Pyaar Ki Pareeksha (L-KT) IMP. - Pg. 141 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: live_life

that is the sweetest thing ever. how dare laksh call kt moti 😆 pls continue soon
loved it
simi

Lol. Thanks Simi. I'll continue soon tomorrow😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
gr8 update zinu continue.soon 👏 .
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

gr8 update zinu continue.soon 👏 .
-abhi

Thanks abhi. I'll update soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
************************************************************ ************************************************************ *********************
PART 3

Laksh comes back after 2 hours..and rushes to his room..
He freshen's up..and goes back down..
Kt tells him to come to the Living Room..
L: Kt..
L: (smiles) Nahar Bhaiyaa..aap kab aaye??
N: bas abhi aaya..
They both hug..
Meanwhile Jay and Bani also come, from their room..
J: arre Nahar..badi derr baad dekha hai..kya haal hai..
N: mai theek hoon..par humaara dhoola nahi hoga..jaanta hai kyun??
L: pata hai..pata hai..biwi jo mil rahi hai..hahaha..
Kt hits him..
L: oowww!! mottii..itni zorr se kyun maarti ho..huh??
K: mai motti..tum..urgh!!..chilgose kahin ke..hmph..
L: naaraaz ho..
K: whatever..
L: sorry...
Kt smiles..
L: (whispers) mottii..
Laksh runs away..and hides behind Nahar..
K: LAKSH!! urgh!! tum..kabhi nahi sudhroge..idhar aao..chigose..hmph..
L: Nahar bhaiyaa..kya bhabhi aapko aise tang karti hai??
Nahar and Saloni look at each other, and smile, in embarrace..
N: nahi..woh mujhe isse bhi zaada tang karti hai..
S: KYA?? Nahar..tum..(hits him sweetly)..
J: no no no!! Bani mujhe sabse zaada--
B: KYA?! Nahi..mai aisa nahi karti..
All three girls start hitting their husbands..and fiance for kt..
L: ow ow ow..kt...mazaak tha..plz stop naa...kt...mai tumhe mottii nahi bulauga..plz chodo..ow ow ow...kt..
He gets a hold of kt's arms..
L: oh god!! apne hone wale pati ko kyun dho rahi ho?? mai laundry nahi hoon..
Everyone laughs..
N+J: don't worry laksh..hum bhi tere jaise hi dhul rahe hain..
The girls are embarrassed, and smile at their "lovers"..
Meanwhile Krish comes running in..saying "Laksh chachu"
Krish comes, and sweetly wraps his arms around Laksh's legs..
Laksh sweetly picks him up..
Meanwhile Mamta comes running in..saying "Krish"..
M: (to krish) badmaash..jab dekho bhaagta rehta hai..
Akshay is seen walking in the door..
A: hi Laksh..
L: hi bhaiyaa..kaise hain??
A: bas theek..tu bata..mil liya bhabhi aur bache se??
L: woh to ho gaya..par naam to bataiye..
Mamta smiles, and looks at Akshay..
A: Ok..teri bhabhi..Mamta..aur tujko jo chachu chachu kehke bulata hai..woh hai krish..
Everyone smiles..
Krish[K]: chachu..meri chocolate kaha hai..
L: kaha hai?? chocolate kaha hai?? kho gayi..??
He checks his pockets..
L: chocolate to nahi hai..par..yeh ki-kat hai..he smiles, and sweetly hands it over to krish..
Krish sweetly smiles, and takes the kit-kat..
M: no krish..chocolate wapas do chachu ko..
K: nahi..
M: krishu..wapas do..
K: nahi..nahi..nahi..
L: bhabhi..rehne do naa..bacha hai..ushi ke liye to laya tha mai..please..aur waise bhi..aap yaha pehli baar ayiee hai..aur krish bhi..aaj naa mat kijiye please..
M: (smiles)..okay..
Krish sweetly starts eating his kit-kat..and laksh keeps him on the floor..
He runs to Mamta..and she picks him up..
A: to laksh..kya baat hai..itne khush nazar aa rahe ho..
L: ofcourse..aap sab se itni derr baad jo mila hoon..
A: humme milke khush ho..ki..apni mangetar ko leke??
L: isko..kabhi nahi..yeh itna tang karti hai mujhe..ki poocho naa..oooffff..
K: laksh..tumhe aur dhulna hai??
L: nahi..(he quietly sits on the couch)..
Everyone laughs..
K: hi mamta di..kaisi ho..
M: mai theek hoon..tu kaisi hai..
K: mai theek hoon..
M: hi Bani..hi Saloni..kaisi ho tum dono..
B: mai theek hoon tum kaisi ho??
S: mai bhi theek hoon..tum batao..
M: theek..
The girls sit down, and start talking about each other..
The boys get bored of this..and decide to go somewhere else and talks..

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After a while of them both talking, Tulsi comes, and meets everyone..and says to laksh and kt, to get busy in the preperations..
All of Laksh and Kt's friends insist on helping..They have nothing to say but to let them decorate around the house..
Laksh is working on putting up the flowers..and kt is just roaming around him..
L: kt..mai iss ladder pe chadke phool lagata hoon..ok..
K: laksh tum gir jao ge..itni unchi(high) jaga se..mat karo..kisi aur ko bol do..please..
L: kt..kuch nahi hoga..ok..tum bas yaha khadi raho..mai yoon lagata hoon..aur yoon wapas aata hoon..
K: laksh..mujhe darr lag raha hai..kahi kuch ho gaya to..
L: (he takes kt's face, in his hands) kuch nahi hoga kt..tumhe bharosa hai naa mujh par?? kuch nahi hoga..hm..
Kt nods..
Laksh climbs up the ladder..with the flowers..and starts decorating..
Kt goes in the kitchen to get something..meanwhile Jay and Akshay come there..
A: Jay..maine suna hai ki..inki arrange marrige ho rahi hai..
L: kya?? arrange marrige nahi hai..love marrige hai..
J: acha..to phir tu pachtayega..
L: nahi..kt mujhe--
N: kya ho raha hai yaha??(he comes and joins akshay, and jay)..
L: kuch nahi..decorations..
Laksh comes back down the ladder..
L: ho gayi..mera kaam to ho gaya--
L: OH NO!! ek kaam to bhool hi gaya..bhaiyaa..kt kaha hai?? (looks around)..
N: pata nahi..
L: mai dekhta hoon..
N: par baat kya hai..
L: bhaiyaa..aap please kt ko bata dijiye ki..mujhe koi bahut important kaam ke liye jaana tha..kuch derr mein wapas aa jounga..plz sambhal lena please..
N: okay..par kaam kya hai??
L: woh baad mein..byee...
N: okay..bye!!
Laksh leaves running..
Meanwhile Kt comes back..
K: laksh..
K: laksh?? kaha ho??
K: bhaiyaa..laksh ko kahi??
N: haan..usse.......
K: usse??
A: haan..usse....uski tabiyat kharaab thi..woh hospital gaya hai..
K: (starts to cry) kya?! kya hua usko?? woh theek to hai??
Meanwhile Mamta, Bani, and Saloni come there..
S: kya hua kt??
K: di..laksh ko kuch ho gaya hai..woh hospital gaya hai..
B: kya?? kya hua usko??
K: (crying) pata nahi..
M: akshay..kya hua laksh ko..
A: hum mazaak kar rahe the..usko kuch nahi hua hai..usko koi zaroori kaam yaad aa gaya tha..isiliye gaya hai..thodi derr mein wapas aajayega..
M: (softly hits akshay on his chest) kyun aise kiya akshay..itna bada mazaak..woh bhi dulhan ke saath..very bad..
A: sorry mamta..sorry kt..
K: its okay bhaiyaa..par ab..saara kaam to ho gaya hai..laksh ko kya kaam tha..
B: usse phone kyun nahi karti??
K: haan..
Kt calls up Laksh, on his cell phone..
K: hello laksh??
L: haan kt bolo..
K: kya kaam tha..yaha par to sab kaam ho chuka hai..
L: kuch nahi..mai abhi wapas aa raha hoon..thodi derr mein..ok..
K: par kaam--
L: kt..chinta mat karo..mai aa raha hoon naa..
K: okay..bye.
L: bye.

************************************************************ ************************************************************ *********************
THE SCENE SWITCHES TO NIGHT TIME..

Laksh and Kt are getting dressed..
After they are dressed they come down, Laksh is wearing his sehra..and kt is wearing her "ghoongat"..
They both sit on the mandap..and tulsi does the gath bhandan..
They both do the rituals, take the phere..
Laksh then puts the mangalsutra on her, and finally the vermillion[sindoor]..
They both get up, and take every elder's blessing..
Laksh and Kt are standing at the door for their Vidayi..
Tulsi does the "nazar utarne wali rasam"..
She feeds them sweet curd..
They both, once again, take every elder's blessing, and sit in their car, which is decorated with flowers..
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So guys..that was my part 3..please tell me how it was..please reply..thanks!! 😳
Love,
Zinu
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
wow!! zinu i loved it 👏 .it's gr8.thanx a lotttttt for updating 😳 😳 .so finally"LAKSH_KT R MARRIED"i'am so happy thanx a lot 😊 😊 😊 .
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

wow!! zinu i loved it 👏 .it's gr8.thanx a lotttttt for updating 😳 😳 .so finally"LAKSH_KT R MARRIED"i'am so happy thanx a lot 😊 😊 😊 .
-abhi

Thanks abhi..yeah they're finally married😆😳😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

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Edited by LakshFan#1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: saira_1

👏 plz continue soon!!!!

Thanks saira. I'll continue as soon as possible😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: LakshFan#1

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omg omg

omg omg

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omg omg

omg omg

omg omg

omg

AWESOME.

MIND

BLOWING.

FANTASTIC.

OUTSTANDING.

YOU ARE AN

AMAZING

WRITER.

PLEASE

CONTINUE

SOON. I

CAN'T WAIT

FOR YOUR

NEXT PART.

PLEASE

PLEASE

PLEASE

CONTINUE

SOON. i cant

wait...

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Thanks LakshFan#1. I will continue as soon as possible😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
5 or more comments, and i will continue 😉

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