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hi friends . I am back. Will try my best to update soon . For now it's a very small part. I will try to post big parts from next time😉

Edited by SAMAR KAPOOR - 17 years ago
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Shimla:

Deepika enters into the cabin of Shraddha where she was standing with a bag.

Deepika: Kya hua Shraddha? Mujhe kyun bulaya?

Shraddha: Actually Deepika. Maine tumhe kuch cheezeind dene ke liye bulaya tha jo hum logon kp Pratham ke paas se mili thi.

Saying this, she gives the bag to Deepika who put her right hand into the bag and found something in the shape of a cross and took it out.It was the chain with the cross Pratham used to wear. She looks at it and a smile appeared on her lips.

Deepika:ye chaindekh rahi ho Shraddha. Ye Pratham hamesha pehanta tha. He has deep belief in his jesus.

Shraddha: Jaisa tumhe hai. Kaali maa par.

Deepika(with a smile on her lips): Haan. Aur aaj Pratham jinda bach paaya hai to sirf apne jesus ki wajah se.Inhone Prathamka saath us waqt diya jab use sabse jyada jaroorat thi.

Deepika puts back the cross in the bag and her hand felt something strange in it this time . She took it out in her hand and found a pump.

Deepika: What's tht?

Shraddha: That's a pump for asthmatic patients.

Deepika(a little bit confused):What? But what it's doing here?

Shraddha: We found it with Pratham.

Deepika(unable to understand anything): What? But Pratham is not having such problem

Shraddha: He is Deepika. We found that in his check up. And i think he is suffering from it from a long time.

Deepika was unable to beleive what Shraddha told her. Pratham and asthmatic? He never told her anything about that.

Deepika: Lekin Shraddha. Usne mujhe to is baare mein kabhi kuch nahi bataya.

Shraddha: Shayad woh kisi ko is baare mein batana na chahta ho kyunki use lagta ho ki is baare mein jaankar log usse hamdardi jatayenge.

Deepika(in a low voice): Ho sakta hai.

Shraddha: Maine tumhe yahan isliye bulaya Deepika ki main tumhe bata sakoonki use liye kya kya khatarnaak ho sakta hai.

Saying this, she gave her each and every detail about Pratham's disease which Deepika listened very carefully .

Shraddha: Ok tht's it Deepika.Maine tumhe sab kuch bata diya hai. Ab Pratham ki saari responsibility tumhare upar hai.Aur yaad rakhna. Woh pehle jaisa tha, ab waisa bilkul nahi hai. Isliye ho sakta hai tumhe use handle karne mein pareshaaniho. Jaisa tumne bataya , Kanan ke incident ke baad woh zindagi jeena poori tarah bhool chuka tha, to shayad ab woh apni zindagi wahin se shuru kar raha hai. Use kuch nahi pata ki uske saath kya kya ho chuka hai. Dheere dheere jaise jaise woh purane logon se milta jaayega , usko halka halka yaad aana shuru hoga. Ya aisa nahi bhi ho sakta. Lekin yaad rahe, any kind of bad shock is very dangerous for him this time. Abhi uska dimaag aisa kuch sehan nahi kar paayega. Isliye u have to be extra careful.

Deepika: Don't worry Shraddha. Mujh par bharosa rakho. Main tumhare dost ko kuch nahi hone dungi.

Shraddha: I know Deepika. Tum par bharosa hai, isliye to tumhare saath use bhej rahin hoon. (Looking at the clock) I think it's too late now. Tumhe subah jaldi nikalna hai.

Deepika: OK. Goodnight Shraddha.

Shraddha: Goodnight.

Deepika left her cabin after that whereas she kept on thinking something after that.

Next morning:

Deepika opened her eyes, as she felt someone singing outside .She put on her slippers in her feet and slowly came out of her ward. She looked here and there and her feet automatically started moving towards the garden and was amazed founding that source of song. Pratham was walking in one direction with the help of his stick

Pratham: Kyon Hawa Aaj Yun Ga Rahi Hai...(2)
Kyon Fiza Rang Chhalka Rahi Hai
Mere Dil Bata Aaj Hona Hai Kya
Chaandni Din Mein Kyun Chha Rahi Hai
Zindagi Kis Taraf Ja Rahi Hai
Mere Dil Bata Kya Hai Ye Silsila
Kyon Hawa Aaj Yun Ga Rahi Hai,
Ga Rahi Hai, Ga Rahi Hai

Deepika started following him in amazement whereas he kept on walking. He then stopped at one place which was a little bit calmer and less crowded. He then looked in all directions with pleased eyes and a smile on his lips whereas Deepika hided herself behind a tree so that he could not see her.

Pratham:( Jahan Tak Bhi Jayein Nigahein
Baraste Hain Jaise Ujale )...(2)

(Looking at the path and then touching the flowers)
Saji Aaj Kyun Hain Ye Raahein
Khile Phool Kyun Hain Nirale

Closing his eyes

Khushbuein Kaisi Ye Bah Rahi Hain
Dhadkanein Jane Kya Kah Rahi Hai

Opening his eyes and nodding his head smilingly

Mere Dil Bata Ye Kahani Hai Kya
Kyon Hawa Aaj Yun Ga Rahi Hai,
Ga Rahi Hai, Ga Rahi Hai

Suddenly he heard a female voice singing with him and looked in that direction. He saw a lady in white salwar kameez with white bangles singing and running in that direction. She was away from him that's why he was not able to saw her.

Pratham(walking in that direction):

( Yeh Kiska Hai Chehra Jise Main
Har Ek Phool Mein Dekhta Hoon )... (2)

As he reached near her, she disappeared. He was in a confusion and looking here and there when two arms with white bangles came ehind him and took him into her grip from behind:

Pratham(without looking back):

Yeh Kiski Hai Aawaz Jisko
Na Sun Ke Bhi Main Sun Raha Hoon

He turned back but noone was there.

Pratham(smiling on his illusion):Kaisi Ye Aahtein Aa Rahi Hain
Kaise Ye Khwab Dikhla Rahi Hain
Mere Dil Bata Kaun Hai Aa Raha
Kyon Hawa Aaj Yun Ga Rahi Hai
Ga Rahi Hai, Ga Rahi Hai

As he finished his song, he heard someone clapping for him. He turned back and found Deepika standing there, clapping for him.

Pratham(blushingly): Deepika tum!

Deepika came near him with her heartwarming smile

Deepika: Kya baat hai! Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki tum itna accha ga bhi lete ho.

Pratham: Thanks. Main to bas aise hi...... Waise tum kab aayin?

Deepika: Jab tum apne aap mein hi khoye hue the. But u sing really well.

Pratham: Thanks once again.

They both kept on looking at each other for sometime as none of them had anything to speak.

Deepika(a little bit embarassed): Chalein!

Pratham: Haan haan why not.

They both smiled and started walking towards the hospital.

Edited by SAMAR KAPOOR - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow thx for coni and welcome back. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow thx for coni and welcome back. 👏

thanks a lot. I will try to post the next part soon😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

wow..Samar bhai u came back wth a bang👏

simply awsome..i said i hav faith n da brilliant writer n u..n nw u hav proven dat ts true..simply wonderful👍🏼..im luking forward 2 reading da rest f dis fabulous story..jst cant wait 2 see da interactions btween all f them n dis new view f pratham's memory loss n his new outluk 2wards lyf😳specially im luking forward 2 da way bhoomi n pratham react 2wards each other..

pls post da next part as soon as u can..i js cant say hw happy im 2 read da rest f dis lovely story😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow great part tooo good thx dear. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hoie hoie... Kya baat hai! Mere bhai aaye aur dhamaake se vo bhi... Short and sweet shayad isi ko kehte hain 😳 I like that song by the way bhai and achcha laga you used it... Hmm... Kaheen Pratham apne pyaar ko jiska chehera nahi dikha use Dipika to nahi manega 😳 Wah... Jaldi waiting for the next part 👏
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Originally posted by: princessunara

wow..Samar bhai u came back wth a bang👏

simply awsome..i said i hav faith n da brilliant writer n u..n nw u hav proven dat ts true..simply wonderful👍🏼..im luking forward 2 reading da rest f dis fabulous story..jst cant wait 2 see da interactions btween all f them n dis new view f pratham's memory loss n his new outluk 2wards lyf😳specially im luking forward 2 da way bhoomi n pratham react 2wards each other..

pls post da next part as soon as u can..i js cant say hw happy im 2 read da rest f dis lovely story😳

thanks a lot sunara for your lovely comments😊. Actually i am trying my best to regain the lost touch and that part was a step in that direction.May be i will be able to write the next part much better than this. And yes, u will be able to see all of them interactiing with each other very soon and Pratham is gonna be the guy he used to be before Kanan's death. Pratham and Bhoomi's relation.aaa... can't say anything about that😉 u have to wait .I am sure u will defo enjoy the next parts too. Til then tc and bye😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow great part tooo good thx dear. 👏

thanks once again dear. I will post the next parts soon😊

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thanks a lot. I will soon😊

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