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Posted: 20 years ago
#11
good job 👏 but please add some more elements like comedy, fighting(including mamaji ofcourse😉) etc. beside romance
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12
U must continue.... you are great....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi guys the story continues

AS ALL WERE WATCHING AT STAIRCASE WITH SURPRISE and arjun was like wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and baisa was smiling even bad dadaji and siddharth.ans shefali face was like red tomato with jealously and just then we see a girl wearing black short sleeveless kurta with parallel salwar and her hair was tied behind loosely and her front hair was coming on her face her face was well makeup and she was wearing a very very beautiful jewellry .

Now u guys have kwon that girl is none other than our bhumi .mansavi comes from behind and indicate bhumi to step down and as bhumi is coming down arjun is looking her ……………………………..and……………………………………………his look was that he has never seen bhumi or any girl soooooooo beautiful and then shakti says

SHAKTI : bete mu(mouth) band kar makhi gus jayegi

BAISA: are bhumi tu to bhout sunder lag rahi ho kahi jaa rahi ho kya

BHUMI:with innocent look : baisa aaj arjun mujhe…

ARJUN: interpt her nahi baisa asal mein aaj mere friend key aha party hai so I amm going.

BAISA: accha jaoooo

And then arjun and bhumi goes

And shefali was just looking them goingggggggggggggggg and yuvraj was saying her ki yeh behanji bhumi ko tayar hona ka baa gaya………….. ha……and then shefali look at yuv

NEXT SCENE

Bhumi and arjun is in car and bhumi ask . where are we going and why did arjun told lie to baisa(ohhhhhhh how suit)

ARJUN: to kya bolta ki hum dinner karne ja rahe.woh bhi sabke samne

BHUMI: laugh shyly

ARJUN: waise bhumi aaj tum bhout sunder lag rahi ho

BHUMI: thanks acca yeh batao hum ja kaha rahe??

ARJUN: dekhti jao

And then car stop in front of a beautiful five star hotel and then watchman comes their and open the door for bhumi and ask arjun for the cars keys.arjun give him

BHUMI : arjun tumne use gari ki chabi kyu di agar car chori kar liya to.(toeeeeeeee)

ARJUN: nahi bhavri who humari car parking pe le gaya hai

BHUMI: achha phir bhi koi bharosa nahi mein ja ke dekhti hu

ARJUN: bhavri bhavri!! Aiisa kuch nahi ho ga

Then arjun and bhumi goes to a restuarent(which on thetopest floor and outdore) and as they enter whole retuarent was sorounded candle and bhumi ask arjun kiisska janamdin hai

Arjun was like ufffffffffffff meri bholi biwi

ARJUN: kakasaheb ka are bhudu yeh to humare liye hai

BHUMI: ohhhhhh thanku. And then music is on playing song kya pyar koroge mujhse(of kuch to hai)

ARJUN : ask bhumi for dance but bhumi says she don't know how to dance

ARJUN: never mind I will teach u and he takes bhavri hand start teaching and was little surprise that she know very well.

ARJUN: are bhavri tumhe to dance karma aata hai

BHUMI: who tv dekha karti thi.

ARJUN:ohhhh and they start dancing and they were dancing they started coming closer …………………………………and arjun hug bhumi and bhumi closes her eyes with shy.and just then they were about to look at their face then a waiter come tell that dinner is ready sir

And then bhumi and arjun is having dinner and bhumi see sea and tell arjun to take her at sea shore after dinner

ARJUN : par bhavri and then see bhavri dipointed face and says yes

After they finishes dinner they go to reception

ARJUN: tum yahi raho bhavri mein reception se aya and he turn around and see his old college friend akash(who was a flirt but yet gud)

AKASH are arjun tum yaha and where is shefali,yaar tum to jante ho na mujhe beech mein hi states jana para

Bhumi listion this and feel sad go from there but arjun say shefali got married to yuvraj and look bhumi face with smile

And she olso smile back

AKASH:Tumhare bhai se accha jane do aur batao yaar who kubsourat ladki kuan jiise tum abi baat kar rahe the hmmmmmmmmmmmm yaar tu to bada lucky hai Yaar dosti to karao

ARJUN: giving bad look to him and says who khubsurat ladki mere biwi

AKASH : haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii cough and says I amm sorry and says are bhabhi se nahi milayega

ARJUN: aao and both goes near to bhumi……..BHAVri yeh mera friend akash

BHUMI: namaste

ARJUN: aur akash yeh meri biwi bhumika

AKASH: namaste bhabhi yaar chal mujhe states ki liye flight pakarni hai

ARJUN: ghar to ana chahyie tha achha chal bye take care

AKASH: abb to jaroor auuga bhabhi ke hath ka khana khane

Byeeeeeeee

NEXT SCENE

Bhumi and arjun on the sea shore as soon bhumi sees sea she run toward it and start playing with water

And arjun started seeing her and only her and then lord Krishna comes their and says kya hua arjun lagta hai bhavri ka pyar tumhare dil pe dastak de raha haiiiiiiiiii hai na…………hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

And arjun start smiling ……………….and then bhumi comes their and say tum bhi chalo……..arjun goes with her and lord Krishna says kash abhi radha yahi hoti

As they both are playing with water bhumi started throwing water on arjun and run and arjun runs behind him and grab her and role her round and bring her near to him and started seeing her and then bhumi olso becomes serious and kiss him on his cheek and just then arjun lift her and and and and and drop her on water and run and bhumi after some pause come to relisation start smiling and runs after him after sometime bhumi says arjun its getting late we shud go home and they return home

At nite bhumi goes to temple and says thanku and lord Krishna says are maine kya kiya jo kiya arjun aur tumne kiya .

Hey guys I amm closing sooo byeee but soon there be fights and shajish betwen arjun and bhumi soo pls bear me

now my post will contain shajish mama ji and shefali

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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
all i can say is just "GREAT". 👏 cant wait for mamaji😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15

gr8 job but after adding sajish dont separate them and please do bring them more closer

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏too gud esha keep posting u r also doing a gr8 job hney
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
esha hney waiting for ur story where r u buddy
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Posted: 20 years ago
#18

Soo the story continuessssssssssssssss

IN THE MORNING SHEFALI IN HER ROOM THINKING HOW TO SEPRATE ARJUN BHUMI(YAAR ISKO JUCH AUR NAHI ATA)

WELLLLLLLLL

SHEFALI: agar mujhe arjun ko pana hai to mujhe arjun ko bhumi ke kilaf karma ho ga nahi to who nuakerani bhumi arjun ko mujhse se chn lege

AND THEN SUDDENLY YUV COMES THERE

YUVRAJ: kya hua shefali

SHEFALI(still think in her mind): agar mujhe arjun ko pana hai to mujhe ak acchi patni aur bhahu banna parega aur tumhara sath dena hoga taki arjun yakeen ho gaye ki ab min use nahi pana chahti hu and then she says to yuv ki tumne bhumi ke bare kuch socha hai uski wajah se humari puri society mein humari nak kat gayi hai

YUV: tum sahi kehti ho isiliye to mein mama aur dad ke pass ja raha hu tumbhi chalo (and both of them go to kaka sahib room)

IN THE ROOM MAMA AND KAKASAHEB IS TALKING AND YUV,SHEFALI COME THERE

KAKA: us arjun ne bhumika se shadi kar ke waise hi humari izzat ko uchal diya aur yeh ab baisa ka nay natak accha kushal tumne vakeel se bath ki kuch ho sakta hai ya nahi

MAMA: jeeja legally to kuch nahi ho sakta aur agar humne kuch illegally kiya to hum hi nuksan hove aur vakkel ka kehna ki baisa ne 25% manasvi ko diya hai aur manasvi uska kuch bhi kar sakti hai. To hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai.

KAKA: KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTE KYA MATLAB HAI TUMHARA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!to kya us nuakrani ko hum 450cr le jane dege

MAMA:jeeja sabr karo

YUV: aur arjun ke factry ka kya hua(now shefali is angry on yuv)

MAMA: bhanje agar bhumika ko 450cr mil gaya na to arjun ek factry 10 factry khol lega

KAKA: to kya kare

MAMA: jaise meine pehl kaha ki ab hume unke beech bhed dalna hoga aur is bhed ki shuruat hum arjun aur bhumi se kare ge .agar hum bhumi ko badnam kar de toooooooooooooooooooooo aur waise bhi uska koi bhi manasvi ki tarah is ghar mein vishwas nahi karta hai isi liye hume bhumika ko badnam karke is ghar se nikalna hai

SHEFALI: mama ji hume aur bhi asani hogi kyuki shakuntala kaki bhumi ko pasand nahi karti hai

YUV: mama shefali theek keh rahi hai

KAKA: jo karma hai jaldi karo

AND ALL OF THEM LEAVE FOR OFFICE

NEXT SCENE

Shefali goes to arjun's office ans sees he his working then she thinks ki yahi accha moka arjun se mafi magne ka

SHEFALI knocks the door

ARJUN: come in

As shefali enters arjun look her and says

ARJUN: shefali meine kitni baar kaha hai ab hum ek nahi ho sakte humari zindagi.

SHEFALI: interrupts him and says mein janti hu arjun isi liye to main tumse mafi magne ayi hu(aur wo apne magarmuch ke aasu bhane lagti hai)meine tumhare sath bura kiya na arjun…

ARJUN : nahi shefali aisa kuch nahi mujhe to khusi hai shefali ki tumhe apni galti ka ehsas hai

SHEFALI: thaxs arjun tume mujhe maf kar diya . to kay ab hum ak achha dost ban sakte hai then she give her hand to her.

ARJUN: thinks and then he olso give his hand(lol)

Just then shefali sees bhumi coming arjun office and and just then she hug him arjun is not aware about bhumi and think a friend is hugging him so he olso hug her back and then tabak…………………………..the door is open and bhumi enter saying arjun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And dammmmmmmmmmmm she is silent and tear come to her eyes(as usual)and very silently says ARJUN……………..

Arjun seee her and is shoucked and says bhavri ,…………………..aissa kuch nahi

And bhumi go away from there…………………………….arjun run after her saying bhavri bhavri ………………

Shefali says in her mind lo mera kaam to ho gaya.

NEXT SCENE

Arjun is running after her bhavri and sees her bhavri is in lift he olso enter and says bhavri meri baat nahi jot um samajh rahi ho

BHUMI: to mein kya samjhu aur kya samjhu

ARJUN: shout at bhumi……… BHAVRI…………………..

BHUMI: is surprise and crying and go away

ARJUN : becomes angry and go away from there to his office

Now guys I amm closing but stay tune more shajish is coming up

byeeeeeee

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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
👏mindblowing too gud keep writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
hey, gr8 wurk... keep it up!!!😊
LUV, ESHAH

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