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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

hope u make it fast...
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Originally posted by: monikaseth
wow grat thanks alot for awesome part 😳what a part i am gone wow great yaar👏

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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

awww great part

i hope angad quits his job before anything else happens

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See i watch way to many Balaji shows and from that i have learnt never to listen to the audience. So something might happen.

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wow ur very good at the "clicking" scenes....btw abby i love ur story...plz update soon 😳

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angad is a cheat. when kripa finds out what he has been up to... she will surely kill him...
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aw. such a romantic part. cont soon.

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ok i am very sorry but i just posted a really long part

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hope u make it fast...

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ok i just posted a part so no more waiting

hEY you guys i just finished a huge part and will post another either today or tommorow..

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avantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

recap—

the window blew open and the red silk sheet blew ontop of the two lovers. The candles blew out and the room grew dark. The two lovers made love to each other tenderly, and we cant see them now.
part 27—

angad and kripa are sleeping, both undressed. Angad had his arms around kripas. and kripa had her arms around his neck really close to him. Kripa snuggled in closer towards angad, which caused angad to stir. both woke up at the same time.

A- morning sexy
kripa blushed and quietly said
K- morning handsome
A- so how is my baby
K- you still remember
A- of course its my first time and ive wanted a baby for like forever.
K- aww how sweet. I love you
and she gave him a big kiss on his cheek
A- wow i should remember things more often and now my thank you
K- for what
A- i dont know because ive planned a second honeymoon for us
K- really
A- yup to paris.
K- angad i have always wanted to go there you know they call it the city of Romance
A- duh thats why im going to take us there, other wise how can i romance with you here
K- angad i love you
A- i know now where is my reward.
K- umm ask for anything and i will give it to you
A- anything
K- anything----- said kripa absent to what angad meant
A- hmmm.... well then i want 2 rewards, one is that i can do anything to you. and the second one is that we take a shower together.
K- okay, wait, what
A- to bad you already said yes
K- b....
she didnt finish, because angad had kissed her on her lips to make her shutup. Kripa who knew that angad wouldnt stop now, just gave in and kissed him back. angad broke the kiss and kissed her neck while kripa groaned. then he kissed every inch of her body, after he was done kissing her. He picked her up and kissed her while walking towards the bathroom. He turned the water on and laid kripa down inside (its a jet tub thingy) and laid ontop of her. the roses on their bodies were now floating in the water and the fragrance aswell. Angad kissed her once again in all places while kripa either moaned or groaned in pleasure. He kissed her lips and her nose her eyelids. his hands lingered in different places and kripa shivered at his touch. Angad kissed her ear lobes, and then went down to her chest but kripa pulled him back up and kissed him on the lips. they flipped. kripa kissed him on the lips, then on his neck, chest, and many other places. This may have been the 10th time they were making love but it always felt like the first time. Angad kissed kripa on the forehead while kripa kissed his chest in different places. Angad stopped kripa and picked her up, drained the water out of the tub and took her to the shower. He leaned on kripa while she leaned on the glass wall the warm water kissed kripas body. And angad kissed kripa as the little droplets kissed her body. he leaned down and kissed her chest, and breast, then nibbled on her nipples when kripa stopped him

K- angad thats for the babys lips only
A- but hes not here now is he
K- no but he'll feel jelous.
A- who cares he'll know that its his fathers right now
K- you have answers for everything dont you.
angad kissed kripas breast
A- of course i do
Kripa moaned while angad went to her her stomach. Angad kissed the side where the unborn childs head would be, and then he kissed in the middle of her stomach. his fingers laced down to her feet and tickled it forcing kripa to slide down till she was at the same place as angad. Angad smirked.
A- my touch still has that affect on you doesnt it
he said while his hand slid from her face all the way down to her waist not forgetting to touch anything that was in the way. Kripa moaned once again.
K- what touch
she asked breathlessly, as if she was running 20 kilometers in a race.
A- you know the one.
and he nipped her earlobe while kripa moved around to make him stop
K- no it doesnt.
A- well i wont stop until it has an affect on you.
K- who is stopping you
she said while clinging to him tightly
Angad kissed her shoulders kissing her all the way down to her wedding ring. and then all the way back up. not stopping kripa hugged him tighter.
K- angad?
A- hmmm
he said while he was busy kissing kripas delicate body
K- promise me something
A- anything
K- that you will never leave the responsibilities of me and our child and that you will love me for the rest of our married life.
Angad stopped and looked up
A- kripa you know that i promised you that last night to never leave the responsibility of you or the child. and i promised to love you for the rest of our lives the day you and me tied the bond and got married.
K- thank you so much angad i love you
A- i love you to and lovers never say thanks to each other
K- sor......
Angad had stopped her from talking by kissing the side of her mouth, slowly moving up to her jaw bone. kripa kissed his chest bit into the side of his chest causing him to flinch. he bit into her neck then causing her to hiss in pain. and they continued making love madly until it was time to come out of the shower.

angad walked out with kripa in his arms tightly hugging him in her short towel while angads towel was wrapped around on his waist. Angad carried her all the way to the cuboard where their clothes were folded. angad gave kripa her clothes and took out his clothes. Instead of putting her clothes on first she started to put her make up and jewelry on and comb her hair. When angad was done putting his clothes on he turned around to see kripa about to put her yellow saree on. Angad walked towards kripa and stopped her by saying
A- im going to dress you today
K- but
A- no, i am going to dress you
K- finnnneee *whispers* gawd so bossy
A- did you say something
K- me, no nothing at all.
and angad took her towel off and took the top and put it on her. he started to tie her strings, and kissed her spine before tieing them. Kripa closed her eyes in Happyness. then angad started to put her petticoat on kissing her hips and kissed the place where he tied the knot. he took the saree cloth and started to wrap it around her kissing her stomach aswell. when the lower part was done he slowly got up kissing her stomach, her breast on each side, her chest, her chin and finally her lip. His tounge played with hers while he pushed kripa to the wall. Clasping their hands together, and their legs tangled together. their tounges played together. one teasing the other. Angad broke the kiss and brushed his lips to her neck.
K- angad
she said breathlessly
A- hmmm.
he said while continueing to make love to her
K- enough
A- no, making love is never enough.
he said still not stopping
K- angad i think im going to fall.
A- dont worry im holding on to you.
K- please stop i need to help alliyah
A- there not home
K- where did they go
A- for a check up and theyre gone to the city. so they wont be back until day after tommorow.
K- why
A- because i told them i want to spend time with you
K- and how bout work
A- im taking a dayoff for 2 days. I finished all the work yesterday so i could spend time with you
K- how bout breakfast and the servants are here to
A- you worry to much i told the servants to take 2 days off. yesterday so we are all alone.
K- but im hungry
A- arent i feeding you now
he started to undress her again.
K- angad enough i want real food.
A- well can you wait because im hungry to and im working on my hunger.
K- wasnt yesterday enough
she said breathlessly while angad took her top off so she was fully undressed now
A- please just today and then ill wait until our honeymoon
K- fine
Angad didnt say anything he just kept making love to her. After a while kripa started to move around.
A- kripa
K- hmmm
she said while closing her eyes.
A- stop moving
K- i cant your clothes are bothering me
Angad grinned
K- quit grinning like that and take them off.
A- no you take them off for me, because im to busy
he said going back to making love to kripa
K- fine
she started to unbutton his shirt slowly since angad was moving around
K- angad stop moving
A- kripa im not going to stop moving you just rip it off
K- fine
kripa ripped his shirt and under shirt off. then she started to unzip his jeans and they were off to. Now both were undressed AGAIN.
Angad carried kripa to the unmade bed and dropped her
K- care full
A- sorry, but its just for the moment
angad jumped ontop of her and started to make love to her again. after a while kripa asked angad.
K- angad do me a favour. take my jewelry and bangles off there hurting me
A- ok
Angad took of her earrings and kissed her earlobes. He took the clip in her hair while kissing her eyes. He started to take off kripas bangles while kissing her stomach. Soom the bangles were scattered all around the bed. Angad crushed kripa petite body under his. he kissed and licked all over her body. Kripa moaned in either pain or Pleasure, Scrunching the crinkled bedsheet under her, she couldnt move her hands since angad was crushing them. Angad lowered himself to kripa legs still not letting go of her hands lightly brushed his lips up to her hip and then to her stomach. kissing it, lightly biting it, Kripa let out a light shriek. angad went up to her breast and kissed kissed around her nipple then he bit it. same on the other side and then moving up to her chest. Angad then moved to her shoulder and bit into it causing kripa to stop breathing to ease the pain. He then moved to her neck and kissed it in all directions. while kripa moved her head in all directions. he moved up her neck and kissed her chin, digging into her flesh as kripa gripped the bedsheets even tighter harder the poor bedsheets almost ripped. Angad kissed her chin and moved up to her lips and kissed her playing with her tounge, teasing it. They kept making love until they both fell asleep.

Kripa was the first one to wake up her body ached but felt happy that angad loved her so much. She slowly wiggled out of Angads grip without waking him up, and rolled off of the bed. She looked at her saree.
'na, itll take forever to put it on' she thought. then her gaze shifted to angads shirt.
'hmmmm less than 2 seconds ill take it' she thought. she picked his shirt up and saw that it was ripped from the bottom so she left it and went to the cuboard. Since she didnt have any thing else than sarees she took angads shirt. It was long enough to cover her till her thighs, so she put it on. she then went downstairs to make some food. while walking down the stairs she noticed that it was 5 o'clock in the afternoon she mentally slapped herself to let her desires take over her. SHe went to the kitchen to see what to make. She decided to make some coffee, and pancakes.she brewed the coffee while she mixed the pancake mix. soon both were done and she set them on the tray, and went to get the butter and syrup. She took them out and set them on the tray. she was about to pick up the tray when she felt a pair of arms wrap around them. she shrieked and jerked around to see angad staring at her with hunger in his eyes
K- angad you scared the hell outa me
she said putting her hand on her heart and breathing quickly.
A- why are you wearing my shirt sexy
he said with a twinkle of mischief in his eyes. kripa turned around and continued making the food.
K- because i didnt want t....
she froze when she felt angads and move up inside the shirt. She started to feel her feelings of making love arousing again. From the front angad started to unbutton the shirt he was on the second last one when kripa held his hands firmly.
K- no more
Angad didnt say anything he just started to kiss her neck making kripas hands weaken angad took that chance and ripped the rest of the shirt off, making kripa exposed. Kripa was in shock. She and angad were naked in the KITCHEN!! omg what if someone saw them. she thought.
A- no one is home the doors and windows are locked. so We can have sex anywhere.
kripa was still in shock. angad turned her around and leaned on her. kripa shivered from the touch of the cold kitchen table. Angad was unable to make love to her properly so he pushed her to the refridgerator door, kripa shivered even more because it was so cold. angad started to kiss her neck, giving kripa the full feelings of making love come out. she started to moan in pleasure she totally forgot about the coldness and the pain aching from her body all she wanted was love from angad. she was sliding down because her legs were weakening. But angad held on to her and slid down with her. Kripa forgot where she was and only remembered that angad loved her a lot. she soon felt herself lying down on the cold kitchen floor and a warm body ontop of her. Angad kissed her everywhere. He crushed his body and rubbed it against hers. He kissed her lips with full force and licked her lips, he then moved to her jawline and bit into it. Kripa dug her nails into Angads back pulling him closer putting to distance into their bodies. Angad could feel kripas chest rise and lower quickly, Moaning while angads hand moved up and down her body. She forgot that she was in the kitchen and pushed angad over and moved ontop of him. She nipped his nipples, ears, lips. She bit into his chest and digged her nails into angads shoulders causing angad to flinch. her leg was running up and down on angads. and her other leg was rubbing the other. Angad groaned as he felt kripas light body on his. Kripa lowered down to angads abs and she kissed one and bit the other. Angad flinched hard causing kripa to move from her comfortable spot. Kripa got up and Angad looked at her quizically.

A- what happened.
K- im hungry, wait
Kripa left to go to the other side of the kitchen and came back with a tray. she set the tray down and lay on angad again.
A- whats this
K- shut up im going to feed you today.
kripa took a peice of the pancake and fed angad. some of the syrup fell on angads chin. Kripa leaned in and licked it off.
A- my turn
angad turned kripa so now she was under him. Angad picked up a peice and dipped it in syrup and dripped it down Kripas chest and fed it to her. He then kissed the syrup drops off of her body, while kripa moaned, breathlessly.
A- you still hungry
K- ill eat later
she whispered breathlessly she pulled angad on her and gave him a long passionate kiss. Angad kissed her back with more force. Kripa broke the kiss and kissed his neck. while angad moaned. angad got up and pulled kripa up causing her to clash with angad. Then angad pushed kripa to the counter and crushed her and kissed her with all of his energy. Kripa being crushed kissed him back with equal energy. they both moved their hands touching every inch of each others bodies. They swayed breaking many vases and pushing down chairs. Still not breaking the love moment Angad leaned on Kripa who was against the wall and bit her neck, while kripa moaned and groaned loudly. Angad pushed kripa further into the wall while kripa enjoyed every moment. Kripa then pushed angad causing him to lean on the railing of the stairs. Kripa leaned on him and gave him a hot kiss, her tounge exploring the insides of his mouth. while Angad felt every curve, and inch of her body. they started to slide up the stairs till the got into a bedroom. they didnt care whos room it was they just wanted a bed. they swayed into the theatre room. In the theatre room their was a small couch which only one person could sit on. kripa dropped angad down on the couch and fell ontop of him. her heavy breathing could be heard by angad. kripa kissed angad on the shoulder and pulled him closer to her losing all distances inbetween their bodies. The act caused angad to flip and fall to the ground, while taking kripa with him. now angad was ontop of kripa, Angad felt kripas throat moving she was breathing quickly. angad kissed her throat and the back of her ear. he turned her around and kissed her shoulder blades, he bit into her flesh, she moaned, he flipped her over again. Kissing her breast, his hot breath, hitting her body. She could feel herself melting in his touch.
K- angad
she mumbled
A- hmmmmm
he whispered seductuvly while kissing her body
K- can we go on the bed.
A- not yet in a minute.
K- please
A-fine
angad picked kripa up and carried her by the waist kissing and nipping her neck while walking to their bedroom. while kripa moaned and moaned breathlessly wrapping her arms and legs around angads waist, she kissed his neck, and leaned down to kiss his breast. She pulled him closer eliminating all distances. She could feel angads body crush her breast. she moaned as angad bit her ear. they walked into a bedroom which had a huge bed. this was the biggest bedroom in the whole house. Angad threw Kripa on to the crisp bed, and jumped ontop of her. Crushing and rubbing their bodies together Kripa moaned in Pleasure, her legs caressing angads legs. her arms beside her head gripped tightly by angad. his lips nibbling on to her breast and then caressing it her deep moans in pleasure and pain. He rubbed his chest against hers while kissing her lips, her moans muffled by the kiss. he broke the kiss and looked at her. Kripa digged her nail into angads shoulders causing him to fall back on kripa, kripa kissed angad with full desire as if they just started. When they broke the kiss kripa threw angad to the side and got ontop of him. She rubbed her soft light delicate body against his strong built body. She bit angads neck, angad groaned. kripa seperated her legs so now each of her legs were on the side of his body. she dug her nails into angads chest while kissing his 6th pac. she slid her hands under angads arms and put her hands on his shoulders. her chest in the air she kissed his forehead, then lowering her lips to his eyes, then nose, and then teasing him by kissing all around his lips but not directly. angad who was getting angry grabbed kripas neck and threw her lips against his. Angad put his arms around her waist, caressing her back. While kripa caressed angads hair and face. breaking the kiss, she moved down to his arm, kissed his tattoo her lips lingering down to his palms,kissing them. then moving up to his shoulder, biting deep into it, then relaxing it by a delicate kiss. Moving to his neck where her hot breath breathed into. she turned him around making his back facing her. she started to caress it, While angad groaned loudly. Kripa kissed his back her tounge sliding where ever she touched. She moved her hand up and down from his thigh to his waist. she turned him around kissing his jawline while he kissed and nipped her neck. moving down to his lips she kissed it. her tounge teasing his, biting the lower part of his lip. Her legs caressing his lower part of his body. Making him groan in pleasure. he pushed her aside and kissing her neck, leaving her to moan in pleasure as his lips lingered around her chest, playing with her breast. her deep breathing showing all of the desire arousing in her body. her arms clutching his back eliminating the distances between them. lowering his body to her stomach caressing it, making her groan. lowering himself again making his way to her thighs, to her feet kissing every inch, making her squeal in delight. Kissing her slender soft legs, his hands caressing her lowerpart of her body. moving to her thighs making her moan once again. kissing lightly and caressing her thighs, as kripa closed her eyes. moving to her stomach, and lightly brushing his rough hot lips against her soft cold stomach, making her clutch onto the sheets. slowly making his way to her breasts caressing and making love to her in a slow and delicate movement, making kripa clutch onto Angads arm. His lips moving towards her neck, licking her bruises and brushing his fingers against her shoulders, Making her moan again and again. They made love everywhere not leaving a place where there were no special moments or memories of last night and today. They made love not thinking of what would happen tommorow. Unknown to the hurricane that would come.

wow that was a very long part. I think. so did you guys like it, it took me forever to type it and i think it is long enough it is 7 pages long in the 12 font.

PROMO___

the scary day of angads life. Kripa hurt, betrayed. The secret reveiled.

hey just to let you know half of this promo might not even come because i am a very bad story typer/writer. So something lke the will happen.

love yall

avantika

Edited by *Avantika_4eva* - 18 years ago

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cheeselova

@cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

awesome part 😳

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Edited by iamsmart - 17 years ago

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

wow. that was a very very romantic part. cont soon.

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monika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

😳 hey mindblowing promo is going to past orpresnt 😭

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kriti mehera

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

so sweet angad loves her so much...
i hope nothing serious happens 2 kripa or the baby...
continue soon...

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

woah. tooo much. haha. nice good job continue sooon.

wait kripas preg? damn and they are making love when is is preg? yikes.

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avantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

They made love not thinking of what would happen tommorow. Unknown to the hurricane that would come

Part 28---

the morning came and kripa was the first one to wake up. she tried to get up but was unable to because angad's arms were tightly secured around her. After a lot of strugling she was finally able to move his arms away. she got up and noticed the mess. She felt like puking. she quickly walked to the cabinet and took some clothes out, walked into the bathroom for a shower. She came out in A blue saree, which was very soft and comfortable. She put on her makeup, did her hair and put her jewelry on, and started to clean the house up. Finally after a good hour she finished cleaning outside and walked into the room it was still messy. she picked up all of the clothes and threw them into the laundry. When she was done she went towards the bed where angad was sleeping. she started to wake him up. After a good 10 minutes of trying to wake him up she finally took a jug of cold water and screamed "3, 2, 1 TIME TO WAKE UP" and she threw the jug of water all over Angad. Angad screamed.
A- kripa what the hell.
K- angad shutup and go take a shower
A- but
k- NOW
Angad angrly walked to the washroom and shut the door. kripa made the bed and cleaned up all the water, and started to take angads clothes out. She noticed a black box. Her curiosity got the better of her and she took the box and opened it. inside was a gun and a little book. it looked like a diary, and had the name ANGAD engraved on the cover she smiled it was the same diary she had gotten when they were dating. she opened it and turned to the last entry and was shocked to read:

"today was our anniversary and kripa was so happy.After dancing with kripa i went to the bar to josh. He looked upset. I asked him what was wrong and he said 'if kripa finds out about you still in the business then she wont forgive you, she'll be hurt man and then she will leave you' i know what he said is right. and i really want to tell her but i cant because every time i look at her, i see her smiling and then the thought comes to me that if i tell her then she will leave me. god tell me what to do!'"

kripa felt like a hurricane had hit her. she felt angry, hurt, betrayed. there was no ending to her feelings. Angad came out in his towel and saw kripa holding the gun in her hand. She raised it to her head and was about to shoot. the gun went off, and hit the wall. kripa was crushed to the bed with angad on her. she struggled to push him away, with tears streaming down her face like a waterfall.
K- get off of me! she cried
A- STOP IT
Kripa just hugged him and cried histarically saying
K- lying, cheating, bas***d, asswhole, loser, you betrayed me, i hate you, how could you.
angad stayed frozen. she tried to commit suicide. but why. did she not want the child. WHY?
A- kripa.....why
Kripa pulled away
K- you cheated on me
A- no kripa i have been faithful
K- not that you idiot, you promised that you would stop this business and your still in it.
Angad was shocked.
A-kri..
K- no dont you talk to me you cheater,now im goign to be asking you questions and you will be answering them
A- a...
K- why? WHy did you not stop after taking an oath
A- because i cant
K- angad i wouldnt be that heartbroken if you had told me your self
A- im sorry
K- no promise me from this day forward that you wont do this business. SWEAR ON OUR UNBORN CHILDS LIFE.
A- i cant
K- why
A- because if i stop then A will kill us
K- A?
A- my last rival gang
K- well then im sorry angad i cant let you touch me or my unborn child until you stop.
A- kripa please im sorry
K- no
A- im sorry i promise the second i finish killing the last rival i will stop
K- isnt that what you said last time
A-.......
K- angad i will forgive you....
angad face shot up
K- when you stop killing until then im sorry and good bye
kripa left the room. Angad fell to the floor and pain and fury was clearly shown in his eyes.
A- i promise kripa before my child is born i will kill A and we will be together again. Mr.A get ready because angad is coming for you. now you will live or i will.
kripa is shown in the kitchen and is crying holding on to her stomach.
K- i hope you fix this angad, i hope you do
and she is continueing crying while angad is shown getting ready and holding his gun.

hey you guys im so sorry for not continueing. i hope you can forgive me. Ummm i hope you like the part. and tell me your actual truthful comments. this fanfic will end in around 5-10 more parts. love you all

avantika

Edited by *Avantika_4eva* - 18 years ago