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Posted: 17 years ago
new update will be posted later on today, so look foward to that, as a lot will be happening and also this part will be emotional and comical.
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Posted: 17 years ago
can't wait!!! As if u dont already know...lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great news guys. I have finished typing up the update, but I won't be posting it just yet, as I have been called in to work early, so I will post it as soon as I get back from work.

There will be two types of good news for you guys in there, however, I would like to let you know, that in this update, there will be no Kashish or Prerna. In this update, there will be-:

Sujal, Kavya, Prem, Angad, Sneha, Kripa, Anjali and Mukti.
Edited by Sujalthegreat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh woo1! excellent prt b4 and cnt wait for the nexxt..
pllzz post soon 😊
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Part Fifteen


Sneha: Wow I am surprised, the house is still standing
Kavya: Of course
Sujal: Come on, sit down, you need to be resting remember.
Sneha: Yes I know and you guys better take good care of me, as well.
Sujal: What ever you say, but you are not to lift a finger…I mean it Sneha.
Kavya interrupted them.
Kavya: You have got to be joking, I am not going to be her servant. She's going to take full advantage of me. This is not fair.
Prem: Look on the bright side, at least she won't be able to chase you for a while and she won't be able to run away from you.
Kavya smiled.
Kavya: Good point.
Sneha: Don't you two even dare try and do anything to me
Sujal: Yeah…If you two do anything to her, then you'll have me to deal with.
Sujal hugged Sneha at the same time.
While Sujal wasn't looking, Sneha stuck her tongue out at both Kavya and Prem.
Kavya: Hey did you just see that?
Prem: I'm going to get you for that you little….
Sujal was surprised as to what was going on.
Sujal: What's happened now?
Sneha hid behind Sujal.
Prem: Bhaiya…she stuck her tongue out on us.
Sujal turned towards Sneha. She just sat there looking all surprised and acting like a complete angel
Sneha: That's a lie…bhaiya that's a lie…you know what they're like, they're just looking for a reason to pester me.
Sujal then looked at both Prem and Kavya.
Prem: She's lying
Sneha: No you two are
Sujal: Right, that's it, you two go from here and Sneha you stay there and get some rest. I'll go and bring you something to eat.
Kavya: But?
Sujal: No but…go…
Both Kavya and Prem looked really annoyed at Sneha and just walked away.
Sujal was about to walk away as well, but he stopped and sat down next to Sneha. He didn't say anything for a while.
Sneha: Bhaiya, what's the matter? Is everything okay?
Sujal: Sneha, if anything had happened to you, I wouldn't have been able to forgive myself.
Sneha held Sujal's hand.
Sneha: Bhaiya, look just forget about it
Sujal: Sneha, you don't understand…to me, you mean the world to me, I always want to see you happy, and yet because of me, you were in so much pain…I…
Sneha stopped Sujal from carrying on.
Sujal: Bhaiya, I know how much you care about me, believe me I know, if it hadn't have been for you, I wouldn't have been able to tolerate that pain. As soon as I held your hand, the pain started to become bearable. I could tolerate it. Bhaiya I know, that as long as I have you with me, I know that I will always be safe.
Sujal still didn't say anything, Sneha could see tears dropping from his eyes. They also started to form in her eyes as well.
Sneha: Bhaiya, do you really want to see me happy? If you do then please stop crying. Look even I'm starting to cry to.
Sujal looked at Sneha.
Sneha: Bhaiya, please just forget about what happened, I just want to carry on normally, like we always do…I want you to promise me…promise me that you won't hold yourself responsible and that you will carry on like we normally do….promise me bhaiya.
Sujal: I promise.
Both smiled at each other and then both hugged.
Sneha: Er…bhaiya, can you do something for me, well a few things
Sujal: What do you want?
Sneha: I want you to tell Kashish the whole truth.
Deep down Sujal, knew that both Sneha and Prerna were right, he has to tell Kashish the truth, before things got out of hand.
Sujal: I know, I will…I promise
Sujal was about to get up.
Sneha: Good choice by the way…she's pretty.
Sujal: Yeah she sure is
Sujal was about to walk away, but then he stopped and came back.
Sujal: By the way, I saw you sticking your tongue out at Prem and Kavya, in the mirror.
Sujal pointed to the mirror, in front of them.
Sujal: Nice try, but I'm still your bhaiyya.
Sneha blushed, as Sujal walked away.
Sneha called from behind.
Sneha: Bhaiya?
Sujal: What's up?
Sneha: I'm sooooooo hungery
Sujal: Nice try…You're the one who messes about and blame them two.
Sneha grabbed hold of both her ears.
Sneha: I'm sorry, bhaiya
Sujal: You're a real emotional blackmailer aren't you. You know I won't say anything to you…Don't worry…I'll just go and get something for you…what do you want to eat, name it.

Meanwhile, outside, Prem was still kind of confused after seeing that piece of clothing and that figure near the bushes.
Kavya: Are you feeling okay Prem?
Prem didn't think it would be wise, to spoil today as Sneha had just come home. Maybe Kavya was right, maybe he's just getting paranoid about the whole thing.
Prem: Yeah, I'm fine…just feeling kind of guilty about Sneha.
Kavya: Look just forget it now…she's fine, she'll be up and running about soon.
Prem: Yeah but what if something major had happened to her…I'm telling you I wouldn't have been able to forgive myself.
Kavya: Well lets just be grateful, that nothing major happened.
Prem: Yeah I guess.
Kavya: Look why don't you go and talk to her, she needs you to be with her.
Prem: What about you?
Kavya: I'll see her later, we've got all day…I just need to go somewhere right now.
Prem: I know…good luck.
Kavya turned around.
Kavya: Thanks.
Then Kavya left. Prem watched Kavya leave. Seeing Kavya like this, reminded him of the time, when Mukti was in his life. It reminded him about how eager he used to be to see Mukti. He just stood there, looking up at the open sky. He was looking for answers to questions in his life. Why had life been so cruel with him.
Prem: First you took my parents, then you took away Mukti, what else is there left to take from my life?
Then a voice behind him startled him.
Voice: You still haven't forgotten about me, have you?
Instantly Prem turned around.
Prem: Mukti?
There she was standing there in front of his eyes.
Prem: Mukti…You…Here
Prem slowly walked towards Mukti. Before he could say anything to her. She held his hand and they both sat down on a bench.
Prem didn't say anything to her. He was afraid of losing her again. He just wanted time to freeze there and then. So he could preserve this moment, for the rest of his life.
Mukti: Prem, why are you doing this to yourself?
Prem: What am I doing?
Mukti: Just because I'm not with you now, doesn't mean you should just give up on life.
Prem: Well you just left me like that…You know even up till now, I still can't understand that why did you leave…You punished me for a mistake that I didn't deliberately make.
Mukti: I had my reasons.
Prem: Yes…you told me, when you left me to suffer.
Mukti: It wasn't easy for me to leave you, It was the most difficult decision that I had to make.
Prem: But did I deserve this…you tell me did my punishment deserve to be so severe, your punishment, had left me to suffer for the rest of my life…your one punishment, will remind me for the rest of my life, about the mistake I made.
Mukti: I didn't want to do it, but it was the circumstances, what made me do it.
Prem: What do you mean?
Mukti: What I mean, is that its in the past.
Prem: Exactly, so why don't you come back to me…Mukti I swear to you that I have changed, I've given my past life up, since then, in the hope that you would come back to me one day.
Mukti: I can't…I can't explain why I can't
Prem: Mukti, please don't do this to me…I still love you
Mukti: I know you do…Prem if you still do love me, then promise one thing.
Prem: What?
Mukti: Promise me that you will move on with your life
Prem: What? I can't Mukti, not with out you…I need you, with out you I have no one.
Mukti: Prem, if not for yourself, if not for me, then please do it for those around you, do it for Sneha, do it for your family.
Prem: But?
Mukti: No buts, Prem…You have to move on in life, just because I'm not here doesn't mean it's the end of your life. Look at everyone around you, Sujal bhaiya and Kavya, they're both moving on with their lives, Sujal bhaiya has Kashish and Kavya is still after Anjali.
Prem: Like I'm after you.
Mukti: But I'm not here with you, like Anjali is with Kavya…Prem if you truly loved me, then please do it for our love, move on with your life.
Before Prem could say anything, he heard a voice behind him.
Voice: Prem
Prem turned and saw Sujal standing in front of him.
Sujal: What are you doing out here on your own?
Prem looked around. Mukti was no where to be seen.
Sujal: Prem…Prem…are you feeling alright?
Prem didn't say anything, he just slowly walked away.
Sujal: Prem, what's happened?
Prem: It's nothing
Sujal: You were thinking about Mukti again weren't you?
Prem didn't say anything.
Sujal: You don't have to say anything, Prem…I can tell
Prem sighed.
Prem: Bhaiya…I don't know where I'm going with my life…I just don't know whats going on…I just haven't got a clue about what to do.
Sujal: Prem…
Prem: I can't forget about her, if I try to, she comes, as if by magic, she tells me to get on with my life, but how can I, when I love her so much, even now I still do…There are times when I think that its either fate or its Mukti who just keeps on testing me every time.
Sujal put his hand on Prem's shoulder.
Sujal: Prem, you can't keep on doing this to yourself, you just can't keep on living like this…Look around you, you'll see the reasons for you to get on with your life.
Prem just stood there, he still didn't say anything.
Sujal: Prem, look at me…go inside and you'll see what I mean…Sneha is inside there, she needs you and here you are saying that you don't know what to do with your life, what about Sneha, how do you think she'd feel, if she saw you like this?
Prem: I don't know if I can
Sujal: I know its going to be hard, but at least try…look just go inside and see Sneha, she's been asking about you…you will feel a lot better.
Prem: I guess so
Prem just gave up for the time being, as he didn't want to talk about it now. He just thought to himself.
Prem: Maybe Bhaiya is right, maybe I need to go and be with Sneha. Being with Sneha, would probably help me keep my mind off Mukti, for the time being.
He just walked back in to the house with Sujal.
Sujal: Prem…Have you seen Kavya?
Prem: He's a man on a mission. He's gone to Anjali.
Sujal: He's not going to give up is he.
Prem: Well at least he's got his mind set on one thing this time.
Sujal: Yeah…that's true
As soon as Prem walked in through the front door, he saw, Sneha sitting down on the sofa and eating. But the minute Sneha saw Prem, she turned her face away and didn't look at him.
Sujal: Looks like you've got your hands full…good luck.
Sujal then walked upstairs.
Prem slowly made his way up to Sneha.
Prem: Sneha?
She didn't say anything. Prem put his hand on her shoulder, but Sneha shrugged it off.
Prem: I guess you're still angry at me…hows your knee anyway?
Sneha: Oh like as if you care
Prem: Oh come on Sneha...don't say that
Sneha: Well why shouldn't I, I've been calling out for you, for a long time and you didn't even come, bhaiyya went out and got you…Did you even ask how am I feeling?
Prem sat down next to her. She still didn't even look at him.
Prem: You know I was awake all night thinking about you, because I was missing you so much…I spent the night in your room, thinking about you, looking at your picture.
Sneha turned around and looked at Prem. But this time Prem didn't look at her now.
Prem: Since you went to the hospital yesterday, I haven't even eaten anything and you say that I don't care about you.
Sneha started to feel kind of guilty now, while hearing what Prem was saying.
Sneha: Prem, I'm sorry…I didn't mean to say those things, I was just joking…please forgive me…I was just playing around with you…that's all.
This time Sneha put her hand on Prem's shoulder, only for Prem to remove her hand off his shoulder.
Sneha: Prem, I said I'm really sorry…I was just playing around, believe me that's all it was…I was just playing around.
Prem then looked at Sneha.
Prem: I know, so was I.
Sneha: WHAT???? PREM, HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO ME!!!!!
Prem: Well that's what you get for sticking your tongue out at me…so ha-ha-ha and ha
Sneha picked up a cushion off the sofa and threw it at Prem.
Sneha: Prem, I don't want to see you again, just get out.
Prem: Oh come on Sneha, its okay for you to mess around with me, but if I do it to you, its wrong.
Sneha: But you take it too far…why do you always pick on me.
Sneha looked down, she looked as though she was gonna cry. Prem went up to her again, with the cushion and sat down next to her. He placed the cushion on the table.
He lifted Sneha's face up, so she would be looking at him.
Prem: Look Sneha, I play jokes on you, because you are my own, you are my sister, my best friend. If I can't play jokes on you, then who can I play them on. I love you more than anything in the world.
Sneha then hugged Prem.
Prem: Hey look, just because I said that, doesn't mean you have to get all sad on me.
Sneha: What do you expect? First you make me cry and then you won't let me cry.
Prem: Hey come on now.
Sneha: Did you really stay up all night, thinking about me?
Prem: Of course I did. I missed you sooooo much, even Sujal bhaiya and Kavya stayed up as well. In fact we haven't eaten, since what happened to you.
This shocked Sneha.
Sneha: What? Why?
Sujal: The house was quite with out you Sneha. It was like as if there wasn't any life left in the place. We didn't even feel like doing anything, expect thinking about you.
Sneha: But bhaiya, it wasn't like as if something major had happened to me, so why did you do this to yourselves.
Sujal also sat next Sneha.
Sujal: Sneha, you probably won't understand this, but when you weren't here, it was like as if a huge part of our lives had disappeared, nothing seemed to as nice as it use to be. All we could do was think about you…You are the soul of this house Sneha…you…
Sneha stopped Sujal from carrying on.
Sneha: Ok bhaiya and Prem stop it now, I'm back now, so both of you come closer.
Both Sujal and Prem came closer.
Sneha: Ok bhaiya, you are first…open your mouth
Sujal opened his mouth and Sneha fed him and she did the same with Prem. Then both Sujal and Prem, fed Sneha and then hugged her.

Meanwhile back at Anjali's place. Kripa was still sleeping. Anjali herself was starting to feel tired too. There were the dishes infront of the tv, that needed cleaning as well. But she was too tired now. She herself was also about to go to sleep, but then she heard a knock on the door.
Anjali: Awwww, who is it now?
Anjali got up and opened the door.
Anjali: Angad?
Angad: Anjali, you look like hell.
Anjali: Funny, what are you doing here? I told you not to come.
Angad just walked past Anjali and made his way in to the house.
Anjali: Hey!
Angad: Well it's a good job I'm here
Anjali was too tired to argue with him, so she just walked away from him and sat down.
Angad followed her and saw Kripa as well. There she was lying on the sofa, cuddled up beneath the blanket. Angad just stood there staring at her. Anjali looked up at Angad and noticed that he was staring at Kripa. She just assumed that Angad didn't wanna disturb Kripa.
Anjali: She's feeling a little better than yesterday.
Angad then looked at Anjali.
Angad: What about you?
Anjali: I'm fine
Angad: You don't look like it…
Angad looked around the room. The whole place looked like a tip.
Angad: Okay I'll tell you what…You go get some sleep and I'll tidy up down here…
Anjali: Angad, I can't let you do that…you've already done enough yesterday, by helping us…I just can't…
Angad: What…can't…Anjali? Am I your friend, yes or no?
Anjali: Yes but….
Angad: No but, go on…go upstairs and get some sleep and you don't have to worry about Kripa either, I'm here, I'll also take care of her.
Anjali: I can't Angad, I just can't…Kripa also wanted to go and see Sneha, I promised her that I would take her later on.
Angad: Don't you worry about that, I'll take her there myself…now is there anything else?
Anjali: No…look Angad.
Angad: No look, now shut up and go upstairs.
Anjali smiled back at Angad, as she was about to go upstairs.
Anjali: Angad?
Angad: What is it now?
Anjali: Thanks, for being a great friend.
Then Anjali went upstairs, into her room.
Angad: Right then, where do I start from?
First Angad, picked up the dishes off the table, but as he did a plate slipped out of his hand, luckily, he just managed to get his foot in the way, to break its fall. The plate didn't break. He quickly turned towards Kripa, to see if he had woke her up. Kripa turned over slightly. Part of her hair from the front, had covered her face. Her blanket had also started to slowly drop onto the floor.
Angad slowly made his way over to Kripa. He gently moved her hair aside, away from her innocent face. He sat back on the table, as he just stared at her. At that very moment, he just wished that time would just freeze. Kripa just looked so beautiful. He was ready to spend his whole life just staring at her, like this. Kripa moved again, only this time her blanket had fallen off. Angad got up and put the blanket over her again. He couldn't help himself as he was about to kiss Kripa. Only before he could, Kripa opened her eyes and saw Angad.
Kripa: Angad?
At first Kripa couldn't believe her eyes. Was this real or was she dreaming? She nearly convinced herself that it was a dream, as she had only just woken up.
Kripa: Angad?
Angad: Yes it's me.
Instantly Kripa sat up on the sofa, clutching her blanket close to her.
Angad: Hey relax, I've come to help, you and Anjali.
Kripa started to get nervous, she didn't know what to do.
Kripa: Where's didi?
Angad: Anjali, is upstairs sleeping. I sent her upstairs…she looked like as if she could do with some sleep.
Kripa: Yeah, she stayed awake all night.
Angad: Taking care of you I guess.
Kripa, was about to tell him, about the real reason, why Anjali was awake all night, but then she thought to herself, that maybe she should keep quite about it, for now.
Kripa: Yeah, I wasn't feeling too good.
Angad: Yeah she told me…which reminds me, she said you wanted to go and see Sneha…if its okay, with you I told Anjali, that I'll take you there myself…I thought she could with all the sleep she can get.
Kripa, wasn't sure about what to say, she should she say yes or should she say no. She was confused.
Angad: If you don't…then
Kripa: No it's fine, I'm going to need to get ready first.
Angad: Well I promised Anjali, that I'll tidy the place up, before I leave.
Kripa: Oh, I can give you a hand, if you want.
Angad: No its okay, you should be resting remember, why don't you go and get ready, while I'll try and get this done as quick as I can.

It didn't take long for Kripa, to get ready. By the time she came back down, Angad, had cleaned the dishes, and tidied the kitchen up. He had just started tidying up the living room, when he saw Kripa coming down. He didn't know what to say to her. She looked really pretty. That innocence was still showing on her face, that he had seen while she was sleeping. She still did look a little tired.
Kripa: Let me help you, with that.
Angad: No its okay, I'll get it done.
Kripa: Oh come on now, the quicker we can get this done, the quicker I can go to see Sneha and anyway doing something else, might help take my mind off the fever.
Angad couldn't refuse her.
Angad: Okay, here, you wipe around the room, I'll use the hoover.
But then he remembered that Anjali, was sleeping upstairs.
Angad: Do you think I'll wake her up, if I switch the hoover on?
Kripa: Wake and Didi? You must be joking. If you screamed in her ear, she wouldn't wake up…don't worry she's a deep sleeper.
Angad: Oh fine then…well lets get on with it then.
Angad switched on the hoover, while Kripa wiped around the room.
Kripa had finished with the wiping first, but as she turned around, she tripped over the hoover wire and was about to fall over, when Angad caught her, just in time. She had her eyes closed, as Angad stared at her. Eventually she opened them and saw Angad staring at her. It didn't take her long to realise that she was in Angad's arms. But it didn't make any difference to her, as this one moment had taken her away from all reality. Both Angad and Kripa just kept on staring at each other. Angad started to move closer to Kripa. All Kripa could do, was just stare at him. Since she had fallen in love with Angad, she had waited for this very moment; to be in Angad's arms and yet, she didn't know what she should do, apart from look at him. She didn't expect to be so nervous and afraid. Her heart just wouldn't stop pounding, the closer she got to Angad, the faster it started to beat.
RIIIIINNNNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!
Kripa's phone started to ring. Yet Kripa didn't pay attention to it. It just kept on ringing. At first she thought the ringing was part of her imagination, as she didn't know what was real and what was just plain, imagination. But the continuous, ringing, gradually bought Kripa, back to reality.
Kripa: The phone?
Angad: What?
Kripa: My phone is ringing
Angad: So?
Kripa: It might be someone important
Angad: Let it ring
Kripa: It'll wake didi up
Angad: Let it
Kripa: Didi will come down
Angad: Let her
The ringing stopped and then started again.
Kripa: I need to answer it, it might be Sneha.
Angad: Answer it then
Kripa: It's…it's on the table.
Angad: What?
Kripa: My…my phone… its on the table
Angad stared at her for a few seconds, he didn't want to let her go.
Kripa: Can I get my phone please?
Angad then helped her on to her feet. Kripa walked back wards to her phone, as she couldn't take her eyes off Angad. She slowly reached down behind her, for her phone and answered it.
Kripa: Hello?
Sneha: Hey Kripa ki bachi! Where were you all this time?
Kripa: Sneha?
Sneha: Yes me. What's up is everything okay? You don't sound too good.
Kripa: I'm fine, why are you asking?
Sneha: Normally you'd be happy to answer my calls, only now you don't sound too happy.
Kripa: Sneha, its nothing like that…its just…
Sneha: What happened to…how are you feeling now? Have you come home yet?
Kripa: Oh, Sneha I am really sorry, I've got a bit of a fever, that's why…
Sneha: Oh Kripa, why didn't you say? You should have told me
Kripa: It's fine, I'm feeling a lot better than yesterday…in fact Angad?
Sneha: Angad?
Kripa: Yeah, Angad is here, he's been helping out
Angad signalled to Kripa, that he was going to put the hoover away.
Sneha: Ohhhhhhhhh! Angad. Why didn't you say so? Here I am wondering how my friend is coping without me and there you are, already with your hands full.
Kripa: Hey Sneha! It's not like that…stop it will you
Sneha: Awwwww, I bet you must be blushing…let me guess, you just can't take your eyes off him, I bet you're looking at him right now, aren't you?
Kripa: Look Sneha, shut up will you
Sneha: Hey relax Kripa, I'm only messing.
Kripa: Oh I will relax when I get my hands on you, wait till I come over.
Sneha: I am shocked Kripa, you are seriously going to hurt a cripple.
Kripa: You can stop that emotional blackmailing, it'll probably work with Sujal bhaiya, Kavya and Prem, but not with me.
Sneha: Bring it on girl.
Kripa started to laugh, over the phone.
Kripa: Seriously, how are you feeling now?
Sneha: Well, put it this way, I'm feeling a whole lot better than yesterday. What about you? Seriously if you're not feeling well, then you don't have to come down.
Kripa: Are you kidding? I missed you a lot. Sorry I didn't come down to meet you at the hospital anyway. By the time I found out what happened, the visiting hours were over.
Sneha: Kripa, its okay…you don't have to apologise.
Kripa: Well I'm coming over soon, so we'll talk then.
Sneha: I can't wait, also you can fill me in on all the details about you and Angad.
Kripa: Oh yes I will, don't you worry about that, afterall you won't be able to run away from me this time.
Sneha: I'll be waiting…bye
Kripa: Bye
Kripa turned around, to see Angad standing there. In a way he made her jump.
Angad: Looks like everything is tidy…so do you want to go and see Sneha now.
There was a brief silence.
Kripa: Yes, thanks.
Slowly both Angad and Kripa made their way out of the house.

Soon enough, Angad and Kripa walked in through the door of Garewal House.
Sneha: Kripa
Kripa: Sneha
Sneha: I'm soooo glad you're here.
Kripa made her way over to Sneha and sat down next to her. Sneha held her hand.
Sneha: Kripa, you're still quite hot, you shouldn't have come…you should have stayed at home resting.
Kripa: I was feeling a lot worser than this yesterday and I would have still come to see you.
Sneha: Ok you can stop that now…you can rest here with me
Kripa: That's why I came here
Sneha: Oh really
Kripa: Yes really
Prem: Well, well, well, look who's here?
Sneha: Prem, you better not do anything to her, she's not feeling well.
Prem: Awww, what? Not another one.
Sneha: Don't you start now.
Sujal: Prem, what's going on
Prem: Bhaiya, its bad enough, looking after Sneha, now Kripa is here, we've got to look after both of them
Sujal: So? They both will be resting. They're not as bad as you're making them out to be.
Prem: Oh really, Sneha has already had me running around the house, getting things for her.
Angad: So what's wrong with that? She's your sister.
Prem: Angad, She told me she wanted to go upstairs to go to sleep, so she made me carry her upstairs, only she changed her mind, by the time I got to the top, so I had to carry her back down again.
Both Sneha and Kripa started to snigger in the background and so did Sujal.
Prem: That's not funny.
Sujal: Well Kripa won't be as bad…I'm sure about it.
Sneha: So you're trying to say that I'm bad, bhaiya?
Sujal: Nope I'm not…I'm saying that since you've come back from the hospital, you have become really mischievous.
Sneha: No I'm not.
Prem: Yes you are
Kripa: Sneha, just ignore them…I'm here now, you can talk to me.
Prem: Okay lets leave these two to talk, we guys might as well go somewhere else.
Angad agreed.
So Sujal, Prem and Angad, left Sneha and Kripa, in the living room and went outside for a bit.
Kripa: Watch how we're going to make these guys do what we say.
Sneha: What have you got in mind?
Kripa: You just wait and see.

Meanwhile, a few hours later, Anjali had woken up and made her way downstairs. She felt a whole lot better after the rest.
Anjali: Kripa? Angad?
There was no answer. As soon as she walked into the living room, she was shocked to see how tidy everything was. Everything was spotless.
Anjali: Nice job Angad.
Then Anjali noticed a piece of paper taped onto the mirror. She read the note.
Anjali: Didi, gone with Angad to meet Sneha, will see you later. Luv you, Kripa.
Anjali then remembered that she herself had told Angad, that Kripa wanted to go and see Sneha.
Anjali: Ufff…this girl is going to drive me crazy…she could have waited for me.
Anjali walked into the kitchen and saw everything was tidy in there as well. In a way started to feel guilty, by agreeing to let Angad, tidy up the house, just so she could rest.
Anjali: You are such a great friend…but you could have left me to do something.
She looked around for something to do, for the time being, but there wasn't anything. Everything had been cleaned and the floor had been hooverd. So Anjali decided to make a cup of tea, for herself. So she looked in the fridge for some milk.
Anjal: Awww damn!
There wasn't any milk in the fridge.
Anjali: I know I'll go out and get some.
Anjali looked in the mirror as she was about to go out. She still looked terrible, her hair was sticking up, her face looked a little sleepy and her clothes had creases in them.
Anjali: Looks like I'll have to go and get changed.
So she made her way upstairs into her room and got changed. Then she combed her hair. She looked again in the mirror to make sure she looked fine.
Anjali: That's more like it.
She picked up her handbag and made her way out of the front door.
It didn't take her long to get to the store, as it was only five minutes walk from where she lived. She bought some milk and a few other things and then made her way back home.
On the way home, she kind of struggled with the shopping and in doing so, Anjali tripped over a stone on the path and sprained her ankle. She wasn't that far away from her house, only a couple of minutes away. She tried to get up, but her ankle started to hurt. Then she noticed a hand come in front of her.
Person: Here, let me help you.
Anjali looked up and saw Kavya standing in front of her. Part of her felt happy that Kavya was here, but the other part was still angry. But then she remembered what Kripa had said to her, last night.
Anjali: I'll be fine, I can get up on my own.
Anjali tried getting up again, but she couldn't stand, as her right foot was still aching.
Kavya: Let me help you…look I only want to help you get home…that's all…you can't get home on your own, you're in pain.
Anjali: It's nothing compared to the pain, you gave me at the club.
Kavya still felt guilty, as he never got over what had happened that night, he could still hear what Anjali had said to him, but he couldn't help himself, as he now loved her too much to lose her.
Kavya: I know you can't forgive me, but even then I still want to help you…so come on, give me your hand and let me help you up.
Anjali reluctantly agreed. She raised her hand for Kavya to grab hold of. Kavya held her hand and helped her to her feet. He got her to use his shoulder as support to take weight off her ankle.
Anjali: What about the shopping?
Kavya looked back.
Kavya: I'll come back for them, that's the least of your worries.
Gradually Kavya and Anjali managed to make it home. He helped her inside the house and got her to sit down. Kavya brought in a chair from the kitchen and placed a cushion on it. Then he got Anjali to put her right foot on top of the cushion.
Kavya: Does it still hurt?
Anjali: A little
Kavya: Let me have a look at it.
Anjali: No I'll be fine.
Kavya: I don't bite you know.
Before Anjali could say or do anything, Kavya removed her shoe and checked out her ankle.
Kavya: Looks like you've just sprained it.
Anjali: I could've told you that myself.
Kavya didn't say anything back to her. He just got up and was about to walk out.
Anjal: Kavya? Where are you going now?
Kavya: Going to get your shopping, before someone else takes it.
This time Anjali started to feel guilty, as she saw Kavya, standing there in front of her feeling all helpless and guilt ridden. Before Anjali could say anything to Kavya, he just walked out. She tried to call out to him, but he didn't listen.
A minute later, Kavya came back in to the house.
Kavya: Anjali, looks like everything is here, nothing has been taken…Where do you want these putting?
Anjali didn't reply.
Kavya: Anjali?...Anjali?
Kavya walked back into the living room and saw that Anjali's eyes were closed. She had fallen asleep again.
Kavya walked closer to Anjali. He sat down beside her, just staring at her. She looked so sweet, like an angel, sleeping there with such innocence.
Kavya started to talk, quietly to his inner self as he just stared at her.
Kavya: I had no right to break your heart like that, you loved me more than anything and yet, I couldn't understand your love. I don't deserve you or your love, but if you can find it inside you, then please forgive me.
Kavya got up and was about to walk out, when he stopped again. He walked back towards Anjali. He picked up the blanket on the other sofa and unfolded it and put it around Anjali. He didn't feel like leaving her, but he had already hurt her sooo much, that he knew that Anjali would now find it beyond difficult to forgive him. Instead he moved closer to Anjali and kissed her on her forehead and then was about to leave, when he felt Anjali holding his hand. He couldn't believe it at first, he thought he was dreaming. So he turned around and saw, that her eyes were open and filled with tears, staring at him. She tried to get up again. Her ankle hurt a little bit, but not as bad as before. Kavya helped her up.
Kavya: Anjali?
Anjali: Where do you think you're going? Who said you can leave again like this? Who said you don't deserve me? Deserve my love?
Kavya: Anjali…you?
Anjali: Yes, I wasn't sleeping, I heard everything you said.
Kavya: Anjali…I…
Anjali: I what? Don't you even dare think of leaving me now!
Kavya: Anjali, but…why? I mean after what I did…
Anjali: I now know that you realised your mistake, and…and…to be honest I haven't been able to forget about you…no matter how much I've tried to erase you from my memory…I…I…just couldn't…because…because I love you too damn much.
Kavya's eyes started to fill with tears as well.
Kavya: I also love you more than anything
Then both Kavya and Anjali hugged each other.
Anjali: If you hurt me again…I swear to you I will kill myself.
Kavya pulled himself away from Anjali.
Kavya: Don't you ever say that again…the day that happens I will die as well…I swear to you that I will never hurt you again.
Then they hugged again.

Meanwhile, back at Garewal house, there was chaos ensuing, as both Kripa and Sneha, were driving the guys crazy. Both ordered dinners and snacks and they had to be made by the guys. The dishes were starting to pile up. They also ordered Angad to go out and get some magazines for them.
Sneha: Don't forget the magazines.
Angad: Don't worry I won't.

Few minutes later, Angad returned with some magazines and gave them to Sneha and Kripa.
Kripa: These aren't the right ones
Sneha: Angad, we don't read these
Kripa: Looks like I will go and get them
Angad: No you stay here, I will go and get them
Angad was about to walk out of the house, when he bumped into Prem.
Angad: Hey look at you, nice outfit.
Prem was standing there wearing an apron and a chef's hat on.
Prem: Don't start believe me, just don't start…where are you going now?
Angad: I'm going to get a gun…and them I'm going to shoot myself…for agreeing to help.
Sujal also came walking out, with the same outfit on.
Both Kripa and Sneha started laughing.
Sujal: What…what's so funny? You can stop that laughing.
Sneha: Bhaiya, you're looking really good, in that outfit. All three of them looked at the pair of them and felt like just shooting them.
Sujal: I'll come with you Angad, I think I'm going to shoot myself as well.
Prem: Count me in as well.
Sneha: Bhaiya?
Sujal: What now?...I'm going to kill her.
Sneha: Can you make me and Kripa, a cup of tea each?
Sujal didn't say anything, he just walked straight into the kitchen. He stopped and turned towards Sneha and Kripa and was about to say something and was surprised to see them all shocked.
Sujal: What?...What's going on?
Sujal looked at Prem and Angad and they were also shocked and looking at the front door. So Sujal went up to the front door and he too also froze.
Sujal: Kavya…this?
Both Kavya and Anjali, came walking in through the front door, with both their arms around each other. And both seemed really happy.
Prem: Kavya…what's this?
Sneha: You and Anjali? What's going on?
Kripa: Didi? What's….
Angad: Are you and Anjali?
Both Kavya and Anjali looked at each other and smiled, then they looked at everyone else.
Anjali: Yes we're back together.
Kripa: OMG! Didi! I knew it!!!!
Kripa ran up to Anjali and hugged her.
Prem: Hey Kavya congrats
Sujal: Well done, I'm sooo proud of you.
Sneha was also about to get up and run to Kavya, but then she remembered that she couldn't. She felt a little sad about it. Everyone was being happy for Kavya and Anjali and yet they all forgot about Sneha.
Kavya noticed Sneha, sitting on the sofa, looking a little depressed.
Kavya: Hey Sneha
Anjali: OMG Sneha! I'm soooo sorry. I completely forgot.
Anjali went over to Sneha and hugged her.
Anjali: How are you feeling?
Sneha's face lightened up a little.
Sneha: I'm fine…so how did this happen then? I mean you and Kavya.
Anjali and Kavya blushed. They didn't say anything.
Everyone was really happy for Kavya and Anjali.
They all laughed and had fun. At one point, Sneha couldn't help herself, she had that mischievous feeling inside her. She winked at Kripa.
Kripa: What are you going to do?
Sneha: Just wait and watch.
Kripa just watched Sneha.
Sneha: Kavya?
Kavya: What's up?
Sneha: Can you take me upstairs? I'm feeling really tired.
Prem: Oh no, no way…you…
Kavya: Oh come on, Prem, she's your sister…
Prem: Yeah but…
Sujal and Angad stopped him.
Angad: Er…Prem, we've got all them dishes to clean
Sujal: Yeah, we've got a lot.
Prem looked at them. Sujal winked at him.
Prem: Oh yeah…we've got a lot to get done…Kavya you might as well carry Sneha, upstairs.
Kavya: She can use the crutches can't she?
Sneha: I can't, my knee still hurts
Kavya: Awwww, here of course I will carry you
Anjali noticed Angad, Sujal and Prem laughing and talking. So she walked over to them.
Anjali: What's going on? Why are you laughing?
Angad: It's nothing…really
Anjali: Come on you guys…Angad, tell me will you.
Prem: Okay…okay, but you better promise not to tell Kavya.
Prem whispered to Anjali about what Sneha was up to.
Anjali: What? No…that's horrible…no way…Kav….
Angad: Hey, you promised, don't forget.
Anjali: Yeah but…
Anjali began to see the funny side of it. She watched Kavya pick Sneha up and carry her upstairs. As Kavya was going up, they all noticed Sneha looking at them and she winked at them.
Kavya: Sneha, honestly you need to lose some weight
Sneha: What ever, it's you…you've lost all that muscle, you've become weak.
Kavya: Yeah…yeah, I'm carrying you aren't I…we're nearly there
Sneha: Kavya?
Kavya: What?
Sneha: I don't feel that tired now, I want to go back down now.
Kavya: What?
Sneha: I know…I just don't feel that tired anymore, I want to go back down now.
Kavya: You are kidding, aren't you?
Sneha: I am really sorry
Kavya: I am not carrying you all the way back down.
Sneha: But how will I go back down then?
Kavya looked around, no one was in sight.
Kavya: Oh funny guys, really funny, come on out
There was no reply, no one came out.
Kavya: I will leave her here if I have to.
Still no one came out.
Kavya looked at Sneha.
Kavya: God, I don't believe this!!!
Kavya ended up carrying her back down. On the way down, Kavya was cursing everyone, including Sneha.
Kavya: I'm going to make you pay for this Sneha…If I don't get my revenge against all of you, my name isn't Kavya…I will make you all pay…You all were in this together…I'm going to make you all suffer.
By the time Kavya got back down, his arms were starting to give way, they felt like jelly, as well as his legs. He just managed to lay Sneha on the sofa. He could barely stand after what Sneha put him through.




Edited by Sujalthegreat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow u weren't kiddin when u said it'd b a longgggggg update 😆 omg so much happened i had 2 start from da beginnin 2 figure out wat ur ff was bout n i've finally caught up well i think i did 😳 had a ? Mukti isn't dead rite n where has she been all dis time 😕 cud u add a bit more of PM scenes if u don't mind 😳 wonder how Kavyaz gonna get his revenge update soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwww tht was longggggggggggggg........loveddddddddddd ittttttttttttttttttttttt....i loved the brother sister love between sujal and sneha they both are soo adorable...also between prem and sneha...their little naughtiness....it very cute...and the kripa angad part was very very nice....onli if sneha wouldn't have called just yet...buh it was goood though...and so happie tht kkavya and anjali are back together...soo happie for them....hahahahaha loved how both the girls made the guyz work...it was soo funiee...especially how sneha made prem carry her all the way up and then bring back down....soo funnie....and angad was soo funnie when hes like im goin out to get a gun and shoot myself...very nice...haha they all ganged up on kkavya...wonder how he is gonna get his revenge?? But im sure kripa and sneha will get him bak for watever his revenge is....cant wait for the next part....hope its as long...continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
ww hat ws ushc a sweet prt!
luvd the ka reunion...poor kavya for the 'excercising'..nyways conitu asap
luuvv it absolutely 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 wow awesome soo long great part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part cont soon hope to read more sk scenes in the next part

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