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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for liking guys. We'll continue soon today 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 1

Laksh is seen coming out of a plane, with Rachna, both smiling very happily.
Laksh guides her to a cab, and tells the driver where to lead to.
After a couple of minutes, the driver stops at a beautiful house, decorated with flowers, and people crowded around, all over..
Laksh gets worried, about what has happened, is it an accident?? or something else??
He takes out all his and Rachna's luggage, Rachna comes out, and he pays the driver, and the driver rides off.
Laksh tells Rachna to follow..
He goes in the crowd, asking people what's going on, no replies.
Finally he asks one more person and he says "an engagement is taking place right now"..
Laksh goes the the very front of the crowd, and see's Kt putting the ring on Avinash..
He frowns, and tears fall out of his eyes, he turns around quickly, so kt can't notice him..
He starts walking towards Rachna, and says "Lets go Rachna"
Rachna gets worried, about why is he crying?? what is the reason??
R: kya hua laksh..what happened?? why are you crying?? tell me please..
L: (angry voice) nothing rachna..please lets go..im not feeling good..
R: but..you wanted me to meet your friends naa..where is she..i wanna meet her first..
L: (turns around and yells at her) Rachna please!! tum aa rahi ho, ki mai jao!!!!
Tears fall out of Rachna's eyes..Laksh feels bad!!
Rachna sadly starts walking on the road, with her luggage..
L: what have i done?? because of me..i made her cry..o god!!
He follows her, and hold's her hand..
L: rachna..rachna..please..im sorry..i didn't mean to do this..
Rachna just stood there crying..
Laksh wiped off her tears..
L: im really sorry rachna..ill never do this again..please forgive me..i dont know whats gotten into me..im sorry..
Rachna gives a sweet smile and says "Its ok"..
R: but, why did you do this?? and why dont you want me to meet your friend?? university mein to uski hamesha baat karte the..aur ab kya ho gaya??
L: kuch nahi..chalo..koi cab dhoond te hain..aur ghar chalte hain..
R: par..
L: par??
R: main to yaha kisi ko nahi jaanti..tumhare siwa..mai kaha rahoongi??
L: mere saath..mera ghar paas mein hi hai..chalo..
R: okay..
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So guys..this was part one..please tell me how it was..
Thanks Zinu, for helping me hun. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great Part Noor Di. And i didn't help you that much. So credit is all your's anyways, im bot helping you anymore 😆 😆 So, please continue soon 😛
Love,
Zinu 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part but very 😭 ....pls make it haPPy!! 😳
love,aliya 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^Yea Muskaan. This is the "so-called" "sequal" of Lost Love. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was awsome..and i agree with aliya..it's tooooooooo much 😭 pllzzzzzz make it happy..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2

Rachna and Laksh start walking towards Laksh's house..
They arrive at Laksh's house, after a couple of minutes..
They both enter the house, and dump their luggage on the living room floor..😆..
[ *by the way, laksh lives alone, and so does kt, and rachna has never been to india b4, thats why she has no where to live, and knows nobody there/here* ]
They both fall on the couches, as they are really exausted..
R: oh lord!! im so tired..
L: same here..im so exausted..o my god!!
They both relax for a couple of minutes, laying on [diffrent] couches..
R: Laksh..
L: hmm...??
R: seriously tum mujhe apni dost [friend] se kyun nahi milne de rahe ho?? kya raaz hai iske peeche..and this time, please don't get mad, and don't ignore it..mai bas jaanna chahti hoon..kya hua??
L: uski mangni [engagement] ho gayi..
R: to kya tum usse pyaar karte ho?? isiliye tum ro rahe the??
L: nahi..mai..aur usse pyaar karoonga..impossible..mujhe to bas iss baat ka gham tha ki..agar uski mangni hui bhi..to usne mera intzaar kyun nahi kiya?? i mean..jab mai wapas aa jata..tab kar leti..
R: offoo laksh..bas itni si baat..usko yeh bhi to misunderstanding ho sakti hai ki..tum kabhi aao hi naa..ya phir tum kab aaoge..for example; agar tum wahi par settle ho gaye..to kya woh tumhara zindagi bhar intzaar karegi?? uski bhi to baat ko samjho naa..
L: you're right..yeah..anyways..mai fresh hone jaa raha hoon..tab tak tum..uhh..tum..tum kuch bhi karlo haan??
R: okay..
Laksh gets up, and starts walking towards the washroom..
R: ruko laksh..
He stops..
L: hmm..??
R: hum kal tumhari dost [friend] se milenge naa?? please..
L: sure..mil lenge..
R: thank you..
L: no problem..
He leaves to the washroom, but comes back..
R: kya hua??
L: woh..i forgot my towel and clothes..
Rachna laughs..
L: oh god!!
R: what??
L: mujhe un pack karna padega..mere clothes aur towel issi mein hai..
R: well mai bhi unpack kar leti hoon..par..
L: par??
R: mera kamra...
L: oh haan..sorry mai bhool gaya..aao tumhe tumhara kamra dikhata hoon..
Laksh grabs Rachna's luggage, and walks towards the guest room, Rachna follows..
L: (opens the room door) yeh raha tumhara kamra..
R: o wow!! kitna khoobsurat [beautiful] hai..yeh tumne sajaya hai??
L: kabka..[since so long]..
R: thanks laksh..
L: kiske liye??
R: you know..
L: i know...what??
R: offoo..for asking me to come here..staying with you..and then this beautiful room..so sweet of you..(she gives him a sweet smile)..
L: (smiles)..isme thanks ki kya baat hai?? anyways, mai chalta hoon. agar tumhe bhook lagi hai toh..tum kuch order kar lena..phone living room mein hai..
R: okay..
Laksh leaves..
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The scene switches to Kt, and Avinash..

All the guests were gone, since the engagement was over.
Kt was talking to Avinash..
K: avinash..
A: haan??
K: tum kal free ho??
A: nahi..kyun kya baat hai??
K: woh..mujhe shopping jaana tha..
A: toh apni kisi dost ko le jao..my days are hectic..aur tum yeh jaanti ho..mai nahi aa sakta..
K: par..
A: stop it kt!! tum jaanti ho mujhe kitna kaam hai office mein..mujhe aise useless sawaal [questions] bilkul acche nahi lagte..tum please..tum jao yaha se..mom ke pass..andar..
K: avinash..mai tumse is liye shaadi nahi kar rahi ki tum mujhe ghar mein apni maa ki sewa mein hamesha rakho..mai isse inkaar bhi nahi kar rahi..par tumhe nahi lagta ki..jab humari shaadi ho jayegi..tab tumhe kuch time mere saath spend karna chahiye..naaki hamesha office mein rehkar??
A: kt just please go!! mai office jaa raha hoon..jab shaadi hogi..tab baat karenge..
He angrily leaves..
Kt stands there with a big frown on her face..tears fall out of her eyes..
K: (thinks) kaha ho tum laksh..ab tak wapas kyun nahi aaye?? tum hi ho jo mere saat waqt guzaar sakte ho, mai tumhare siwa yaha kisi ko nahi jaanti..tum hi ho, jo mujhe bata sakte ho ki mera hone wala pati mere layak hai ke nahi..please jaldi wapas aa jao laksh..intzaar karoongi mai tumhara..
Meanwhile Avinash's mom come's and keeps her hand on kt's shoulder..kt gets a sudden shock, and quickly wipes off her tears, and puts a smile on her face..
Avinash's Mom [AM]: kya baat hai kt?? tumhari aankhon [eyes] mein aasoon [tears]..avinash ne kuch kaha kya?? ussi ne kaha hoga..uski baato ka bura mat maan na beti..woh aisa hi hai..
Kt smiles, and they both sweetly hug..
AM: chalo ab kt..raat [night] hone wali hai..hum dono andar chalte hai..
K: ji..
They both walk inside the house..
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well, this was it for part 2. please tell me how it was. please reply. 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part.......n it's really intresting 👏 .plzz make laksh-kt realise their feelings. 😳 continue.soon
-abhi 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is interesting. 😉 continue soon..! 😉 and please bring Lakshya and KT together in the end..😳 😳
Edited by **maham** - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is interesting. 😉 continue soon..! 😉 and please bring Lakshya and KT together in the end.. 😳 😳

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