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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwww tht was rocking....i luved their morning romance 😳 .....too gud sis...now wats up wid psyoc mr prithviii

ThanQ...will see what can I do with this Prithvi😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi just caught up with ur ff.
must say simply superb.
liked it.
Angad and Kripa 😳 😳 😳...full of life and romance
hope that Prithvi and gang and Naina don't create any problem in their married life....they both had suffer alot already.
Edited by ridhijai - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part: 49

Angad was reading the newspaper after coming home but stealing Kripa's looks intermittently. Devyani and Sur were watching SaReGaMaPa in Zee TV. Sur was humming along with the singers and Devyani was enjoying as if she was already performing in front of public. Kripa was amusingly watching them while setting table. Naina and Dilip were out of the house for some dinner party.

Angad slowly walked into kitchen as Devyani was intensely enjoying the program with Sur. Teddy was busy in making lassi in the kitchen. Kripa was helping him and noticed Angad hesitating to approach her. Kripa enquired with eyes and he gestured with his eyes to meet him in the bed room. Kripa checked Teddy once and came closer to Angad "kya huva? You look disturbed?" Angad shook his head and grabbed her hand to pull into the corridor between the kitchen and dining room. Kripa softly giggled as he pulled her close pressing her waist. "subah ka blouse kahan gayi?" he whispered in her ears as kissing her back of ear and rubbing her upper back with his left hand. She was tickled and blew air in his ears. "I wore it in the morning to go out, abb khaney ke waqt wo tumhey disturb karegi na"she mischievously replied him. Angad nipped her neck below ear "your presence in any form disturbs me, Sweety!"

Kripa softly moaned "wait for another hour; I take care of you, Hottie!!" Angad pouted his lips "abhi chalo, ek minute ke liye. Anyway there is some more delay to serve food." Kripa bit her lower lip "ek miute mein kya hoga?" she raised her eyebrows rolling her eyes too mischievously. "kya ho sakta hai bataoonga, chalo." Kripa chuckled and stuck out her tongue and ran into kitchen. Angad laughed softly rubbing his back of neck as stroking his hair. She blushed at his hungry looks and turned her eyes.

He stood there on the way to caress her every time she passes him while she was bringing the dishes from kitchen. Kripa was giving sharp warning looks and he was mischievously blowing kisses in air. She was blushing for his mischief and caught by Teddy couple of times. Teddy dutifully finished shifting all dishes and served food in all four plates. He stood for everyone to take their seats.

Angad walked Kripa to his side as usually Sur sat with him whenever the four took the dinner together. Angad caressed Sur's cheeks "can I have dinner with mom today, please?" Sur smiled shyly "no problem, papa!" She ran to Devyani and smiled. Devyani kissed her cheeks "bahut samajhdar hai meri rajkumari!" Sur shook her head and laughed shyly holding her left hand near mouth. Kripa blushed at Devyani's looks and silently started eating.

Angad was kept on secretly caressing her thighs, waist with his left hand while his feet took the duty to caress her feet. Kripa gave sharp looks as warning but he acted innocent. She stomped his feet too for couple of times but he rolled his tongue to stop his pain. He threatened her with his eyes to take care of her enough in the bedroom. She blushed imagining his wild love. Couple of times he took her food from her hands just before she was putting in her mouth which made her embarrassing in front of Devyani and Sur.

Devyani wondered for Angad's mischievous act today as he was usually very decent. She took Sur to her room as soon as they finished their dinner. Angad grabbed Kripa leaving the rest of work to Teddy.

"Aaj phir kya hogaya hai tumhey?" Kripa asked as soon as they came inside the room. Angad locked the doors behind them and pushed Kripa on bed. He relaxed in her lap spreading his hands on both sides of her. She bent on his face and pressed his chin and caressed both noses. She looked into his eyes with a smile on her face. He stared into her face and kissed her stomach over her sari bending his neck back. She kissed his throat caressing his chest. He removed his shirt and made her run her fingers over his chest. He pulled her pallu and kissed her two sides and rubbed his face in her cleavage. She gasped and cradled him. Angad hugged her tightly and rubbed his face in her throat. He showered kissed all over her face, neck, throat, and upper chest. He was panting and trembling with passion. Kripa was feeling breathless for his wild love. "Angad! yeh kya horaha hai tujhey? Aahista. Please, you are hurting me," she tried to push him away from her when he was pressing her hard in his embrace. He looked into her eyes pausing at his passion. He kissed her mouth deeply "aaj tumhey puri tarah khaajaney ki mann kar raha hai. So no one can separate you from me. mere andar sama jaao, Kripa! I can't bear your separation. Noone can snatch you from me. You are mine. Only mine." He started nibbling her swellings wildly. Kripa gasped deeply before stopping him from the passion. She folded the pillows with two hands on either side, wildly turned her face sideways, scratched his back with her nails when he hungrily nibbled her body every inch. She cried out his name with pain in pleasure.

Both totally exhausted with their wild passion for more than usual manner. Angad softly touched her stomach with his two hands as hiding his face into her lap. He kissed her abdomen and mumbled "you are mine; no one can snatch you from me. You are only mine." Kripa surprised while gathering her normal breathe for his unusual mumbling. She tried to wet her dried throat and turned her face to get some water. She slowly grabbed the bottle from side table and finished half the bottle at a time and closed her eyes to calm down her breath. She looked down at Angad who was dozing in her lap. His hands were still slowly caressing her sides of thighs. She caressed his hair, smiled and closed her eyes as pressing his face in her lap.

Angad opened his eyes in the middle and checked his surroundings. Kripa was sleeping peacefully with one hand on his head and other on her stomach. He kissed her lap, hands and got up. He removed all clothes crumbled around them and set her properly under cover. He pulled his boxers up and drank the rest of water from the bottle. He sat beside Kripa and caressed her cheeks as stroking her strands. He kissed softly her upper lip. He recollected his passion with fear of losing her in back of his mind. He smiled and rested his head on her chest for few seconds.

He got up and wore a shirt and walked into kitchen to get some water.
Devyani and Sur were fast sleeping. Teddy cleaned kitchen and already went to his outhouse. He grabbed a cold water bottle and walked back into his room.

Kripa was just opened her eyes and checking for Angad. She smiled after seeing him. He locked the doors and walked to her. He placed the bottle on side table and asked if she needed some water. She shook her head sideway. He kissed her forehead and slid into cover beside her. He grabbed her in his arms and cuddled her. She rested her head on his chest and moved her hands inside his shirt. He turned her side and brought both faces close. Kripa smiled and pinched his cheeks "kya baat hai, itna emotional hogaya tha?"

Angad smiled with his eyes and kissed her eye lids "tumhey khoney ki darr hogaya tha." Kripa made wide eyes "kyon?" Angad was hesitating to speak out and she continued "Prithvi ki waja sey?" He looked at her and lowered his eyes with guilt. She lifted his chin 'mere aankhon mein dekho, Angad! Mujhper viswaas nahin raha? How did you even think that I go back to Prithvi? Who is he to me? Tum mera pyar ho, meri beti ki pita ho. Aur mera pyarasa pati." She kissed his eyes aloud and circled her hands around his waist. She pulled his hands around her and dropped her head over his shoulder. "Prithvi humara kuch nahin bigaad sakta. Wo humara koyi nahin lagta hai. Why are you so insecured?"

Angad pressed her closer as convinced by her assurance. "Aaj Prithvi mila tha office mein." He continued when Kripa looked into his eyes with surprise "he is the partner in one of our projects. I had to attend a meeting with him. He talked to me after meeting. He wants to see Sur once. He expressed his happiness with his present life and repenting for harassing you."

Kripa sighed and again put her head over his shoulder "wo kuch bhi kahey mujhey kuch faraq nahin padta. I'm yours and Sur humara beti hai. I never allow him to see her even once. Sur hates him. You don't have to entertain him. Jitna door ho sakey utna door rakhna ussey, jada entertain karney ki koyi jaroorat nahin hai. We had enough from him. We are no more related to him."

Angad shook his head and pulled her on top of him. She kissed his chest and moved her hands inside his shirt. She pinched his tips and he laughed with ticklish feeling. He sat down and pulled his shirt away. He cuddled her and parted her lips for deep passion. "Welcome to my son" he whispered and covered her under him with passion.

Morning around 8, Kripa brought coffee to wake up Angad. He pulled her in his lap and enquired about Sur. "Sur toh school chali gayi thi. What about you? Aaj office nahin jana hai?" Angad lazily smiled and hid his face in her neck. She caressed his hair "pagal!" he smiled and kissed her lips. Kripa gave him coffee before he intense his passion. Angad frowned but finished his coffee. Meanwhile, he got call from office and rushed to get ready.

Kripa called Suryaban after Angad left for office. "Thanks papa!" Suryaban laughed from other side "Kripa! Papa ko thanks keheney ki koyi jaroorat nahin hai. It's my duty to take care of you. Agar Prithvi phir sey tumhey pareshan karna chahey toh, he better know what he gets from us." Kripa laughed and hung the phone.

Kripa called Suryaban immediately after she woke up in the morning and conveyed all the mess Prithvi made for last few days. "Papa! Pata nahi Prithvi kya chahta hai. But I don't want him to interfere in my life any more. He asked Angad to see Sur but what right he has to do so? Why is he trying to spoil my life? Please papa! Aap hi kuch kar saktey hai, Angad was very upset last night." She conveyed about Prithvi's confrontation with Angad yesterday.

Suryaban called Prithvi and enquired about his intentions. He felt genuine in Prithvi's words but warned him as Kripa didn't want him to regenerate any relationship. He warned to give police report for intruding into their lives again and warned to stay away from them. He also warned him to complaint in his new company about his past domestic violence case too. Prithvi was terrified and apologised. He was slowly settling down in his life and didn't want any more troubles because of this latest thought of regenerating relationships with Kripa..

Prithvi called Kripa in the afternoon to apologise her "Kripa! Mein genuinely apologies maangta hoon. I understood you are not comfortable to make friends with me. I promise I never bother you again." Kripa ignored his genuine apologies "Prithvi! You better stay away from me. Tum mujhey hi nahin Harshini ko bhi hurt kar raha hai. She doesn't like me and never wanted any friendship with me. You told you are happy with her. Now it's your duty to keep your relationship safe and healthy with her and your unborn children. Stay away from us, warna I don't hesitate to give report again on you."

Naina and Devyani overheard Kripa's conversation and exchanged looks. Naina lowered her eyes with guilt and walked away from there. Devyani sighed and prayed for their welfare.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Hi just caught up with ur ff.
must say simply superb.
liked it.
Angad and Kripa 😳 😳 😳...full of life and romance
hope that Prithvi and gang and Naina don't create any problem in their married life....they both had suffer alot already.

ThanQ...u will be happy for next part😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
idiot naina
she will never understand kripa
lolzzz angad is too possessive about kripa
awesome part


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~Sana~
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iamsmart

idiot naina
she will never understand kripa
lolzzz angad is too possessive about kripa
awesome part
_________
~Sana~

ThanQ sana!Naina sasuma haina..there will be that differene always in this ff.

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Posted: 18 years ago
hi di.nice parts .really enjoyed them and didnt cursed u for a sec. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey di he was really a lot upset lol anyways pleaseeeeeeeeeee do something about this prithvi and naina. i hate both of them. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon with more romance lol

love ya di

mittal
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

hi di.nice parts .really enjoyed them and didnt cursed u for a sec. 😉

curse me😛😆...ThanQ

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

hey di he was really a lot upset lol anyways pleaseeeeeeeeeee do something about this prithvi and naina. i hate both of them. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon with more romance lol

love ya di

mittal

Thanks..Angad is scared of leaving kripa now😳prithvi..naina..dekhengey kya kar saktey hai😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwww vallanki tht was too hot 2 handle i just luved it.................aww cant wait 4 the next prt 😳 lovley n rocking prt 😳

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