*KISMAT* (Laksh & KT) Pt 2 on Pg5 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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luv the siggy!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thx for the comments everyone. i hope to recieve even more in the future. Here are the character sketches.




KT Sighania - 24 years, she is very bright and friendly. very beautiful. After her mum died she looked after everyone since they were still young. she's a friend, sister,mother and teacher to both her sisters and treats angad exactaly the same as she looked after him when his parents died. loves her family and believes that destiny and dreams can be fulfilled. when her mum died she was 15 years. she's the only one who kind of gets on with their dad.


Kripa Sighania - 20 years, she's very bubbly really close to her sisters and angad. she doesn't get on with her dad for some reason, thinks of KT as her best friend and mother. She was 13 when their mum died. She secretly loves Angad but doesn't exactaly admit it. She goes to a college in Darjeeling and is going to graduate soon, same college as Angad.


Archana Sighania - 15 years, very sweets and charming. Loves KT and Kripa and Angad is her best friend. Thinks of KT as her mother and friend, her mum died when she was 8 years but she doesn't remember her that well because she was sent to boarding school for 4 years. She knows that Angad and Kripa love each other but hasn't told anyone. Hates her dad because she doesn't talk to her and thinks he's unfair.


Angad Khanna - 21 years, very cutue and charming. Very close to KT, Kripa and Archana. When his parents died he was 14 years old. His dad was a very good friend of the Sighania's so they took him in. KT has looked after him since. Sectrelty he loves Kripa but hasn't admitted it yet. He goes to the same college as kripa and is going to graduate soon. Can't see archana or kripa crying but especially KT as she is like his own sister and mother.


Suraj Sighania - Fathe of KT, Kripa and Archana. after his wife Shalini died he has been miserable, he was once a very jolly person. now he is very stone hearted. his best friend and buisness partner was Dillip khanna (Angad's dad) but they died in a car crash so they have looked after Angad since. He only gets on with KT because he thinks she's the most responsible daughter out of the rest and he decides everything without taking other peoples opinions and views.

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Laksh Virani - 25 years, a very cute, handsome and loving person. Helps out in the family buisness. His best friend is his cousin Manthan, he's like a brother to laksh. Shares all his sectres with him and his bhabhi's, Sanjhani and Suhana. Loves to play the guitar. He believes in dreams and making his wishes come true. Loves his parents and can't see anything bad happen to his family. time to time he helps out in the family buisness.


Manthan Virani - 26 years old. A very handsome and charming person. Helps out in the family buisness, very close to his cousin Laksh, treats him like his own brother and shares all his sectrets with him. He is married to Suhana, loves her loads and parents and ofcourse his younger sister, Bhoomi.


Suhana Virani - very beautiful, married to Manthan loves him and gets on very well with sanjhani and laksh.


Sanjhani Virani - very pretty, married to Nakul gets on very well with Suhana and laksh.

The rest of the characters are same except there's no tripiti and tanya. there's nandani and ganga and everyone is happy.
Edited by laksh_ktfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 Luv the Character Sketch. Plz post the first part soon. Waiting eagerly. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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luv the into!!! 👏 👏 👏 i like the characters u av chosen 😃
plz start it soon! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 that looks like everyone is living their life happily... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow amazing INTRO!! 👏 ....pls continue soon!! 😳

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amazing,superb,cool.what else??? 😆 😆 😆 plzzzzzzz continue.......soon 😳 😳
-abhi
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awesome introductions!!Plzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😉😉



Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx for all the lovely comments heres the firt part that everyone was waiting for....

Part 1
A girl is shown running in the rain... she splashes in a puddle and quickly runs into her house which is in a quiet little village near panvel. she opens the door and runs in, she stops to catch her breath... we are show her eyes then her mouth and then her face.... it's KT drenched in the rain.. she runs up to her room and changes into a white churidaar pyjama. KT sits on her bed and takes out a diary from under her pillow, she props up her feet onto the bed and starts to write with a tear stained face...

may kia karo... papa nay mera rishta teh karliya hai..... woh kehtey hai kay larka bohot izzat ghar say hai.... mai abhi shadi nahi karna chaha tey,may kia karo? papa ko kaisay samjao? may arranged marriges may believe nahey kartey lekin merey papa ney meray liyay rishta choose kia hai toh woh larka acha hi ho ga.... may apney papa say hamesha kehtey thi kay may love marriage karoy gi.. jis larkay say mujhe pyar hoga woh duniya ka sabsay acha larka hoga, lekin ab merey shadi jis say ho rahey hai woh merey kismat may hay bhi kay nahi, us ka naam meray hatho pay likha hai kay nahey woh to baad mai pata chalay ga... agar mai shaadi kay liyay haan karo to.

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A boy is shown playing with children in the rain, he is trying to catch one of the children that are running but he misses. The boy finally catches one of the children and sits down, we are shown his eyes then his mouth then his face it's Laksh... he runs back to his house and goes to his room,to have a shower... he comes out and sees his mum standing near the table... it's Ganga.....

G - chalo Laksh ab jaldi say tyar ho jao, tumhey Tulsi dadi kay saath Haridwar jaana hay
L - lekin mom mera jana zaroorey hai?
G - aray, har saal to tumhey jatay ho na unkay saath, pooja kay liyay to aaj kyun nahi?
L - may to asay hi kehraha tha, ofcourse may jao ga.
G - acha, chal tyar hokay neechay ajao, may breakfast tyar kartey hoon.

Laksh gets ready and goes down for breakfast.

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Back in Panvel.....
KT is getting ready when her papa comes and speaks to her
P - beta haridwar janay kay liyay tyar hogayey?
KT - ji papa! aur ap?
P - beta mai is saal bhi mai tumharay saath nahey ah sakta
KT - lekin papa, ap to pehlay har saal meray saath atay thay pooja kay liyay aur ap 3 years say nahey ayey
P - mujhey kuch kaam hai zaroorey, tum Archana kay saath akeley chaley jao
KT - par papa ap bhi toh hamaray saath chalay na...
P - mainay mana kar diya na.... to kar diya, mujhey is baray may aur baath nahi karney tum apni behen kay saath haridwar jaa rahey ho pooja kay liyay, tum loog 3'o'clock tak tyar rehnay, may kisey ko behj do ga tumhay station tak chornay kay liyay.
KT - ji papa.

KT goes and wakes up her little sister, Archana.....
KT - archana, utho bohot dair hogayey hai, aj humay haridwar bhi jaana hai
Archana - par didi, mujhey nahi jaana.
KT - aisay nahey bol tey, aur aj to hum akelay ja rahay hai, papa bhi nahey ah rahay humaray saath.
A - to ismay kaun si naey baath hai? wo to kabhi bhi nahey atay.
KT - aisay nahey bol thay, chalo utho
A - didi, kia papa phir say hum ko akela behj rahay hay?
KT - unkey majboori hay, unay kuch kaam hai, chalo ab jaldi say tyar ho jao, humay mandir bhi jaana hai.

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KT and archana reach the mandir, they go and pray to kali maa.
KT (to herself) - maa, ap meray papa aur behen ki raksha karnay, main un dono say bohot pyaar kartey hoon, merey shadi honay wali hai, phir archanha akeli reh jayey gi, uskay dil may say papa kay liyay jo nafrat hai woh nikal dena maa, woh dil ki bohot achey hay, aur may chahatey ho kay papa aur archana dono bohot hi khush rahay, mujhay aur kuch nahi chahey hai.

Archana ( to herself) - ap merey didi ko khush rakhna, woh mera aur papa ka bohot khyaal raktey hain, unho nay mujhey maa ki tarha pala hai, mai unsay bohot pyarr kartey hoon, unhey kuch na ho, jab didi ki shaadi ho jayey gi, to may unhay bohot yaad karogey, lekin unhay hamesha khush rakhna mujhey aur kuch nahi chahey hai, papa kay liyay kuch nahey mango gey, woh to mujh-say baat bhi nahey kartay.

Archana and KT make their way home but Archana stops four streets away from their house.
KT - kia hua?
A - did ap mujhey aur kripa didi ko bhulay gi to nahey? ap ki shaadi ho rahey hay phir may bilkul akeli reh jaogi.
KT looks at her youngest sister with love-filled eyes before speaking
KT - Ay pagli may tumhay kabhi nahey bhoolo gi, samjey?
Archana hugs KT. KT ruffles Archana's hair before speking.
KT - dekho Archana, tumhay apna sapna bhi toh pura karna hai na? tumhay ik bohot achey writer bana hay. tum mehnat say parhai karna phir dekhna mai,papa,kripa or tumhara best friend angad kitnay khush hogay.
A - lekin did, apko apna sapna pora nahey karna? kuch ban kay dekhanay ka?
KT - haan, par ab kismat ko kaun rokh sakta hai? chalo humay ghar jakay haridwar kay liyay bhi tayar hona hay.

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Laksh meanwhile is ready wiating for his tulsi dadi. Pari, Laksh's cousin sister, goes by and sees laksh day-dreaming.
Pari goes up to him and screams in his ear:
P - KIA SOCH RAHAY HO BHAIYA?
L - aray! pari yeh kia kar rahey ho?
P - bhaiya ap kis soch rahay hai?
L - kuch nahey
P - kia phir app uskay baray may soch rahay hai? apney pari kay?
L - tumhay kaisay pata chala?
P - aray Laksh bhaiya ap hamesha to uskay hi baray may baath kartay hai, aj to bata hi day, kaisay hogey wo?
L - Meri Pari to sabse alag hogey
(KT is shown getting ready)
Usay sajnay sawarnay ka bohot shok hogay
(KT is putting kajjal on her eyes)
Woh apnay hato may kangan pehenay gi aur phir unhay kan khai gi (she's going to wear bangles in her hands and then make them make a noise)
(KT puts on her kangan)
Woh jab chalay gi to uski payal ki chan chan sab sun kay khush hojayey gay.
(KT puts on her payal)
Pata nahey kaha milaygey mujhey meri pari. Laksh ruffles the back of his hair.
L - lekin wo jaisey bhi hogey wo bilkul alag hogey, sab larkio say alag. Laksh snaps out of his dream.
L - array pari tum idhar hi ho? jao Tulsi dadi say kaho jaldi ayay.
Tulsi comes outside and sees Laksh waiting.
T - chalo Laksh, humay waisey hi deer ho rahey hai
L - acha chalay.

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A mandir is shown there are lots of people praying to God. KT is standing towards the front.
KT - ay bhagwan ap ghar may sab teek rakhna, Kripa aur Angad kay graduation honay walaey hai isliyay un dono ko khush rakhna aur papa aur archana ki raksha karna.
L - ap ghar may sabko khush rakhna, mujhey ayr kuch nahey chahey hai. Laksh is standing towards the back. They finsih praying and are doing some 'pooja' near the water. After about two hours the prayers are over and everyone is making their own way home. Archana and KT make their way towards the car but KT realizes that she is not wearing her payal, it must have fallen somewhere.
KT - archana tu chal may apni payal dhoond kay atey hoon.
A - acha didi.
Archana goes to wait in the car while KT goes and looks for her payal.
Meanwhile laksh and tulsi go towards their car but laksh realizes he's left the keys indside, he goes to get them while tulsi waits by the car.

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Now when people say whatever happens, happens for good, was what was in laksh and KT's fate or as laksh and kt called it - KISMAT. These two didn't know that just this one meeting would change their life's forever.

As KT got inside the mandir she noticed something gleaming near the pillar. she went foward, it was her payal, she picked it up and was putting it on when Laksh came in, KT didn't notice him, Laksh founf his keys and was leaving when we are shown Ganeshji's statue and wind starts blowing, KT's duppata flies off her and l;ands on Laksh's face. both laksh and kt turn around at the same time, Laksh slowly lifts the duppata of his face and KT sees him, they both start walking towards each other until they are standing in front of one and other. They stare at each other for a while until KT takes her duppata mutters a quick sorry and runs off in the other direction, Laksh stands there thinking about this girl he had just seen, she was exactaly what his apri had beem, his dream girl, she had eyes of an angel. Laksh comes out of his dream and goes back to his car.

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The next day KT is in her house with her aunty, Archana and her dad. A man is showing them lots of sari's and matching jewellery. KT is sitting there dreaming, not paying attention to whats going on around her. She's thinking about the person she saw yesterday. there was something different about him, something very special.
A - didi, yeh dekho na yeh app kay shaadi kay liyay.
KT - haan??? bohot acha hay, may abhi ati hoon.
KT leaves and goes to her room and lies on her bed with her pillow under her chin. Archana follows KT because she had been behaving strangely since she got back yesterday.
A - didi, kia hua ap ko?
KT - pyar... (still in her dream world)
A - KIA? par didi..
KT snaps out of her dream.
KT - aray kuch nahey may to aisai hi
A - did may apko achi tarha say janti hoon, ap mujhsay kabhi jhoot nahi bool thi.
KT tells Archana about the person she saw in the madir yesterday.
KT - pata nahi woh kuch alag sa tha, pehli baar kisi ko dekh kay kuch hua tha, hulchul si machey thi dil may, sama rukh gaya tha, agar isay pyar bhol thay hai to haa mujhey pyar hai, mujhey pyar hogaya hai, kisey anjaan say, pata nahey kaun hay woh, lekin jo bhi hai woh hai bohot pyara.
suddenly someone turns KT around by the arm and she is slapped on the face!!!!!!!!

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who slaps KT?
will she agree for the marriage.
keep reading and please do comment. 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 amazing beginning to ur ff!!!
the 'pari' idea was 😆.
plz update soon!

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