Masti- Part 17 Pg 39.... P-M scene - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
wow that was a great part..
hehe it was funny... 😆
smart how they took his pictures..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
OMG!!
IT WAS SOOO GREAT....
I JUST LOVE IT!!....
plz continue soon..
you've got a new fan of your ff and you*LOL* 😛
anyways
dieing to read the next part...
love
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
haha too funny...
i love how they are all close and play funny pranks on eachother!! and ontop of that the pictures!! hmm i wonder wut they will do with them 😕 😆
plz cont soon..cant wait to see how the girls are 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you havent continue.....
plz do it soon....
dieing to read the next part...
Love
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for your comments guys, I need atleast 4 more comments please in order to post the next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love the part it's great and keep up the good work. Can't wait of the next part.

Love,

Saniya
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

"Di, Get Up."
"Kastui, so ne do na." Kripa said without opening her eyes.
Kasturi: Di, we have University today, now get up, we're getting late.
Kripa gives in and wakes up: Alight, I'm awake. Is Mukti Up?
Kasturi shakes her head.
Kripa yawns: Go wake her up please.

"MUKTIII. Wake up, sleepy head."
Kasti puts the curtains aside and since the sun is in Mukti's eyes, she wakes up.
Mukti rubs her eyes and smiles: Morning.
Kastuti looks ar her room. There are clothes scattered everywhere, lots of Johnny Depp's posters on the wall and on the floor, her closet is open with huge piles of unfolded clothes, and her dresser is full of all these girly stuff.
Kastui frowns: Do, what's this? Why is your room soo messy???
Mukti yawns:Just too lazy to clean it up, hun.
Kasturi just shakes her head: Anyways get ready quickly.


Angad and Robbie managed to put Prem's pictures on the bulletin board withour letting anyone see them.
Angad gives Robbie a thumbs up.

At Lunch everyone gathers at the bulletin board.
(Randomn girls) Girl 1: OMG!
Girl 2: Is that Prem?
Girl 3: That's really Prem?
Girl 1: aww, nonetheless he still looks very cute.
Girl 2: I agree. Cho chweet.
Some of Prem's friends come there.
Guy 1: Ah, that Prem?
Guy 2: I think so, man he looks hilarious.
Guy 1: I know, a pic of prem with shampoo?
They all burst out laughing.
Prem's been watching this and turns red with embarassment.
Who the h*ll took my pictures and pu them there? Prem thought. His thoughs were distracted by a bunch of geeks-girls giggling.
Girl 1: Omg! That's him. He looked so cute with shampoo on. The other girls just start giggling and rem turns even redder and walks away. His friends catchs up with him.
One of them asked: Dude, what's with the shampoo pics?
Another one asked: Yeah, this news is around the entire school you know. Btw did you pu thise picss....
Prem cuts him of: Are you crazy? Why would I do that? But I don't get it, who did this? I mean I don't walk with shampoo on....
Then it comes to him.
Prem: I know who did this.
His friends: WHO?
Prem: Angad and Robbie. Ahhh I am gonna kill them.
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Prem slams the door of his car and angrily walks in the house. Angad and Robbie are sitting on the couch watching T.V, eating popcorn and drinking pop. Prem bangs the house door which makes Angad and Robbie look up.
Angad: hey bro, what's up?
Robbie: Come, sit and enjoy the movie.
Prem who is looking very mad looks around for something to beat the sh** out of his idiotic brothers. He finds a baseball bat0 a real one. He picks it up and walks toward Angad and Robbie who are sitting on the couch, looking at him confused.
"I belive you guys had lots of fun, huh? Prem said with a look of disgust on his face.
Robbie gets off the couch and steps back because he knows what's coming next.
Angad gets off the couch and stammers: Het bro, watcha talking about? Robbie stammers too: Yeah, what..
Prem cuts him off: Oh shutup. You 2 took my pictures when i came out of the bathroom looking like a baby and posted it on the bulleting board.
Robbie bites his nails: How'd you know?
Angad gives him a dirty look and said to himself: Robbie, you're such an idiot. You weren't supposed to say that out loud, god.
Robbie notices the looks Angadd's giving him and realises what he said: Uh oh...
Prem- really angry: I am not gonna leave you guys and he chases them around with the bat. He gets his hands on Robbie first, and gives him a good punch on his right eye. He raises his bat and was going to bit it on his head but figured it wasn't safe so instead he hits him on his butt and beats him up really hard.
Robbie in pain: Ouch Prem, stop it, my butt is swollen, Damn it. It hurts. Get off.
Prem: No. You should have thought about the consequences before posting my pics.
And then he starts hitting RObbie on his back and pretty soon his back's swollen too.
Robbie screams in pain: Angad! Help man.
Angad went to his room and got 2 badminton rackets. While Angad is coming down the stairs, Robbie says with happiness: Aww how sweet of you, you got me something too?
Angad cocks an eyebrow: Pfft. No dude, both of these are for me.
Robbie frowns: How rude!
Prem stops beating up Robbie since he thinks he had enough and goes after Angad.
Prem raises his bat and hits Angad on his shoulder.
Angad winces in pain: Ouch. Don't hit me there/ You're damaging my muscles.
Prem grins evilly: Now that's exactly where I am gonna hit you. You like to show off your muscles huh? Now you won't be able to work out for.. abt 2-3 months.
Angad became horrified at that thought: 2-3 motnhs?
Prem ignored him and continued hitting him on his shoulder and pretty soon Angad's left arm became very sore.
Angad in pain: Stop it, Prem!
Prem: No. You gotta pain man.
He again lifts his bat but this time Angad takes and throws his bat away and starts beating him up with his badminton rackets.
Prem winces in pain: Ouch. You....
Angad grins: Now you're gonna pay for hitting me.
Robbie comes running with a basketball : Hold on, I'ma join too. Lil bro, you're gonna pay for beating up your big bro. You shameless man.
Prem yells in anger and pain: Shut up.
Angad said while punching and twisting Prem's arm: Robbie why are you carrying a basketball?
Robbie: I couldn't find anything better in a hurry. Alright stop hitting him for a sec.
Angad stops and Robbie starts "shooting" th eball at Prem as if he were a basketball net. They all start fighting again, either punching, kicking, pinching, throwing balls, beating eeach other(or Angad-Robbie beating Prem or Prem beating Angad-Robbie) whith badminton rackets or a baseball bat.
Prem gets his hand on a butter knife- since he thought the other one would be quite dangerous and pulls it on Robbie.

Atlast when they all get tired and can't fight anymore they sit and rest and start applying band-aid to their bruises, cuts and what not.
Angad has a black eye and so does Robbie. Robbie has a wide cut across his face and Prem's face is bruised up and he has an almost broken arm. Prem's looking the worst right now, afterall both his bog brothers had teaned up.
Prem: Gimme a bear. Ah I'm tired and I 'm in sooo muchh painnnn.
Angad gives him a not-to-mess-with-me look.
Robbie: Get it yourself. My butt is aching a lot, thanks to you and your stupid racket.
Pren: Shut up, I'm looking the worst ok? and he adds with puppy eyes: Don't you guys feel ashamed beating up your younger brother lke this? He looked like as if he were to cry.
Angad and Robbie just ignores him and do feel a little sorry and guilty for beating him up like this. When either Angad or Robbie don't say anything, Prem sticks his tongue out at them and starts giving them the dirtiest looks ever.

Ok guys, so that was the second part, I hope you enjoyed it and please leave comments, I need atleast 10 comments to continue, this time I only had 7 or 8 but in the future I need more comments to continue.

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Guys, I was wondering if any of you know how to make a banner? Please, if you do then do tell me 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
haha. that was hilarious..poor guys, but when r the guys gonna meet mukthi and kripa and kasturi?!? 😆 😆 i cant wit for it.. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
OMG..great part..i was hoping for more girl intro but this works..poor Prem!

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