Because Of You-6. Hate all-pg9(Note pg11) - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
just read ur whole ff
it's awesum
poor kripa
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: MUNNIBABA2006



ohh yea i got a suggestion... warn me before you get pissed...soo i can get out of your way.... and we dont end up not talking to eachother...

it was short but good... hmm i really hope angad isn't just playign around... adn i am really disappointed in josh.... maybe he hates her...doesn't like her beause she went with her mom and he had to go with his dad leavign them...? i wish i could slap him... adn tell him that ITS HIS SISTER! HIS BABY SISTER! their mom just died..... she needed him! do continue sooon!




sorry but i am just a little mad... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Thank you people next part also pretty short up in 10 minutes 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
👏 continues soon woderful part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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6. Hate all in the-

I said on the table next to Tanya who would constanly give her dirty looks. Breakfast was being served, Sanjana was sitting on the right of me next to her father and across from her mother. I watched them talk as I sat there quietly looking down at my food. Josh was back he was sitting across from Tanya and Angad was across from. Everyone was discussing their lives and i sat quietly as if I was invisable to the world. By the time breakfast was over the table was being cleared. I sat quietly I could feel both Tanya and Angads eyes on me. Tanya got up with the still warm plate of food she was taking back to the kitchen, forget it being just warm it was burning. All of a sudden the plate fell on my lap and almost burned through my pants and on my shirt. I jumped up trying hard not to scream. Slowly things fell on her feet, Tears fell down my eyes but it didn't cause such an affect on anyones eyes. Manisha got up and helped me up the stairs to my room. Even with my blurred out vision I could almost tell Tanya was grinning at everything that happened.

In my room I changed my jeans into loose sweats and a t-shirt. I could still feel the burn on my skin and tears were still flowing. I was all alone till someone walked into my room. I had my knees to my chest and cried. The burn wasn't the only thing that hurt. Everything thats been happening to me made its way back ans i cried my heartout. Tanya stood infront of me, I looked at her she had a fake "I'm Sorry" look on her face just by looking at her even a baby could tell it was fake. "I'm so SORRY Krip-Pa I didn't mean to do that. I'm sure that must have hurt alot right knowing that the burn was everywhere right?! I hope you feel better and your capable of leaving this house and my family, its not like we had enough trouble with you and your mother of yours a part of my fathers horrible past- I think you understand what I mean." She got up and left. I felt my heart shatter, I wanted to leave this place so badly. Reliazing no one wanted me here hurt so much. Tanya's word echoed over and over again in my head. I felt my inside boil, I knew that both her and her father would pay. Her for half-way burning me and him for ruinng our lives.

I sat back in bed eyes closed I wasnt crying no more only sitting thinking. For some strange reason my thoughts kept going to Angad, I kept thinking how cute he was and how sweet he was at times and at times such a jerk. I looked out the window the lights were out and the moon shined outside into my room. I felt someone staring at me I turned in bed to face the balcony. I saw Angad look at me I still had the tear stains on my face and hurt was shown clearly through my eyes. I didn't know why but all I wanted to was just stare at him. He was once again shirtless in the cold snowy night. I closed my eyes, and pulled the comforter over me up to my face and slowly fell asleep strangly dreaming about Angad.

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I'm seriously not in the mood and i dont feel good the part sucks put the next part is pretty...😳 I'm sure u understand what I mean well comment and goodnight.
Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

Thank you people next part also pretty short up in 10 minutes 😛

👏 cant wait😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 tanya is mean anyways wonderfull part continue soon please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i just love this fanfic! what does she mean... i mean if she hates kripa for being his past then howz it her fault.. i mean shouldnt she hate her dad?? i mean its not her fault.. even tanyas but still like her anger is justified but her actions arent.. i dont get it.. they alwayz blame the children not the real person at fault the cheater!!!ughhh

continue sooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part it was awosome
count soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
poor kripa.she shud leave their house, these ppl are so bad

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