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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
sorry fo not commenting sooner.
both lkt are 😭 . hope rachna does something 2 bring them 2gether.
gr8 job noor 👏 and continu soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
Thanks for liking guys. Credit goes to Zinu, since she MADE me write this FF. Now..i have to use my imagination 😭 O well. Thanks so much for liking, next part will be up soon 😛 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Sorry Noor, but I didnt notice your first part and the second one.
Itwas fantastic. Zinu Di "MADE" you write this FF? 😆
That's really funny, plz continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
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PART 3

NEXT MORNING...

Laksh and Rachna were getting ready to go and meet kt. But Laksh suddenly remembered something very important..
after they both were ready, they came down to the Living Room.
R: chale laksh??
L: woh rachna..
R: kya??
L: mujhe kuch kaam tha..agar tum bura naa mano to..hum thodi derr baad chale??
R: sure..i have no problem with that..par tum jaa kaha rahe ho??
L: bas kahin par..thodi derr mein wapas aa jaounga..okay..
R: okay..
L: tab tak tum..
R: kuch bhi kar lena..
L: haan..wohi..(laughs)..okay bye..
R: bye..jaldi aana..
L: okay..
He leaves, and Rachna closes the door, after him.
R: (thinks)..laksh kitna sweet hai..maine aaj tak isse zaada sweet ladka kahin nahi dekha..yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai?? maine to aaj tak kisi ladke ke baare mein aisa nahi kaha..phir laksh mein kya hai..hamesha mujhe ussi ka khyaal rehta hai..kya mujhe usse pyaar to nahi..nahi..yeh nahi ho sakta..woh mera bahut acha dost hai..pyaar to ho hi nahi sakta..par shayad..nahi..mai is topic pe baat nai karrongi..(she smiles, and walks towards the kitchen)..
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO KT..

Kt is packing lunch for avinash..avinash comes running down the stairs..and avinash's mom, is cooking breakfast..
AM: pack ho gaya kt??
K: ji maa..
A: ok bye ma..bye kt..
K: suno..
A: hmm..
K: lunch..
A: oh..thanks kt..(he grabs it)..
Avinash kisses kt on her forehead..and leaves..
Kt and Avinash's mom smile sweetly..
AM: jaane aaj isko kya ho gaya hai..pehle kabhi bhi itna sweet sa nahin hua hai..tumhara hi asar hai kt..thank you..
K: maa..aap bhi naa..
AM: acha chal..khaana teiyaar hai..
Meanwhile Kt looks out the window, and sees Laksh walking across the road..
K: (happily) Laksh..
AM: laksh??
K: haan..mera dost..wapas aa gaya..maa..agar aap bura na mane..to mai uske ghar..
AM: sure beta..isme poochne ki kya baat hai..
Kt happily smiles..and goes to get ready..
She comes back down after a little while..she has some breakfast, and leaves to see Laksh..since she thought he was there..
She walks to his house, and knocks on the door..
Rachna thinks he's back..and runs to open the door..
She opens the door, and see's kt..whom she dosen't know..YET!!..
K: umm..laksh hai??
R: nahi..abhi woh kahi gaya hai..aap kaun??
K: mai uski dost [friend]..kt..
R: ohh..kt..andar aao please..
Kt steps in, and they both walk to the living room, and sit on the couch..
R: to aur batao kt..tum kaisi ho??
K: mai theek hoon..par..tumhe yaha kahi pehle nahi dekha..
R: haan woh darasal..mai kabhi india nahi aayiee..laksh ne mujhese poccha, and i say wahy not..jaanti ho..woh hamesha london mein tumhari baatein karta tha..tumhare siwa usne mujhe apni family ke baare mein bhi nahi bataya..strange naa..
K: very strange..vaise batao..achi baate karta tha ki buri??
R: hmm..mostly achi..par thodi buri bhi..
They both giggle..
K: to tumhe india kaisa lagta hai..
R: very sweet..yaha kitna sab kuch hota hai..so many events..yaha par kitna fun hai..i just love it here!!
K: to batao..laksh kaha gaya hai?? kabtak wapas aayega woh??
R: kuch pata nahi..darasal..hum dono tumhe milne aa rahe the..aur usne kaha usko koi zaroori kaam hai..aur kaha ki woh jaldi wapas aa jayega..abhi intzaar karo..
R: toh maine suna tumhari engagement ho gayi hai..congractulations!!
K: thank you..um..
R: (laughs)..sorry..naam rachna hai..
K: (laughs)..ok thanks rachna..tum batao..tumhe koi pasand aaya..ya tum laksh pe fida ho..
R: pata nahi..soochti hoon..tum batao..tumhara hone wala pati kaisa hai..laksh jaisa flirty..yaa...
K: nahi..woh laksh jaisa bilkul nahi hai..total opposite..
R: woh kaise..
K: dekho naa..usse naa mere liye waqt hai..aur naa hi apni maa ke liye..ab mai kya karoo..usse hamesha kaam dikhta hai..
R: ohh..anyways usko chodo..tum kuch logi..
K: nahi..abhi khake aaiyee hoon..
Meanwhile they hear the door open..It's Laksh..
L: (yells) Rachna..chalo..mai aa gaya hoon..hurry up..mujhe kahin aur bhi jaana hai..
R: (to kt) chalo kt..woh aa gaya..ab hume kahin jaane ki zaroorat hi nahi hai..
They both giggle, and walk out of the living room..
They both walk towards laksh..who isn't looking in their direction, he is wiping off his clothes..
L: Rachna..jaldi karo..
R: ahem..
Laksh looks up at Rachna, and notices Kt standing right beside her, both smiling happily..
Laksh's eyes widen..and he is really shocked..
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This was part 3 guys..please tell me how it was..hope you like it. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
gr8 part!! 👏 👏
continue soon!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 gr8 job.
continue..soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
Great Part Noor i just read through the intro and the parts there really good you know 👏 cont soon

xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
👏 👏 👏
plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
👏 👏 👏

waiting for the next part!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry i was unable to update due to some difficulties occured. But now here it is;

PART 4

Recap;
Laksh came back to pick up rachna, to go see kt, but she was already there, and when he looked at her, he was very shocked..
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Now:
L: uh..
R: kyun chonk[shock] gaye??
Kt stood there smiling at Laksh..
L: woh, mai..
R: yehi hai naa tumhari woh dost..kt??
L: uh..haan..tum mil hi liye ho toh..mai chalta hoon..
R: arre..ruko..kaha jaa rahe ho..baitho ge nahi..afterall..itni derr baad mil rahe ho, apni dost se..common..don't leave like this naa..
L: uh..okay..as you wish..
He steps into the living room with Rachna and Kt..
Kt first hugged Laksh very tight..
K: (still hugging him) mai kitni khush hoon ke tum aa gaye laksh..itni derr kyun laga di..i missed you so much!!
Laksh couldn't say anything, as he was really shocked..
K: laksh..kya hua??..tum jawab kyun nahi de rahe..(still higging him)..
Laksh wraps his arms around kt's waist..and higs her back..
K: laksh kuch to bolo..
L: mai..tumhe kaise..
K: tumhe dekha tha maine..apni khidki[window] se..
She pulls out..
Laksh just keeps staring at her..
K: kya hua laksh..aise kya dekh rahe ho..mai kt hi hoon..(she sook him)..
L: huh?? woh..mai..haan..mujhe pata hai, ki tum kt hi ho..
K: (to rachna)..Rachna?? isse kya ho gaya hai..kya london mein bhi aisa hi tha kya?? what's wrong laksh..tum theek se jawaab kyun nahi de rahe ho..what's the matter..
L: nahi..kuch nahi..bas..itni derr baad mil raha hoon toh..isiliye..tum baitho naa..
K: to batao tumne mujhe miss kiya??
L: nahi..
K: (frowns) kya..??
L: (holds her by her shoulders)..haan..maine tumhe miss nahi kiya..
Kt is about to cry..
L: maine tumhe bahut miss kiya..
K: Laksh..
L: kya??
K: tum kabhi nahi sudhroge..chilgose kahin ke..
L: lo..abhi wapas aaya hoon..aur tum mujhe phirse cholgosa bula rahi ho..abhi dekhta hoon mai tumhe..
K: acha..kya karloge tum..
L: mai abhi nahi..baad mein karoonga..
K: kyun?? darr lag raha hai..
L: ex-cuse me?? mujhe..aur darr?? woh bhi tumse?? impossible..mai to isiliye keh raha hoon..ki mere ghar par, ek mehmaan [guest] aaya hua hai..ab mai apni reputaion ko tumhare liye low kyun karu huh??
R: (laughs) i don't mind..hahaha..
K: dekha..ab kya?? darr rahe ho..
L: KT!!!
They both sweetly hug..once again!!
Voice from door: (yells) KT!!!!
They pull out..and see...Avinash, standing at the door...DuN dUn DuN..😆..
K: avinash..
before she could continue avinash came and slapped kt..kt started crying..
L: excuse-me, tum--
A: tum chup raho..yeh mere aur kt ke beech ka maamla hai..tumhe beech mein aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..(he yells it out)..
L: woh mai samajhta hoon..par is waqt tum mere ghar mein ho..aur meri dost par haath uthaya hai tumne..mai yeh bardaash nahi kar sakta..
A: tumhari dost hogi..par yeh meri magetar [fiance] hai..samjhe..
Laksh looks at kt..and kt looks back at him..with one of her hand on her cheek..and with lots of tears in her eyes..
A: chalo kt..
L: ruko..tum aisa nahi kar sakte..usne galat kiya hi kya hai..??
A: chalo kt..abhi..
He drags her, and starts walking towards the door..
Kt looks back at laksh crying, trying to call him..but avinash wont let her..
R: yeh kya tha..yeh usse aise kyun..??
L: pata nahi rachna..par yeh ladka kt ke liye theek nahi hai..tum ruko..mai aata hoon..
R: ruko laksh..mai bhi chaloongi..
L: hmm..(means a yes😆)
They both follow Avinash and Kt..
Avinash takes kt inside the house, into the living room..and Laksh and Rachna follow..
Avinash's mom comes down, into the Living Room..
AM: kya hua..kya ho raha hai yaha?? kt..tum ro kyun rahi ho..avinash kya hua...
A: aap isse poochiye..yehi thi jo kisi aur insaan ko gale laga rahi thi..jab mai nahi hota hoon toh..kisi aur ke paas chali jaati hai..
AM: avinash yeh sirf apne puraane dost se milne gayi thi..bass..tu iss par gusa kyun ho raha hai?? office mein kuch hua kya??
A: aap jaanti thi..ki yeh kisi aur ke ghar..
AM: haan haan mai jaanti thi..yeh mujhse pooch kar hi gayi thi..tu bhi naa..use kiya hi kya tha..bas apne dost ke gale lag rahi thi..kya tu aisa nahi karta?? kya yeh tujhpar aise chilaati jaise tune ispar..avinash apne temper ko control mein rakh..kitni baar kaha hai..tu kab samjhe ga..
Avinash felt guilty..before he could say anything to kt, she ran out the house..and bumped into laksh..
L: kt..
Kt was just crying looking at him helplessly..
L: kt kya hua..kuch aur bhi..tum chalo mere saath..
Laksh grabs her by her shoulder and walks with her to his house..Rachna was horrifed seeing her in this condition, she also followed..
AT LAKSH'S HOUSE..
Laksh got kt in his house, and closed the door..he took her to the living room, and made her sit on the couch..
Rachna went in and got some water for kt..
R: laksh..paani..kt ke kiye..
L: thanks..
L: (to kt)..kt paani peelo..please..
Kt grabs the glass and has a sip or two..
L: ab batao kt..kya hua tha..
Kt didn't say anything..
L: kt please..kuch to bolo..usne aisa kyun kiya..kya baat thi..
K: (crying) laksh..mujhe usse shaadi nahi karni hai..mai ab aur nahi sehen[tolerate] kar sakti..meri maddad[help] karo laksh..please..tumhari dost ko tumhara saath chahiye..
L: maine kab kaha ki mai tumhari madad nahi karoonga?? aur waise bhi..tum jo bhi kadam logi..mai usme hamesha tumhare saath hoon..ab pehle batao..waha par kya hua tha??
Kt explains everything to him..
Laksh and Rachna are shocked..
L: kt..toh..usne apna office ka gussa tumpar nikaala??
K: shayad..mai keh nahi sakti..par laksh..ab mai kya karoongi..humaari mangni[engagement] to ho chuki hai..
L: jaanta hoon..mai tha waha..
K: kya?? tumne bataya kyun nahi..
L: shayad tumhe surprize dena chahta tha..
They both smile..
L: aao..khaana teyaar karte hain..
K: tumhe aata bhi hai khaana banana??
L: uh..kuch kuch..(does a shy/fake laugh)..
K: (laughs)..aao..mai tumhari madad[help] karti hoon..
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That was part 4. hope you like it. boy, its hard to come up with ideas..zinu plz help me once again..plz.. 😭 😊
xoxNo0rxox
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