*KISMAT* (Laksh & KT) Pt 2 on Pg5 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
i thought you said u r gonna update regularly now but im still waitingggggggggg and its been so long and no update !!
please update as sooon as u can ~!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
come On Update Soon Love the parts 100 times better then Ekta so please update it's been maybe more then 4 weeks please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
bUT REALLY LIKED pART 1 AND THE SKETCHES 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
plz jaldi karo!cnt w8 4 part 2 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Ok everyone.... im so sorry for the long wait.... it's been like months since i updated but i really have been busy... i've just started my GSCE year so am doing my best to study.. as some people must know i do a lot of cirriculum activities and only get home at 6 which gives me a couple of hours to do everything else so you might find delays in the update but from now on i'll try and update regularly.... thx for the great comments and hope to recieve more in future.... thanx again 😊 😊

Part 2
The person taht slapped KT was her dad (S)!!! he grabs her by the arm and turns her around.
S - tumahy sharam nahey atey? tumharey shaadi ho rahi hai, aur tum kisey aur kay baray may soch rahey ho.
KT - lekin papa........
S - mujhay kuch nahi suna,tumharey 5 din kay baad shaadi hay!
A - BAS KARAY PAPA
Archana who has been holding in her anger for 12 years finally has enough!
A - AP HAMESHA APNEY BAATH MANWA TEY HAI, AP NAY KABHI DIDI KI KHUSHIO KAY BARAY MAY SOCHA HAI? AP YEH BHI NAHEY JANTEY KAY DIDI KO ABHI KUCH KARNA HAI....... WOH HAMESHA HAMAREY KHUSHIO KAY LIYA APNEY KHUSHIA NAHEY DEKHTEY!
KT - Archana bas karo!
A- KYUN DID? YEH TO MUJHSAY BAATH BHI NAHEY KARTAY, HAMEYSHA APNAY BARAY MAI SOCH TAY HAI. I HATE HIM! I HATE YOU MR. SURAJ SIGHANIA!.
Suraj lifts his hand to slap Archana but stops halfway.
A- kyun rukh kyun gaye? mai didi ki tarha nahey hoon, kay ap mujhey kuch bhi kahay aur mai chup chap dekhtey rahr gi!
Suraj just leaves from there while Archana looks at KT and runs upto her and hugs her. Shes crying.
A - Didi yeh hamesha ap kay saath kyun hota hai?
KT hugs archana back.
KT - Archana yeh tumnay kia kardiya?

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Laksh is sitting in his room near the window and has his sketch pad out. He remembers hoses angel eyes, the soft lips, the innocent face, that sweet voice that muttered ' Sorry', her soft silky black hair. Laksh draws KT's face and it's exactally like her, beautiful and innocent. Laksh hears someone coming in and quickly closes his sketch pa. It was Baa. She came in and sat down beside Laksh.
B - aray Laksh, tumnay to breakfast bhi nahey kia, neechay aa kay kuch khalo.
L - Baa ap chalay may ata hoon.
b - haan teek hai jaldi ana
Laksh goes to the bathroom to fresh up while Baa gets up to leave but she sees Laksh's sketchpad, she flicks through it and sees sketches of herself, Ganga, Sahil Tulsi , Manthan and Suhana, Nakul and sanjhani, as she turns towards the back of the pad she sees KT's drawing, ofcourse she doesn't know who it is, she smiles to herself and says ' Pyar hogaya hai meray Laksh ko!'


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Everyone is at the dining table eating, Laksh comes and sits down. He doesn't speak to anyone which isn't unsusual as he's the quietest person in the house and keeps himself to himself most of the time locked away in his room. But todays he's acting very stranger then ususal, he's flinching at everyones words, as he's lost in his thoughts about the girl he met at the mandir. His bhabhi Sanjhani notices this and calls Laksh to come and get something from the kitchen. As soon as he's inside, Sanjhani grabs his hand and takes him to the far corner.
S - kia naam hay uska Laksh?
L - Bhabhi apko kaisay.........?
S - Bhabhi hoon mai terey! apnay dewar kay dil may kia hai may sab samajh ti hoon. chal ab bata kia naam hay uska?
L - pata nahi bhabhi, lekin woh jo bhi thi, thi bohot pyari, lekin bhabhi ap please kisi ko nahey batayey ga.
S - nahi bataongi baba!
L - ap ko kya lagta hai? woh mujhey phir sey milay gi?
S - agar tumhari kismat may likha ho to tum usay zaroor milogay, kismat ka khel hai yeh sab, kismat ka.


plz leave your comments
i know its not a big part but i'll update tommorow...
so keep a lookout 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
AWW YAY ! 😳
Finally Continued ! xD
That was an AWESOME Part Aelia ..
WOW ! Please do continue soon , can't wait ! 😛 😳 👏
P.S.: i understand, anywhoo, studies comes first.. 😳 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Ohhhhhh yay...finally u updated...... 👏
i'm loving it cont. soon.....
gr8 job... 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
gr8 pat! 👏 👏 👏
take your time w/ nxt update,i kno how it feels ive just started GCSE year 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey i just read all of it and great intro and part i realllllllly like it update soon

-tuba
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
finally you updated!!😳
love the part can't wait for next part!!👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳

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