Because Of You-6. Hate all-pg9(Note pg11) - Page 5

aww, i feel sad for kripa..its really cool to read itr though..continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

It was a good part continue soon plz!!

love this fanfic keep on writing and wait write a part where kripa talks back to those people giving her so much pain. she needs to teach them a lesson

Hey Milly,

Sorry for not commenting often, I didnt get a chance to, was in a hurry. But I promise to comment more now :D .. awesome part, loved angad's flirting at the end, it seemed to have changed teh atmosphere. wonder why he is so weird around her. i hate when guys do that, they are nice sometimes, yet sometimes they seem to be annoyed and irritated for no reason at all. man, her dad cheated on her mom... tahts sad.. and why is josh acting so weird around her.. i hope everyone starts being nice to her and stuff real soon!! continue soon!!

<3 Madiha

Originally posted by: Disha=)

the ff is soo sad... its sort of depressing...but its fun too read... aww poor kripa... i really feel sad for her... .... doo continue plss... i just caught up or i would've commented before... 👏

ya it is thx

Originally posted by: erier101

Hey Milly,

Sorry for not commenting often, I didnt get a chance to, was in a hurry. But I promise to comment more now :D .. awesome part, loved angad's flirting at the end, it seemed to have changed teh atmosphere. wonder why he is so weird around her. i hate when guys do that, they are nice sometimes, yet sometimes they seem to be annoyed and irritated for no reason at all. man, her dad cheated on her mom... tahts sad.. and why is josh acting so weird around her.. i hope everyone starts being nice to her and stuff real soon!! continue soon!!

<3 Madiha

Thx for the comment ya i hate that two u dont no where he takes the playing around to. yes her father cheated on her mom but u dont no whatelse he did...

Originally posted by: kyphkamahbuba

love this fanfic keep on writing and wait write a part where kripa talks back to those people giving her so much pain. she needs to teach them a lesson

ya thx. lets see what r the twist and turns next.

Originally posted by: huntor

It was a good part continue soon plz!!

thx

Originally posted by: zeenat_786

aww, i feel sad for kripa..its really cool to read itr though..continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

ya well her life is pretty sad thx

Originally posted by: Kaj!

this is so sad i feel so bad for kripa. plz continue

thx

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part and plz continue .but why her dad is so rude to her after all she is his own daughter?

thx he is isnt he bet no fathers like that

Originally posted by: cute_navi2001

hey...just caught up with ur FF it's awesome dont stop it's great plz continue 😊

wont thx

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

AWW dont' do that...lots of people like it...I am just busy with school that's why couldn't commment...but plz do continue...it's really amazing!

thx

Originally posted by: jdsean

Please I beg of you don't stop the fan fiction. It is really good. Sometimes people don't have time to comment, well that is the case for me, but don't stop its really good. I want to see where you'll take the story with Kripa living in the house with all these people that hate her, and with Angad.

lol thx i wont

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part
PLZZZ don't stop this fanf fic its really good
all the people who don't comment plzzz comment

thx

Originally posted by: ishu124

wow. i just read this fanfic. and its great. i cant wait. continue sooon.

thx

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey. come on. atleast write for all the people who do read ur fan fic n comment. i no you take a lot of time to write n many people just read but dont comment but why do this to the people who do read n comment. ur fan fic is really awesome. n i really enjoy reading it. plz cont n dont stop writtin ur fan fic. 😛

ya thx i understand

Originally posted by: MUNNIBABA2006

finally not distracted anymore... anywayss... soooo... i loed teh part... i mean angad was flirting soo openly with her...hehe... loved the last paragraph...and seriously my heart aches when i read about kripa... reminds me something... anywayss.... pls pls pls pls pls continue...

to everyone reading teh ff...

yo people...silent readers...plss comment... atleast just say what you felt about eth part..w.as it good bad...awesome horrible... i am seriously fed up of waiting for all the writers not continuing cuz of lack of comments... pls pls pls... just like a petition atleast just sign your name in! 😃

oh jus watch what flirting does

thx people next part coming up in a bit

5. Kiss on the-

When we came home we stood outside the door about to knock he grabbed my hand and held my arms and kissed me ya i know what your thinking on the lips. Well no not really on the cheek sortta close to my mouth. I had my hand on my cheek and the door open my smile disappered when i saw Josh. I walked in without looking at him and ran up stairs to my. I looked down from stairs and looked at Angad who was busy talking to Josh.

I went to my room and layed in bed i took out my sketch book and drew my and Angad holding hands looking up at the moon sitting on a hill. I didnt no why but he made me feel good. I walked to the balcony looking out and staring at the backyard which was covered in winter snow. I looked out and saw a mansion right across the room from mine. I watched as a guy came upto the balcony he looked out, I ran into my room and looked from the dark room so he couldn't see me in the dark. He was shirtless it was shocking how he wasn't cold she still had her coat on. I looked at him trying to see his face. I squinted to get a better look, I gasped as I reliazed who it was. Angad wow what a shocker, he looked so relaxed. His eyes were fixed to me well my room. I looked at him he looked at me. For some reason it seemed as if he knew i was there even in the dark. He turned an walked inside, I layed in bed and closed my eyes sleeping a dreamless sleep.

The next morning I got up before everyoe else. I came out of the shower and went downstairs it was only 6 i couldn't sleep. When i got sownstairs, I saw someone sitting on the couch. I walked to the person and almost jumped and screamed but it was only Angad. "Don't you have your own place." i asked. "Ya but you know I don't want to leave you." He said getting up and walking to me. He was so close, just then Josh snuck down and stood next to angad looking at me then him then back at him to me then at angad. "Lets go." he said as he put on his jacket. They walked to the door and soon left i stood at the open door watching the snow fall. I blow at the cool air and went back in.

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I know it short but it took me time to look over. I didn't edit and well I asked a friend but she seems less interested i might post one more part later and tommorow about 2 or 3 parts when i get back from school. I need comments i go crazy without typing this story and I can't post it unless I get enough comments. And because I have know friends to talk to or anything so I have the time of my life. Have any comments complaints or suggestion please tell me. Thank you.

great part. its so sad to see that josh doesnt even talk to kripa at all. but its a great story. cont soon.

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

I know it short very very short!but it took me time to look over. I didn't edit and well I asked a friend but she seems less interested yea when i was ready you didn't gieme and after getting all attitudy i didn't want to talk... soo sorry but not my fault i might post one more part later and tommorow about 2 or 3 parts when i get back from school. I need comments i go crazy without typing this story and I can't post it unless I get enough comments. And because I have know friends to talk to what am i? an animal? a stranger?or anything so I have the time of my life. Have any comments complaints or suggestion please tell me. Thank you.

ohh yea i got a suggestion... warn me before you get pissed...soo i can get out of your way.... and we dont end up not talking to eachother...

it was short but good... hmm i really hope angad isn't just playign around... adn i am really disappointed in josh.... maybe he hates her...doesn't like her beause she went with her mom and he had to go with his dad leavign them...? i wish i could slap him... adn tell him that ITS HIS SISTER! HIS BABY SISTER! their mom just died..... she needed him! do continue sooon!

oh god i dont really understand why is josh trying to ignore kripa


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sana