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nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#61

nice prologue with funny parts!

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Nikki

@Chick91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

great prologue!! 👏
nice funny parts 😆

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Rani

@Rejected

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

that was a great prologue i think it is great start your fan fic soon cant wait to read it 😃

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mansi

@mansi1219

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#64

hiya!

me back again... yay!

ok... nice promos and prologues... the kripa sounds so much diff.. before and after.. i guess she is in 6th grade.. so neway.. good job wit hte prologue.. def. soudnede like a 12 year old writing it.. ok me gonnma comment on PP now.. 😃

luv ya ..

mansi

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neha9

@neha9

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: mitali_s
vry nyc prologue...loved it...r u gonna rite thif ff in first person?

No, just the journal entries.

Originally posted by: sahr_8
hehe the only thing i loved was this line "her chest is like getting puffy " lolzzz
cant wait for the actual story

lol... yeah.

Originally posted by: mansi1219
hiya!

me back again... yay!

ok... nice promos and prologues... the kripa sounds so much diff.. before and after.. i guess she is in 6th grade.. so neway.. good job wit hte prologue.. def. soudnede like a 12 year old writing it.. ok me gonnma comment on PP now.. 😃

luv ya ..

mansi

Mansiiiiii Ur back!!! Yahh... anyways... gld you liked it.. lol. Yeah, the first draft was very complicated, so i re-wrote it and made sure it sounded a little more dumb lol...

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@ishu124

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

wow. that was one stupid 13 year old. uff...seriously..her chest is getting fuzzy...haha. listen in science..they will explain nature science..

man this kid need to go out into the real world...out of the circle.

that was good neha..cant wait for the next part.

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simply.me

@simply.me

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#67

g8 prologue neha...looks like another brilliant ff....continue soon...

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amna

@Mrs.Fr..

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#68

AWWWWWWWWWWW neha it remind me more about wen i was 12 years old and used to write such things ...which were crazy equally cute i still have 7 ...diaries LOLZ ...it is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee 😳 ...oh yeah i aws out i read playboy princee too it is going hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm MIND BLOWING 😳

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Sharmin

@Shazii

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#69

that was awesome neha luved it ,i luved the diary entry its cool,i used to have a diary when i was younger but my stupid sister looked through it and i neva wrote one again anyways that was gr8 cant wait for chapter 1 😛