::.Ziddi.:: (ak) 'yes or no....'pg 9

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Disha=)

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey everyone... i am disha... i have been in IF for more than year already... but i really never thought it necessary to register... this section has been a very enjoyable section for mee... i love to read teh fanfiction... you guyss are really creative i have to say... soo young and yet soo creative... i am a teenager by heart as well... but unfortnately... am over teenager....😉 am 23... i am engaged and will bne gettng married pretty soon... only if i could wait till teh age of 25...🤢🤢🤢 but my dad doesn't have a really good heart soo he wants to see mee getting married... 😳 okkk... soo after gettng continuos nagging from my sister's daughter... who is about 11 years old... i finally decided i want to wrte as welll... i might continue everyday... as i quit my job like two days ago...lol... was tooo tired of continuosly ... okk...soo i need to talk less... okk soo this story is my love story....soo i hope you guyss will like it... but i will add some mirch masala to it.. sooo not everything is true...

CHARACTERS

Kripa Sharma(ME!..umm as neha): very ziddi...always gets what she wants... she can do anythign to get it... spoiled brat.... middle class...

Angad Khanna(My fiance.... as iqbal): ziddi as well... but not as much as kripa... is in love with Mishty... adn is engaged to her...

Prithvi Bose(My best friend..... as amit tandon): kripa's best friend adn her partner in crime...

Mishty Mehra(My cousin.... as survana): kripa's best friend... lot sweeter and less ziddi than kripa... loves anagd alot...she is rich unlike everyone else...but is very down to earth...

Disha Sharma(My elder sister...): Kripa's elder sister... and also a partner in crime... has a soft corner for prithvi...

Edited by Disha=) - 18 years ago

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey, welcome to i-f, and your ff sounds interesting!! plz do continue, waiting for the first part!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

awww... ur life story is very cute!!! nd this FF sounds VERY interesting!!!
CANNOT wait to read it, continue soon!!! 😛

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Disha=)

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part One

Setting: Mumbai, India... 21st january 2006... it is early in the morning... everyone has gone for their work already... except for one person...Kripa!

prithvi: kripa... get up!!
kripa: prithvi... let mee sleep... remember i quit yesterday! i dont need to wake up early no more...
prithvi: YOU QUIT AGAIN!
kripa: yup...
prithvi: well.... i hire you again... soo you're coming to the office right now.!
kripa: no..prithvi...plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
prithvi: i dont wanna listen to anything... you'll be here by ten...

before she could reply he hung up... she groaned and hung up as well... she hated her life... y did she have to work? well teh work wasn't exactly work...but still she had to be with prithvi from 8 in teh morning to 5 in teh afternoon... and was getting paid for it...soo it was her work/job right?...why did she have to grow up... she was better off being a 16 year old girl... who had just gotten out of her school life forever... wasn't leaving school supposed to be fun?... guess not... she dragged herself to teh bathroom... as the water gushed through her body... she rememebred her childhood... soo carefree... soo free... and now...she had a stupid work...whcih was worse than school work... noone could say she was a 22 year old girl...

she might not be the richest girl...but she lived like one... she had a sports car for which she was still paying... she had eth fanciest dresses and the most arecent fashion clothes... she wore designer clothes...maybe not all but most of them... she was a spoiled brat... and she was proud of it...

10:00 am, prithvi's cabin...

prithvi: kripss... thankgod you're here...

he said grinning aas kripa frowned... she walked upto him and pulled him up by his collar...

kripa: why teh heck did you hire mee again... i quit yesterday!
prithvi: well... if u hated this job soo much... why did you join mee again??
kripa: because you freaking blackmail me!!!!
prithvi: uhh... kripa... can you leavemy collar pls... its choking mee...
kripa: oh how i wish i could just choke you to death...soo i could live in peace!...
prithvi: comeone this is not such a bad job...
kripa: job??? you call this a job?? dude... i have to take care of your stupid girlfriends... make your appointment with each one or them... help you sneak in teh home... and all... its not a JOB!

prithvi just laughed seeing her burst out... kripa frowned and stormed out of the cabin...

9:00 pm, kripa's room...

every person has a dream... a desire... a wish... which they pray to come true... adn she had one tooo... she was a movie freak... she watched every serial... adn watching them.... she always wished there would be a person... a guy to be exact... who will love her... she had promised her mom to marry whomever her mother wished too... but t was just for the sake of saying it... she really wished there would be someone who would sweep her off her feet... who would take her away... away from teh world...into a small wold of their own...a small world they would create... she wished to have a cricket team of babies... oh yes,... babies... she was very fond of them... although she hated when they pooped... and cried but still that was a baby's job right?

she smield as these thoughts came to her... she didn't hear her cell phone ring for eth feifth time in an hour... slowly getting out of the trance she heard it adn quickly picked it up...

kripa: hello...
mishty: KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
kripa: OMG!!! mishty!!!... how are you? where are you? did you come back? when? how? why? how are unkle and aunty... did you meet someone there?? is he hot? OMG!! i cant believe i am actually talking to you!!!!!
mishty(laughed): #1 i am fine...perfect...terrific... #2 i am in GOA... #3 yes i am back... when: three days ago, how: by flight, why: to get married... mumma and dad are fine... yes i met someone there and he even proposed to mee... he is HOT... very very HOT! plus..he super gorgeous... with sexy body... and believe me you are really talking to mee!!!!!
kripa: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU'RE GETTING MARRIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mishty: calm down kripss... you know i am not getting married without your approval right? soo you're coming here by teh next flight to meet HIM!...
kripa: but...
mishty: yes you can bring prithvi and disha with you too... well they will be coming anywayss later for the wedding but i want YOU here soo you can approve HIM...
kripa: okk... i will talk to mummy and will come with prithvi... disha di might not come... shes busy...
mishty: okk then... meet you sooon....
kripa: yup we will... bye... mwahhhhh love you...adn tell HIM to be careful.... I am Coming!!!

plss tell mee how did you like it?? i live in USA... but i wrote this ff taking place in india... soo plsss bear mee... i have been there but was here when i was around 8? and haven't been back soo dont really rememer places too welll... okk soo i will leave now... angad will enter eth ff in teh next part... bye bye

😳 😳

Edited by Disha=) - 18 years ago

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Samina

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Posted: 18 years ago

amazing part
sounds really intresting
cant wait 4 kripa 2 reach goa and meet angad
continue soon
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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

Fab Part!! HAHA Angad better watch out, cuz Kripa gonna drown him in her love!! lol 😆 Continue Soon!!

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Rani

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Posted: 18 years ago

omg that was a great part continue soon 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

haha. that was good...contineu sooon.

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Disha=)

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Posted: 18 years ago

PART TWO

Setting: January 23rd... airport of Goa... 1:00 am...

kripa sighed... shes been waiting for three hours... but mishty's so called boyfriend hasn't come yet... mishty had to go to teh party today... and there was noone but her... prithvi couldn't vcome adn he said he will be there in two-three days with disha... she paced for sometime and then started reading a magazine... the first impression is not going to welll... she thought... she was soo going now... just as she thought she should go... a guy infront of her... she looked at him annoyed... but soon everythign she forgot everything... she forgot who she was...where she was... she felt a whole new emotion over come her...

angad: kripa?
krioa: (nod)
angad: i am soooo sorry... i was comign but--
kripa(interruptng): its okk...

angad stared at her amused... mishty had specially mentioned him to be there on time... cuz she hates late commers adn here she was being all nice to him...

angad: okk lets go...

he took her lugguage... loaded into his car and asked her to sit down... soon he started driving...

angad: oh btw... my nam is angad... angad khanna... mishty's fiance...

kripa felt herself getting hit by a big stone... ofcourse... HE was mishty's fiance... she looked at him... and turned away adn looked out of eh window saying nothing... she sighed... maybe her life was just meant to be spent alone...

angad on the other hand was confused...w as she mad at him for coming late? thats why she wasn't saying anything... not even interviewing him... mishty had said she talked alot... always chatting away... but why was she soo quiet right now...

January 24th... 12:00 pm...

mishty: soo how did you like angad?

kripa frowned for a second... then smiled...

kripa: hes Sexy... and by sexy i mean ....REALLLy sexy!

mishty gigled... she knew kripa... and she knew how crazy she was about guys...and her choice was always teh best... soo now she was proud of herself for HER choise...

kripa: well i know nothign about him...(she frowned) all i know is that he is a very very late commer...(she smiled)and very ver y goood looking...soo cant really say anything....
mishty: hes not a really later commer... he's only late when he's really busy...
kripa: uh-huh well he must bee busy right now too right... on a sunday afternoon... when he was supposed to be here like two hours ago?
mishty(sighed): i know you hate late commers... but...

she was interrupted by angad... who had a large grin on his face...

kripa(mumbled): talk of teh devil...and here he comes...

last night... she couldn't sleep ...at all... all she could think about was y was god sooo unfair to her... mishty always had everythign adn she never did... and yet she was going to sacrifice her first love... well maybe not love...but first person she actually had more than a crush... to mishty...after a lot of thinking she finally came to a desicion... she needs to stay away from him... he was like a greek god... a god noone can resist... not even teh great Kripa Sharma...

angad: soo you girls ready...?
kripa: you guyss go ahead... i dont think i am in teh mood anymore...

kripa skipped upstairs to her room before mishty could protest... but still mishty followed her in her room adn saw her gathering some stuf...

mishty: what are you doing?
kripa: well i dont live in Goa... now that i am here... thought about catching some waves... (she shrugged) now where did i put my bathing suit!

she started searching for it... while mishty tried to convince her to come to lunch with them... but she plainly refused...

mishty: pls pls pls pls pls pls
kripa: NO!

she finally got it as she dug into her suitcase... it was under her other clothes... she hadn't fully unpacked yet...

kripa: now excuse mee...

she went to teh bathroom... changed into her bathing suit and then just put on some loose sweat shirt adn shorts... she grabbed a toewl... her smal bag and walked out... mishty sighed... shes too stubborn to listen to her... angad watched kripa walk out without even giving him a glance... as if he were invisible... but teh thing he didn't know was...she was stealing glance at him by teh corner of her eyes...

5:00 pm... mishty's house...

kripa: thankss soo much...
sahil: you're welcome... sooo meet you tomorrow?
kripa: yess... adn if i dont come adn go to eth boring lunch with my cousin and her boyfriend... do come to save mee...
sahil(laughed): sure...
kripa: bye...

she leaned and pecked his cheeks... she went inside humming a song... when she bumped into angad...

angad: hi...
kripa: hey...

kripa tried to go but angad stopped her...

angad: are you mad at mee for something?
kripa: no why would i be?
angad: cuz you've been ignoring mee...and kind of keeping a certain distance from mee...
kripa: well et reason is simple... i dont like you!
angad: but you dont even know mee...
kripa: dont even want to...
angad: but...
kripa: listen... i love mishty twice as much as you can even think about loving her... you know her for what? 6 months? i know her since she was not even potty trained... and i dont really want to insult you infront of her...soo i am avoiding every possible way to keep in contact witgh you!... adn sicne i love her adn she loves you... there is no way i can break her heart saying i dont liek you... cuz trust mee... if is ay i dont want her to marry you... she'll break this marriage before you can even say your name...

angad just stared at her in amusement...

kripa: now i think i am done talking...and you are done understanding...soo tata bye bye... and try to stay away from mee..!

she walked past her rolling her eyes... angad just stood there not being able to say or do anything... she didn't like him? but every friend... every cousin he has ever met of mishty had been drooling over him...and here comes her closest cousin who doesn't like him at all?... he was damn confused... this is gonna be really tough he thought... as he walked towards mishty's room...he saw kripa jumping on oe foot... then he saw her swollen pinky of her right foot...

kripa: owwie! owwie! owwie! owwie!

she collapsed on teh bed and started to kiss her pinky... well lightly touching her lips to her pinky... she took out a first aid box and applied some medicine... and then bandaged it... and he heard her curse him(angad) under her breathe... he wanted to laugh at her innocence... her childishness... he stared at her for a second... shook his head... he had to do something to make her like him... soo than this marriage wouldn't make anyon sad... not even teh person who hated him... only he didn't know... she was head over heels in love with him already... she was just acting to not like him to console herself that he cannot be hers... se was already mishty's and she would sooo not snatch him away from her beloved cousin....

okk i am going to sleep now adn will come later again... i am sooo tired... babysitting my niece is not a very pleasant thing... she's a devil... a pure devil... 🤢 buti loveeeeeeeeeeee her... okkk from teh next part... it will be a battle of angad adn kripa's stubborness... angad trying to make her like him...and kripa trying to resist him... both not living in peace untill they've accomplished what they want... lets see who wins....

Edited by Disha=) - 18 years ago