{LRL}.....Doomed...End Pg-54 {See Pg-55} - Page 43

Finally,to naina is feeling guilt inside.Anyways,I was right about aalekh knowing everything 😊 !!It was a great fiction,dear 👏 .I am going to join ur fan club too 😊 .But, I feel today something is not there,something which is making rajveer incomplete.Dont know what.May b u know as u understand ur character better than anybody.But u could have ended his character in a better way.All the characters were used up very nicely.But i think you could have used rajveer in a much better way.I dont think I am clear to you.Cant exprees what i am feeling.But it was a gr8 story & ur writing capabilities made it an excellent one. 👏

Originally posted by: SAHELIGSWM

Finally,to naina is feeling guilt inside.Anyways,I was right about aalekh knowing everything 😊 !!It was a great fiction,dear 👏 .I am going to join ur fan club too 😊 .But, I feel today something is not there,something which is making rajveer incomplete.Dont know what.May b u know as u understand ur character better than anybody.But u could have ended his character in a better way.All the characters were used up very nicely.But i think you could have used rajveer in a much better way.I dont think I am clear to you.Cant exprees what i am feeling.But it was a gr8 story & ur writing capabilities made it an excellent one. 👏

I perfectly understand wat u r trying to say bcoz even I feel d same... Seedhi-saadi bhaasha mein raj's char was wasted...It cud hve been much better. Bt i cudnt actually help dat!!I tried to improve d char bt his sudden murder & few other technical aspects made his char ruined!! Dat d only thing even I m unhappy abt..odrewise this one is my fav fic bt since d fic is over.... I can 4get abt it now!! Hopefully raj's char will get justice in nxt fic!!

uf sanya awesome,excellent n fantastic part.then doomed is finished successfully.gr8 work sanya. 👏

well.. that was brilliant!!! a fantastic ending.. i luvd it.. alekh.. intelligence officer.. thats awesome.. i wish he cud hv saved huda!! but.. everything isnt a rosy picture always.. he is shaheed.. but good for naina yaar.. deserved every bit of the guilt.. shows how imp trust is in a relnship.. amazing end to a mindblowing ff sanya.. it ws really gr8 reading it.. following the multiple twists n turns in the story.. most of them unexpected.. u kept us on our toes.. n wanting to read more n more n more.. n thats the mark of a gr8 writer.. but apart from a very captivating storyline not jus plotwise but also in its uniqueness (i.e negative characters).. u also updated regularly which i think is very imp to keep ur readers.. cuz ppl read lots of ffs.. n it isnt fun if u forget wat the previous part ws.. but with u that never happnd.. i know u said not to say thanks.. but sanya.. thanks for one of best ffs i hv ever read on IF.. gr8 job.. 👏 👏 👏 hope u come back really soon with lovestation revisited.. lets hv a romantic one now.. which reminds me.. even tho u dont think so.. i think ur gr8 with the whole RJ thingy.. chalo.. thats probably the longest comment i've ever made.. n its for ur ff.. so it shud give u an idea of how gud this one was.. all the best for the next one.. c ya soon.. wil miss u till then.. enjoy ur break!! 😊

hey very good part......... 👏 naina killed my darling rajeev 😡 but i am happy that atlast she killed herself 😭

hey sanya 😛 😃
uff yeh mera comp bhi na phir do din ke liye mujhe heraan kar raha tha.... 😡 😡
n yes abt d 2nd last part too cool n ossome 😳 😃 😛

yeh kya end!!! i guess substantial way me n ekdum rocking tarike se....
loved alekh...loved huda, naina n raj n yes overall me just loved ur fic sanya as i always do n will always...muwwwaahhhhh 😊

w8ing for love station revisited........n yes u rock shonna n keep rocking 👏

sorry sanya couldnt comment coz my comp got crashed....i think u have mistaken...i never said i will not comment i saids i am in a shock 2 comment...if u felt bad then sorry..maybe i need 2 put my views in a more polite way......so finally killed herself ...good atleast he realised her mistake.I am waiting for ur next FF even if u pair HN or AN i am with u

Originally posted by: yyyy

sorry sanya couldnt comment coz my comp got crashed....i think u have mistaken...i never said i will not comment i saids i am in a shock 2 comment...if u felt bad then sorry..maybe i need 2 put my views in a more polite way......so finally killed herself ...good atleast he realised her mistake.I am waiting for ur next FF even if u pair HN or AN i am with u

In dat case I m mistaken...No yaar I didnt feel bad!! D way raj's char shaped up I knew few of u will not like it..I dont like dat thing myself so cant really blame any1..can i?
Bt still no1 actually reacted d way I did expect a few to.....n I cant tell u how glad I m for dat!!
Thanxx for being wid me..I'll be bakk soon!!!


I'll put up d next fic intro on 15th July!!! { I hve finally made up my mind!! }

THanxxxxxx every1 for liking d fic....Hope I dont disappoint u wid d nxxt one & also my last one -

awesummmm sanya!!!! eagerly waitin 4 it yaar!! 😳 👏

cant wait for ur new ff........i bet its going to be awesome like this one........ 😛