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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwww!! lol that was so cute....angad and kripa are both in love with one another and finally they realize it...wooohooo great part as always dear please do continue soon c=
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part; atlast realization of love has dawned upon him and he is thankfully not bringing the age to a concern; excellent part; it was eally nicely conveyed; every bit of it; form his feelings to the bet; kripa's teenage bloom of having a crush and the simple kiss which did the magic. I guess no one can stop him to know what really was under that sundress of hers now😉 lovely part; keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey evey one i would like to thank every one for the great comments and i will continue the next part as soon as i get the chance, right now i am working on writing part four for my other fan fic so be on a look out for an update for that fan fic also
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Posted: 17 years ago
fab parts just loved it👏 AK's relationship is midblowing....
the dares r the best... just loved them...
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Fab part 👏finally angad has realized he is love with kripa and that it's not just attraction and thankgod he has stop thinking about the whole age thing. i must say kripa was very lucky to get such a dare 😆...wonder what's going to happen next ...do continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
your ff is so awesome
i read like three of your ff and there all so good
i love this one it was so funny what the girls did to angad and finally he knows that he loves kripa
plzzzzz cont....soon cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey every one i would like to thank every one for the great comments and i will be continue the next part hopefully today as i am half way thought writing part 16 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13

your ff is so awesome

i read like three of your ff and there all so good
i love this one it was so funny what the girls did to angad and finally he knows that he loves kripa
plzzzzz cont....soon cant wait for the next part

i am glad to know you find my fan fics good😃 and glad to know you like this fan fic also 😊 yep the girl had quite a lot of fun messing around with Angad alright😆
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Town Fair

When early morning came the next day Angad had already made breakfast for the girls and was just more then ready to kick all the wild child girls out of his small cabin size of a house, he wanted to be alone with Kripa so badly he wanted to throw him self on to that young girl so badly it almost scared the crap out of him!

The fresh smell of breakfast got the girls out of Kripa's room pretty quickly and Angad throwing an alarm clock in to Kripa's room also had a little of something to do with it. The girls came awake with tired eyes and pulled backed hair in ponytails out towards the kitchen counter.

The girls dug there forks and spoons into there breakfast whining and complaining of the early time they were woken up. "Angad can Kripa come with me to the town fair from my house today" Jane said with a bright smile, she had one of those faces that most adults just couldn't refuse towards but then again Angad wasn't a completely old adult.

"What, sorry Jane but I don't think so" he said hoping she would just drop the subject, he really wanted to talk to Kripa alone when the girls felt and if she ended up leavening with the girls out the door with the rest, he would never get the chance to talk to her alone till late a night, when the town fair ended.

"please, please, please" She did a puppy dog face, the one Angad hated with all his guts mostly because it always got him to agree to stuff he didn't want to do, he begged the gods that his own daughter one day wouldn't learn this very tricky talented trick.

"ugh…Fine! Go" As soon as he said this though gritted teeth Kripa and Jane jumped up in joy, they both ran back to Kripa's room the get her things to wear at the festival. Through the closed door Angad and the rest of the girls still having their breakfast could hear Jane and Kripa talking "hey Kripa, you should wear this sun dress it would look dam good on you" He head Jane say and he wanted to kick that chick so hard for suggesting Kripa to wear a sun dress the same one that got him thinking of play battleship with Kripa in bed except not using the board and little game piece.

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At the festival Kripa noticed Angad no where to be seen, she was a little disappointed, she had expected him to come as the entire town of highland was there, even the town groceries store was close and that place never closed for any event. She and Jane were sitting on the back of one of the high school football player truck talking to few of the guys having a great time, but still she couldn't help but look around to see if Angad was any where to be seen.

"Your Kripa right?" One of the guys came up to Kripa at the side of the truck with a basketball in his hand, with the obviouse suggestion that more then likely he was a basketball player at Highland High School named after the town.

"Yep she in indeed Kripa." Jane answered for Kripa the quickly whispered in her ear. "That is the most cutes and hottest guys in school talk girl" Jane said nudging her to the other end of the truck where the girl was looking at her from.

"Hi, I'm Justin" He let out a hand for Kripa to sake, at first she wasn't sure about it but then put her hands in to his. She noticed his hands to be strong a bit ruff, figured from him being a basketball player.

He stood up on one of the tires when Kripa grabbed his hand and made his way on to the truck beside Kripa.

"Haven't seen you around Highland much, what high school do you go to?" he said with a flashing grin that quickly disappeared when Kripa answered his question

"I don't, I dropped out last year" this got every one around that was busying talking to shut up and look at her, even Jane didn't know that Kripa was a drop out she only thought that she was visiting and that was about it.

All the kid in highland always finished high school no matter what happened all the kids finished high school it didn't matter if they decided not to go to collage but high school was like an untold rule for the kids in highland, if you didn't finish high school it was like you were, well they really didn't know, all they knew was high school was one thing you had to pass in order to be excepted into Highland society.

"You're a drop out!" Justin said with eyes wide in amazement. No one would have guess for her to be a drop out, she looked to be such a sweet girl, no tattoos, or hit of her being a drug dealer. For crying out loud she was staying with Angad Khanna the guy who graduated from IV league geniuses center.

Jane was speechless her thoughts were trailing the same was Justin's were, she would have never in a million years thought that Kripa was a drop out!

"um, why is every one staring at me like that" Kripa said and noticed a lot of high school students looking at her except for a few who didn't seem to be bothered by her last statement.

"Sorry it's just, none of us have met any one that was a drop out before" Justin said in bewilderment. He didn't understand what could cause such a sweet girl to drop out of high school.

"Well I kind of got kicked out of school and then I never really thought it important to go back" And this put every own even more in shock, what could have Kripa possibly done to be kicked out of school. She must have done something super in order to be a drop out and to be kicked out must be ten times worst.

Before Kripa to say anything else to get the award stares around her to stop looking at her about a twenty guys surrounded Jane and Kripa with words say "that's so cool" "what you do" etcetera, etcetera.

"Um, Kripa, we better get out of here" Jane said in a nervous tone as more and more guys started to crowed around in amazement. It wasn't like Jane minded the attention but she just wanted to get away from the tension of so many guys around them.

"Right behind you" Kripa said as Jane leaped off the truck and Kripa followed, she had no idea the people in highland high would have been so amazed with the fact that she was a high school drop out.

Ran away from the crowed to a safer calmer place, headed for the soft drinks to catch their breath. "Note to self, keep drop out story to self" Kripa said out loud as Jane nodded her head in agreement also trying to catch her breath from the extreme run they just did.

"Kripa, I think we broke the world record for the fastest run time" Jane said who clearly wasn't a type of person that found jogging a fun pass time.

As soon a both girls settled around, Kripa looked around hoping to spot Angad but still she found no sign of him.

"Who are you looking for" Jane said when she noticed Kripa looking around

"Angad" Jane gave a little laugh when she heard Kripa say his name

"He never comes to these town festivals, its really rare when he comes, I think he avoids it because of the women, a few years ago he came to the festivals and all the women were all up in him, he just never came back." when Jane said this Kripa was extremely disappointed, she had really wanted to see Angad. She knew she was in love with the man but she also knew that he didn't love her back. And why would he she was five years younger then him as much as she wanted to throw him in bed with her she had to remind her self that guys like him never would like a girl like her.

She thought to her self how easy it was to imagine him in bed but then how scary it felt to think about really doing it with him. Shivers went down her spine as she thought about the crazy idea of him really in her bed, when he had kissed her weeks back; her whole body felt shivers down to the bone and the thought of actually doing it…the thought of just him touching her in places no man ever had made her want to scream.

"But why are you looking for Angad?" Jane asked in wonder, Kripa blushed at Janes comment; she really wanted to tell someone of what she was feeling. Usually she kept every things to her self but this feeling that she was feeling for Angad, she wanted to tell some one any one and she knew Jane could be trusted.

"I think, I might be…" she tried to get the words out but just the word love didn't seem to cover every thing that she was feeling for the man.

"You think you might be what?" Jane asked in curiosity.

"I think I might be in love with him" And as soon as she said that Jane's mouth dropped open,

"Your in love with ANGAD KHANNA!" she said maybe a bit to loud as every one in the festival from the gate way all the way in the back turned their heads and looked at Kripa and Jane with there mouth hanging open in shock until one of the elderly lady shocked from the middle of the festival field "finally!" and as soon as the lady said this every one cheered. A lot of the elderly woman and older men came up to Kripa with large smiling faces.

"your Kripa right"? I'm Mrs. Georgina, I have been trying to set up Angad Khanna with a date for so long and here you are in love with him. Just watch this whole town help you win his love" she said with such a large smile.

Kripa was so embarrassed to the wits; she didn't know what to say. The whole town just found out she was in love with Angad Khanna and instead of laughing or making fun of her they were trying to help her! She was surprised and embarrassed so badly she just didn't know what to say.

"We first got to make Khanna jealous then he will know what he is losing out on!" some one yelled from the crowd that was starting to go around Kripa.

"No lock them in a room together" someone else yelled

Just as fast as ideas and crowd was gathering every one ran away to do there own thing at the festival when they noticed Angad coming around the corner towards the festival, talking on his cell phone.

As soon as Angad noticed Kripa he turned off his phone and went up to her, "thought I would come check up on you, so are you liking the festival." Kripa could feel hear cheeks heat up from the embarrassment a few minutes ago and was even more embarrassed to know that every one in town was pretending they didn't know anything about Kripa's feeling towards Angad when in fact she was madly in love with him.

Mrs. Blueberry from the flower shop came up to Kripa and gave a slight grin pushing her a little from the back towards Angad. This gesture made Kripa even more on fire of embarrassment, she didn't like the idea of every one, literally every one in town knowing she was in love with Angad Khanna.

"Yeah we are having a great time" by saying that she turned around grabbing Jane by the arm and walked away from Angad

Whispering in Jane's ear Kripa said "You better knew how to use a gun because I'm going to kill the crap out of you once we are alone.

Angad was a bit disappointed at how curtly Kripa went away from him, he had actually thought it was going to be easy to get Kripa to fall for him but now he was starting to think other wise from how little she spoke to him. He didn't even get a chance to tell her he liked her dress that she was wearing but then again that dress really made him go crazy for the girl beneath the dress even more.

He looked around a little hoping to find someone to talk to, only to notice Al the pancake house owner giving him a more then a friendly gaze, if any one else had such a friendly smile on them for him, Angad wouldn't have thought any thing of it but Al hated his guts for the past three years. Why the hell was he smiling like a mad man? That was when he noticed Al wasn't the only one giving a funny smile towards him about five of six people around him were giving him funny looks and the closer he walked towards other towns people they all gave him the overly friendly smile of a look. He knew then that every one in town knew something he didn't.

Hey every one I hope you liked this part and I will continue the next part as soon as I get the chance. Please do comment as they mean a lot. Lol I wasn't expecting to make this part so long but I just got carried away in typing up this part I didn't really noticed how long it ended up being.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww that was such a cute part😳 I liked the ways kripa knmows how to make angad say yes; its sweet. lol and then the high school drop out thing, lol they found cool but oh well. and omg jane embarassed her. She let the whole town know, lol now thats funny and sweet; awww I guess angad will fulfuill his fantasy as soon as he can, as it is, he's gettong quite impatient with that sudress of hers😉 awesome part; I wonder how kripa's parents would react if they ever found out
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