Pyaar Ki Pareeksha (L-KT) IMP. - Pg. 141 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

hi!! zinu i miss u a lot... 😭 .n ya ur fanfic rocks ⭐️ .continue soon
-abhi

hii! i miss you a lot too...😭. Thanks, glad you like it😃..I'll continue as soon as possible😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: saira_1

gr8 start 2 ur ff 👏 im so glad we cn still read our sweet lkt scenes even if we cant watch them oh the show 😭
plz update soon 😉

Yeah, i hate it that they broke the couple on screen. Thanks for liking my ff saira. i'll continue soon😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123

hey i just started reading your ff!! Wow you should be writer!!Can't wait for the next part!!👏

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳😳

Thanks for your sweet and lovely comment RadhaKrishna123. I'll update as soon as possible😊😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
WHOA!!!! i just read all of this..WOW!!! this one is outstanding..OMG 6 FANFICS..that too THIS YEAR?? HOLY..how can you write all 6?? youre like the WIND..i luv all ur ff's and this one is just FAB..
continue very very soon...im waiting..................................... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
WHOA!!!! i just read all of this..WOW!!! this one is outstanding..OMG 6 FANFICS..that too THIS YEAR?? HOLY..how can you write all 6?? youre like the WIND..i luv all ur ff's and this one is just FAB..
continue very very soon...im waiting..................................... 👏
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Edited by LakshFan#1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Sorry my computer is messed up..it keeps double posting all the time 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: LakshFan#1

WHOA!!!! i just read all of this..WOW!!! this one is outstanding..OMG 6 FANFICS..that too THIS YEAR?? HOLY..how can you write all 6?? youre like the WIND..i luv all ur ff's and this one is just FAB..
continue very very soon...im waiting..................................... 👏
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👏

Thanks for your lovely comment LakshFan#1. I'll continue as soon as possible. Thanks for liking it😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#28

Hi Everyone!! Before I Continue My Part. I want to share a very special occasion today.👏

It's our very own Uru_Hershey/Uru's Birthday Today. YAYYYYYYY!!!!👏

So Everyone Please Wish Her A Happy Birthday!!😳

She Will Love It!!😛

~~HAPPY BIRTHDAY URU~~

🥳

Love You Always<3

Zinu😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
************************************************************ ************************************************************ *********************
PART 2


NEXT MORNING..
Laksh was still sleeping, when Kt walks in to wake him up..
She sits beside him..
K: Laksh..
She shakes him..
L: hmmm........................................................ ................
K: uthooo....9 baj rahe hai.......uthoo naa....hmph...
L: Kt..itna bhao kyun khaati ho.........sone do naa...................agar shaadi se pehle yeh haal hai........to shaadi ke baad mujhe maar na dena please.....(he sweetly smiles, with his eyes closed)........
K: (annoyed)...LAKSH......
L: hm........................
K: utho abhi..chilgose kahin ke...
She starts to leave, but suddenly Laksh holds her hand, and pulls her down..
She sits on his lap..
L: chigosa huh??
K: haan chilgosa..tum ho hi chilgose..hmph..
L: acha..
K: haan...acha hai..tum uth to gaye...ab haath chodo...neeche bahut saare kaam karne hai...chodo naa....
L: khud niklo...kar sakti ho yeh?? itni takat hai tum mein?? (teasingly)..
K: tum mujhe challenge kar rahe ho?? abhi nikal ke dikati hoon..hmph..
L: dikhao..mujhe bhi dekhna hai..ki tum meri grip se kaise nikal ti ho..
Kt looks at Laksh, and Laksh looks back, deep into her eyes..
They stay like that for some time..
T: (shouting from downstairs)..KRISHNA!!!!!!! NEECHE KOI AAYA HAI...DEKH TO ZARA.....!!!!!!!........
K: chodo laksh..neeche koi aaya hai..
L: to hum kya kare..
K: chodo naa laksh..please...
L: challenge poora karo...
K: Laksh..
L: Kt..
Kt sweetly pushes him, and leaves..
Laksh smiles at her..and goes to the washroom..
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After some time, Laksh comes down, all dressed up..
L: (from the stairs) Kt........
K: Kya hai..kyun chilaa rahe ho..?? (she comes running up to him..
L: Kt..mai zara koi zaroori kaam se jaa raha hoon..jaldi wapas aa jaoonga..theek hai..
K: par laksh..
L: bahut zaroori hai kt..maine kaha naa aa jaoonga..please..
K: theek hai..jaldi aana..warna..
L: ok ok..jaldi aaonga..
Voice in background: humara swaagat kare bina hi..very rood Laksh!!
L: (smiles) Jay Bhaiyaa...
He runs down, and hugs Jay..
L: Hi..kaise hai aap..
J: mai theek hoon..par tu theek nahi rahe ga..hahahahaha....
L: kyun?? kya hoga mujhe??
J: (whispers) teri shaadi ho rahi hai naa..teri biwi tujhe nahi chode gi..
Bani hits Jay sweetly..
B: Laksh..tum inki baat mat suno..yeh to bas kuch bhi bolte rehte hain..
Laksh and Jay laugh..
L: Bhabhi..don't worry..inke saath mera poora bachpan beeta hai..mujhe blackmail nahi kar sakte yeh..
Bani and Laksh laugh..while Jay looks sort of embarassed..
Kt runs down, and stands by Laksh..
L: oh haan!! Bhabhi..Bhaiyaa..Yeh hai meri mangetar[fiance]..Kt..aur aap usse bula sakte hain..mottii...
K: (hits laksh) LAKSH!!!!
L: mazaak tha mottii..
K: LAKSH!!
L: ok ok..sorry..mai aata hoon..
He sweetly smiles, and leaves..

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WHAT'S HAPPENING NEXT??

- Laksh and Kt meet Nahar, Saloni, Akshay, Mamta, and sweet Krish.
- They have done all the preperations of the wedding.
- Laksh's and Kt's friends..meet everyone in the family.
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Guys..I know that was short..but i wanted to update today..sorry it was short..ill make the next one longer..please reply..thanks!! 😊 😆 😳
Love,
Zinu
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
that is the sweetest thing ever. how dare laksh call kt moti 😆 pls continue soon
loved it
simi

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