Pyaar Mein Hulchul LAST PART/EPILOGUE p49 - Page 21

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

~ NOTE ~

Im sorry guys i wasnt able to post new parts, i was out of town, but it looks like due to some problems...which are i havent done my ap homework i wont be continuing until august 10...hope all of you can forgive me...im terribly sorry😳

aww....ok!! im sure we'll survive😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
hi guys, just to let you know...i am working on the next part but cant post it...btw when i was writing these chapters in my book, i realized how stupid some of them were...so i changed them around a lot in my book...i rewrote most of the parts...im not sure if i should continue but i think i will especially for shina di, anam di, subhag....(who will kill me if i dont)....these people are dangerous...kiran and many more...just for you guys..i will write much better parts...and i promise you will like the rest of this ff...im sure...it wont suck...i have a lot of twist and turns in store... 😳 thanx a bunch to everyone who is bearing with me...you guys are the best...and i promise once i finish my ap homework and turn it in...i will post 3 parts...in one day 😃
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

you GUYS ARE the BEST....im SERIOUS

🤗I LOVE ALL OF YOU DEARLY😛

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hiya Sukhi its ok take ur time ur studies are more important we can wait for the parts and I wont kill u promise😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww thank you di...for leaving me alive 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
im posting today guys....i dont feel good about not writing for a while....so im posting a part today... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Thank you to all my readers and silent readers, who waited patiently for the next part....and thanx for reading...everyone...

Recap:
Angad: (thinks) wow she looked hot today…
Zaib: kiske baare main soche rahe ho, angad
Angad: huh…oh no one..
Zaib: you sure…cuz from the look on your face you look like your in love…what say are you?
Angad: what rubbish….!
Zaib: rubbish shmushes…your in love, believe it or not…anyways im thirsty…I be back in a bit…
Angad: yah whatever…after zaib leaves he starts thinking about kripa…you see zaib thinking about tanya…both thinking about there girls…

Today's Episode:
Kripa: Gauri….Gauri?…GAURI!
Gauri: huh? What happened, is everything okay?
Kripa: yes everything is okay, but whats wrong with you, ever since you got back from London, your very lost…hey, are you in LOVE….omg you are…who is he, tell me naa…
Gauri: no one, im not in love okay…
Tanya: LIAR, LIAR, PANTS ON FIRE….kripa the truth is, when you were here in my place and I was there, well she bumped into a good looking guy, he caught her, and they both stood there staring into one anothers eyes for 5 minutes, it was so romantic…I must say…very cute…
Gauri: (turns red and blushes) shut up tanya, its nothing like that, okay, kripa come on…don't believe her
Kripa: hmmm…liar, I trust tanya on this one, there is a different sparkle in your eyes, and plus your blushing…whats that supposed to mean…huh., just say it your in love…
Tanya: gauri, just say it…
Kripa: yah, who is he…
Gauri: (blushes hard) ha…im in love with….
Kripa: yeah I knew it….
Tanya: I did too…(interrupted)
Gauri: shiv kapoor…
Kripa: WHAT…YOU MEAN SHIV KAPOOR…the guy who has had a crush on you for like years….
Tanya: hey how come I never knew that…
Kripa: shiv has like gauri ever since he set eyes on her, we were in the same high school…hey does this mean you have liked him for a while…
Gauri: yah, I loved him since high school….(still blushing)
Tanya: aww how cute, lets set them up once we get back, okay?
Gauri: shut up tanya…and runs out of there as fast as she could
Kripa: tanya, look what you did, you made the poor girl blush, so hard, I thought she was gonna explode….high five me…twin
Tanya: yeah, im so happy she found her love, now we just need to find out if he also likes her….but how?
Kripa: don't worry, I know where he lives…he lives around the block…

*****

Zaib: hello?
Kripa: hi zaib, how are you?
Zaib: kripa, im fine and you?
Kripa: rocking, listen I need a favor, could you go to Shvi's house, and ask him if he likes Gauri….
Zaib: ya sure, but where does he live….
Kripa: around the block from my house…you know where my house is right?
Zaib: ya…okay…I will go…but not today, and first I have to become friends with him..
Kripa: thanx zaib, you know you're the best….
Zaib: I KNOW…lol
Kripa: okay, I gotta go bye…take care
Zaib: ya bye…

*****

PLAN NO. 1: MONDAY:
Kripa: Tanya you ready, you go to college, and I will do the second half for you, is that okay…
Tanya: ya, that's fine…gauri is coming with me right?
Kripa: ya….so you know the plan right…we have to get even, and prove you innocent..
Gauri: ya…so lets get started, people..

*****

Tanya walks through the halls with gauri by her side, she felt confident, she would prove herself innocent…no matter what…
Tanya: okay gauri, do you have the stuff
Gauri: ya…you ready…
Tanya: always…and they both head for the gym lockers…
Gauri: which one is hers…
Tanya: right there…she will be here in no time….and then we will get started
Gauri: yah…
Just then Anjali walks in with her bags, walks up to her locker, opens it and changes into her shorts, and a shirt, for soccer practice. She leaves, and walks out the door…without noticing gauri n tanya…who walk up to her locker open it…(the dummy forgot to lock her locker)…..
Tanya pulls out all of anjali's clothes…and hands them to gauri, who takes out a scissor, and starts cutting them, meanwhile, tanya takes anjali's bag and opens a bottle of lotion…drops it in there…and then takes ice cream out of her bag and rubs it all around her bag and the inside of her locker….she then takes another bag from her bag, opens it and takes out the rat…and throws it in her locker…while gauri takes all her clothes and throws them on top of the rat….
They close the locker and walk away, a little further they high five each other….and walk out of the gym for soccer practice…


PREVIEW - Anjali screams
Someone in trouble
PlAN NO. 2

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome Part Sukhi

poor Anjali 😆 it was very funny and cute
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!! aww shiv and gauri soo cute 😆
lol omg wut a plan..and eww a rat!!!
plzz cont soon!!! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part. !! The Gauri and Shiv part was cute. Continue soon.

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