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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 17 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
nice part cont soon hope to read more sk scenes in the next part

ok there will be plenty of SK lol.

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sumayyah patel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#302

FAB part. sorry couldn't comment be4 hand (wasn't able to log in). Hope to see more scenes of all couples in the next updates and u don't need 2 post such LOOOOOOOONG updates, take ur time and go steadily in writing out the updates

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 17 years ago

#303

PROMO

Turns out Kashish, Prerna and Anjali, used to be college buddies. One day Anjali sneaks up on Kashish from behind and sees Kashish writing in her diary "I LOVE KAVYA!"
Kashish and Anjali have a big arguement. Kashish leaves Sujal.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 17 years ago

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sumayyah patel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#304

kool promo. can't wait to find out why Kashish leaves Sujal

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 17 years ago

#305

hopefully new update will be posted today, so you won't have long to wait

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sumayyah patel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#306

kool. can't wait for it.
continue soon please

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 17 years ago

#307

Part Sixteen

Gradually they all came walking out from where they were hiding. They all were laughing at Kavya. Including Anjali.
Kavya: Anjali…You too!
Anjali started to feel kind of guilty, for keeping quite.
Anjali: Okay…that's enough guys…its not his fault that he's not strong enough.
Kavya looked up Anjali.
Kavya: Oh really…That's it now!
Immediately Kavya got up and slowly made his way over to Anjali.
Anjali: Kavya…Kavya…Kavya…What are you doing?...NOOOOOOOO!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Kavya tried to grab hold of Anjali, and carry her, but she wouldn't let him.
Anjali: Kavya…Kavya…Nooooo
Anjali tried running all over the place, with Kavya chasing her.
Anjali: What are all of you standing there for?...I helped you…now you guys at least help me now.
Prem: Sorry…Anjali…you are on your own with this.
Anjali: Prem…wait till I get hold of you.
Anjali just kept on running around helplessly, while everyone else was laughing. Eventually Kavya caught up with her and grabbed her. Then he got his arms around her and carried her.
Anjali: Don't you have any shame? Everyone's watching.
Kavya just stared at her.
Kavya: If I have to carry you like this for the rest of my life, then so be it…I don't have any shame.
This time Anjali, blushed as she stared at Kavya, she tried looking away, but she couldn't. Neither could she get away from him.
Angad then pretended to cough, to make Kavya and Anjali realise, that they were all watching. But they didn't notice.
Angad went up to them closely.
Angad: Kavya, everyone's watching…you can put Anjali down.
Kavya: What?
Angad: Everyone is watching
Kavya turned and forgot that they weren't alone in the room. In the panic, Kavya accidentally dropped Anjali, on to the floor.
Anjali: KAVYA!!!!!
Kavya looked down at Anjali. He was shocked, he couldn't believe what he had just done. Neither could everyone else. They just started laughing again, at the pair of them. Eventually so did Kavya and Anjali. They started to laugh at themselves. However in all of the commotion, Prem quietly walked out of the room, as it all brought back the past.
Prem: I'm sorry Mukti…I can't forget you.

Flashback

Prem: Oh great I can't believe this…a flat tyre.
Prem kicked the tyre.
Mukti: What's happened?
Prem: It's all your fault…you chose this path didn't you. Why do I always listen to you?
Mukti: So change it then
Prem: Tell you what open the boot, and get the tyre out, you can at least do that can't you.
Mukti got out of the car, and made her way to the car boot. While she did, she slipped on the mud on the ground and fell.
Prem looked up and couldn't see Mukti anywhere.
Prem: I don't believe this, do I have to do everything around here…Mukti, where are you?
Prem looked inside the car and she wasn't there. Then he looked up and saw Mukti's hand reaching up on top of the car roof. Both her hands were covered in mud.
Prem: Hey are you okay?
Then Mukti showed her face.
Prem: DAMN!!!!
Prem jumped back.
Prem: Mukti, tell me straight…did you take your mask off or put a mask on?...I mean…
Mukti started to get really angry. She took off her glasses. Prem could clearly see the anger in her eyes. The area around her eyes was clear unlike the rest of her face, which was covered in mud. She put her glasses on top of the car roof and pointed her finger at Prem.
Mukti: YOU!!!!!
She tried to make her way around to Prem, but she kept on slipping. Prem just kept on laughing at Mukti.
Mukti: What kind of a person are you? This has happened because of you…just look at me. If you hadn't have told me to get the tyre for you…
Prem started to feel guilty.
Prem: Okay…here let me help you up
Prem held out his hand for Mukti to grab on to.
Mukti: No thanks.
Mukti refused to grab his hand. But then an idea came into her head. She then grabbed hold of his hand and tried to pull him down. But Prem let go of her hand quickly, causing her to fall again.
Prem: Nice try…but that won't work with me.
Mukti looked up at Prem.
Mukti: Remind me again, what did I ever see in you?
Prem: My good looks and charming personality.
Mukti: Don't flatter yourself, cause you have neither…whats so charming about what you did to me? I can't even stand up, with out slipping.
Prem: Okay…look I'm sorry…
Mukti: Forget it…okay.
Prem: Hey I said I'm sorry
To make matters worse, Mukti felt little droplets of water on her head. She looked up.
Mukti: Oh great!!!!
Prem: What?
Prem also looked up.
Mukti: Can my day just get any worse?
It started to rain.
Prem just watched Mukti trying to protect herself from the rain. Mukti looked up at Prem, while shielding herself. Prem slowly made his way over to Mukti. He knelt down beside her, and picked her up. He then slowly made his way towards the car, while carrying her in his arms. Both Prem and Mukti, just stared at each other, forgetting about what was happening around them.

End Of Flashback

Anjali: Prem, what are you doing here?
Prem turned and saw Anjali standing in front of him.
Prem: Errrr…I was just waiting for a phone call, I couldn't hear over the phone, with everyone laughing.
Prem tried to smile back at her, to assure her that what he had said was the truth. But he couldn't. So instead he tried to change the subject.
Prem: What are you doing here anyway? Are you spying on me?
Anjali: No I wasn't
Prem: Oh really…I think I will need to have a word with Kavya
Anjali: You just try it…and you'll see what happens
Prem: Relax…I'm just kidding
Prem then walked past Anjali and was about to walk back into the house.
Anjali: Prem…what about your phone call?
Prem: Don't think he's gonna call and I can't keep on waiting out here for it.
Prem then walked back in.
Anjali: Lie all you want Prem…I know you can't forget about Mukti…No one can forget their first true love.
Anjali then looked up at the sky.
Anjali: Thanks
Kavya: Who are you saying thanks to?
Anjali turned and saw Kavya standing behind her. He walked up to her and hugged her.
Anjali: I was just thanking god, that he returned my happiness to me.
Kavya: Oh really…
Anjali: Yeah…but then you came back into my life
Kavya looked at her and smacked her gently on the back of her head.
Anjali: Hey…I was just kidding…I just…just…feel…
Kavya: I know, what you're trying to say
Anjali looked at Kavya.
Kavya: Anjali, I swear to you, that I will never hurt you in anyway. I know after saying this you probably still have doubts, but all I can say to you, is that I love you soooooooo much and I promise to keep you happy for the rest of our lives.
Anjali hugged Kavya.
Kavya could hear Anjali sob. He lifted her face up and wiped her tears away.
Kavya: No…don't…not anymore. You can't make me break my promise to you, especially so easily.
Anjali smiled.
Anjali: You promised me to keep me happy…these are tears of happiness…so, no you haven't broken your promise.

Meanwhile back in the house, Sneha notice, that Kripa looked a little lost in her thoughts.
Sneha: Hey, Kripa, where are you?
Kripa: What? Oh its nothing…I was just…
But then she looked ahead and saw Angad coming out of the kitchen.
Sneha: Oh…Oh…Oh…I see
Angad: Do you girls need anything else?
Sneha: No nothing, I think Kripa needs something…don't you
Kripa stared at Sneha, she was getting annoyed at Sneha.
Kripa: No I don't need anything at all.
Angad: Are you sure?
Kripa looked at Angad.
Kripa: Yes I am sure…thanks.
Angad's phone started ringing, so he walked away to answer it.
Kripa: You know you are really something else…I just want to…
Sneha: Go after Angad
Kripa: Right!
Kripa grabbed hold of a cushion and hit Sneha with it.
Sneha: Is that the best you can do?
Kripa hit Sneha again a few more times. This time Sneha tried to grab hold of a cushion.
Sneha: Arrrgghh!!!
Sneha's knee started to hurt again.
Kripa: Sneha…Sneha…
Sneha: I'm okay…if my knee didn't hurt, I would've taken you out, with this cushion…you are so lucky.
Kripa: Yeah yeah.
Anjali: Hey you two what's going on?
Sneha looked at Kripa and smiled. While Kripa had an angry look on her face, like as if she was warning her not to say anything.
Sneha: Oh nothing, we were just wondering how did you and Kavya get together?
Anjali sat down next to them
Anjali: Hey, you two…just talk too much
Kripa: Oh come on didi…you can tell us…
Anjali: No
Eventually Anjali gave up under the pressure she was under.
Anjali: Okay…okay, but if you tell anyone…I mean it…I will….
Sneha: We understand didi.
So Anjali, began to tell them about what happened.

Meanwhile back in the kitchen, Sujal, Prem, Angad and Kavya were cleaning all of the dishes.
Kavya and Angad, looked at Prem and Sujal.
Angad: This has all happened because of you two…I mean what have we been reduced to…look at us…just look at us.
Kavya: You're telling me…remind me again, why did I agree to this
Sujal: Will you two stop talking and just get on with it.
Both Angad and Kavya, threw their washing cloths at Prem and Sujal. Both of them looked down with guilt.
But then Sujal's phone started ringing. Sujal picked his phone up and looked. A number was flashing on the screen. At first he disconnected the call, as he wasn't in the mood to talk. But then same number flashed again. So Sujal answered the phone.
Sujal: Hello?
Kashish: Hi Kavya, it's me, Kashish
Sujal left the kitchen, without saying anything and made his way outside.
Sujal: Hello, Kashish, whats up?
Kashish: Kavya, thing is…I…I…
Sujal: What's up? Why are you sounding so nervous?
Kashish: I can't seem to find my phone, I think I may have left it in your car, so I'm phoning from home.
Sujal: Really…No wonder you phoned using your house number…I'll tell you what let me go outside and check in my car.
Kashish: You don't have to check now…I mean if you're busy…I know with Sneha coming home…
Sujal: Kashish just relax…It's no problem at all, we're friends remember and anyway I really need to get out of here.
Kashish: Why what's going on?
Sujal: Really, don't get me started. Sneha and her friend are making us run all over the place for them…do this…do that…its really getting insane now.
Kashish started laughing over the phone.
Sujal: Hey its not funny
Kashish: Okay I'll tell you what, I'm free today, do you want to meet up somewhere, sounds like you could do with some company.
Sujal: That would be great…I'll let you know about your phone…one minute.
Sujal unlocked the car door and found Kashish's phone on the passenger side floor.
Sujal: Hey I've found your phone.
Kashish: Oh thank god…just for that I will meet you later on today.
Sujal: Where?
Kashish: Erm…just come and pick me up, we'll go for a drive or something.

Sorry guys for this short update. But this is all I could write at the time, as I didn't want you waiting for too long. So enjoy....!!!!!

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 17 years ago

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hershii

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Posted: 17 years ago

#308

awww wat a cute partt....love the chemistry between kkavya and anjali,,,and poor premm...mukti needs to come back...nd sneha and kripa's friendship is too cute...the guys are soo funnie while doin the dishes....very nice part....its okie u wrote as much as u cud...i forgive u...lol....loved the partt...ps loved the flashback scene....