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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
omg!! that's gr8 toh laksh aur kt ka milap jaldi karo naaaaaaa. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 6

Recap:

Laksh finds out the truth about Kt and Saniya. Sahil is with him, and is stopping the wedding.
Kt and her friends plan to sleepover at her house for 2 days. After dinner .. their lights start turning on a off, Everyone starts screaming and running around. Someone grabs kt and kisses her cheek, and dissappears. The lights turn back on. All of kt's friends run back to the kitchen, and find her fainted on the floor.

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Now:

Kt wakes up in about 5 minutes, everyone is relieved.
Kt: Oh, the lights are back on. Thanks goodness!!
Hira: yeah, what happened to you?? you just suddenly fainted..
Kt: now i remember..someone kissed--(yells) LAKSH!!!!!!!!! URGH!!!!!!!!!! THAT BRAT!!!!!!
Uru: Wait, you're talking about the guy you hate??
Kt: yeah!! He kissed me..ew..URGH!!..
Preet: Well..who is he??
Kt: I'll show you.
She runs, and comes back with her Yearbook!!
All of her friends look.
She flips the page..and finds the name "Laksh Virani"
Kt: (looks at the picture) This isn't Laksh..who is he??
She keeps flipping pages until she finds the picture of the guy she thinks is "Laksh"..
Kt: RIGHT HERE!! (she points at the picture)..But..his name is "Suraj"..that means, he's not Laksh. uuh!!!
Abs: I don't know about him, but Laksh is cute..
Kt: hmph..
Abs: What?! he is cute..and hot!!
Kt: Abhi..
Abs: fine..don't agree..ill just keep it to myself.
Kt: whatever!!
Uru: admit it kt..i know you like him too..
Kt: fine i guess he's a little cute.
The girls look at each other in silence, and start to giggle, and talk about Laksh.
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THE SCENE SWITHCEN TO TRIPTI AND SAHIL..

Tripti: (yelling angrily) how can you do this sahil. he is our son. he needs to get married to a girl like saniya.
Sahil: (yells) Tripti!! its his choice. and i won't go against him. i will go against you, but not him. he has a right to pick his life partner. not any of us. understand?!
Tripti: No!! he will get married to saniya. and tomorrow. thats final.
Sahil: Tripti!! just shut you mouth!! i cancelled the wedding.
Tripti: WHAT?! how dare you cancelled it?! it was my dream!!
Sahil: well your dream isn't a dream..its a greed!!..
Tripti angrily walks away!!
Sahil sits on the couch relieved.
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THE SCENE SWITHES TO LAKSH, AT GANGA'S HOUSE..

Laksh was feeling way better. He stopped crying. He was just sitting on the couch admiring kt's picture, looking at his yearbook.
Eklavya and Manthan were in the kitchen with Ganga.
They all came out and noticed Laksh. His face looked like he was day dreaming..his eyes looked like he was in deep love. He smiled at the picture, and didn't notice anyone around him.
Ganga, Manthan, and Eklavya look at eachother and are confuzed on seeing Laksh.
Ganga: (whispers to E and M) that's weird..his condition was so bad a minute ago..and now look..he look's like he's in love..
All three laugh..
Laksh is still in the same position..
All three walk to laksh..Ganga takes the yearbook from him, and closes it. She snaps her fingures in front on laksh..
Laksh: Huh?? what??
M: what happened to you??
E: yeah!! were you like day dreaming??
L: uh..NO!!..just...NOTHING!!
G: (laughs) anyways laksh..you hungry??
L: yeah mom. make me something plz..(makes a cute face)..
G: fine..come..you guys(E, and M) also come.
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THAT NIGHT..
Eklavya and Manthan went home..
Laksh was still at Ganga's house..
Sahil called to see if Laksh is there or not..
S: Hello?? Laksh..when are you coming home??
L: im staying here. im not coming home.
S: why?? i told you..you're not getting married to saniya. then why won't you come home??
L: you know the answer dad..im sorry..but..i can't stay there anymore. i thought i'd come home and give you two a goog and bad news. but when you told me that im getting married to saniya. it took away all my hapiness. i can't come home till tripti mom agrees that i won't marry her. till then where ever i am. you don't need to worry. i may sound mean, but trust me dad..im not trying to.
S: i know son. i'll try to make tripti agree.
L: no dad. i want her agreeing on her own. don't take her burdens on you. promise me, you won't do anything like that..
S: okay..i promise..take care Laksh..
L: i will..
They both hang up..
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NEXT MORNING..

Laksh was sleeping on the couch..since he didn't want to sleep in any room..he wanted to watch T.V. all night..😆..
Ganga woke up..got ready, made breakfast for Laksh, and herself..and walked to Laksh..
G: Laksh..(she runs her hand through his soft hair)..Laksh..get up..its 9:00 a.m.
L: hmm...hmm...hmm...
G: Laksh..look eklavya and manthan are here..(she was kdding)..
L: hm..hm..hm..laterr.........
G: oooffffooo...Laksh..please get up..your friends are waiting for you..
L: mom...let me sleep please..i slept like at 5:00 in the morning..
G: that late?! what were you watching?!
L: nothing..just watching silly cartoons, nothing else was on..then i got bored..so i watched Titanic..hmm..Titanic..so lovely..ahh...
G: (laughs) cartoons?? okay..laksh now get out of titanic dreams, and come eat breakfast..i have to leave for work..
L: hmm....fine..........
He woke up in slow motion..and walked up to the washroom with his eyes half closed.
He comes back after half an hour..fresh and ready to go..
He comes to the kitchen and see's ganga getting ready to leave..
L: mom..sorry i took long..are you leaving now??
G: yeah laksh..i'm going out of town..will come back at the end of week..here are the keys to the house(she points on the counter)..take care okay..im leaving at a very short notice, sorry laksh..
L: thats fine. can i invite friends over??
G: why are you asking?? do whatever you want..its your house..(smiles)..
L: (smiles) thanks mom..
They both hug..
G: okay now..if you need anything, you can call me okay..
L: yeah!!
G: okay bye laksh..take care..love you..byee..
L: Love you too..bye mom..come home soon..
They both hug once more, and she leaves.
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************THE SCENE SWITHES TO KT..

Everyone just woke up..
Kt: (yawns) guys..im not in a mood of cooking..anyone want pizza??
Uru: yeah! sure..
Abs: yeah! i love pizza..😆..
Everyone else add in a "yes"..
Kt: okay..i'll order some..
She grabs the phone beside her..and dials the number..
Someone picks up..its laksh[real one]..
L: Hello???
K: hi..pizza place..yeah!! i'd like to order--
L: wait..wait..wait..what pizza place?? im no pizza place..
K: Oh!! sorry..wrong number..
Voice in background..
Uru: KT..what's talking you so long..
L: (in head) kt??
K: ok..sorry..i think i got the wrong number..
L: no..no..wait!! its the right number..i was just joking around..
K: WHAT?! is this a way to treat your customer?? anyways..i want a veggie pizza..at this address..right now!! hurry..hmph!!
She hangs up..
L: whoa!! what attiude!! well..atleast i get to meet her..(smiles happily)..
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So guys..that was my Part 6..tell me how it was..please reply..Thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Awesome Part!! I Can't wait till they meet!! 😆
Please Continue Soon 👏
LakshFan#1 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Awesome Part!! I Can't wait till they meet!! 😆
Please Continue Soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Sorry..I Keep Double Posting 😭
~NiKkY~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
omg he is gonna come to thiere house

yYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY 😃

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
😆 Pizza Place orders.. 😆 😆 So funny. Keep writing. I never knew laksh can even make pizza. 😆 So lets wait and read the next part from out very own "Zinu29"!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
zinu itna suspense kyun create kart ho 😳 however continue soon 👏 n ya if i would b there also i would say laksh is cute n handsome 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
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PART 7

Laksh picks up a veggie pizza, and is searching for the appartment.
IN KT'S HOUSE..
Uru: omg yaar..when's the pizza coming?? im starved..
Hira: Me too..
Abs: same here..
Kt: don't worry..if he's more late, i won't pay him..hmph..first the way he treats customer's on the phone..and now being late..hmph..
Uru: well..lets do something fun..
Hira: like??
Abs: i know!! lets play truth or dare..i'll start..
Abs: hmm..ok Kt..Truth or Dare??
Kt: hmm..i'll go with Truth..
Abs: Okay..Do you like Laksh?!
Kt: noo..
Hira: Kt..tell the truth..
Kt: fine..i do..but not as much..
Abs: Yeah..Yeah..ok kt..your turn..
Kt: umm...okay..Hira..
H: yeah..
K: trith or dare??
H: dare..
K: okay..umm...
H: when the pizza guy comes, you have to kiss him on the cheek..
H: if he's cute..
K: not if he's cute..you have to..
H: fine..
H: okay..next..uru..
U: yea..
H: truth or dare??
U: truth..
H: who do you like besides laksh??
U: no one..
H: ok..that was true..i can tell by her expressions..
Meanwhile they hear a knock on the door..
K: pizza..finally..ill go get it..
Abs: wait..kt..remember hira has to kiss the pizza guy..
K: oh yeah..go hira..
H: uuhh..finneee!!!
Hira goes to the door[everyone crowds around to see], opens it, see's a pizza person standing, he is just about to turn when she kisses him on the cheek. he turns shocked..its laksh..
L: excuse me?!?!
Hira: L..L...L...L...L...L..
Abs: LAKSH!!!!!!!😲...
Kt: what the..?!
Hira grabs the pizza, and runs in embarassed.
L: uhh....okay...weird...
Kt: sorry..it was a game..we were playing truth or dare..here's your money..
L: its ok..no need for that..(he starts to leave)..
K: excuse me?!?!
He turns..
L: yeah?!
K: you're laksh..laksh virani right??
L: yeah..that would be me..
K: would you like to come in for some time..and..are you really pizza man??
L: (laughs) no..im not pizza guy..
K: Oh!! well..would you like to join us??
L: does anyone mind??..(he scratches the back of his head)..
Abs[A]: NO!!!! COME ON IN!!!!!!
K: abhi....control..
K: come in..
L: okay..but only for 2 minutes..im in a hurry..
K: okay..
He steps in and each girl screams..
Laksh runs out the door..
L: my god!! what happened?? is the pizza to spicy??
Everyone laughs..
U: No..its just y--
K: uru...shh...
K: its nothing..hehe..just nothing...well come on in..
L: uuuuhhhh.......uummm.......welll.....ii--
Meanwhile his phone rings..
He picks it up..
L: hello??
Its Manthan..
M: Laksh..where are you..we've been standing out of your house for 15 minutes now..
L: oh shoot!! ok..i'll be right there..
He hangs up..
L: sorry..i gotta go..later..
Each girl screams "Bye Laksh"
Laksh runs away scared..
Kt closes the door..
K: You guys..you scared him off..
Hira: well oops..
K: pfft...
Hira: mm..mm..mm..well..well..well..miss kt is JeAlOuS..
Everyone laughs except kt..
K: of what?! and no im NOT!! grr..
Hira: hey you guys..so are all of you jEaLoUs..
All: No we're not..and of what?!
Hira: DUH!! I kissed Laksh..
Everyone gasps..and are shocked..
Abs: WHAT?! you kissed him..i didn't think you'd have the guts to..urgh!! you little..he's mine..grr..😆..
Uru: No He's Mine..
Preet: No He's Mine..
They start hitting each other..except kt..
K: guys STOP!! he's none of your's he all MINE!!!!!! hmph..
Everyone: HAAH!! GOT YOU!!!!! 😆
Uru: It was a plan of our, so that you can admit you like him, so HAAH!! got you..(they all start laughing)..
Kt: well..whatever..im hungry..
She picks up a pizza slice, and stuffs a bite in her mouth..since she is embarassed. 😳
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So Guys..tell me how it was..Please Reply..Thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
zinu nice part 👏 n thanx for my dailoges seriously 😆 i would fight for laksh but i dont mind sharing him with kt. 😳 😳 😳
-abhi

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