Pyaar Mein Hulchul LAST PART/EPILOGUE p49

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Posted: 18 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: jdsean
Great part. !! The Gauri and Shiv part was cute. Continue soon.

thanx hun, i agree shiv and guari part was really cute, not because i wrote it😆 and yah i will continue soon😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: subhag
awesome part!!! aww shiv and gauri soo cute 😆
lol omg wut a plan..and eww a rat!!!
plzz cont soon!!! 😃 😃 😃

thanx hun, i agree shiv gauri part was really cute...i also loved the plan but not the fact that they used a rat....disgusting rite? i will continue soon and thanx for writing😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Awesome Part Sukhi

poor Anjali 😆 it was very funny and cute

thanx di, im glad you liked it...😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Recap:
Tanya and Gauri ruin Anjali's locker…

Today's Episode:
Tired and sweaty Anjali walked back into the locker room. She went up to her locker and grabbed the handle and pulled it back. She felt something gushy on her hands, she slipped her hands back and looked, it was mustard, lotion, and some red stuff mixed together on her handle, she screamed, terrified; she quickly looked into her locker and screamed so loud, the ground shook. She picked up her clothes and noticed holes and cuts. Who? Who could have done this, she thought but before she could think, something popped up out of her clothes. She jumped on to the bench, holding on to a nearby pole and looked back into her locker. The thing was moving, had four feet, was an ugly color grey, ugly tail and a small body…she looked a bit closer but didn't come down the bench and noticed it was a RAT….she moved back and climbed on to the nearby pole again when the rat came near her, tears ran down her eyes. Oh how disgusting! her clothes were gone, an ugly rat was in her locker, she screamed until a few girls walked over to her, and said "whats wrong? Do you have issues?" Anjali didn't say anything but just pointed to her locker, when the girls looked they screamed and ran out of the locker rooms, until they were away from there. The coach comes looks and says to Anjali, "disgusting, can you not learn to eat in the cafeteria, that's it your suspended for two weeks, I had warned you many times, and look I want you to clean this locker out NOW, and get rid of the mouse, understood!"

Tanya and Gauri stood quietly in a nearby corner, holding each other so they wouldn't fall, they were laughing so hard, someone must have thought they had gone mental. Tanya looked at gauri and noticed her cheeks were a bright pink, tears ran down her eyes. Gauri looked at Tanya her eyes were watery, she was laughing so hard, she was clutching to the wall so hard, that she gauri felt she had gone mad also.

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He stood in the corner, thinking about what had happened over the few weeks, why had life changed so much, tears ran down his eyes, as he thought, how she had cheated him, why did she cheat him, what had he done to her, why was his past troubling him so much, and today another had done the same, oh how he hated her so much, he felt he could strangle her…. "Angad" Zaib walked towards him, and put his arm around him, comforting him, only he knew why angad was like this, he never used to be like this, heck, life had always been unfair to him.

FLASHBACK:
Nurse: "congratulations madam, you have given birth to two baby boys." dilip "naina, you have given me the most happiness in the entire world, you have given me a son" naina: "what are you saying, dilip, I have only given this happiness for myself" dilip: "naina, you break my heart….im so glad, you have given me this beautiful gift the day before our anniversary, life is amazing"

FIVE YEARS LATER***
"mujhe mera bacha chaaye, I want my son dilip, go save my son, he cant die, he cant leave his mother, he doesn't have blood cancer…its all a lie, we will go to another doctor, or the US, to confirm this, but dilip nothing is wrong with our child….please dilip listen to me"
Dilip: im sorry naina, but he has blood cancer, and is on the last stage, nothing can save him, tears ran down his eyes as he said we cant do anything im sorry….

A WEEK LATER***
Naina: Nurse, nurse, nurse, my child is missing, where is my child, go find him, he was just here, you were supposed to be with him, please check him now, NURSE, DAMN IT I WANT MY CHILD….

You see a dark room, a doctor is sitting terrified, at what he had just done, but he had done it to save his family, was it right or wrong, but he was forced to do it. Another man in black turned around and said, "good job, you took their younger son, now they should pay, after all they had tortured me and sent me to jail, their younger child should pay!" the doctor looked up terrified, when the man said "good work, I have nothing to loose now, I have their child anyways get back to work and act like nothing has happened, understood?" doctor: yeah…I will just stay away from my family and I, that's all.

FIVE YEARS LATER ***
A little boy in blue shorts, and a white shirt ran up to his parents and said, "mom, dad, look there is a boy that looks like me, over there, except he is wearing rags, and is beaten a lot, look mommy, daddy come on lets go" naina looked at dilip and said, "how is this possible, dilip, lets go and check" they walked over to the temple and looked at the boy, tears flowed down his eyes, he had been raised on the streets for five years running away from cops, and feeding off of food stolen from others. Naina looked carefully at the boy, walked up to him and said, "beta, who are you…but before she continued she looked into his eyes, and tears ran down her eyes, dilip, dilip she screamed. Dilip turned towards her and said naina kya hua, what is wrong? "dilip, this is our angad, look its our child, he was kidnapped…

Naina and dilip hugged him and kissed him, the boy looked scared, but until he saw the other boy that looked like him, he understood, these were his parents, the parents that loved him before he was kidnapped by the ugly fat man….

END OF FLASHBACK:

Angad turned around, tears in his eyes and quickly hugged his brother, "bro it hurts it still hurts today, why had everything turned out like this, why?" zaib, "bro stop crying, it hurts man, but you look horrible when you cry you know that, when you cry you remind me of our fat cousin Nikhil, man such a small name for a 10 year old…it doesn't even go around his waist" "shut up zaib, that's jacked up, hes our cousin, we will help him loose weight, I have an idea, hand him over to mom" they laughed and walked out of there….

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She was standing at the beach, arms crossed, her hair blowing thinking about him, when someone put their hand on her arm, she turned around and smiled her cute dimply smile, there he stood, the love of her life, shiv. "gauri, um hi do you remember me?" "stupid, I still remember you, how has life been, everything has changed huh, we used to be good friends, but I guess life had something different in store" shiv looked at her with tears in his eyes, and said "I cant hold back longer, gauri" she looked at him with confusion in her eyes and said huh?

He got on his knees and said "gauri, I love you and I know you love me, WILL YOU MARRY ME? Please….I will keep you happy for the rest of your life, will never let a tear escape your eyes, and will never let that million dollar smile fade…will you, gauri, marry me, and make my life complete? Tears ran down her eyes, as she looked at him and said "yes shiv I sill marry you, I love you too…." Shiv got up, hugged gauri and said I love you, he picked her up and twirled her around, today life had changed for them, they walked hand in hand at the beach, finally quietly he slipped a gorgeous diamond ring on her finger, she looked up at him and said, "shiv, your making me cry, you made my life, I love you" he smiled at her and just hugged her, life was worth the living for him.

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Kripa: omg, gauri your engaged to shiv, wow that's great, but im deciding when you get married okay, im older then both of you so I take care of all of these marriage plans, understood? Gauri looked at her and smiled, she thought back kripa and tanya never made her feel like she was an orphan, she had two sisters, and she was happy. A tear escaped gauri's eyes, which didn't go unnoticed by kripa and tanya, they understood what she was talking about and hugged her, it will be okay…

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THREE WEEKS LATER: Plan No. 2:
She walked in to the cafeteria, kripa noticed this and walked towards her, with chilly cheese fries in her hands, she bumped into her, and all her clothes were covered with chilly, cheese and fries, she screamed. "Tanya, you little…watch where your going, you ruined my new dress, you little….b" the principal walked in and said "Anjali, come here now, how dare you, if I hadn't come you would have, disgusting, I guess you need to be suspended for another 2 weeks to teach you some lessons, and you have three weeks of detention once you return back to school, but for now get out, understood! Anjali screamed, and turned towards kripa and said, "you will pay, because of you, you….Kripa started crying…crocodile tears came down her eyes, the principal walked back to her and said what is going on here,….Kripa looked up and said, "ma'am, she is yelling at me for something I didn't mean to do, and she is threatening me, saying rude stuff, calling me names….the principal holds her hands up and says that's enough, ANJALI, YOU STEP INTO MY OFFICE NOW,…Tanya you go back to class…and be careful…Kripa: yes ma'am.

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Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

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lol................that was funny and cute.....awwwwwww......but poor angad.......hope he meets kripa so she can be his support.......or all four of them (angad, kripa, zaib and tanya) can meet at gauri's engagement or wedding and finally realize that they're twins of each..........hope ak and zt could be together soon
continue asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#216

Awesome Part Sukhi very cute and sweet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#217

that part was gr8 and touching...angad's past is a little sad...

gauri-shiv part was adorable

tanya and kripa are hilarious....

cont soon...

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago

#218

awesome update!!!!! i feel soo bad for angad!!! he was kidnappe when he was little ....haha kripa and tanya are too good...lol anjali!! 😆 😆 😆
and yay shiv and gauri are getting married...i think all four of them will meet now! 😃
plzz cont soon!!! 😃 😃 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

#219

great part
i feel so sad for angad
hopefully all 4 of them will meet soon

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: meme25
lol................that was funny and cute.....awwwwwww......but poor angad.....i agree his past is very sad.....hope he meets kripa so she can be his support...agreed....or all four of them (angad, kripa, zaib and tanya) can meet at gauri's engagement or wedding and finally realize that they're twins of each.....naa not yet...cant make them meet so soon, now can i...there is a lot i still gotta do😉.....hope ak and zt could be together soon me too
continue asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i will this friday...since i need to finish my ap hw first....😃