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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG!!! i just caught up with this FF!!! and i LOVE it!!! you just keep getting better and better at writing FFs!!! i know this was supposed to be a sad and depressing FF, but i find it funny... like AK fighting and the things they say to each other, WOW!!! poor Angad nothing is worse than 15 teenaged girls, lol... dying to read more, continue soon!!!! 🙂

p.s. i agree with the person above, Angad should really stop being so mature!!! 😉

glad to know that you liked this fan fic and i am even more happy to know that you found humor in the fan fic also🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago

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lol i actually thought about haveing Angad kiss Kripa in front of every one but i thought of it to be way to soon because they arent in love yet its just the start of the love pocess😆

nah i think you just wanted to make the reader wish for that😆 ok then do start on this love process soon😆😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey amazing part as always Rejected ... I rilli liked the sleepover part..must say.. u hv amazing ideas!! This part was so totally lykk our-generation-type.. U noe lykk teenage type!!
Well I do'nt have ne words 2 say..am just amazed.. I had damn gud fun reading this part..wish I wz in Kripas place
I also like the way you've potrayed Kripa
I just hv 1 thng to say - 'Amazing!!'
Plzz cont soon..
srry 4 d shrt comment
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh yay ur finally back...ahh i'm sooo happy😃😃..i loved all your ffs esp this one...its very unique ..well i'll be back to comment later after i catch up on this one and also for you "the other" ff too
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Posted: 17 years ago

Always Pick Dare

"Okay, Kripa it's your turn." Angad had retired to his room for the night; unlucky he couldn't hear the girls and their silly game any more. But he couldn't help but smile at the way Kripa's eyes looked when he had fallen on top of her. He continued to lie on his bed with both his hands to the back of his head being used as a pillow. God she was beautiful, he had to admit she maybe young but she was one hell of a beauty. Maybe he shouldn't think of this age thing as an importance. What is he thinking, she is only eighteen, and maybe its only attraction nothing more he told him self. Angad couldn't debate in his head correctly if what he felt for Kripa was love and care or just simple attraction. Then he thought of the way he had kissed her before she had changed to a glamour girl, he loved the way her lips had felt on his then maybe it wasn't just attraction maybe it was something he felt for her when he was close to her. He shook his head settling it to him self that attraction was all it was and felt it at that.

"Okay, I pick Dare" Kripa said back in her room. The night was still pretty young for a sleep over as it was still only twelve thirty.

This time it was Jane's turn to make up the dare. She had to do a crazy dare before of pulling down Angad's pants; this dare had to be equally good, or even better. She had to make this dare worth wild, something that would get the party really going crazy and excited. She thought about daring Kripa to strip in front of Angad but then thought against it. This dare had to be something better something good.

"Got it, Kripa you have to go up to Angad and kiss him, on the lips" Jane said in laughter while the girls were again in all ooos and aaas. Kripa blushed at the thought remembering the kiss she had shared with Angad before. In just a few days Kripa started to develop such a crush on Angad, it was so teenager type but it shouldn't matter, as she was a teenager.

She wasn't scared of kissing Angad it was the thought of his reaction that scared Kripa. She didn't want to kiss him if it would cause akward and weridness between them, she liked the friendship that he and her shared and she just didn't want to ruin it by a stupid dare. She told her self in her head 'never pick dare' and then stood heading out her own bedroom and towards Angad's

The girls followed behind Kripa as she opened Angad's bedroom door she saw him lying on the bed, as soon as she called his name he sat up slowly a bit dazed. He noticed Kripa in his room and the girls all crowed around the door with big grins and giggles on their face. Oh god now what, he thought. It was obvious what ever the girls had planed it had something that Kripa was supposed to do.

"Okay, spill what is the dare supposed to be now?" He said rolling his eyes looking at the girls who started giggling more.

Kripa felt ridicules and turned around to leave but the girls at the door pushed Kripa back in to Angad's room. She could feel her face turn red in embarrassment.

"Okay Kripa, do what ever crazy thing they dared you to do, I don't care nothing can be worse then have yawl pull down my pants." He said lying back down on the bed as if the girls had never entered the room or were in his room at the moment. He just told himself no one was in the room and closed his eyes letting what ever the girls had planed to let them do it as they out numbered him and it wasn't like he could do anything about it.

That was when he felt something heavy creep on top of his body very slowly; it put shivers though his spin so sharply. He opened his eyes to see Kripa lying on top of him; her green eyes were looking in to his brown ones. She looked so young so…so innocent.

"Kripa?" he said in a quite whisper that only she heard and no other in the room. His voice called her name out in beauty and question at the same time. He didn't jump or push her away from her lying on top of him; he liked her where she was. He wanted her to stay. He didn't hold her back she he was aware of his surroundings and knew that they weren't the only ones in the house, or the only ones watching.

Kripa slowly brought her lips closer toward's Angad, her movements were so slow, he had plenty of time to push her away, still he was so draw in to her eyes to even notice her gestures moving closer and closer towards him.

Her lips softly touched him and that was when he completely lost sense of what was going on, or who was round the place all he knew was that this was more then just attraction it was love, it is love, he was in love with Kripa. Before he could dare to kiss her back she already took her lips off of him, looked at him for a moment and then gave a lazy smile.

"Sorry I was dared" after, saying that she got off of Angad and ran out with the giggling girls. Before she left behind the girls she turned back at the door to look at Angad and she saw him looking at her from his bed with a large smile on his face. Something that made her heart flip inside out and she to gave a wonderful smile back understand that she was in love then she to ran behind the giggling girls back to her room in glee and happiness.

She told her self in her head always pick dare. And continued to smile her heart out.

Hey every one I know this is a short part but I have been a bit busy lately I hope you liked this part and please do comment as they do mean something, I will continue the next part a soon as I get the chance and as for those who were waiting for Angad to get over his age thing, well yawl got your wish.
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Posted: 17 years ago
finally he realized he loves her no he wont let her go now its kripas turn to realize wat she feels it was so cute rani and thanks for fulfiling our wishes plz cont soon will wait.
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Posted: 17 years ago
YEAH!!!!!!!!
He Realizes he loves her
OMGG I WAS SMILING THROUGH OUT THE PART
(MY MOUSE THING WaS ON TEH P OF PART SO IT LOOKED lyk fart)
Mii cheeks hurt from smiling so big
LOL
GREAT PART, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON. nd Pm me when u continue
😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome hun no complains i mean they both finally realized that they love each other, just too good, it was so funny when angad was like kripa do watever you want anyways do cont soon loved it i am still laughing
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Posted: 17 years ago

yayy!! angad realized that he loves kripa! and finaly he got over the age thing!!

and i think kripa's in love as well!!
aww this part was soo cute!
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely part.....they realized their love for each other....can't wait to see what happens next
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