::.Ziddi.:: (ak) 'yes or no....'pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like ur ff 👏
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART FIVE

three days later...

30th January... Mishty's room...

Mishty: kripaaa...plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Kripa: no! No! NO!
Mishty: But i am nervous going there alone!
Kripa: Not my Problem!
Mishty: Ugggh why have you become soo mean?
Kripa: okk sorry... (sighs) fine i'll go
Mishty: yippie!!!!!! oh and wear a saree...
Kripa: yea right!

In teh car

Mishty: atleast you wore indo-western dress...
Kripa: whatever 😡
Mishty: *gigle*

Angad's house...

Angad was waiting for mishty... he wanted mishty to go toa business party with him... he had no idea kripa was tagging along... mishty had said she'll be at his place by 8:30pm... it was already 9... as he looked at teh door he was mesmerized by what he saw... he saw kripa enter his house looking absolutely BEAUTIFUL... in the pink adn white salwar she wore... he didn't even see mishty enter... he was too busy staring at kripa... kripa frowned and stoppped... then got behind mishty and started walking behind her... adn finally started blushing by teh looks he was giving her... Finally angad saw mishty... she was looking good too but not as much as kripa...

Mishty: sorry angad... i took a little time to get ready...
Angad: its okk... lets go...
Kripa(groaning): can i go home now???
Mishty: kripaaa!!
Kripa: damn!

Party...

kripa was bored to hell... she was sitting in a corner doin nothing... she came with mishty and missed teh pool party for this??? she frwned adn continued drinking her 8th? soda in an hour... she burped slowly and sighed... she got another soda and started drinkign it... her goal was 10 mnore soda's over the next hour...

she felt a hand on her shoulder and she jerked almost dropping the drink... she looked at who it was and frowned... it was Yash Khanna... dear father of Angad... he was grinning big... kripa frowned deeper...

Yash: how are you miss sharma?
Kripa(sarcastic): On Top Of The World!(she leaned to him) how about we talk outside... i dont want angad seeing us together...

Out in eth garden...

as soon as they reach outside... he gives kripa a fatherly hug...

Kripa: great! you remember mee! and your stupid son doesn't!!!!!
yash: If he doesn't remember you then why did he bring u here?
Kripa: he didn't bring mee here.... he brought mishty here... my cousin... i just tagged along cuz she was "nervous/scared" to meet you... He "loves" her and she "loves" him... they are "engageed"!!!
yash: oh... OH! welll... i iwll go ina dn tell angad id ont want mishty to be my daughter in law... and i will tell him eth truth...

he was about to go in when kripa hold him back

Kripa: OR.... or you can go in there have a decent convo with mishty adn angad... approve her and start making eth arrangements for the wedding...
Yahs: BUT....
Kripa: Uncle... pls??
Yash: anythign for you...
Kripa: i love you uncle...
Yash: only if you had told him you loved him...
kripa: i guess thats never gonna happen...

they sat on a bench adn talked for a while...

Yash: kripa dontyou think youre not being fair to yourself or angad? he loves you!
Kripa: he LOVED me... heloves mishty now...
Yash: love isn't a game that he loves someone now and other next time...
Kripa(sigh): i know uncle... i thought that too... i thought he would always love me... but... (a tear dropped from her eyes aas she looked at yash) zindagi mein pehli baar laga ki shayad mujhe kuch bina chahe hi mil gaya... shayad bina zidd kiye hi mujhe mil gayi... but i guess God just wants to play with mee fight with mee... (wiped her tears) promise mee uncle... you wont tell him anything... if he loves mee he will remember me himself... if he ever loved mee he will recognize mee... i dont care if he loves mee ornot... all i want is him to not forget mee... ro remember me... to recognize i was teh same girl he had proposed to 5 years ago...

yash wiped her tears and kissed her forehead...

yash: i know him very well kripa... eh hasn't forgotten you... ever since he left Goa... i have seen him talk to your picture.. just stare at teh dance picture for hourss... i have seen him restless at night... not being able to sleep at all... he is guilty kripa.. very guilty...
Kripa: i know uncle... i know he is... but... i dont think i will forgive him if he doesn't recognize mee...

Mishty'a home...

Kripa: FINALLLY!!!

kripa ran upstairs to her room before anyone could ask her any question or anye would talk to her... she NEEDED a hot shower... and she NEEDED to get out of these stupid indo clothes...

angad and mishty looked at her amused by teh speeed she ran... they kissed goodbye and angad left...

sorry i know i said i would continue on monday but continued today... i usually go out with y fiance on weekends and well i was with him yesterday tooo... soo couldn't continue yesterday... here you go teh next part... i might not be able to continue tomorrow... as it is my brother's high school graduation... okk i will leave now...bye bye...
Edited by Disha=) - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
awesome part. hope angad recognizes kripa soon. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
great part!! i hope angad recognizes her soon!! continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i just started reading and may i say that this fanfic is amazing!!! i just love it!! i wonder wat "WHOLE" story is btw them..

great partzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

contine sooooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part 👏 👏
i hope angad will remember kripa and leave mishty?
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART SIX

January 31st...5 am... Kripa's room...

Kripa: but...
Disha: kripa.. you said wait for sometime... today is my brithday... and i am asking you to tell mee everything...NOW!
Kripa: disha di...
Disha: I SAID NOW!!!!
Kripa: ok ok finee... chill...

she took a deep breath...

Kripa: we went to goa.. i met him in a party... we fell in love... he called me and asked mee to meet him in teh same hall where we met... but he never showed up... soo i had been lookign for him ever since... i am madly in love with him... and i am reallllly mad at him... there i told you...
Disha: hmmm but i want more detail...
Kripa: What?? you want me to go to a flashback adn tell you?
Disha: yupppp....
Kripa: uggh fine....

she cleared her throught adn like a real narrator she started her story...

FLASHBACK..

december 31st... new years eve party...

(note: this will be in kripa's point of view)

it was when me and couple of my friends came to goa for teh new year...as you adn prithvi were out for something... the hotel we were staying at had held a new years eve party... soo i decided to go there... i didn't have a date... well duhh who would wanna ogo with mee??? anywayss... so i dressed up and looked into eth mirror... i am not bragging but i looked like a princess... waiting for her prince charming...

soon we all went downstairs when i saw him... he was perfect... just perfect... as hot as ever... my prince... i neveer really believed in love at first sight but seeing him i felt like i was already in love with him...and as we have met before... i justs tared at him... i didn't know if i was drooling but i could've been drooling... anywyass abck to him... yea soo he looked at mee... and looked right into my eyes... his eyes... oh thoise gorgeous eyes... i could feel myself getting drowned into them... he stood up and walked toards mee... is tarted getting nervous but stood firm...

he asked mee for a dance i merely said yes...well duhh why wouldn't i?? i mean he was teh hottest and teh sexiest guy in teh whole party... and he asked ME to dance!we danced...adn danced and danced and danced...

my arms were wraped around his neck adn our bodies were pressed against eachother... his hands were firmly around my waist... i rested my head on his shoulder... we hadn't spoken a word... but we seem to know what we were saying to eachother... finally after a longggggggggggggggg silence... he said...

" we've dancing for a long time... and yet we dont know eachother... i am angad...angad khanna..."

" glad you finally said something... i am kripa..kripa sharma..." i said grinnign like an idiot...

he looked amused at my answer... i blushed adn buried my head in his shoulder inhaling his smell..



now we two were talking... its been an hour..and we know almost everythign about eachother... we sat on the beach...about 5 mins away frome the party... we were in eachother's arm.... and out hands were interwine together... adn all teh whiel we talked my eyes were in the interwined fingers... oh you can know how it must fel to sit in the beach... on a moonlight night... in a guy's arm... it feels like heaven... for a minutei thought it was just a silly crush like all teh teenagers have... adn welll we both were teenagers as well... i mean 17 and 19 are teenagers right???

sooon it was time... we saw the fireworks... angad closed his eyes and took a deep breath... then he looked at mee adn smiled...

Angad: HAPPY NEW YEAR...
Kripa: HAPPY NEW--

before i could say it back... he crushed his lips into mine... and all i did was shudder... and then returned eth kiss... the kiss was not tender but not hard either... it was just we needed...wanted... as we kissed there the fireworks worked in teh sky... isn;t that just like a fairytale where you always say that when you kiss "the one" there should be fireworks going on... your head should almost explode... thats what hapened...

after a long passionate kiss... unwillingly he pulled away... we both breathed deeply... then he looked at me... i pulled him closer and kissed him... and this time he kissed mee untill we could no longer breath... as we sat there making out... we hear d someone clear their throat...

Someone: ahhem ahhem

we broke our kiss and flushed in embarrassment... it was his dad...

Angad: uhhh... dad? what are you doing here?
Dilp: umm to get fresh air and to watch teh fireworks... ummm i dont need bother ask what YOU were doing here... but i will ask anywayss... What are you doign here???
Angad: ummm...

i was red from head to toe... i was soooo embarrassed... his dad laughed and helped us stand up... he leaned in adn whispered to us...

Dilip: next time you feel like having a "make-out session" do it somehwere private....

he patted my head and walked away... me adn angad were totally red... he leaned in and pulled mee into his arms adn kissed my cheek...

Angad: see thats how cool my dad is...

i just rolled my eyes... his dad came again...

Dilip: i wanna take a picture of you tooo...
Angad: sure...

he took out and picture and we posed for it... just as he clicked angad kissed my cheek and i gasped..and tahts how the picture turned out... but it was really adorable... i asked him for one copy of that...

kripas story will continue tomorrow... i am tired..need some sleep... good night everyone...didn't have time to proof read it...soo might have some mistakes....
Edited by Disha=) - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nyce part!! wowie love at first sighttt eh? sweet.. that was so diff.. how they just knew it by staring at each other and talking through their eyse.. loved it.. waitin for u to contt !! Cont Soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. awesome part. cant wait 2 read more of the flashback. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice part, i really enjoyed it! it was too cute hope Angad and Kripa will be together after the flashbacks😕 continue soon can't wait fore more! 👏
Laiba😊

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