'THE FIRST KISS' KYPH FF pt 26(end)pg 34 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. great part. angad was really sweet. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
such a sweet ff..really!! ur doing a wonderful job and i hope kripa admitts her love fast!! continue sooon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
WOW...gr8 Bheegi!! u have got a reall nice talent...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
amazing prt...i hope she realizes her feelings sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Thhanks all of you. Here is part 8 and 9:



PART 8:

Next morning, everyone was busy talking about having the "sagaayi" ceremony the same day. Angad was restless and desperately needed to talk with someone. "Kanan bhabhi…yes….she can help me" he went to Nishant and Kanan's room. Kanan was laying out her sarees on the bed, trying to decide what she would wear for the ceremony.

"Angad…aao…kuch kehna hai?" she smiled and invited him inside

"Bhabhi…wo….aapki help chahiye…" Angad said

Angad's red and swollen eyes told her that he had not slept all night. She teased him, "kyon….pyar mein neend udd gayi hai kya?"

"Kuch aisa hi samajh leejiye…..parr jo aap soch rahi hain….waisa nahin hai.." he sat down on the bed and buried his head in his hands.

Kanan kneeled down on the floor and looked at him, "Angad…..if my observation is not wrong….you are in love with Kripa!"

"Bhabhi!….aap ko kaise pata?" Angad looked up in disbelief

"You know Angad…tumhari aur Nishant ki personality bahut different hai parr ek cheez mein tum dono bilkul ek jaise ho…."

"Wo kya bhabhi?"

"Tum dono ki aankhein tumhare dil ki baat saaf saaf bolti hain…..bas unhey padhney wala chahiye" she winked at him

"Bhabhi ….please help me….yeh engagement….I don't want to go ahead with it…" he sounded desperate.

"I am very happy for you Angad…..I feel Kripa is the right girl for you aur mera bhi faydaa hai….I would rather have her as my sister-in-law instead of you know who…" she laughed and got up, "ab tayyar ho jao….I will manage the rest"

Angad got up and hugged Kanan, "You are the best….bhaiya is so lucky!"

Nishant walked in from the bathroom, "Arre yeh devar-bhabhi mein kya mili-bhagat ho rahi hai….?"

"Bhaiya…..yeh hamari secret hai" Angad winked at Kanan and left.

Gayatri and Kripa were busy in the kitchen since early morning. "Kripa beta….khaatirdaari mein koyi kammi nahin honi chahiye……pata hai beta Mishti ko maine itna relaxed kabhi nahin dekha…..warna wo hamesha kaam mein itni bust rehti hai…..lagta hai Angad ka saath uskey liye achcha hoga…" as soon as she said that, Kripa accidentally cut her finger while chopping some vegetables.

"Arre…Kripa…dhyaan se…" Kanan noticed the blood from Kripa's finger as she was entering the kitchen

"Kripa! Beta….yeh kya ho gaya….lao mein sabzi kaat leti hoon….tum oopar jaakar bandaid laga lo.." Gayatri took the knife from her. Kripa turned around and left. Kanan could tell Kripa had also stayed up all night and was not her usual chirpy self.

"Aunty….mujhey aap sey ek zaroori baat karni hai…" Kanan said

"Haan…bolo beti…"

"Wo….engagement Mumbai jaakar baad mein nahin karr saktey?….Darr asal Angad chahta hai…uskey dost bhi ceremony mein shaamil ho….main mom dad sey bhi baat karr loongi….." Kanan tried to read Gayatri's expression.

"Beta….wahan jaakar phir karr lengey…aaj tho bas choti si ceremony, sirf ghar waalon ke beech hai….Mumbai mein ek badhi party karr lengey…" Gayatri tried to reason with Kanan.

"Wo…actually Angad ka best friend, Shabbir abhi bahar hai…aur Angad uskey bina koyi naya kaam nahin karta….wo bachpan ke dost hain….harr kaam saath saath hi kartey hain…" Kanan tried her best to convince Gayatri

"Achcha…main…Mishti ke papa se poonch thi hoon…." Gayatri wiped her hands and left the kitchen

When Dilip and Naina heard about the possibility of delaying the engagement from Kanan, Dilip got furious, "yeh….commitment ki baat hai Kanan….it will not look nice…Mumbai mein phir ek badhi ceremony karr sakthey hain…"

Angad also walked in, "Dad….I need to tell you the truth…main Mishti sey shaadi nahin karna chahta….I love someone else."

Dilip's eyes turned red in anger, "What do you mean? Abhi ek hafte pehle maine jab tumsey pooncha tha ki tumhari nazar mein koyi ladki hai tho tab tumney inkaar karr diya tha….ek hafte mein aisa kya ho gaya?"

Angad lowered his eyes and said softly, "Mujhey pyar ho gaya…dad"

It was seldom that Dilip lost his temper with his sons.

"Pyar go gaya! Angad tumney na jaane kitni ladkiyon ke saath pehley yeh kaha hoga….I don't believe ki ek hafte mein tumhey kisi se itna zyaada pyaar ho jaayega….I am sorry son, I think you are just shy of commitment but remember Dilip Khanna is not…..WE ARE NOT GOING TO BACK OUT!"

Naina intervened, "Zara Angad ko thoda time aur de do Dilip, engagement Mumbai jaakar hi karr lengey…..abhi itni jaldi kya hai….aakhir uski zindagi ka sawaal hai….kuch din sochega tho phir maan jaayega….I know my boy…" she affectionately patted his back in support.

Dilip conceded, "OK….main Suryabhan se baat karta hoon….parr yeh batao…yeh doosri ladki kaun hai?" he looked at Angad

Kanan interrupted, "Dad…wo Mumbai jaakar baat karr lengey…warna yahan tamasha khada ho jaayega…" Kanan was aware of the dynamics between the 2 sisters and she did not want Kripa to get into trouble. She thought that later they would approach this subject tactfully.

"OK….waise mujhey pata hai..Angad ko love-shove nahin huya hai…..yeh sab bahaane hain…..anyways we can wait a few days…..Mishti is a good girl….she will understand…" Dilip said as he walked out of their room.

….to be continued…
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 9:

Dilip went to Suryabhan's room. He explained the situation with Angad wanting to postpone the engagement due to the absence of his best friend Shabbir.

"Khanna sahib….aap tho ladkey waaley hain…..jaisa aap kahengey waisa hi karengey….koyi baat nahin…..Mumbai jaate hi date fix karr lengey" Suryabhan reassured Dilip.

Dilip was pleased that the Sharma's were open minded, easygoing people and having them, as "samdhi's" was a good decision.

Dilip patted Suryabhan's back, "You have my word, Angad aapka hi damaad banega….aur kisi ka nahin….."

Kanan overheard their conversation and smiled at the hidden meaning of Dilip's promise.

KRIPA's ROOM;

Mishti barged into Kripa's room.

"Kripa!…..tumhey pata tha ki engagement aaj nahin ho rahi?"

"Mujhey….mujhey kuch nahin pata didi….parr kyon…aaj kyon nahin ho rahi…?." That was news to Kripa also. She thought, "tho kal raat Angad sach bol raha tha kya?…Nahin aisa nahin hona chahiye….."

"Well….Angad tumsey kaafi baatein karta hai…mujhey laga usney kuch kaha hoga….anyways….Mumbai jaakar saari tayyari karr lena….." as Mishti turned around to leave, she saw the iPOD on Kripa's bed.

"Kripa…yeh tumhey kahan sey mila…?" Mishti was surprised to see the expensive gadget with Kripa. Mishti had always been the recipient of all new purchases at home, Kripa always got hand me downs.

"Oh…didi…yeh mere ek dost ney diya hai…." Kripa was scared to say the name as she had already sensed some anger from Mishti whenever Kripa was with Angad.

Mishti checked out the iPOD, envious that Kripa had something so fancy but kept quiet and left. She reasoned, "I can always buy the latest version anytime…"

ANGAD'S ROOM:

Kanan was talking to Angad's , "Tho devarjee…aapka kaam ho gaya…."

"Abhi poora nahin hua hai bhabhi…engagement postpone hi huyi hai….cancel nahin…" Angad said seriously

"Wo bhi ho jaayegi…..don't be so impatient….we have to be a little tactful….Dad aur Kripa dono ki izzat ka sawaal hai…..Mumbai chalkar sochengey….."

Kanan left as she saw Mishti entering.

Mishti came and hugged Angad, "Angad…..I am so disappointed aaj hamari engagement nahin ho paayegi….I was looking forward to going shopping with you….well koyi baat nahin….Mumbai mein formalities karr lengey…..chalo mere saath coffee peene chalo….I will take you to my favorite coffee shop"

Angad obliged reluctantly as he remembered Kanan's words of wisdom about not making a scene there.

AT THE COFFEE SHOP:

Angad sipped on his coffee and remained silent as Mishti talked about the world, politics, business, share markets, mergers and acquisitions..…..

Finally Angad said, "Mishti…..apni family ke barey mein kuch batao….I would like to know…"

Mishti was not used to talking about her family with people, she found personal conversations kind of boring, "Oh….not much to tell…..main apney mama papa ki eklauti beti hoon….aur Kripa meri cousin hai…bachpan mein uskey parents accident mein marr gaye the….tabhi sey hamare saath rehti hai……she is a nice girl but you know, not that bright……….she was always an average student……not like you and me!" she grinned

Angad clenched his teeth but resisted raising his voice, "well…she is the only one working on two degrees at the same time……I think that is very commendable…..I think everyone has a talent in a different area….that's what makes the world go around…." He looked at his watch, "chalo…Mishti ab chalte hain…..dad wants to reach Mumbai at a decent time….he has an early morning meeting" he got up after paying the bill.

Mishti was not thrilled with Angad defending Kripa. She decided to change the topic.

"Achcha Angad…..batao tumhara aagey kya plan hai….matlab career plans kya hain….are you going to stay in consulting or join your dad..?"

Angad was visibly irritated , "Mishti…main itni door ki nahin soch tha hoon….I have some bigger problems to deal with!" he looked at Mishti with the corner of his eyes hinting at the "biggest problem" at his hands!

THE KHANNA'S DEPARTURE:

The khanna's were very appreciative of the hospitality by the Sharma's.

"Gayatri bahen….humein time ka pata hi nahin chala…..aap logon ney hamari bahut achch khatirdaari ki…..ab Mumbai jaakar sagaayi ki tayyari karte hain…" Naina squeezed Gayatri's hands

Dilip and Suryabhan also exchanged hugs. Mishti was expecting some form of intimacy from Angad, but he just shook her hand, "Thanks…Mishti for everything……I will never forget this trip…" his eyes were trying to locate Kripa. Kripa had decided to stay inside after she had sensed that Mishti was in a foul mood since she came back from her outing with Angad.

Kanan sensed Angad's restlessness.

"Angad….mera phone nahin mil raha…please zara dekh karr aao…kahin oopar room mein tho nahin reh gaya?" Kanan winked at Angad

Angad got the message, "haan bhabhi …abhi jaata hoon…" he bolted from the group and ran upstairs.

Nishant was surprised, "Kanan….tum tho bahut organized ho…..phone kaise bhool gayi?"

Kanan elbowed him, "Pata nahi aaj kal thodi bhulakadd ho gayi hoon…..tumhari company ka asar hai" Nishant smiled as he knew how disorganized he was; he could not function without Kanan…..she took care of everything….

Angad looked for Kripa everywhere. He was desperate to meet her before he left. He finally found her sitting on a chair on the terrace listening to her music.

"Kripa….KRIPA!" he had to repeat himself as she was immersed in the music.

She startled and got up, "OH…Angad….mujhey laga aap log chaley gaye hongey…"

Angad's eyes had a very tender look, "I had to say goodbye to my friend…." He came closer and sqeezed her hands and then planted a kiss on her forehead. Kripa closed her eyes and a tear escaped from them. She remained silent and softly said, "Thank you Angad….I am sorry maine tumhey galat samjha….." They both stood there staring into each other's eyes……there was only love in them for each other…..

Angad turned around to leave but turned back, "Can I call you on your phone sometimes?"

Kripa nodded and smiled through her tears…..

…..to be continued….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Wow! Great Part! Continueee Soon! 😳 Please Post the next part soon!! 👏
Edited by mizz_sabah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
amazing parts rocking, just love this FF continue sooooooooooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
nw whts the plan??? hw do v get rid of misty????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
wow great part!
this ff is really great!
continue soon..can't wait for the next part..

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