

Kri:I tried but u already went out…

Su:ohh no..maine toh apne bare mein itna bura bola hai..ohh no..

Ka:ohhh shit…sujal….u ate those laddoos and sweets and chips!!!

ang:yeah…they tasted pretty funny…but I liked them…

Kripa and kashish look at each other

Ka:angad…it had all tht..fevicol in it…

Kri:and those sweets contains lots of salt…it wud burn u throat

Ka:and those chips contained chlli..the extra strong one…it wud burn ur stomach muscles..

ang:aoooooorr…aoor…muje kuch ajjeb ho raha hai…[he was makng creepy faces]ehh..umm…uff…[holds his stomach]ehhhhhhh…[holds hi throat]ewwwwwwwwwww….FEVICOL!..how cud u do this kashish…[😆]

Kripa,kashish and sujal laughed lik anything at his condition..

ka-su-kri:🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Edited by dhvanisoni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
toooo gooood dear awesome part 👏 continue soooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooohooooo balle balle cha gae tusi......
amazin awsume fantastic parts yaar.....
👏
haaayeee SUJAL ki punjabi.....amazin thi yaar..... 😆
the most funniest part SUJAL KASHISH ki hi shaadi ho rahi hai and they are doin strange thin to breake the rishta...hehehehe....
poor ANGAD kya hoga uska...fevicol wale ladoo mirchi wale chips oh my god....hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe 😆
next part jaldi post karna yaar ab to maze shuru hue hai......
Edited by neh0307 - 17 years ago

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