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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
gr8 part zinu plsss continue soon!!
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awesome WORK! šŸ‘
love,aliya 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 8

Laksh reaches his house, and see's Manthan, and everyone else waiting for him, sitting on their doorsteps, mad.
L: Uh..sorry guys..
M: Ohh!! Now you come..we've been waiting since so long. where were you??
E: Manthan, don't ask him that..Look..(he ponts toward his cheek)..
M: so you were with a girl huh??
L: what?! noo..
M: (walks up to up) what's this then?? someone kissed you on your cheek.
L: Omg..omg..omg..(he says, and rubs the lipstick off)..
Everyone laughs..when laksh is highly embarassed..
L: (whispers to himself) ok..relax laksh..you didn't do anything..just chill..
M: So you coming or what?! or you have pLaNs..for that SoMeOnE..
L: Manthan..noo..im coming..(he gets annoyed)..
M: (laughs)..okay..lets go..we're going over to meet kt..we have fixed--
L: wait what?! kt..the one in the yearbook whom i thought was saniya, but turns out no to be..right?! (he was confused)..
M: what?! uh..yeah!! that one..she lives in an appartment, and she has some friends sleeping over..
L: but..how do you know her??
E: Pari, and Archita bumped into her yesterday, and so they became friends..
L: uh..no..um..i have plans..okay..byee..
Bhoomi: wait laksh..you're making it up, i can so tell. you're just embarassed, or shy..aww..laksh shy to meet a girl..
L: what?! no im not..fine have it your way..i'll go..hmph..
Everyone laughs, and they proceed towards their home..
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THE SCENE SWITHCHES TO KT..

Everyone is preparing something special for their "guests"..šŸ˜†..
They help each other around making food. Clean up the house, etc..
The "guests" took long to come since they were buying "presents"..for their "first-time-coming" to the house..
After some time, they are all prepared, and ready to go..they hear a knock on the door..
K: they're here..come..lets go..
They open the door..Its the mailman..
MM: um...kt..??
K: yeah..thats me..
MM: you have a mail..
K: mail?? who would send me a mail?? hm..weird..
K: okay..well..where to sign??
MM: right here..(he points at the note thingy)..
She sign's it..says thanks, and closes the door..
U: who's it from??
K: college..ill see..
She opens it and reads it..

Dear Krishna Tulsi [Kt]..
This letter has been sent to everyone..who is in this college..
Evevryone has to come back by June 22 night..
Since, there are special judges coming to see the elections, so everyone is needed.
They cannot stay here for the elections, untile after June 25.
You will have 3 days to work on your speech, make posters, etc.
But this time, we need all of you back.
You will have further holidays, after the exams..
We are sorry for the inconvinience..
Hopefully you reached this letter on time..
Thanks,
The Principal.


Uru: aww..we have to leave..
Hira: yeah..no fair..
Abs: Well..our meeting with pari, and her friends is cancelled..what will we say to them now?? great..this ruined everything..urgh!! i don't wanna go back..i was having so much fun..grr..
Uru: me too..
Hira: me too..
Kt: yeah!! these stupid elections. omg..i JUST realized..if laksh isn't laksh..then im wversing laksh..
Everyone: (confuzed) WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Abs: explain in full form please..i mean full details..im confuzed..
K: remember i didn't want to compete in the elections with laksh?? well..the laksh i didn't want to compete with is not laksh, so i have to compete the real laksh now..not that "Suraj"..ew..whatever..
U: oh!! now i get it..yeah!! you'll have to compete that cutie..šŸ˜†..
Abs: hey..he's my cutie..šŸ˜†..anyways..yep..you'll have to..hahaha..good luck!!
K: abhi..be a little nicer..
A: i know..i was just joking..hello...
H: well..thats bad news..i mean you like him, so i think you'll drop out..but don't i wanna see who wins..and who loses. it'll be fun to watch..
Everyone laughs..
K: hahahha..very funny..now come on..lets start packing..again!!..
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They all start packing..meanwhile Kt's phone rings..
Kt picks it up..It's pari..
P: Hello kt??
K: yeah pari..
P: we won't be able to come, we have to pack..we got a letter from--
K: yeah..same thing happened to me..the nad news is that..how are we going to finish all the food we made??
P: well..i could do one thing..how about..well..we all are packing right now..when we're done, i'll give you a call..and tell you we're on our way..
K: so you're still coming naa??
P: yeah..just packing..again..urgh..i don't wanna go..exams too..grr..
K: i know..same here..well..im going to get back to my packing..you do also..so you can come here with your friends..
P: okay..talk to you later then..bye!!
K: Bye!!
They hang up..
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So guys..that was my next part..please reply, and tell me how it was..thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ Laksh and kt competing. Who would I vote for?? hhmmm... Let me think....
I think I would vote for Laksh. Just a lil voting from Uru šŸ˜† . I know it wasn't needed. šŸ˜† anyways, you did work hard on this part. Good job.
Love,
Uru
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
Lol. very nice part. continue sooon šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
i lub this ff šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
wow gr8 part continue soon......... šŸ‘
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
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PART 9

After an hour. Pari called Kt, and informed her that they were on their way..
After some time Kt, and all of her friends hear a knock on the door.
It's pari, and everyone else.
K: Oh..come in you guys. welcome.
Everyone steps in..with some bags..
Kt closes the door and they hear an "Oww!!"..
P: haha..kt..you closed the door, on our friend i think..
K: oops..sorry..
She opens it, and see's laksh rubbing his nose..
Eklavya comes behind Laksh..
E: haha..what happened to you laksh..
L: nothing..im fine..lets go..
L: (stepping in the door)..hi kt..here's a little present, for coming the first time to your house..
K: thanks..but there was no need for this.
L: i got it anyways. you can't refuse to take it now, can you?? haha..
He walks to pari, and archita who were sitting on the couh, in the living room..talking to kt's friends..
L: Hi guys..
Everyone: Hiiiiiii..(they all smiled happily)..
Like that..everyone entered the door, and sat on the couch..at last kt sat..
K: so pari..won't you intorduce me to your friends??..(smiles)..
P: no way!! haha..they should intoduce themselves..
Everyone laughs..
Eklavya[Eku]: Okay..i'll start..Hi..im Eklavya..
Everyone: Hi..
L: im Laksh..
Everyone Giggles..
M: im Manthan..
Everyone[E]: Hi..
A: im archita..as you already know..
K: Well..i'm Kt..and these are my friends..they can intoduce themselves..
U: Hi..im Urvashi..you can call me Uru..
H: im Hira..
A: im abhinaya..you can call me abs, or abhi..
E: Hi uru, hira, and abhi..
K: okay..well..we met everyone and everyone met us..anyone want any snacks??
A: sure..
Kt gets some snacks and serves them.
K: Don't you guys hate, that we're going back to school so early..
P: Yeah!! so annoying..and then exams..urgh!!
A: i know!! this is so unfair..
L: i gotta go guys..(gets up)..
M: why?? what's wrong??
L: no one's home..and then elections..so yeah!!
E: nice excuse..
L: eklavya..this is no excuse..you and your thoughts..
E: whatever..it's still an excuse..
L: for you..
P: oh yeah!! Laksh is competing Kt..who is sitting right infront of us..
M: oh yeah!! forgot about that..haha..
L: Well..i better get going..bye..thanks for the..lunch..bye!!
H: (whispers to kt) aww..i think he's going to beat you in the elections..haha..
K: shut up hira..there's no way..
The girs giggle..
Laksh starts walking towards the door..
U: won't you stay for lunch..or are you scared to eat the food made by us..
L: (turns around) no..its nothing like that..well..i guess ill stay till lunch..
He walks and sits back down..
U: so you were scared of the food we made..
L: what?! no i wasn't..i never said that..ooh god!! you girls..make a big issue out of everything..
K: what?! no we don't..you boys make a big issue over everything..not us..we're the best!!
L: Ohh..Excuse-Me!! You girls are so stubborn..when you find a guy, you treat them like you own them..ooooffff!!!!
K: WHAT?!?!?! how can you say that..all we ask for is some respect, and love..
L: which we offer, but you girls are busy blushing, and telling us to go away all the time..what do you call that?!
K: well..you boys always want love..
L: what if we want some love, only some..but you girls..you don't even have time for it..i mean..we also want respect and love..which you girls don't give us..
K: yes we do!!
L: oh yeah!! and when do you?? when you need something?? when you want to go somewhere?? you always use us..
Kt was speechless..
M: holy Laksh..night argument..
L: well whatever..i just proved boy's are better than girls..
M: YEAH!!!
Eklavya and Manthan, Hi-5 Laksh..
P: OMG!! Boys are SO not better than girls..
L: Oh yes they are..
A: in what ways??
L: Okay well..they are always there when the girls need them. they always support them. they always help them carry their stuff. they are really sweet to them. they always want to see them in their eyes, and show some love..but the girls tell them to go away--
M: Laksh..calm down..whoa..do have like a list of all this??
L: yeah..and there are so many on the list..i'll die telling you..
K: well..not all boys are like that..
L: i agree but most are..
U: okay guys..just cut the argument..it started because of me..haha..i was just kidding laksh..you turned it into a whole argument..
L: what?! i turned--
E: Laksh..stop!! not again..please..
L: fine..
He lets out a big sigh..and sits on the couch..
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So guys..tell me how it was..please reply..thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!!! nice argument for the first time i feel that boy's r also good 😳 .however kt&laksh fight has started so it's going to rock i suppose.plzz continue....soon 😊
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
No fair Laksh! You are not better than me, are you? I hope not.
Anyways, nice part. All started off because off me I guess. I am sorry guys. šŸ˜†
Keep writing. And of course, get well soon. A BIG HUG FROM URVASHI TO ZINU DI!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
gr8 part!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘
continue soon!! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
loved it
continue sooon i love your ff 😊

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