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simz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

awww so cute! 😳 !! pls continue soon 😃 u know wat no no continue nowwwww 😆 . i can't wait!!!

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

Lol. I'll try, Simi. 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

*Sniff* *Sniff* awww.. Poor laksh and kt. Hope laksh get well soon. [how about you? r u feelng better from ur fever???]
Wow zinu di you improved a lot of writing skills since you started wriing this FF. Go Zinu29 Go!!!

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Hira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

bechara laksh seriously zinu why always lakshya gets hurt or sick in your ff 😃 . next time make kt sick and show laksh caring for her 😳 .
gr8 update 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😛

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Note:

Hi Guys. I will not be able to update at all on June 3rd. As, I am very busy. I will only come on India-Forums once or twice that day. I am very busy. If you need further information, please feel free to PM me. I can't say if I will be online for tomorrow even once, as i'm really very busy. Hope you understand guys.😊 Thanks!!😃😉

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Sapna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

I Just caught up to your story. It's awesome. Keep it up. Awe 😭 😭 I'm going to have to miss your update for 1 day 😭 😭 Well. Its okay. take your time. 😊 I'll wait. Continue ASAP..no im joking..take ur time 😉

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: LakshFan#1
I Just caught up to your story. It's awesome. Keep it up. Awe 😭 😭 I'm going to have to miss your update for 1 day 😭 😭 Well. Its okay. take your time. 😊 I'll wait. Continue ASAP..no im joking..take ur time 😉

Thanks for the lovery comment LakshFan#1. And, thanks for understanding😊

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Zinu👏

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Angelic_Pari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

it ok zinu we understand.....😛

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

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^Thanks for understanding Saria. Thanks all of you for understanding 😊 I will post the next part soon. 😉
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zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

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PART 12

After 2 weeks, everyone came back to the hospital to see Laksh, and to check if the medicine was there or not.[Tulsi was also there]
G: Doctor..did you give him the medicine yet??
D: no..it was suppsed to arrive yesterday, but it wont come until next month.
S: what?! i'm not keeping my son here for 2 month's now. why didn't it come yet??
D: there was an accident occured, and that truck had the medicines in it.
G: so how long is laksh going to be in here. he didn't eat anything since 2 weeks. can't you people be a little more responsible. i can't see my son suffer like this.
D: i'm sorry..but we can't do anything..sorry!!
G: (yells) sorry. all you can say is sorry?? that won't do any good. my son is suffering in there. and you say sorry. is this your duty?? just saying sorry dosen't mean anything..
S: (keeps his hands on ganga's shoulder) Ganga..calm down..nothing will happen..
S: (to doctor) you can leave..
The doctor leaves..
Ganga starts crying..
Sahil guides her to the bench..
Tulsi sits beside Ganga..
T: Ganga..
G: (crying) Maa..Laksh..
T: main jaanti hoon, tere pe kya beet rahi hai ganga..bharosa rakh..theek ho jayega laksh..
G: yehi to mai bhi chahti hoon maa..par..main usse aisi halat mein kab tak dekhoon..beta hai woh mera..
T: shaant ho jaa ganga..dekh main uske saare dosto ko bulaati hoon..principle ko toh pata hi hai iss baat ka..aur unhone kaha tha, ki laksh ke saare dost..jab chahe yaha aa sakte hain..usse milne ko..
G: par maa..isse kya hoga..
T: tujhe sahara milega ganga..
G: maa..aap meri sahare ko chodo..laksh ko koi sahara nahi mil raha hai..usko 2 hafto[weeks] se..neend ki dawa di jaa rahi hai..uski haalat bigad sakti ha maa..[he's been given medicine to go to sleep for the past two weeks..his condition can turn critical..]
T: ab hum kare bhi to kya kare ganga..usko uthaenge to khatra hai..
S: ganga..maa theek keh rahi hai..maa aap eklavya aur sab ko yaha bula lijiye..
T: theek hai..
S: Ganga..hum abhi aate hain..
G: okay..
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Sahil and Tulsi go home..So Ganga is left..
Doctor comes to Ganga..
D: Um..the medicine is here..
G: Oh, thank God!! well..please give it to him..
D: ofcource..
He leaves and goes in Laksh's room..
Ganga watches through the window.
The Doctor, injects the medicine in, through Laksh's arm.
And comes out the room.
G: doctor..when will he wake up??
D: quite soon. But, after he does, you can discharge him, but make sure he has his full apetite, more if possible, since he has been here for so long. He needs rest, and needs to eat lots of food.
G: Okay..thank you..but..how come the medicine--
D: there was another truck on the way, no one knew about it. luckily it reached here, and your son got his medicine on time.
G: thank you doctor..sorry for yelling at you this morning..
D: it happens..i know how a mother feels, about their childeren. it's perfectly fine.
G: thank you.
D: ill leave now. you can go in and see him now. after all you didnt see him in 2 weeks now. bye.
G: bye.
Ganga goes in Laksh's room..and sits beside him..(crying)..
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO TRIPTI, AND SANIYA..
Tripti and Saniya were seen sitting on the couches, relaxing, and playing cards, orcouse with money..so kind of like gambling..
T: haha..saniya i beat you..
S: nope..i beat you!!
T: damn!!
S: okay..mom..when is Laksh coming back from the hospital..
T: i don't know..as soon as his drama is over..
They both laugh..
S: i don't know how he can act so well..wow!!..he acted to stay in the hospital for 2 whole weeks. what's next..his death..
They both laugh, and tease Laksh..
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO THE HOSPITAL..
Eklavya and everyone else comes near ganga..with tulsi and sahil..
They can't find ganga..Meanwhile kt looks in the room..and see's laksh talking to ganga..
K: hey look!! laksh is up..he's--
Eku: lets go see him!!
K: No eklavya..stop!!
Eku: why..what's the problem..??
K: let them both talk..after all she's his mother..see how much she has missed his son, in these pase 2 weeks. let her talk. we'll wait..
M: you're right!!
Everyone: Yeah!!
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..
Ganga is holding Laksh's hand..She is crying, and Laksh is trying to make her feel better..
L: Mom!! please stop naa..i've only been here since 2 weeks..thats it!!..and look..im fine..
G: Laksh!! 2 weeks!! itna waqt guzar gaya tha..aur tumne to meri jaan hi nikaal di thi..
L: wapas aa gayi naa..nikli nahi aapki jaan. mom!! please..stop crying!! mere liye!! (makes a cute face)..
Ganga wipes off his tears..and hugs him..
L: I Love You Mom!!
G: I Love You Too Laksh!!
They pull out..
G: aisa ab kabhi mat karna laksh..
L: arre..maine kya kiya..
G: Laksh..
L: okay okay mom..nahi karoonga..i promise..ab khush..(smiles)..
G: haan..
L: waise mom..
G: haan..
L: main yaha se nikal kab sakta hoon?? i hate this bed..ugh!! so uncomfortable..
G: pata nahi..
L: to poocho naa..i mean 2 weeks is a long time no??
G: (laughs) okay..
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AFTER A COUPLE OF DAYS..
Laksh was discharged from the hospital long time ago..he was feeling fine..and decided to go back to college..
In that week, he ignored Saniya every time she tried to talk to him, and just walked past her..
Saniya got really mad at him for doing that..and still not willing to stop..
NEXT MORNING..
There was no college, as they all were studying for the next exam..
Everyone was gathered up in Bhoomi's room..
Laksh, Manthan, and Eklavya were walking across each other..looking at their books, trying to memorize some answers..which made all the girls mad..
P: you guys..just chill..and sit down..quit roaming around..its annoying..
M: shut up Pari..we're studying..and this is how we study..
A: uuufffff!!!!! Laksh..please sit down, and you two also..
L: yah..one sec..im..
He's too lazy to answer..and so is everyone else..
Bhoomi gets up, and pulls Laksh, Eklavya, and Manthan by their arms, and drag them, and pushes them on the sofa..
M: hey!!
B: what?!
M: what was that for..
L: SHUT UP PEOPLE..trying to concentrate here..sshhhh......
Everyone shuts up..and gets back to their studiying..
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So guys..this was my Part 12..please tell me how it was..please reply..thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago

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