kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
hey very good part........... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome 👏 👏 👏 just finished reading ur story its good 👏 👏 cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 parts... 👏 ...gud gng.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww...nice...liked it....so now sujal is fgoing to new york!hmm....i guess he ll tell everything to akshat and probably aksht will turn out to b ksh's friend or somting lik tht and then woh kash samjhayega to marry sujal and tab tak toh rishi must have left kash....

thts just my GUESS!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-12

sujal comes in the evening and greets her mom.....he is trying to tell his decision...he knows its difficult......but its best for him....it will help him....to forget kashish....kashish his 1st love......1st love that he......he lost......

s:mumma wo....wo aapse baat karni thi......aaiye na baithiye.....(sujal takes veena and made her sit on sofa)....mumma aapne hi kaha tha na ki....mujhe life mein aage badhna chahiye......aur...aur...kashish ko bhulna chahiye.....to isliye main new york ja rahoon......akshat ke paaas....
v:smiles....main tere faisle khush hoon....achha hai thode dino ke liye bahar jaaoge....to mood bhi change ho jaega...theek hai beta.....kab niklana hai??
s:.....nahi mumma....main wapas nahi aaonga.....main wahin business kar raha hoon akshat ke saath.....
v:(very sad....has tears in her eyes)lekin sujal....tum...tum to jaante ho beta main tumhe dekhe bina nahi reh sakti......fir tum....
s:lekin maa aap bhi to samjhiye na......main yahan wapas nahi aana chahta.....yahan har cheez mujhe kashish ki yaad dilate hain......mera office...mera room...wahan wo window.....wo shopping mall jo roz main jaate huye dekhta hoon.....wo canteen jahan maine use jaan tha....mera cabin.....uski aankhen,,,,,uski hasi.....sab yaad aata hai maa......sab kuchh(he is crying)...sab kuchh maa....sab kuchh....yahan tak ki meri saansein , mere sapne....har jagah wo basti hai.....main kya karoon maa.....mujhe jaana hoga.....fir main roz fone to karoonga....main aapse roz baat karunga....
plzz ma mujhe ro kar mat bhejo........(he storms off to his room)
v(to herself):ja beta...ja beta....tu agar is mein khush hai to yahi sahi.....

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k:rishi....pata hai tumhara pichhle 2 hrs se wait kar rahi hoon...kahan the tum.....?
r:jaan...tumhare liye yeh lene gaya tha....(shows her a very beautiful bouquet of red roses...)...kaisa hai..??
k:bohot khubsoorat.....
r:lekin tumse kam...
k:tumhe flirt karna khub aata hai.....achha batao tumhe job mili....??
r:tabhi to yeh roses laya hoon.....mujhe job mil gayi hai.....ab wahin kaam karoonga lekin...uske liye mujhe 1 mnth ke liye.....delhi jaana hoga....
k(tears are forming in her eyes):1 mahina....rishi...
r:arrey yeh to jhat se nikal jaenge.....dekhte dekhte...
k:achha rishi...ab to tumhe job mil gaya hai......jaane se pehle papa se baat kar lo.....plzzzz...hum pichhle 6 mahino se mil rahe hain....aur main tumse tab se keh rahi hoon.....papa se 1 baar mil to lo...
r(in mind....fir shuru ho gayi) :dekho kashish abhi to meri job lagi hai....main pehle kuchh ban jaaon fir tumhare papa se baat karoonga......plzz kashish meri baat ko samajhne ki koshish karo....plzzz.....jab tak main apne paairon par khada na ho jaon.....tumhare papa se kaise mil sakta hoon...
k:main samjhati hoon rishi....lekin...lekin tum bhi to samjho.....papa meri shaadi karwa denge.....aur fir 1 mahina main kya karoon...
r:tum bhi koi job join kar lo....is tarah tumhare papa bhi tumhein force nahi karenge..
k(thinking):yeh shayad theek rahega......tumhein niklana kab hai.....???
r:kal...shaam ki flight hai yahan se...
k:..KAL....
r:haan...jaanta hoon jaldi lekin kya kar sakta hoon(to himself.........ab tumse mann bhar gaya hai, aur tum mujhe apne kareeb bhi nahi aane deti)
k:roz fone to karog na.....???
r:yeh bhi koi bolne waali baat hai...??...ab kal to main ja raha hoon...to kam se kam 1 kiss to milni chahiye....
k:tum bhi na rishi....
r:main bhi kya kashish..(he holds her hand and pulls toward him....holds her face in hands and comes closer.....more closer....they are just an inch apart.....but suddenly....kashish turns around.....)....kya hua...
k:kuchh nahi rishi main late ho rahi hoon....(hugs him) bye...(she leaves)
rishi is very angry now but doesnt says anything......just then its his cellfone ringing....
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end of this part.....how bad rishi is......but he will return...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part 👏 but yeh kya sk alag ho rahe hain 😭 sab kashish ki wajah se 😡 aur yeh rishi ek mahine a bahana banake kashish ko dhoka deke bhaag jayega 😡 😡 tab kashish ko pata chalega 🤢 but plz i wish sk saath rahein 😊 anyways keep posting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyy
arrrrgggghhhhh...y is rishi gonna return yaar... har baar use kiss karna chahta hai....Use bata do sasb log tht woh haq toh only and only Sujal ka hi hai....

gr8 part...plz cont.soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good main bhi jaa rahi hoon new york...sujal kitne baje nikal raha hai??? zara flight details dena??? 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
gr8 part dear... 👏 ...this rishi na is too bad....kashish ko dhoka de raha hai...aur waha sujal is gng to new york...cont soon cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx dear..

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